中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
书面表达之叙事描写类
记叙文
一、要点入门
记叙文以记叙、描述为主要方式，一般是开门见山，直接交代时间、地点、人物、事件等，然后详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因等。一个事件的组成包括许多细节，写作时，要选择与写作意图相关的主要材料。
二、典型例题
在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请根据以下图示，以“My pleasant day”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，叙述你这一天的活动和感受。
要求：1.参考所给图示，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，行文连贯，书写工整。
【思路点拨】
短文要求以叙事为主，可按“总——分——总”的结构来写。先总述一下你这一天的整体感受，然后分早晨、中午、下午等时间段分别叙述你所做的开心事，最后再发表感受。由于叙述的是过去发生的事，因此要用一般过去时。人称用第一人称。
【写作模版】
I…in the morning.Then…At
noon，…In the afternoon，I…I felt…living happily and
actively.Ｋ
【满分范文】
My pleasant day
I had a pleasant day last Saturday. In the morning，I got up early. After breakfast I began to do my homework. It took me an hour to finish it.Next，I had fun surfing the Internet for a while.While Mom was cooking lunch，I cleaned the house and washed my clothes.After lunch I had a short rest. In the afternoon，I went to volunteer at the old people's home.After that I played tennis with Dad.When I was back home I listened to some music. I felt relaxed.I enjoyed living happily and actively.
一
（2021·湖北恩施土家族苗族自治州·中考真题）
为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；
2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；
3. 你的感想。
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
My Beautiful Hometown
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二
（2021·江苏盐城市·中考真题）
初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unforgettable Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What was the experience
2. What have you learned from it
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences._____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三
（2021·云南昆明市·中考真题）
Life is full of love
爱是荒漠甘泉，滋养你的心灵；爱是长夜明灯，指引你前进的方向。生活中爱无处不在，它或来自你的父母、家人；或来自你的老师、朋友、同学甚至陌生人。请你用英文以 “Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文，叙述一个你经历过充满爱的故事。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四
（2021·浙江衢州市·中考真题）
为助力打造 “书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以 “热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以 “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求：
1. 短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2. 短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数：90～110。
参考词汇：experience, habit, knowledge, pleasure
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五
【2020 浙江省温州市】
56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写人叙事作文
写人记叙文，是通过对人物思想性格的刻画来表现中心思想的，也就是写人要写“魂”。写人时，首先要确定文章的中心，然后选择典型事件来写。
【常用词汇】
外貌特征：beautiful，fat，tall，thin，lovely，short，strong，pretty，healthy，good looking等。
性格特征：kind，lazy，friendly，smart，confident，shy，naughty，outgoing等。
表示年龄：at the age of…，be born，in one's fifties，a fifteen year old boy
【常用句型】
He looks like… 他看上去好像……
She has long black hair.她有一头长而黑的秀发。
He used to be/have… 他过去是/有……
His favorite subject is… 他最喜欢的学科是……
【万能模块】
…like him very much.I think he…
【典型例题】
母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。
【满分范文】
My Mother
We need love.We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old now.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She is a woman of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I'll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time.That's what she wants most，I think.
一
（2021·湖南湘潭市·中考真题）
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
What does he/she look like
What is he/she like
Why do you admire him/her
参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求：
1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is
_______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
二
（2021·湖南怀化市·中考真题）
假定你是李华，2022年亚运会将在杭州举行，你想成为一名志愿者，请用英语给组委会写一封信，内容包括：
1. 擅长英语，口语很棒；
2. 性格外向，乐于助人；
3. 爱好运动，了解亚运会等。
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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书面表达之叙事描写类
记叙文
一、要点入门
记叙文以记叙、描述为主要方式，一般是开门见山，直接交代时间、地点、人物、事件等，然后详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因等。一个事件的组成包括许多细节，写作时，要选择与写作意图相关的主要材料。
二、典型例题
在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请根据以下图示，以“My pleasant day”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，叙述你这一天的活动和感受。
要求：1.参考所给图示，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，行文连贯，书写工整。
【思路点拨】
短文要求以叙事为主，可按“总——分——总”的结构来写。先总述一下你这一天的整体感受，然后分早晨、中午、下午等时间段分别叙述你所做的开心事，最后再发表感受。由于叙述的是过去发生的事，因此要用一般过去时。人称用第一人称。
【写作模版】
I…in the morning.Then…At
noon，…In the afternoon，I…I felt…living happily and
actively.Ｋ
【满分范文】
My pleasant day
I had a pleasant day last Saturday. In the morning，I got up early. After breakfast I began to do my homework. It took me an hour to finish it.Next，I had fun surfing the Internet for a while.While Mom was cooking lunch，I cleaned the house and washed my clothes.After lunch I had a short rest. In the afternoon，I went to volunteer at the old people's home.After that I played tennis with Dad.When I was back home I listened to some music. I felt relaxed.I enjoyed living happily and actively.
