Unit4 writing 课件13张缺少音频

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Unit 4 Writing
Dear Dr. Know,
There are too many rules! At 6:00 a.m., my mom says, “Get up now and make your bed!” After breakfast, my mom always says, “Don’t leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen!” After that, I run to school because I can’t be late. At school, we have more rules— don’t be noisy, don’t eat in class,… My dad says I can’t play basketball after school because I must do my homework. I can play only on weekends. After dinner, I can’t relax either. I must read a book before I can watch TV. But I have to go to bed before 10:00. Rules, rules, rules! It’s terrible! What can I do, Dr. Know
Molly Brown, New York
1.The type of the passage is _______.
2. The writer,_____ writes this passage to ______________.
3. The main idea of this passage is ________________.
4. The writer feels ____________.
a letter
Molly
ask Dr. Know for help
too many rules for Molly
terrible/unhappy
What’s the format(格式) of the letter
How many parts are there in the letter
Part1: topic sentence(主题句)
陈述所遇到的问题
Part2: supporting details(细节支撑)
介绍具体的rules
Part3:asking for help(求助)
Dear Dr. Know,
There are too many rules! At 6:00 a.m., my mom says, “Get up now and make your bed!” After breakfast, my mom always says, “Don’t leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen!” After that, I run to school because I can’t be late. At school, we have more rules— don’t be noisy, don’t eat in class,…
My dad says I can’t play basketball after school because I must do my homework. I can play only on weekends. After dinner, I can’t relax, either. I must read a book before I can watch TV. But I have to go to bed before 10:00. Rules, rules, rules! It’s terrible! What can I do, Dr. Know
Molly Brown, New York
把脏盘子留在厨房里
跑步去学校
say+（that）+句子
我也不能放松。
before+句子/doing/时间点
It’s terrible to have so many rules.
太多 too many+可复 too much+不可
Part2: supporting details(细节支撑)
介绍具体的rules
Molly talks about the rules in the order of______
Molly talks about her______rules and ______rules.
time
family
school
表达规则的句型？
1.祈使句
2. 主+ can’t+V.原
3. 主+must+V.原
4. 主+ can+V.原
5. 主+have to+V.原
How to be better
1 使用连词
And/that’s because /that’s why/before/after / when/ before/ what’s more,/ besides…
2. 添加感受或看法
I thinks it’s fair/unfair/important/terrible/strict/relaxing/boring…
In one’s eyes,
Dear Molly,
I know how you feel. People always tell us, “Don’t do this!” or “You can’t do that!” But think about it, Molly. There are a lot of things you can do. You can play basketball on weekends. You can watch TV after you read a book. Parents and schools are sometimes strict, but remember, they make rules to help us. We have to follow them.
Good luck!
Dr. Know
1. What’s Dr. Know’s advice
Think about what she can do.
Follow the rules.
2. What can Molly do according to(根据) Dr.Know
She can play basketball on weekends.
She can watch TV after reading a book.
3. Why do we have to follow the rules
Parents and schools make rules to help us.
Dear Molly,
I know how you feel. People always tell us, “Don’t do this!” or “You can’t do that!” But think about it, Molly. There are a lot of things you can do. You can play basketball on weekends. You can watch TV after you read a book. Parents and schools are sometimes strict, but remember, they make rules to help us. We have to follow them.
Good luck!
Dr. Know
我知道你的感受。
考虑
有许多事情你可以做。
他们制定规则是为了帮我们。
祝你好运
The best title:
Too many rules for Molly
Dr. Know’s advice for Molly
Can
have to
have to
have to
can’t
must
can’t
have to
can
How many parts
order
sentences
Logic & richness
逻辑和丰富性
分段
写作顺序
句型结构
连词和感受
How many parts
order
sentences
Logic & richness
逻辑和丰富性
分段
写作顺序
句型结构
连词和感受
　　假如你是李娜，你要给笔友Mike写一封邮件介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的校规。
请根据下表内容，完成这封邮件。
Dear Mike，
There are many strict rules at school.
For example, we can't fight with each other. It’s important for us to be friendly to others. And we must keep quiet in the classroom. It’s a good way to create a quiet classroom. I think these rules are useful. That’s because I think these rules can make our school more beautiful and we will have more time to study and play. But some rules are too strict. We can't bring our phones to school. We can't eat in the classroom. Girl students can only have short hair. These rules are too bad.
Rules are strict but useful. They can make a person perfect. As the saying goes, no rules, nothing stands. So we must follow the rules.
How about your school rules Tell me, please.
Yours，
Li Na,