2013中考英语书面表达第9集：共43页（含名师指导写作技巧）
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2013中考英语书面表达第9集：共43页（含名师指导写作技巧）
先全面而系统地指导中考作文的写作技巧，然后精选了几十篇书面表达，都有参考范文。
作文七注意
（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意
（二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 （三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句,感叹句.适当使用复合句和强调句。另外,要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句,谚语等以加强文章的感染力.
（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
（五）谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（六）检查修改文章:
（七）写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到卷面上。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。
二、谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（一）作文万能结构示意图
（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练
三、作文步骤
1. 审题分析题目：找出作文的文体、时态、人称和文章的要点。
2. 根据要点的意思用英语进行最贴切的表达。
3. 多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。
4. 写好开头和结尾。
5. 复查纠错。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： *******************************************************
一、例题精析
书面表达（满分25分）题目：
假设你叫王平，你了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。请用英语给Happy Teens的主席Mr. Holmes 写一封电子邮件，介绍同学李强加入他们的组织。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
要点：
李强是九年级二班的尖子生。
正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。
有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。
几天前来向我征求建议。
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯。2.包含以上所有要点。3.词数80左右。
Dear Mr. Holmes,
I have a friend named Li Qiang.______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【题目分析】
（一）审题可得
文体：写信的应用文
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。
我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。
（二）要点组织
李强是九年级二班的尖子生。He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine.
正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。
He is an honest boy and he always helps others. / He is honest and helpful.
He has helped two poor children to return to school to study.
有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。
Sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him.
几天前来向我征求建议。He came to ask me for advice a few days ago.
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. He can be happy again.
我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。
I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization to solve the youth problems through all kinds of activities.
I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities.
我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。 I want to introduce him to join our organization.
（三）分析题目，写好开头和结尾，恰当增加连接句子和连接词，使文章一气呵成。
Dear Mr. Holmes,
I have a friend named Li Qiang . He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine. And all of us love him very much. Why? Because he is an honest boy and he always helps others. As we all know, he has helped two poor children to returned to school to study. However, sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him. We all are unhappy. And he is very worried. So, he came to ask me for advice a few days ago. These days, I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities. So I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. As result, I introduce him to join the organization in order that he can be happy again. I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.
Yours,
Wang Ping
二、中考考点要求
根据中文提示，写一篇70-100字左右的英文表达。(尽量不要超过150个单词)
内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。；了
三、作文七注意
（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意
1.审清文体 2. 选准人称 3. 用好时态 4. 突出要点 （二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 （三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句,感叹句.适当使用复合句和强调句。另外,要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句,谚语等以加强文章的感染力.
（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的用法。 4）注意冠词用法。例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。e.g：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant, etc.
（五）谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（六）检查修改文章:
认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连贯性来给分，根据错
误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方
面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点
5)时态、语态错误。6)标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。
（七）写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到卷面上。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。
书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
四、谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（一）作文万能结构示意图
（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练
▲【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Good beginning is half done.
1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句
2. 开头万能句型：
1) ....plays an important part in the...
2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more....
3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in ....
4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so.
5) I will never forget the ....
3.造主题句训练Make a topic sentence.
1）Smoking
As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.
Many students say smoking is fun, but I don’t think so.
As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.
2）The Spring Festival
I will never forget the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life.
Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I don’t think so.
3）Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English. But I don’t think so.
4）To be a volunteer for the 16th Asian Games
As we all know, the 16th Asian Games is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.
A volunteer plays an important part in the 16th Asian Games.
5）A School Trip
I will never forget the school trip last week.
▲【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。
2. 结尾经典词组、句型：
At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望
Let’s try our best to ....
I believe if we can..., ... will be ....
What a ...! / How...!
3.根据主题概括训练Make a concluding sentence
1）Keeping healthy
Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.
2）Helping others
I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
3）To be a green consumer(绿色消费者)
Let’s try our best to be a green consumer.
In one word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment.
4）Beijing
How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?
▲开头、结尾的实战训练
书面表达
在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。
提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭
4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗
要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。
满分作文 （25分）
As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch. After supper, I always wash dishes. I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）
▲【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】
1.长句短句交叉使用最好。
2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句
提高档次。
3.把握要点，层次清晰。
4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become
正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气
☆需要熟记的连接词有：
1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序
1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally
3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during
2、表示并列
not only... but also, both... and, either ...or,
neither...nor，on (the) one hand…on the other hand
3、表示举例或补充
1）for example
2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse
4、表示转折 however, but，although, instead of
5、表示原因 thanks to, because of，because
6、表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, such...that,
7、表目的 in order to, so that
8、表比较 the same as, than, of all ...
★正文巧用连接词和从句的实战训练★
Example:
生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。
要求：
1、语言规范，书写工整。
2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding…….
基础一般的同学的写法：
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved. I couldn’t say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.
基础好的同学的写法：
范文
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “As we are good friends, we should help each other.” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.
正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气（上文句子对比）
Which sentence is better?
1. I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. ( good)
When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. (better)
句式富于变化
Which sentence is better?
