2022年中考英语记叙文写作课件（共有PPT14张）

(共14张PPT)
Writing
我校即将举行主题为kindness的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点 : 1. 结合经历,简述你帮助他人或得到帮助的事
2. 你对此的感想
3. 你未来的计划
注意：1. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
3. 词数：100左右。
4. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
It‘s my great honor to give a speech about “kindness”
____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening!
Writing Task
一 审( Read )
1. Topic 主题
3. Style 体裁
2. Person 人称
5. Tense 时态
6. Purpose 意图
4. Key points要点
the First Person
the Past Tense
Narrative writing 记叙文
Argumentative writing
议论文
the Future Tense
二 列 ( List )
1. Structure 结构
the beginning part
the main part
the ending part
2. Content 内容
Topic
Experience
Feeling
Plan
二 列 ( List )
3. Key points 要点
· Point 1
When , what, how， who , where……
Experience：
· Point 2
Feelings：
Good sentences？
直到尝试了，你才会知道你会成功。
当我看到人们脸上喜悦的表情的时候，我得到一
种强烈的满足感。
帮助别人对我来说是梦想成真。
我可以做自己喜欢做的事情，同时也能帮助其他人。
有了你的帮助，我才有可能……
再次感谢你改变了我的生活。
How do you feel when you help others
I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on people’s faces.
Helping others is a dream come true for me.
I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
You helped to make it possible for me to do sth…
Thank you again for changing my life.
二 列 ( List )
3. Key points 要点
· Point 3
I’m going to do …
In the future I will do …
I can volunteer to do …
I decide to do …
I plan to do …
I would like to do …
I want to do …
… …
the Future Tense
Practice
Write 6 sentences to describe your experience, feelings and plans.
kindness
Experience: _____________________
_______________________________
Feelings: _______________________
_______________________________
Plans:__________________________________________________________
三 加 ( Add )
四 美 ( Beautify )
Add details
linking words,
adjectives (形容词)，adverbs (副词)，
different sentence
patterns (不同句式)，
proverbs / sayings,
...
I get a feeling of satisfaction.
I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction
when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owner’s faces.
The bus driver Wang Ping stopped the bus.
The bus driver, 24-year-old Wang Ping, stopped the bus without thinking twice.
He got off and asked the woman what happened.
予人玫瑰，手有余香。
帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。
你付出的越多,你得到的越多.
让我们通过帮助别人让世界充满爱和温暖。
Helping others is helping ourselves.
Roses given, fragrance in hand.
The more you give, the more you will get.
Let’s make the world full of love and warmth by helping others.
Good morning, everyone!
It‘s my great honor to give a speech about “kindness”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
五 查 ( Check )
六 抄 ( Copy )
1. All the key points.
内容充实，覆盖要点（内容，要点）
2. Rich words, sentence patterns. No grammar or
spelling mistakes.
用词适切，语法正确，句型多样（词汇，语法，句型）
3. Clear structure, linking words…
结构紧凑，意思连贯（语意，连词，指代）
4. Correct punctuation(标点), letters. Clean and
neat handwriting, 100 words.
书写规范，词数适宜（标点符号、大小写、 词数）
If we keep on spreading kindness, love is a circle.
To write, to record, to share, to influence .
Helping others is helping ourselves.
Writing can be enjoyable and meaningful.