2022年英语吉林省中考作文复习课件（44张PPT）

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研读课标、深挖教材、 精准备课、扎扎实实
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书面
表达
考查方式
小作文
大作文
分值：20分
小作文：选材比较广，多以应用文出现，如邀请函及回复邀请函、招聘广告、失物招领、感谢信，留言条等。设置4—5 个空，要求考生根据要求及提示填上所需要的词汇。
大作文：运用所学语言知识，完成信息沟通、再现生活经历、描述周围事物、发表意见和观点的能力。传统命题方式是采用指导性写作或控制性写作的形式，即通过图画、表格、要点提示等限定写作内容和文体等，考生须将提示内容写进短文中。
中考写作分析流程
写作技巧指导
典例精讲
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中考大作文
2017年——2021年真题
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热门话题作文
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中考小作文
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2017年——2021年真题
热门话题作文
2017年 2018年 2019年 2020年 2021年
话题 日常活动 志愿者活动 人际交往 家风，家训 毕业庆祝午餐会 文艺表演海报 养成良好习惯
形式 日记 书信 邀请函、接受回函 邀请函、接受回函 根据图表完成短文填空
要求 填空 （词数不限） 填空 （每空一词） 填空 （词数不限） 填空 （每空一词） 填空
（不超过3词）
教材联系 八下Unit2 八下Unit2 八上Unit9 八上Unit9 七上Unit6
八下Unit2
小作文 题型特点对比表（吉林省2017-2021中考试题）
2017年小作文
学校上周六开展以“爱在心中”为主题的志愿者活动，张伟同学以此为内容写了一篇日记。请你根据提示将他的日记补充完整。（每空词数不限）（5分）
，June24th Sunny
Today it was a fine day and the sun was bright . My classmates and I went to the old people’s home as volunteers .
At the old people’s home , we did 67 helpful .First ,we read newspapers to them ,and they told us stories about the past and how things used to be . 68 ,we cleaned up their rooms and played chess with them .Finally ,we had a performance for them . I think this activity was very 69 .Many old people are very lonely and need us to 70 them .I hope I can often go there .
66. Saturday 67. something 68. Next/Then 69.meaningful/good/wonderful/nice/great 70.care for/look after/take care of/listen to
2018年小作文
尊老爱幼、诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德；传承家风、铭记家训是我们需要肩负的神圣使命。下面是李华给她的外国朋友David写的一封介绍“家风、家训（Family Instructions）”的信。请将其补充完整，每空一词。（5分）
Dear David，
How is everything going You asked me about Chinese family instructions in your last letter .In my opinion , they’re common beliefs(信仰）that family members should follow .
From a very young 66 , my parents told me to respect the old and to care for the young .Many traditional stories tell us to be 67 and keep our promises .When people are 68 trouble , be there and help them . I was influenced by what I saw and heard . Gradually , I came to 69 the importance of family instructions . I think we teenagers need to pass them on .
Are there any family instructions like 70 in your country Please write to me soon .
Love, Li Hua
66.age 67.Honest/open/straight/... 68.in/havingmeeting/facing
69.realize/know/understand70ours/mine/those/these
71.sorry72.have a good time/have fun73.Thanks
74.I will be there a little late
Graduation Party
Please join us for lunch ！
At 11 a.m. on Tuesday ,July 2nd
At 3H Street Maria’s house
Maria想举办一个毕业庆祝午餐会，她向朋友们发出了邀请。下面是她的邀请函及收到的部分回复，请补全它们。（每空词数不限。71-73每小题1分；74小题2分）（5分）
Dear Maria,
I’m 71 I can’t come . I have to visit my friend Steve because he is ill .
Hope you 72 !
Peter
Dear Maria,
73 for the invitation .I’m coming ! But my swimming class is from 10 a.m. to 11 a.m. So 74 .See you on July 2nd !
Emma
2019年小作文
71.Friday 72.join/be 73.too 74.hall 75.show/enjoy/challenge/improve/relax
Students Wanted for School Show
Time: From 3 p.m. to 5 p.m.
Friday, August 28th.
Place: In the school music hall
Email :sandy0717@
某校计划举行一次文艺表演活动，负责人Sandy向全校同学发出邀请。请根据下面的海报，帮助Jack和Alice补全其回复的内容，每空一词。（5分）
Dear Sandy,
I am happy to get the information about the school show on 71 ,August 28th .I want to 72 in it .I’m good at singing and I can play the guitar, 73 .Could I get a chance, please
Looking forward to your reply !
