英语书面表达训练——遣词造句

课件28张PPT。写作基础（三）
——遣词造句 府谷中学英语组 吕文娟 Hi, Mike ,
As a student of your age , I understand your situation.
As we know , parents love us very much ,so you should understand your parents .Here are a few / my suggestions.
Firstly , you can find a chance to talk with your parents and tell them that you have grown up . Secondly , you should do something such as washing , cleaning and so on . It may make your parents know that you can look after yourself. Last but not least , you should learn to be independent in daily life . If you do , I think your parents will change their ideas .
Good luck to you !评语：行文连贯，思路清晰，表达清楚。较高级词汇和句式的使用给文章增光添色。
得分：25分结论：英语书面表达的句子要完整 、连贯 、简洁 、强调和多样，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。写好句子的方法一：合并句子 1)It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden. 2)A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty.
The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. 写好句子的方法二：改写句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介词短语做伴随状语) Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses. 2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…结构改写句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it. 1、He knows English very well.
= He English
= He is English .
= His English is .PracticeI、同义句转换（ has a good knowledge of ; good at ;perfect/ excellent） 2、I prefer swimming to skating .
= I swim rather than skate
= I like swimming than skating .( prefer to ;more )3、The problem is too difficult for me to solve.
= The problem is difficult I can’t solve it .
= The problem is my ability.
= It is such a difficult problem I can’t solve.( so , that ; beyond ; as)4、I didn’t know about it until he told me yesterday.
= Not until he told me yesterday
I know about it .
= It was he told me yesterday I knew about it( did ;not until ,that) II、在不改变句意的情况下，改写下列句子，使其更加简洁凝练There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet which is planned for next Sunday .( Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. )2、Because of the fact that I had a lot of work to do，it wasn’t possible for me to accept their invitation . ( I was too busy to accept their invitation.) 3、he problem of pollution is serious in our city ,but if we try our best to stop the pollution , the pollution will stop .( The problem of pollution is serious in our city , but if we try our best , the pollution will stop .)4、He told us a story ;the story was very interesting .( He told us a very interesting story.)5、Eugene O’ Neill .was an American writer ,and he had an unhappy childhood ,and he told the story of his childhood in a play named A Long Day’s Journey Into Night and he said it was written in tears and blood.(Eugene O’ Neill, an American writer, told the story of his unhappy childhood in a play named A Long Day’s Journey Into Night, which he said it was written in tears and blood.)写好句子的方法三：一句多译
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.

It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. 1）这本书花了我300元。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.

I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. 2）我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。He came here yesterday afternoon.
He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
3）昨天下午他才来。 III、翻译下列句子（每句至少用三个句型）?He had no difficulty/trouble (in) working out the problem.?He didn’t have any difficulty/trouble (in) working out the problem.?He worked out the problem without any difficulty.?He worked out the problem with ease.
1、他毫不费劲就把这道题解出来了。?Hearing the news, she burst into tears.
?When she heard the news, she burst out crying.
?She burst out crying at the news.
2、听到这个消息，她放声大哭。?It is said that he is studying abroad.
?People say that he is studying abroad.
?He is said to be studying abroad.
3、据说他正在国外学习。?I happened to meet with him in the street the other day.?It happened that I met with him in the street the other day.?I met with him in the street by chance a few days ago.?I ran across him in the street a few days ago.
4、前几天，我碰巧在大街上遇到他。5、他做完练习后，便出去了。(1) After he had finished the exercises, he went out.?(2) After he finished the exercises, he went out.?(3) Having finished the exercises, he went out.?(4) Finishing the exercises, he went out.?? (5) After finishing the exercises, he went out.?(6) The exercises being finished, he went out.?(7) The exercises finished, he went out.?(8) The exercises having been done, he went out.