一
（2021·湖北恩施土家族苗族自治州·中考真题）
为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；
2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；
3. 你的感想。
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
My Beautiful Hometown
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.
There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.
But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.
I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown为题，结合图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍家乡的过去；第三段介绍家乡的现在；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
二
（2021·江苏盐城市·中考真题）
初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unforgettable Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What was the experience
2. What have you learned from it
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences._____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the Asian Games held in our city.
Being one of the three volunteers selected from our school, I felt excited and proud. To make sure that I could provide the best service, I practiced in my spare time, especially my spoken English. When the day finally came, I felt a little bit nervous because I was afraid of making any mistakes. Fortunately, I performed well and was spoken highly of by the volunteer organization.
I learned that we should be confident and hard-working. It was the first time that I had been a volunteer for such an important event, which made me proud ever since.
三
（2021·云南昆明市·中考真题）
Life is full of love
爱是荒漠甘泉，滋养你的心灵；爱是长夜明灯，指引你前进的方向。生活中爱无处不在，它或来自你的父母、家人；或来自你的老师、朋友、同学甚至陌生人。请你用英文以 “Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文，叙述一个你经历过充满爱的故事。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Life is full of love
Is there a thing full of love buried deeply in your heart I want to share one with all of you and push myself.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. It was the rush hour and the bus was extremely crowded. I was even secretly happy that I had a seat. Just at that moment, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. Just as I was hesitating, our eyes met. I had mixed feelings, embarrassed, worried, nervous…Before I could get up, she said to me with a warm voice “Boy, you must be very tired after the whole day’s work. But fighting for your dream is a happy thing. I will get off at the next stop. Sit here and have a good rest.”
How kind and understanding she was! What she said made me not only ashamed but moved. It was her love that is pushing me to be a better person!
四
（2021·浙江衢州市·中考真题）
为助力打造 “书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以 “热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以 “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求：
1. 短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2. 短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数：90～110。
参考词汇：experience, habit, knowledge, pleasure
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Version 1
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man.
I have a great passion for reading and it has become part of my life. I have a good reading habit. Every morning, I read newspapers for the latest news. I’m also fond of novels and magazines. Besides, book reviews provide me with different ideas on great books.
When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life. What’s more, reading opens my eyes and broadens my mind. Through reading, I can experience what I haven’t seen or done before.
With a deep love for reading, I can’t wait to read more.
五
【2020 浙江省温州市】
56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
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【参考范文】
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.
写人叙事作文
写人记叙文，是通过对人物思想性格的刻画来表现中心思想的，也就是写人要写“魂”。写人时，首先要确定文章的中心，然后选择典型事件来写。
【常用词汇】
外貌特征：beautiful，fat，tall，thin，lovely，short，strong，pretty，healthy，good looking等。
性格特征：kind，lazy，friendly，smart，confident，shy，naughty，outgoing等。
表示年龄：at the age of…，be born，in one's fifties，a fifteen year old boy
【常用句型】
He looks like… 他看上去好像……
She has long black hair.她有一头长而黑的秀发。
He used to be/have… 他过去是/有……
His favorite subject is… 他最喜欢的学科是……
【万能模块】
…like him very much.I think he…
【典型例题】
母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。
【满分范文】
My Mother
We need love.We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old now.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She is a woman of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I'll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time.That's what she wants most，I think.
一
（2021·湖南湘潭市·中考真题）
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
What does he/she look like
What is he/she like
Why do you admire him/her
参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求：
1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is
_______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
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（2021·湖南怀化市·中考真题）
假定你是李华，2022年亚运会将在杭州举行，你想成为一名志愿者，请用英语给组委会写一封信，内容包括：
1. 擅长英语，口语很棒；
2. 性格外向，乐于助人；
3. 爱好运动，了解亚运会等。
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.
Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Secondly, I am an outgoing girl and I’m ready to help others. So I can cooperate with others well. Last but not the least, I like sports. I want to know more about the Asian Games. I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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