Jack
Dear Sandy,
I’d like to take part in the school show in the music 74 .I’m in the school band .I can play the drums . And I can also dance .I really hope to 75 myself .Can I be a member
Please reply to me soon .
Alice
2020年小作文
Do exercise
Eat healthy
food
Read books
Help with
housework
Stay out
late
(Activities)
15
150
365
(Days)
我的朋友李华是一位初中生。她有很多好习惯值得我学习。
请根据所给信息和下面的柱状图,补全短文内容。每空不超过三个单词。(5分)
2021年小作文
Li Hua is my 71 . She has a lot of good habits. Every day,
she does exercise, 72 and reads books because she thinks they are 73 for her. Li Hua loves her family, and she sometimes helps with 74 . Although she likes hanging out with her classmates, she 75 stays out late. I should learn from her.
71.good friend/friend 72.eats healthy food 73.good 74.housework 75.seldom
大作文 题型特点对比表（吉林省20172021中考试题）
2017年 2018年 2019年 2020年 2021年
作文题目 运动的益处和运动计划） 课外活动 梦想职业体验 介绍自己、未来计划 文明礼貌伴我行 争做文明中学生 Self-Protection
文体 书信形式 记叙文 信件 演讲 记叙文
命题形式 命题作文 命题作文 命题作文 命题作文
人称 第一人称 第一人称 第一人称 第一人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时 一般现在时 一般现在时一般将来时 一般现在时一般将来时 一般现在时
与教材 的联系 八上Unit2 九年级Unit4 八上Unit2 九年级Unit4 八年级上册Units6+7 八年级上册Units6+7 七下Unit4九年Unit7
2017年
假如你是李华，是一名初三学生，2017年被评为“校园运动之星”。你的笔友Jim想请你介绍一下在初中三年里，运动在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些益处和你未来的运动计划。请你给Jim发一封电子邮件。（15分）
要点 1. 运动的益处（至少2点）。2 .未来的运动计划（至少2点）
要求 1 .词数90左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
2. 文字不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Jim,
How is it going I am proud of being chosen as the “School Sports Star ”of 2017.__________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
2017年
Dear Jim,
How is it going I am proud of being chosen as the "School Sports Star” of 2017. Now, I'd like to share my experience with you.
I used to be weak and shy, but now I become healthier than before by doing sports. Exercise also helps me get more confidence, so I am popular in our school now. With the growth of confidence and popularity,I study harder and get better grades. To stay healthy,I want to make a plan. First of all, I will do some running every morning. Then,I will climb the mountains onweekends.I believe it's never too late to do sports. Only in this way can we keep in good health.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018年中考
文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful “为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。（15分）
要点 1. 你所参加的1~2项课外活动。2. 课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
要求 1. 词数90左右。2. 文章中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
After-School Activities Make My Life
________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
2018年中考
After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays,after-school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities, such as arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club,I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
2019年
假如你是李华，你想参加China Daily 举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。（15分）
要点 1.个人信息与兴趣爱好。 2.梦想职业与个人计划。
要求 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr.Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you ._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply .
Best wishes !
2019年
Dear Mr.Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My friends say I'm an outgoing and helpful girl, and it's easy for me to get on well with others.
As for my hobby, reading is what I like best. In my spare time,I spend much time reading books, especially the books on medicine.Actually,my parents are both doctors. They influence me a lot, so to be a good doctor is my dream. I have been studying hard to enter a good medical university. Besides,I'm going to take more volunteer work to help sick people. Those experiences may help me become an excellent doctor.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
2020年
假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行,争当文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。（15分）
内容 1.列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响。2.提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议。3.发出争做文明中学生的号召。
要求 1.词数80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。2.文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名。3.可以适当发挥。
Hello , everyone! My name is Li Hua . Nowdays , people care more about grades .In fact ,good behaviors is as important as good grades .However ,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe we’ll be better students as long as we behave ourselves .
That’s all .Thanks for listening !
2020年
Hello,everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students jump the queue when they are waiting for something. These may make others uncomfortable. To be better students, we should think of others and keep our voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening!
2021年中考
在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友 ，饮食，交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection “为题，用英语写一篇短文。（15分）
内容 1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。 3.发出自我保护的号召。
要求 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。2.词数80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：书写规范，卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名。
Self Protection
These days ,people pay more attention to safety problems .__________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
In short ,self protection is important to us .Wish everyone a safe life !