1.We are good friends. We should help each other. （good）
We are good friends and we should help each other. （better）
As we are good friends , we should help each other.（best）
句式富于变化
1.I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word. (good )
I was too moved to say a word. (better)
五、作文步骤
1. 审题分析题目：找出作文的文体、时态、人称和文章的要点。
2. 根据要点的意思用英语进行最贴切的表达。注意每一个句子的主语尽量多样化，也就是说句子类型要多样化（能力的范围内尽量简单句和复合句交替使用），但文章的人称、时态应基本保持一致。另外，如果你有些要点不会直接表达，则注意转变成你会表达的英文去表达，但不要改变文章原本的意思更不能因为不会表达就放弃表达或者用错误的表达。
3. 多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。
4. 写好开头和结尾。
5. 复查纠错。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点。
5) 时态、语态错误。6) 标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。
6. 注意书写，卷面做到无任何一处涂改。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有时间，都要草稿，特别是看图写句子。
六、附：8个话题作文
1.关于学习英语的话题: “How to learn English well?” 2.卫生健康饮食:
3.?“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。
4.环境问题
5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ” 6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法
7.介绍自己的兴趣业余爱好。 8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2012年的春节。
一.?环保 1.?It’s?our?duty?to?protect?our?environment。 2.?It?is?very?important?to?take?care?of?our?environment 3.?We?should?not?throw?litter?onto?the?ground 4.?We?should?not?spit?in?a?public?place/??cut?down?the?trees 5.?We?should?plant?more?flowers?and?trees。 6.?We?must?pick?up?some?rubbish?and?throw?it?into?a?dustbin 7.?If?everyone?makes?contributions?to?protecting?the?environment,?the?world?will?become?much?more?beautiful.
二、?旅游 1.?Last?Sunday(Saturday,…)?,it?was?sunny(rainy,?windy,?foggy,) 2.?I?got?up?very?early?(late).?After?breakfast?I?went?to?…with?my?friends?by?bike,?bus，… 3.?We?enjoyed?ourselves. 4.?We?forgot?the?time.?We?didn’t?come?back?until?5?o’clock。 5.?We?all?felt?very?tired,?but?we?were?happy. 6.?I?thought?I?would?never?forget?this?trip. 7.?Last?summer,?my?parents?and?I?went?to?Beijing?for?our?holidays。 8.?We?visited?a?lot?of?places?of?interest. 9.?We?had?a?good?time?there. 10.?We?bought?a?lot?of?things.?The?clothes?here?are?good?and?cheap.
三、?比赛 1.?Last?Sunday,?Class?One?had?a?football?match?with?Class?Two. 2.?All?of?us?went?to?watch?it. 3.?The?match?was?very?exciting. 4.?In?fact,?I?have?never?seen?such?an?exciting?match?before。 5.?The?score?was?5-3.?Our?team?scored?three?goals?in?the last?fifteen?minutes. 6.?Class?One?won?this?match.?Class?Two?lost. 7.?Class?One?played?well.?They?deserved?to?win。 8.?Their?PE?teacher?was?very?pleased?with?their?performance.
四、?健康 1.?It?is?very?important?to?keep?healthy. 2.?How?can?we?keep?healthy? 3.?We?can’t?go?to?sleep?too?late.?We?can’t?get?up?too?late。 4.?We?should?eat?the?food?healthily. 5.?We?should?do?more?exercise. 6.?Last?Tuesday?I?got?a?cold?and?had?a?pain?in?my?head。 7.?I?didn’t?feel?like?eating?anything. 8.?I?decided?to?see?the?doctor. 9.?In?the?doctor’s?office,?the?doctor?looks?over?me?carefully. 10.?He?said?:"Nothing?serious."?And?he?told?me?to?take?a?rest?and?drink?more?water. 11.?A?nurse?gave?me?an?injection.?It?was?a?little?painful. 12.?The?doctor?asked?me?to?take?the?medicine?three?times?a?day. 13.?A?few?days?later,?I?felt?better.?From?then?on?I?believe?that?keeping?healthy?is?the?most?important?thing?in?the?world.
五、?学科 1.?My?favorite?subject?is?English。 2.?More?than?three?quarters?of?the?information?on?the?Internet?is?in?English. 3.?It?is?used?by?travelers?and?business?people?all?over?the?world. 4.?China?has?joined?the?WTO?and?the?Olympic?Games?will?be?held?in?China.?English?becomes?more?and?more?useful. 5.?So?English?is?very?important?and?I?like?English?very?much。 6.?We?have?a?lot?of?fun?in?the?English?class. 7.?Our?English?teacher?often?makes?us?happy?in?the English?class. 8.?I?hope?I?can?go?abroad?one?day,?and?then?I?can?speak to?foreigners?in?English。 9.?I?like?English?and?try?my?best?to?learn?it.
六、?节日 1.?In?China?the?most?important?holiday?is?the?Spring?Festival. 2.?It?comes?in?January?or?February. 3.?On?the?Spring?Festival?Eve?people?have?a?big?dinner.?They?have?a?lot?of?nice?food?to?eat. 4.?During?the?Spring?Festival?people?have?a?lot?of?interesting?things?to?do. 5.?People?visit?their?relatives?and?friends.。 6.?They?greet?each?other?with?a?hug?and?say,?"Happy?New?Year“. 7.?As?China?is?a?big?country,?people?in?different?places celebrate? this?holiday in?different?ways.
