中考英语书面表达训练 课件

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书面表达目的在于考查学生应用各项语法知
识、正确进行书面表达的能力，善于理解情景提
示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力。
一、中考中常见的题型及解题方法与技巧
1. 看图作文
(1) 仔细审题，弄清题目要求，明确作文的中心
思想，判断文章的类型。
(2) 仔细观察画面，确定要素。比如，故事发生
在何时、何地，画中的人物为何人，他们做了
什么事，结果如何等。
(3) 根据提示句或短文第一句来确定时态。
(4) 写作前，先在草纸上列一个提纲，逐图描
述，图文意思要一致，语言文字要连贯，
语法要正确无误。
(5) 要详略得当得体。
(6) 把已写好的文章通读一遍，并结合图画进
行必要的检查、修改，力求全文内容表达
准确、完整，并最大限度减少错误。
2. 提示作文
(1) 认真审题，看清题目中的要求。
(2) 根据提示内容，列出要点及每个要点应列的
词语。
(3) 紧扣提纲，动笔写作。
(4) 检查句子的语法结构，注意英汉表达的差异，检查字母大小写是否规范，字数是否合乎要求。
二、真题解析
1. 观察下图。根据图示和参考词语，适当拓展想
象空间，以Why are trees important 为标题，
用英语写一篇不少于80个词的短语。
注意：
(1) 短文应切中题意，条理清楚，词句通顺，书
写清晰、规范。
(2) 短文第一句话已给出。参考词语：take in
carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳；oxygen氧气；
insect昆虫；stop water and soil from going
away防止水土流失；desert沙漠。
[解析]
1. 认真审题：本题已给出题目，我们可以根据题目，用提示词和图示为线索展开书写。
2. 确定要素：
①树能吸收二氧化碳，释放氧气
②树能给鸟类提供家园
③树能为某些小动物提供食物
④树能阻止水土流失
⑤树能防止土壤沙漠化
⑥植树造林，美化家园
One possible version:
Why are trees important
Trees are very important to us. Do you know
why Let me tell you.
Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and
make oxygen. That’s important. People and animals
need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects
live in the trees. Some of them also get food from
trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going
away. If we have a lot of trees, they can stop land
from being desert. I think this is very important. You
know, trees are green. They can make our country
even more beautiful.
Trees are our good friends. We should
plant more trees and take good care of them.
2. 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David 的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文
内。)
提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners,
learn, now, difficult, different from, it is
important…, listen, talk, read, write
Dear David,
I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.
_________________________________________
__________________________________________
_______________
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
[解析]首先确定体裁为书信第一人称。内容
要点如下：①学中文的体会和方法；②建议；
③祝愿
One possible version:
Dear David,
I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn
Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many
foreigners are learning it now. it’s difficult for
you because it’s quite different from English.
You have to remember as many Chinese
words as possible. It’s also important to do
some reading and writing. You can watch TV
and listen to the radio to practise your listening.
Do your best to talk with people in
Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only
from books but also from people around
you. If you have any questions, please ask
me. I’m sure you’ll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
三、巩固练习
1.根据图画内容和所给词语完成一篇短文。
要求：
(1) 词数80个左右。
(2) 用图中所示内容表达完整，用上所给词语，
条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。
(3) 短文第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
所给词语：walk, rice field, see, frog (青蛙),
catch, old man, say, friend, pest(害虫), turn red,
put, smile, good boy
Xiao Ming was on his way home one
afternoon.
____________________
One possible version:
Xiao Ming was on his way home one afternoon.
When he was walking past a rice field, he saw a frog.
He wanted to play with it. So he went over quietly
and caught it. Just at the time, an old man came up
and said to him, “Frogs are our friends. They are
good at catching pests. It’s not right to catch them.”
When he heard it, his face turned red. He put the frog
back into the field. The old man said with a smile,
“You’re a good boy.”
2. 五月的福州，万商云集。假设你在“海交会”上
碰到一位来自澳大利亚的商人，你从他那里了
解到下列表格中的情况，请你根据以下表格的
信息用英语写一篇介绍Bill Smith 的短文。
要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，内容
可适当补充，词数80左右。
姓名：Bill
Smith 性别：男 年龄：45 国籍：澳大利亚
职业 商人
爱好 电脑、音乐
家庭成员 妻子（医生）、儿子（学生）
性格品质 工作努力、认真，心地善良、乐于助人
其他 已开办两家大工厂，在他的帮助下十名贫困孩子完成了学业，相信花园城市—福州会越来越美、人民生活会越来越好。
参考词汇：start (开办), finish one’s studies, the Garden
City, live a better life
One possible version:
Bill Smith is a businessman from Australia. He is
45 years old. He likes computer and music. (There
are three people in his family.) His wife is a doctor
and his son is a student. He works hard and carefully.
He is kind-hearted/kind and helpful. Bill Smith has
started two big factories in Fuzhou. With his help,
ten poor children have finished their studies. He is
sure that the Garden City—Fuzhou will be more and
more beautiful and the people here will live a better
life in the future.
3. 请以“I want to be a/an.…”为题写一篇
短文，词数60~80词。内容必须包括
提示中的三项要求，请不要使用真实
姓名及所在学校名称。
提示：
①What do you want to be
②Why do you want to be a/an…
③How can you make it come true
One possible version:
I want to be an inventor
Many people want to make their new ideas and
wishes come true. They want to invent some new
things for the world. I am one of them. I just want to
be an inventor. Inventions can change the world.
They can bring fun and happiness to our life. And
our fife will become better and better. Now I’m still
a middle school student. I must try my best to work
hard at my lessons and learn what my teachers teach
us. I will use my inventions to make contributions to
our country.