2021年中考
Self Protection
These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. However, some of them know little about how to solve safety problems. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we should follow the traffic rules, or it may cause accidents. We mustn't cross the road when the traffic light is red. We should wait until the light turns greenWhat's more, be careful of making friends online. Strangers online may do something bad to us, so we'd better not tell personal information to them. Always think twice before meeting a Net friend. As long as we follow these suggestions, we are sure to live happily.
In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!
解题技巧
连词成句，连句成篇
无一遗漏确保内容的完整性
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拟定提纲，提炼要点
时间顺序、空间顺序或事理重要性顺序
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通读全文，查漏补缺
对全文进行检查和修改
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审题
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确定文体、主题、时态、人称
三、连词成句，连句成篇
方法一:善用词汇
我希望你能帮助我。 A.I wish you can help me.
B.I’m looking forward to your help.
他们很早就到了。 A.They arrived early.
B.They arrived as early as they could.
我认为学英语很有趣。 A.I think learning English is interesting.
B.I find it really fun to learn English .
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A.His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.
B.To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A.She is very young.She can’t carry the heavy box.
B.She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C.She is so young that she can’t carry the box.
D.She is not old enough to carry the box.
方法三: 妙用关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more ，not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; in order to do…;
7.表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; have great/much influence on sb./sth..;
方法三: 妙用关联词
8.表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; be good at
9.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand… on the other hand
10.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
11.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
12.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
13.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,
in short
四、通读全文，查漏补缺
作文写完之后，应从题目要求出发，对全文进行检查和修改。经过反复修改和润色，才能使文章句子流畅，布局严谨。对于文章的修饰，学生可从以下几方面着手：
◎用词方面
（1）代词的格和指代关系是否正确； （2）名词的单复数是否正确；
（3）动词的搭配是否准确； （4）副词的位置是否合适；
（5）形容词的比较级和最高级是否正确；
◎句子方面
（1）句型结构是否完整； （2）主谓人称是否一致；
（3）时态、语态、语气是否正确； （4）连句的方法是否恰当。
四、通读全文，查漏补缺
◎段落方面
（1）段落主题句是否概括本段的中心思想；
（2）扩展句是否都围绕这一主题，有无多余的句子；
（3）句子之间是否连贯；
（4）段落层次是否分明，是否合乎逻辑。
◎篇章方面
（1）文章主题是否合理自然；
（2）段落之间过渡是否合理；
（3）文章的文体及所用的组织方法是否恰当；
（4）文章内容是否充实，有无遗漏。
●典例精讲
人的生命仅有一次,安全队每个人都很重要.请根据以下提示,写一篇关于安全话题的短文.内容提示 :
1.外出时要遵守交通规则(obey traffic rules),上街要走人行道、不闯红灯（traffic lights);2.吃健康食物如如蔬菜、水果等，不吃垃圾食品；3.不独自下河游泳；4.当遇到危险时要保持镇定，并且寻求帮助。
要求：1.词数80个词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2.短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
How to be safe
Safety is very important to everyone. But how to be safe Let me tell you about it . First ,_____________________________
●典例精讲
【步骤1】正确理解提供的情景和要求
根据所给信息，确定本文主题是健康与安全，时态为一般现在时，人称为第三一人称。同时，根据所给提示信息，明确文章的具体内容是描述安全问题及采取的措施。
【步骤2】拟定提纲，提炼要点
根据以下关键词用简单的句子列出文章的要点：
safety is important、 obey traffic rules、 walk on the pavement、not go across the roads、 traffic lights、 healthy food、 healthy food、swim alone、 swim alone、 keep calm、 ask...for help...
【步骤3】连词成句，连句成篇
【步骤4】通读全文，查漏补缺
How to be safe
Safety is very important to everyone. But how to be safe Let me tell you about it.
First ,when we are out ,we should obey traffic rules. On the street ,we should walk on the pavement and remember not to go across the roads while the traffic lights turn red.Second ,it’s important for us to eat healthy food such as vegetables and fruits instead of junk food .Third ,we can’t swim alone in the river. Last but not least ,when we are in danger ,we must keep calm and ask others for help in time .
If we can follow these suggestions ,we’ll be safe .