七、?写人 1.?His?name?is?Jack. 2.?He?was?born?in?London?in?1982. 3.?He?is?1.68?meters?tall?and?weighs?52?kilos. 4.?He?is?20?years?old. 5.?He?comes?from?England. 6.?He?is?a?good?ping-pong?player. 7.?He?is?medium?build. 8.?He?has?short?hair. 9.?He?is?outgoing.?Every?one?likes?to?talk?with?him.?He?gets?on well?with?us. 10.?He?teaches?English?very?well. 11.?He?works?very?hard.?He?works?in?No.5?Middle?School. 12.?He?loves?watching?football?games?after?work. 13.?He?often?helps?me?with?my?English. 14.?At?the?age?of?six,?he?began?to?play?table?tennis.
八、?生活 1.?Jim?got?up?very?early. 2.?Jim?cleaned?the?room?and?do?the?housework. 3.?Jim?went?to?shop?and?did?some?shopping. 4.?Jim?did?some?cooking. 5.?Jim?fed?the?cat. 6.?Jim?sweeps?the?floor. 7.?He?washes?the?dishes. 8.?He?has?lunch?at?school. 9.?It?is?a?busy?day.?He?is?very?tired.?But?he?feels
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【001】----【日照市2012】书面表达
三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories ”为题，给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意：1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆（学业有成、爱好特长、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾）和对未来的憧憬。
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed
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【参考范文】One possible version：
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
（二）评分说明：
1. 文章要包含题目所要求的内容，即使和参考答案中所提及的不一致，亦可接受。
2. 要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。
请按下列五个档次评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，7－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，5－6分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，3－4分。
5. 仅能写出与文章有关的单词或片语，0—2分。
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【002】----【2012重庆真题】书面表达。(15分)
假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。
要点提示：学科网校对
1．路线(见右图)；
2．公园环境优美、凉爽，
还可游泳、野餐等；
3．……
要求：
1．词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
【参考范文】.One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
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【003】----考点一、话题作文【2010·湖北省咸宁市】
为配合我市举行的“6·5世界环境日”万人骑自行车城区环游活动，请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon（低碳）, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）
短文要点如下：
1．在6月5日自己骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；
2．在家使用节能灯；减少洗澡淋浴时间；
3．将用过的课本留给下届学生；
4．请你就此话题补充1-2个个人做法。
要求：
1．不要逐词翻译；
2．在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名；
3．词数80左右；短文标题和首尾句已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
节能灯 energy-saving lamp
用过的 used
下届 lower grades
Lower carbon, happier life
It’s our duty to save the environment.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
【参考范文】Lower carbon, happier life
It’s our duty to save the environment. I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus on June 5. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they are shopping.(I will turn off the lights before leaving.)
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
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【004】----【日照市2010】书面表达
我市是一个海滨旅游城市，每年夏天接待大量的外国游客。学校学生会决定招 聘部分志愿者在暑假期间为外国游客服务。
假若你是李华(16岁，九年级十一班），希望参加这次志愿活动，既帮助别人，锻 炼自己，又能提高自己的英语能力。
请根据所给提示，用英文回复下面的招聘启事。
注意内容包括应聘的条件、目的及打算；
2.不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.词数:80左右。
12 Volunteers Wanted
Serving for the foreign visitors during the summer vacation.
Outgoing; Excellent spoken English ； Know about some western culture Those who are interested in this activity, please send your email to studentunion@ 163. com before June 14th, 2010 for an applying.
Student Union
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers.
I'm looking forward to your early reply. .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】**********
One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers. I'm Li Hua，a girl of sixteen years old, from Class 11， Grade 9. English is my favorite subject, and I can speak English very well. What's more，I know some customs of some foreign countries. As an outgoing girl, I'm getting on well with my classmates and teachers. I really like to meet all kinds of people.
To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself，because I can have a good understanding of the world. I believe I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English and it's quite helpful for my future life.
If I am accepted, I'll try my best to do it well. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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【005】----考点一、话题作文【2010·江苏省镇江市】
请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述（至少3点），可适当发挥（例如：We are usually fair. We always treat others equally.)。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。
具体要求：
1? 内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议，可适当发挥。
2? 括号内所给例句不得使用。
3? 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4? 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
5? 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。
As post?90s students, we have so many advantages.
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【参考范文】One possible version：
As post?90s students，we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition，we are abviously imaginative. We always try something new and do everything differently.
On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth，some of us ar a little impolite. Sometimes we can?t express our opinions in a correct ways. What?s more，we are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.
Overall，as post?90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. Boys and girls，the future is up to us to createe.
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【006】----【2012株洲真题】
中考马上要结束了，考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David，你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信，告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情，并说明理由。
注意：1. 60词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
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Yours,
David
【参考范文】A possible version:
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to get your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stayed up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball very much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a few interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
David
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【007】----【2010·浙江省卷】
请你选择最喜欢的一门学科，以My favourite Subject 为题，写一篇短文，说说喜欢这门学科的理由，以及平时是怎样学习的。
要求：1.词数80左右
2.叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
【参考范文】My favourite Subject
English is my favourte subject because English is used widely in the world，especially in Yiwu，a city with so many foreigners. What’s more，I like it because my English teacher is kind and friendly to me.
In order to learn English well，I read English aloud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class，I often wacth English programs and keep an English diary every day.
In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better.
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【008】----【2012苏州真题】书面表达（共1题；满分20分）
假设你是名初三毕业生，考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天，请你根据下表所列的 内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，写下这一天的感受。.
去校前
兴奋(原因自拟） 担忧(原因自拟）
到校后
发现老师、同学友好 忘了紧张、感觉自在
离校时
不会再担心 相信会快乐
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 日记的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；
3. 日记须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
4. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
【参考范文】One possible version ：
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.
