人教版初中英语九年级全册Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! Section B写作课课件22张

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I think that mooncakes are delicious.
Unit 2
学习目标
通过头脑风暴，能够谋篇布局春节的关键信息
通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Let’s watch and think.
Q1: What is the name of the festival
Q2: How do you feel
Q3: When is it
Q1: What is the name of the festival
Q2: How do you feel
Q3: When is it
It is Spring Festival. / My favorite Chinese festival is Spring Festival.
It makes me feel excited and happy.
It is celebrated on the 1st day of the first lunar(阴历) month.
Let’s read and think.
节日让我们快乐，节日也给我们以独特的感受。假如你是王文，代表学校参加某英文网站以"My Favorite Festival ”为题开展的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，从中西方节日中任选其一，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示：1. 说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由。
2. 描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的。
3. 谈谈你对这个节日的感受或建议。
要求：1. 不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 短文要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
英语写作
审体裁、人称
时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
用过渡词（句）
连接句子和段落
查单词拼写
时态、主谓一致
誊写
写作步骤: 1. 审
审体裁 __________
审人称 __________
审时态 __________
记叙文
审
第一人称
一般现在时
Beginning
Development
Ending
outline
(2014年吉林长春卷) 节日让我们快乐，节日也给我们以独特的感受。假如你是王文，代表学校参加某英文网站以“Myf Favorite Festival ”为题开展的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，从中西方节日中任选其一，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示：1. 说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由。
2. 描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的
3. 谈谈你对这个节日的感受或建议。
要求： 1. 不少于80词
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名
3. 短文要包含所有提示要点，可适合发挥。
写作步骤: 2. 抓
喜欢的节日是什么和理由
2. 一次经历 / 怎样度过（时间顺序）
3. 你的感受 / 建议
抓要点
(2014年吉林长春卷) 节日让我们快乐，节日也给我们以独特的感受。假如你是王文，代表学校参加某英文网站以“Myf Favorite Festival ”为题开展的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，从中西方节日中任选其一，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示：1. 说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由。
2. 描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的
3. 谈谈你对这个节日的感受或建议。
要求： 1. 不少于80词
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名
3. 短文要包含所有提示要点，可适合发挥。
Let’s think.
What can we say when we talk about Spring Festival
Chinese
festival
when
feelings
things to eat
why
things to do
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
outline
What is your favorite festival Why
when
where
who
things to do
things to eat
feelings
suggestions
Development
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
1. ___________ is the most important traditional festival in China and it is also my favorite festival.
2.That is because_______________________.
Beginning
What’s your favorite festival
写作步骤: 3. 扩
light firecrackers and fireworks
give/receive red pockets
(lucky money)
do the spring cleaning
have New Year’s Eve dinner
eat sweet
dumplings
make
dumplings
Harry
Wu
Ming
put up new year scrolls
What do people do during Spring Festival
Development
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照时间顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
8:00
12:00
19:00
put up new year scrolls
light firecrackers and fireworks
have evening eve
00:00
eat dumplings
6:00
do the spring cleaning
give / receive lucky money
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Read and answer questions.
写作微策略：
以读促写
（寻找相关话题的文章）
Can you add more after reading
Choose what you like.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Can you add more after reading
Choose what you like.
Development
8:00
12:00
19:00
put up new year scrolls
light firecrackers and fireworks
make dumplings
00:00
eat dumplings
6:00
do the spring cleaning
give / receive lucky money
decorating with red lanterns and colorful lights
watch the CCTV New Year’s Gala
have a family reunion dinner
send various text messages to exchange greetings and good wishes
visit relatives
watch folk shows
visit temple fairs.
eat fish, dumplings and food that brings good luck.
写作步骤: 3.扩
My favorite
I think it is __________________
My feeling:__________________
3. Suggestions:________________
Ending
Write down key words for your ending.
写作步骤: 4. 连
Write it in order of time.
按照时间顺序
2. 连接词的使用
叙事的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. Before the Lunar New Year’s Eve, ________.
2. On the eve of Spring Festival, ___________.
3. The next day, _____________ .
What’s your experience
Development
写作步骤: 5. 查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a narrative
2. Can you find the experience the writer wrote about
3. Does it have correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
写作步骤: 6. 抄
Tips：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Let’s edit.
Self-check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
能够谋篇布局春节的关键信息
能够分析阅读文本，扩充内容，起草作文。
能够进行小组讨论，分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文。
Homework
Redraft your passage.
Look for more information about Chinese festivals.
Seach for the information about how to ask for information politely.