●典例精讲
开头点题，引出作文主题。
①用First引出第一个要点—交通安全。描述时使用了when和while引导两个时间状语从句，同时长短句式的交叉使用以及适当的发挥增强了文章的可读性并丰富了文章内容。②用Second引出第二个要点—食品安全。本要点使用了it’s + adj.+ for sb.+ to do sth.这个句型，并运用了such as和instead of短语，使文章的可读性进一步加强。③用Third引出了一个简单句，引出第三个要点—游泳安全。这使得文章上下文错落有致。④用Last but not least引出第四个要点—遇险时该如何自救。这个短语的使用，不但强调了第四点的重要性，而且与文章开头First遥相呼应。从而使得文章重点突出、层次分明。
结尾总结，提出呼吁。
经典范文 (一)
良好的习惯成就美好未来。作为青少年，如何培养良好习惯呢 请根据以下内容提示以How to Develop Good Habts"为题写一篇英语短文. 80-100词
提示:
1上课认喜听讲，做笔记。
2.每天按时完成作业。
3.闲暇时多读课外书籍。
4.每周锻炼3至4次。
5.多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃不健康食品。
6补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。
How to Develop Good Habits
As teenagers,what should we do In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish schoolwork on time every day. In our spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less unhealthy food. It's necessary for us to take exercise three or four times a week. What's more, we should go to bed early to get enough sleep. We had better not stay up too late. We should always
remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing, it's healthy for our mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
保护地球有限的资源,倡导节约,抵制浪费，我们中学生也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学;随手关水、断电;废旧物品回收等。请根据要求和提示写一篇关于如何节约资源的演讲稿。(10分)
要求:90 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
提示词:yesources(资源),waste,electricity,recycle
经典范文 （二）
Dear students,As the world develops faster and better,the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. As students,we sbould da something to help save the resources. First,we should save water.Water is the resource of life.So it's very important for us to do so.We can furn off the water while we are washing our hair. Remember to turn off the electricity when you leave a room. Next, we'd better use public transportation or ride a bike to school. Riding bikes can bring some advantages. It is good for health and it doesn't cost anything.Beside's, it's necessary for us to recycle books and paper. Recysling them is really easy. We can save a lot of resources in this way. When we go shepping, we'd better take our own bags instead of using plastic bags from the supermarket.Above all,everyone can make a great contribution to saving the resources.No matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference.
即将离开母校了，初中三年的学习生活令人难忘，毕业际。你校将举行感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。
提示:1.感谢父母，教我如何生活。
2.感谢老师，教我许多知识
3.感谢同学，教我美好问忆开头已给出(不计入总词数)
经典范文 （三）
Good mornng, everyones .I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I'd like to thank everyone of you.
Firstly,, we should thank our perents. Since three years ago, they have been looking after me. they not only provide everything that we need for us but also teach us how to live well and healthily.
Secondly, we should say " thank you" to our teachers. We should thank them for giving us love and help. They teach us rich knowledge, they lead us to learn methods of solving problems, Although they were very strict with us, we all know they love us.
Thirdly, we should also thank our classmates and friends. They are the ones who are always ready to face difficulties wth us. Thanks to them, we will have lots of nice memories of friendshp forever.
That's all. Thank you.
校英语社团正在开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like ”的讨论,为此邀请了一些学生和家长，请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并阐述你的观点。
注意:1.文章必须包括表中内容,可适当增加细节;
2.你的观点至少两条,不能重复表中的观点;
3.词数:80~100。
Students’opinions Parents’opinions Your opinion
get on well with students give active and lively classes have plenty of knowledbe strict with studentsge
经典范文 （四）
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like. As for students, they think a good teacher should get along well with his students, and he is supposed to try to make his classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest. Different from students, parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge. What's more, teachers should be strict with their students.
In my opinion, the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students, especially those who have difficulties in learning. Anyway, they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well.
时光荏苒,毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去民年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一,并根据提示写一篇短。
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文章不少于 90 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
School life in the past three years School life in the coming
three years
your hobby or interest activities you took part in and your progress your friends and teachers your dream or plan
activities you hope to join in and the reasons
teachers and classmates you hope to meet
经典范文 （五）
How time flies! It's time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years.
I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussion. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected. I am not as shy as I used to be and willing to try new things.
I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest. My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as I'm concerned,reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three year school life forever.
共勉
教学中的每一次讲授，每一次作业，每一次练习，都应该紧紧围绕《课程标准》和教材展开，平时的任何一堂课，任何一次测试，都要权衡再三再进行，向每一堂课要质量。随便地拿一套试卷就练，随便地拿一道题就讲，是对自己工作的亵渎，更是对学生的一种敷衍，根据《课程标准》量体裁衣，才能做出合适的服装。否则，学生穿起来就会过大或者过小，就是教学失败。教学延伸面的宽窄是否适度，决定课堂效率的高低。只有目标明确的教学范围，才能收到事半功倍的效果。最后，祝在座各位同仁2022年中考成绩再上一个新台阶。祝各位身体健康，心想事成。
汇报完毕，感谢倾听
新源镇中学 吕清侠