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【009】----【2012南京真题】书面表达（满分15分）
上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday.
【参考范文】One possible version:
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.
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【010】----【2010·四川省卷】
为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well？”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中学生的身份写一篇60--80词的短文参赛。
内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ……
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。
How to behave well?
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【参考范文】 How to behave well?
As a student in Yibin, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
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【011】----【2012温州真题】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章：内容包括，走路有利健康，和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等；可适当发挥。
注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：be good for, with friends, save
【参考范文】
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
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【012】----【2012衢州真题】
假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
?
A pleasant outing
时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北山公园(the North Hill Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……
感受
……
?
要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
（3）词数: 80~110个。
?
参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic
?
A pleasant outing
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【参考范文】One Possible version
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 p.m.. We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing it was!
(106 words)
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【013】----【2010·江苏省苏州市】
假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲I Believe I Can Fly．这
是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲．请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛．
内容要点；
1．这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性；
2．自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功；
3．梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难；
4．没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功；
5．你的感悟(考生自拟，至少一点)．
注意：
1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．参考词汇：自信—confidence(n．)；
3．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R．Kelly．___________________________________写___________________________________________________在________________________________________________________________答____________________________________________________________
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____________________________________指______________________________________
_____________________________________________定_____________________________
_____________________________________________________位____________________
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【参考范文】 I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R．Kelly．This song tells us that confidence is very important．When a person has confidence，he believes in himself．He believes that he can and will succeed，and this gives him the courage to try new things．Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties．No one can achieve success without them．If you believe you tail fly，then you can really fly someday．
I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties．I’ll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success．
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【014】----【2010湖南省娄底市】
Zhou Hui和Ge Bin是“一帮一”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。Zhou Hui在Ge Bin的帮助下有了明显的进步。请根据下表信息写一篇60字左右的短文。（开头已写出，不计入总词数）
Zhou Hui
In the past
didn’t listen carefully in his class ,?like to play computer games every day
Ge Bin
Now
study hard?
get on well with his classmates
Make Zhou Hui be interested in his study
Help Zhou Hui with his study
?
【参考范文】One possible version
We are very glad that Zhou Hui has made great progress. But in the past he didn’t listen carefully in class. He also liked to play computer games every day. Ge Bin is Zhou ?Hui’s? classmate and friend. He tried his best to make Zhou Hui be interested in his study and help him with his study after school. With his help， Zhou Hui studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now.
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【015】----【2012陕西真题】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求：
1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
4. 词数：60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
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That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
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【016】----【2010江苏省宿迁市】
假如你是李华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。
要点：
李华
爱好
对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料
困惑
得不到老师理解
观点
1.个人爱好有助于学习；
2. ……(至少一点)
老师
观点
时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切
注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头和结尾已给出的内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
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【017】----【2012黑河真题】书面表达 (共计15分)
Writing （本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分）
（注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分）
( A ) 6月1日，张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会，会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封E-mail。询问她的身体状况，表达感激与思念，并告诉她同学们一定会努力学习，同时祝她早日康复。要求：字数30—50词。
Dear Ms Zhang,
How are you?________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
【参考范文】(A) One possible version:
Dear Miss Zhang,
How are you? We all miss you very much (1分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1分). Don’t worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1分) ? We all hope you’ll get well soon (1分).
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)
内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议
要求：1.词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all.
【参考范文】B Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.
But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.
Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
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【018】----【2010·河南省】
请“ is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；
2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
3．词数80左右。
is fun
【参考范文】 Cooking is fun
Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons.
First, it is a good way to show my love to my parents. Both my parents are very busy. So
When I come back home early,I’11 cook for them. After they return，we sit together and enjoy
the meal. I can see them smile happily.
Second．It is a kind of creation. I always try to cook different dishes. When my new dish
is praised by others, I feel proud.
l like cooking. It brings me a lot of fun.
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【019】----【2012 山东滨州真题】书面表达
规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一
篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2．词数：80—100。标题和短文开头已给出，不计
入总词数。
3．参考词汇：be friendly to…，help，study hard，
come true
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be ______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
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【020】----【2012新疆阜康真题】书面表达（满分15分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
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【021】----【2012福州真题】提示作文(12分)
2011年12月20日，福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National civilized city)。你学校的English club正在举办以“文明福州，持续文明”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示：◆尊敬师长，明礼诚信 ◆友善待人，乐才助人
◆遵守交规，不闯红灯 ◆保护环境，(写2—3个例子)
要 求：1)词数80左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数；
2)内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
参考词汇：respect (v. 尊敬), polite, honest, obey, traffic lights, protect the environment
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we ..._________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
【参考范文】
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students~ what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it's always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it's important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about. We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass. In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
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【022】----【2012 桂林真题】.书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend“为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
.
【参考范文】One possible version
My good friend[www.@z&zstep.#^c%om]
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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【023】----【2012 宿迁真题】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
【参考范文】One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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先全面而系统地指导中考作文的写作技巧，然后精选了几十篇书面表达，都有参考范文。
作文七注意
（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意
（二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 （三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句,感叹句.适当使用复合句和强调句。另外,要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句,谚语等以加强文章的感染力.
（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
（五）谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（六）检查修改文章:
（七）写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到卷面上。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。
二、谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（一）作文万能结构示意图
（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练
三、作文步骤
1. 审题分析题目：找出作文的文体、时态、人称和文章的要点。
2. 根据要点的意思用英语进行最贴切的表达。
3. 多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。
4. 写好开头和结尾。
5. 复查纠错。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： *******************************************************
一、例题精析
书面表达（满分25分）题目：
假设你叫王平，你了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。请用英语给Happy Teens的主席Mr. Holmes 写一封电子邮件，介绍同学李强加入他们的组织。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
要点：
李强是九年级二班的尖子生。
正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。
有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。
几天前来向我征求建议。
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯。2.包含以上所有要点。3.词数80左右。
Dear Mr. Holmes,
I have a friend named Li Qiang.______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【题目分析】
（一）审题可得
文体：写信的应用文
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。
我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。
（二）要点组织
李强是九年级二班的尖子生。He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine.
正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。
He is an honest boy and he always helps others. / He is honest and helpful.
He has helped two poor children to return to school to study.
有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。
Sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him.
几天前来向我征求建议。He came to ask me for advice a few days ago.
你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。
I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. He can be happy again.
我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。
I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization to solve the youth problems through all kinds of activities.
I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities.
我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。 I want to introduce him to join our organization.
（三）分析题目，写好开头和结尾，恰当增加连接句子和连接词，使文章一气呵成。
Dear Mr. Holmes,
I have a friend named Li Qiang . He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine. And all of us love him very much. Why? Because he is an honest boy and he always helps others. As we all know, he has helped two poor children to returned to school to study. However, sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him. We all are unhappy. And he is very worried. So, he came to ask me for advice a few days ago. These days, I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities. So I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. As result, I introduce him to join the organization in order that he can be happy again. I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.
Yours,
Wang Ping
二、中考考点要求
根据中文提示，写一篇70-100字左右的英文表达。(尽量不要超过150个单词)
内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。；了
三、作文七注意
（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意
1.审清文体 2. 选准人称 3. 用好时态 4. 突出要点 （二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 （三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句,感叹句.适当使用复合句和强调句。另外,要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句,谚语等以加强文章的感染力.
（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的用法。 4）注意冠词用法。例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。e.g：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant, etc.
（五）谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（六）检查修改文章:
认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连贯性来给分，根据错
误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方
面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点
5)时态、语态错误。6)标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。
（七）写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到卷面上。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。
书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
四、谋篇布局——写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】
（一）作文万能结构示意图
（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练
▲【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Good beginning is half done.
1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句
2. 开头万能句型：
1) ....plays an important part in the...
2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more....
3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in ....
4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so.
5) I will never forget the ....
3.造主题句训练Make a topic sentence.
1）Smoking
As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.
Many students say smoking is fun, but I don’t think so.
As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.
2）The Spring Festival
I will never forget the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life.
Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I don’t think so.
3）Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English. But I don’t think so.
4）To be a volunteer for the 16th Asian Games
As we all know, the 16th Asian Games is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.
A volunteer plays an important part in the 16th Asian Games.
5）A School Trip
I will never forget the school trip last week.
▲【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。
2. 结尾经典词组、句型：
At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望
Let’s try our best to ....
I believe if we can..., ... will be ....
What a ...! / How...!
3.根据主题概括训练Make a concluding sentence
1）Keeping healthy
Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.
2）Helping others
I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
3）To be a green consumer(绿色消费者)
Let’s try our best to be a green consumer.
In one word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment.
4）Beijing
How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?
▲开头、结尾的实战训练
书面表达
在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。
提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭
4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗
要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。
满分作文 （25分）
As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch. After supper, I always wash dishes. I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）
▲【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】
1.长句短句交叉使用最好。
2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句
提高档次。
3.把握要点，层次清晰。
4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become
正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气
☆需要熟记的连接词有：
1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序
1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally
3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during
2、表示并列
not only... but also, both... and, either ...or,
neither...nor，on (the) one hand…on the other hand
3、表示举例或补充
1）for example
2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse
4、表示转折 however, but，although, instead of
5、表示原因 thanks to, because of，because
6、表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, such...that,
7、表目的 in order to, so that
8、表比较 the same as, than, of all ...
★正文巧用连接词和从句的实战训练★
Example:
生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。
要求：
1、语言规范，书写工整。
2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding…….
基础一般的同学的写法：
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved. I couldn’t say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.
基础好的同学的写法：
范文
Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “As we are good friends, we should help each other.” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.
正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气（上文句子对比）
Which sentence is better?
1. I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. ( good)
When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. (better)
句式富于变化
Which sentence is better?
1.We are good friends. We should help each other. （good）
We are good friends and we should help each other. （better）
As we are good friends , we should help each other.（best）
句式富于变化
1.I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word. (good )
I was too moved to say a word. (better)
五、作文步骤
1. 审题分析题目：找出作文的文体、时态、人称和文章的要点。
2. 根据要点的意思用英语进行最贴切的表达。注意每一个句子的主语尽量多样化，也就是说句子类型要多样化（能力的范围内尽量简单句和复合句交替使用），但文章的人称、时态应基本保持一致。另外，如果你有些要点不会直接表达，则注意转变成你会表达的英文去表达，但不要改变文章原本的意思更不能因为不会表达就放弃表达或者用错误的表达。
3. 多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。
4. 写好开头和结尾。
5. 复查纠错。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点。
5) 时态、语态错误。6) 标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。
6. 注意书写，卷面做到无任何一处涂改。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有时间，都要草稿，特别是看图写句子。
六、附：8个话题作文
1.关于学习英语的话题: “How to learn English well?” 2.卫生健康饮食:
3.?“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。
4.环境问题
5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ” 6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法
7.介绍自己的兴趣业余爱好。 8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2012年的春节。
一.?环保 1.?It’s?our?duty?to?protect?our?environment。 2.?It?is?very?important?to?take?care?of?our?environment 3.?We?should?not?throw?litter?onto?the?ground 4.?We?should?not?spit?in?a?public?place/??cut?down?the?trees 5.?We?should?plant?more?flowers?and?trees。 6.?We?must?pick?up?some?rubbish?and?throw?it?into?a?dustbin 7.?If?everyone?makes?contributions?to?protecting?the?environment,?the?world?will?become?much?more?beautiful.
二、?旅游 1.?Last?Sunday(Saturday,…)?,it?was?sunny(rainy,?windy,?foggy,) 2.?I?got?up?very?early?(late).?After?breakfast?I?went?to?…with?my?friends?by?bike,?bus，… 3.?We?enjoyed?ourselves. 4.?We?forgot?the?time.?We?didn’t?come?back?until?5?o’clock。 5.?We?all?felt?very?tired,?but?we?were?happy. 6.?I?thought?I?would?never?forget?this?trip. 7.?Last?summer,?my?parents?and?I?went?to?Beijing?for?our?holidays。 8.?We?visited?a?lot?of?places?of?interest. 9.?We?had?a?good?time?there. 10.?We?bought?a?lot?of?things.?The?clothes?here?are?good?and?cheap.
三、?比赛 1.?Last?Sunday,?Class?One?had?a?football?match?with?Class?Two. 2.?All?of?us?went?to?watch?it. 3.?The?match?was?very?exciting. 4.?In?fact,?I?have?never?seen?such?an?exciting?match?before。 5.?The?score?was?5-3.?Our?team?scored?three?goals?in?the last?fifteen?minutes. 6.?Class?One?won?this?match.?Class?Two?lost. 7.?Class?One?played?well.?They?deserved?to?win。 8.?Their?PE?teacher?was?very?pleased?with?their?performance.
四、?健康 1.?It?is?very?important?to?keep?healthy. 2.?How?can?we?keep?healthy? 3.?We?can’t?go?to?sleep?too?late.?We?can’t?get?up?too?late。 4.?We?should?eat?the?food?healthily. 5.?We?should?do?more?exercise. 6.?Last?Tuesday?I?got?a?cold?and?had?a?pain?in?my?head。 7.?I?didn’t?feel?like?eating?anything. 8.?I?decided?to?see?the?doctor. 9.?In?the?doctor’s?office,?the?doctor?looks?over?me?carefully. 10.?He?said?:"Nothing?serious."?And?he?told?me?to?take?a?rest?and?drink?more?water. 11.?A?nurse?gave?me?an?injection.?It?was?a?little?painful. 12.?The?doctor?asked?me?to?take?the?medicine?three?times?a?day. 13.?A?few?days?later,?I?felt?better.?From?then?on?I?believe?that?keeping?healthy?is?the?most?important?thing?in?the?world.
五、?学科 1.?My?favorite?subject?is?English。 2.?More?than?three?quarters?of?the?information?on?the?Internet?is?in?English. 3.?It?is?used?by?travelers?and?business?people?all?over?the?world. 4.?China?has?joined?the?WTO?and?the?Olympic?Games?will?be?held?in?China.?English?becomes?more?and?more?useful. 5.?So?English?is?very?important?and?I?like?English?very?much。 6.?We?have?a?lot?of?fun?in?the?English?class. 7.?Our?English?teacher?often?makes?us?happy?in?the English?class. 8.?I?hope?I?can?go?abroad?one?day,?and?then?I?can?speak to?foreigners?in?English。 9.?I?like?English?and?try?my?best?to?learn?it.
六、?节日 1.?In?China?the?most?important?holiday?is?the?Spring?Festival. 2.?It?comes?in?January?or?February. 3.?On?the?Spring?Festival?Eve?people?have?a?big?dinner.?They?have?a?lot?of?nice?food?to?eat. 4.?During?the?Spring?Festival?people?have?a?lot?of?interesting?things?to?do. 5.?People?visit?their?relatives?and?friends.。 6.?They?greet?each?other?with?a?hug?and?say,?"Happy?New?Year“. 7.?As?China?is?a?big?country,?people?in?different?places celebrate? this?holiday in?different?ways.
七、?写人 1.?His?name?is?Jack. 2.?He?was?born?in?London?in?1982. 3.?He?is?1.68?meters?tall?and?weighs?52?kilos. 4.?He?is?20?years?old. 5.?He?comes?from?England. 6.?He?is?a?good?ping-pong?player. 7.?He?is?medium?build. 8.?He?has?short?hair. 9.?He?is?outgoing.?Every?one?likes?to?talk?with?him.?He?gets?on well?with?us. 10.?He?teaches?English?very?well. 11.?He?works?very?hard.?He?works?in?No.5?Middle?School. 12.?He?loves?watching?football?games?after?work. 13.?He?often?helps?me?with?my?English. 14.?At?the?age?of?six,?he?began?to?play?table?tennis.
八、?生活 1.?Jim?got?up?very?early. 2.?Jim?cleaned?the?room?and?do?the?housework. 3.?Jim?went?to?shop?and?did?some?shopping. 4.?Jim?did?some?cooking. 5.?Jim?fed?the?cat. 6.?Jim?sweeps?the?floor. 7.?He?washes?the?dishes. 8.?He?has?lunch?at?school. 9.?It?is?a?busy?day.?He?is?very?tired.?But?he?feels
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【001】----【日照市2012】书面表达
三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories ”为题，给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意：1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆（学业有成、爱好特长、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾）和对未来的憧憬。
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed
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【参考范文】One possible version：
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
（二）评分说明：
1. 文章要包含题目所要求的内容，即使和参考答案中所提及的不一致，亦可接受。
2. 要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。
请按下列五个档次评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，7－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，5－6分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，3－4分。
5. 仅能写出与文章有关的单词或片语，0—2分。
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【002】----【2012重庆真题】书面表达。(15分)
假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。
要点提示：学科网校对
1．路线(见右图)；
2．公园环境优美、凉爽，
还可游泳、野餐等；
3．……
要求：
1．词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
【参考范文】.One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
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【003】----考点一、话题作文【2010·湖北省咸宁市】
为配合我市举行的“6·5世界环境日”万人骑自行车城区环游活动，请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon（低碳）, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）
短文要点如下：
1．在6月5日自己骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；
2．在家使用节能灯；减少洗澡淋浴时间；
3．将用过的课本留给下届学生；
4．请你就此话题补充1-2个个人做法。
要求：
1．不要逐词翻译；
2．在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名；
3．词数80左右；短文标题和首尾句已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
节能灯 energy-saving lamp
用过的 used
下届 lower grades
Lower carbon, happier life
It’s our duty to save the environment.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
【参考范文】Lower carbon, happier life
It’s our duty to save the environment. I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus on June 5. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they are shopping.(I will turn off the lights before leaving.)
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
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【004】----【日照市2010】书面表达
我市是一个海滨旅游城市，每年夏天接待大量的外国游客。学校学生会决定招 聘部分志愿者在暑假期间为外国游客服务。
假若你是李华(16岁，九年级十一班），希望参加这次志愿活动，既帮助别人，锻 炼自己，又能提高自己的英语能力。
请根据所给提示，用英文回复下面的招聘启事。
注意内容包括应聘的条件、目的及打算；
2.不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.词数:80左右。
12 Volunteers Wanted
Serving for the foreign visitors during the summer vacation.
Outgoing; Excellent spoken English ； Know about some western culture Those who are interested in this activity, please send your email to studentunion@ 163. com before June 14th, 2010 for an applying.
Student Union
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers.
I'm looking forward to your early reply. .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】**********
One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers. I'm Li Hua，a girl of sixteen years old, from Class 11， Grade 9. English is my favorite subject, and I can speak English very well. What's more，I know some customs of some foreign countries. As an outgoing girl, I'm getting on well with my classmates and teachers. I really like to meet all kinds of people.
To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself，because I can have a good understanding of the world. I believe I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English and it's quite helpful for my future life.
If I am accepted, I'll try my best to do it well. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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【005】----考点一、话题作文【2010·江苏省镇江市】
请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述（至少3点），可适当发挥（例如：We are usually fair. We always treat others equally.)。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。
具体要求：
1? 内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议，可适当发挥。
2? 括号内所给例句不得使用。
3? 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4? 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
5? 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。
As post?90s students, we have so many advantages.
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【参考范文】One possible version：
As post?90s students，we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition，we are abviously imaginative. We always try something new and do everything differently.
On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth，some of us ar a little impolite. Sometimes we can?t express our opinions in a correct ways. What?s more，we are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.
Overall，as post?90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. Boys and girls，the future is up to us to createe.
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【006】----【2012株洲真题】
中考马上要结束了，考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David，你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信，告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情，并说明理由。
注意：1. 60词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
【参考范文】A possible version:
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to get your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stayed up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball very much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a few interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
David
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【007】----【2010·浙江省卷】
请你选择最喜欢的一门学科，以My favourite Subject 为题，写一篇短文，说说喜欢这门学科的理由，以及平时是怎样学习的。
要求：1.词数80左右
2.叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
【参考范文】My favourite Subject
English is my favourte subject because English is used widely in the world，especially in Yiwu，a city with so many foreigners. What’s more，I like it because my English teacher is kind and friendly to me.
In order to learn English well，I read English aloud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class，I often wacth English programs and keep an English diary every day.
In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better.
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【008】----【2012苏州真题】书面表达（共1题；满分20分）
假设你是名初三毕业生，考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天，请你根据下表所列的 内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，写下这一天的感受。.
去校前
兴奋(原因自拟） 担忧(原因自拟）
到校后
发现老师、同学友好 忘了紧张、感觉自在
离校时
不会再担心 相信会快乐
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 日记的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；
3. 日记须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
4. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
【参考范文】One possible version ：
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.
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【009】----【2012南京真题】书面表达（满分15分）
上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday.
【参考范文】One possible version:
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.
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【010】----【2010·四川省卷】
为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well？”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中学生的身份写一篇60--80词的短文参赛。
内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ……
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。
How to behave well?
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【参考范文】 How to behave well?
As a student in Yibin, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
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【011】----【2012温州真题】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章：内容包括，走路有利健康，和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等；可适当发挥。
注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：be good for, with friends, save
【参考范文】
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
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【012】----【2012衢州真题】
假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
?
A pleasant outing
时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北山公园(the North Hill Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……
感受
……
?
要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
（3）词数: 80~110个。
?
参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic
?
A pleasant outing
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【参考范文】One Possible version
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 p.m.. We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing it was!
(106 words)
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【013】----【2010·江苏省苏州市】
假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲I Believe I Can Fly．这
是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲．请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛．
内容要点；
1．这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性；
2．自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功；
3．梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难；
4．没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功；
5．你的感悟(考生自拟，至少一点)．
注意：
1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．参考词汇：自信—confidence(n．)；
3．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R．Kelly．___________________________________写___________________________________________________在________________________________________________________________答____________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】 I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R．Kelly．This song tells us that confidence is very important．When a person has confidence，he believes in himself．He believes that he can and will succeed，and this gives him the courage to try new things．Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties．No one can achieve success without them．If you believe you tail fly，then you can really fly someday．
I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties．I’ll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success．
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【014】----【2010湖南省娄底市】
Zhou Hui和Ge Bin是“一帮一”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。Zhou Hui在Ge Bin的帮助下有了明显的进步。请根据下表信息写一篇60字左右的短文。（开头已写出，不计入总词数）
Zhou Hui
In the past
didn’t listen carefully in his class ,?like to play computer games every day
Ge Bin
Now
study hard?
get on well with his classmates
Make Zhou Hui be interested in his study
Help Zhou Hui with his study
?
【参考范文】One possible version
We are very glad that Zhou Hui has made great progress. But in the past he didn’t listen carefully in class. He also liked to play computer games every day. Ge Bin is Zhou ?Hui’s? classmate and friend. He tried his best to make Zhou Hui be interested in his study and help him with his study after school. With his help， Zhou Hui studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now.
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【015】----【2012陕西真题】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求：
1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
4. 词数：60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
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That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
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【016】----【2010江苏省宿迁市】
假如你是李华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。
要点：
李华
爱好
对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料
困惑
得不到老师理解
观点
1.个人爱好有助于学习；
2. ……(至少一点)
老师
观点
时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切
注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头和结尾已给出的内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
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【017】----【2012黑河真题】书面表达 (共计15分)
Writing （本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分）
（注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分）
( A ) 6月1日，张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会，会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封E-mail。询问她的身体状况，表达感激与思念，并告诉她同学们一定会努力学习，同时祝她早日康复。要求：字数30—50词。
Dear Ms Zhang,
How are you?________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
【参考范文】(A) One possible version:
Dear Miss Zhang,
How are you? We all miss you very much (1分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1分). Don’t worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1分) ? We all hope you’ll get well soon (1分).
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)
内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议
要求：1.词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all.
【参考范文】B Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.
But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.
Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
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【018】----【2010·河南省】
请“ is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；
2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
3．词数80左右。
is fun
【参考范文】 Cooking is fun
Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons.
First, it is a good way to show my love to my parents. Both my parents are very busy. So
When I come back home early,I’11 cook for them. After they return，we sit together and enjoy
the meal. I can see them smile happily.
Second．It is a kind of creation. I always try to cook different dishes. When my new dish
is praised by others, I feel proud.
l like cooking. It brings me a lot of fun.
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【019】----【2012 山东滨州真题】书面表达
规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一
篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2．词数：80—100。标题和短文开头已给出，不计
入总词数。
3．参考词汇：be friendly to…，help，study hard，
come true
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be ______________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
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【020】----【2012新疆阜康真题】书面表达（满分15分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
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【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
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【021】----【2012福州真题】提示作文(12分)
2011年12月20日，福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National civilized city)。你学校的English club正在举办以“文明福州，持续文明”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示：◆尊敬师长，明礼诚信 ◆友善待人，乐才助人
◆遵守交规，不闯红灯 ◆保护环境，(写2—3个例子)
要 求：1)词数80左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数；
2)内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
参考词汇：respect (v. 尊敬), polite, honest, obey, traffic lights, protect the environment
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we ..._________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
【参考范文】
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students~ what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it's always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it's important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about. We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass. In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
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【022】----【2012 桂林真题】.书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend“为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
.
【参考范文】One possible version
My good friend[www.@z&zstep.#^c%om]
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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【023】----【2012 宿迁真题】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
【参考范文】One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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同课章节目录
- 词法
- 名词
- 动词和动词短语
- 动词语态
- 动词时态
- 助动词和情态动词
- 非谓语动词
- 冠词
- 代词
- 数词和量词
- 形容词副词及其比较等级
- 介词和介词短语
- 连词和感叹词
- 构词法
- 相似、相近词比较
- 句法
- 陈述句
- 一般疑问句和否定疑问句
- 特殊疑问句及选择疑问句
- 反意疑问句
- 存在句(There be句型)
- 宾语从句
- 定语从句
- 状语从句
- 主谓一致问题
- 简单句
- 并列句
- 复合句
- 主谓一致
- 主、表语从句
- 名词性从句
- 直接引语和间接引语
- 虚拟语气
- 感叹句
- 强调句
- 倒装句
- 祈使句
- 句子的成分
- 句子的分类
- 题型专区
- 单项选择部分
- 易错题
- 完形填空
- 阅读理解
- 词汇练习
- 听说训练
- 句型转换
- 补全对话
- 短文改错
- 翻译
- 书面表达
- 任务型阅读
- 语法填空
- 其他资料