2022届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写动作描写专练
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读后续写动作描写专练附两种动作描写结构
读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The spot of red was what first caught Randy Heiss’s attention on December 16, 2018. He was hiking the remote land behind his farm in a small town near the U.S.-Mexico border, and there lying on the grass was a balloon. He walked toward it with his dog, thinking he should pick it up and throw it away.
That’s when he noticed the balloon’s string was attached to a piece of paper. “Dayami,” it read on one side, in a child’s writing. Heiss flipped the paper over. On the back he saw a numbered list, all in Spanish. His Spanish wasn’t very good, but he could see it was a Christmas list!
Heiss was charmed. He suspected that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon, something he used to do himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned the letters Heiss had sent, but he wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales, Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million. Based on the wind direction, he was almost sure that was where it came from. Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list. They determined that Dayami, probably a girl, had asked for a doll, a dollhouse, doll clothes and art supplies.
Heiss then posted his search about finding Dayami on Facebook, attaching photos, hoping some of his friends in Nogales might know the girl’s family. A few days passed with no results; Heiss worried that time was running out before Christmas. On December 19, 2018, he decided to send a private Facebook message to Radio Xeny, an AM radio station based in Nogales. To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away and promised him to post his search on the station’s Facebook page immediately.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:
The next morning, Heiss awoke to a message from Radio Xeny.
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Dayami’s eyes were wide open with wonder.
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翻译小练习：
1. 工作人员已经找到了Dayami。他确实住在Nogales，愿意在电台安排聚会。
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2. Heiss和他的妻子急忙去买Dayami清单上的所有东西。然后他们驱车45分钟，越过边境进入Nogales。
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3. 他们终于见到了那个非常兴奋的女孩。
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4. 比如，“哦，天哪，这真的很管用！“这是一次美好的经历，” Heiss说。
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5. 61岁的Heiss在Arizona州Bisbee生活了30多年。
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6. 十年前，他和妻子失去了他们唯一的孩子。他们没有孙子。
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7. 现在他们把时间分配给Nogales和Bisbee。
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8. Heiss说：“在我们的生活中，圣诞节期间和孩子们在一起是不存在的。
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9. “在我们的圣诞经历中，这是一个巨大的漏洞。”
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10. 从那以后，他一直在思考，他发现了气球是多么的幻觉，更不用说他能够找到Dayami和她的家人了。
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参考答案：
1. 工作人员已经找到了Dayami。他确实住在Nogales，愿意在电台安排聚会。
The staff had located Dayami. who indeed lived in Nogales and would be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station.
2. Heiss和他的妻子急忙去买Dayami清单上的所有东西。然后他们驱车45分钟，越过边境进入Nogales。
Heiss and his wife rushed to buy everything on Dayami’s list. Then they drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales.
3. 他们终于见到了那个非常兴奋的女孩。
They finally met the very excited girl.
4. 比如，“哦，天哪，这真的很管用！“这是一次美好的经历，” Heiss说。
Like, ‘Oh my gosh, this really did work!’ It was a beautiful experience,” Heiss said.
5. 61岁的Heiss在Arizona州Bisbee生活了30多年。
“Quite healing for us.” Heiss, 61, has lived in Bisbee, Arizona for more than three decades.
6. 十年前，他和妻子失去了他们唯一的孩子。他们没有孙子。
Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child. They have no grandchildren.
7. 现在他们把时间分配给Nogales和Bisbee。
Now they split their time between Nogales and Bisbee.
8. Heiss说：“在我们的生活中，圣诞节期间和孩子们在一起是不存在的。
“Being around children at Christmastime has been absent in our lives,” Heiss said.
9. “在我们的圣诞经历中，这是一个巨大的漏洞。”
“It’s been kind of a gaping hole in our Christmas experience.”
10. 从那以后，他一直在思考，他发现了气球是多么的幻觉，更不用说他能够找到Dayami和她的家人了。
He has since reflected on what a mirade it was that he spotted the balloon at all, let alone that he was able to locate Dayami and her family.
参考范文：
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The next morning, Heiss awoke to a message from Radio Xeny. The staff had located Dayami. who indeed lived in Nogales and would be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station. Heiss and his wife rushed to buy everything on Dayami’s list. Then they drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales. They finally met the very excited girl.
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Dayami’s eyes were wide open with wonder. Like, ‘Oh my gosh, this really did work!’ It was a beautiful experience,” Heiss said. “Quite healing for us.” Heiss, 61, has lived in Bisbee, Arizona for more than three decades. Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child. They have no grandchildren. Now they split their time between Nogales and Bisbee. “Being around children at Christmastime has been absent in our lives,” Heiss said. “It’s been kind of a gaping hole in our Christmas experience.” He has since reflected on what a mirade it was that he spotted the balloon at all, let alone that he was able to locate Dayami and her family.
读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
①Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
②In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.
③Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only include the most excellent people in the field.
④Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens- her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Amy's body and said, "Child, you just don't fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
⑤Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
⑥This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Buttler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
⑦Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Buttler called, “Emily, you're next." Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Buttler told her to do. Mr. Buttler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Buttler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
⑧Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
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The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
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Finally, the day of performance came.
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翻译小练习：
1. 她的目光落在“艾米莉”这个词上，她尖声尖叫，像一个兴奋的小精灵跳了起来。
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2. 然而，欧文太太的话在她脑海里闪过，使她心中一片阴郁。
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3. “如果有人嘲笑我而我失败了呢？艾米丽紧张地低声说，她先前的兴奋让位于日益增加的焦虑。
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4. 她拖着脚步离开合唱室，在期待展现自己非凡才华的期待和被戏弄的焦虑之间挣扎着。
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5. 但最终，一种无法抗拒的歌唱欲望吸引了她，她决心要取得一个完美的表演。
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6. 艾米丽摇摇晃晃地走到舞台上，努力把嘴唇弯成优雅的弧线，以掩饰内心的不安。
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7. 她奇怪的身体发出嗡嗡声，这使她更加焦虑。
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8. 汗珠从额头渗出，艾米丽紧紧抓住袖子以缓解焦虑，最后终于唱出了第一个音调。
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9. 人群一片寂静，接着是雷鸣般的掌声。
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10. 艾米丽用悦耳的歌声，让喜悦的泪水在模糊的视线中自由地飞溅。
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11. 她看到了一个光明的前景，她不再是一个残疾女孩，而是一个歌唱的精灵，永远闪耀着光芒。
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参考答案：
1. 她的目光落在“艾米莉”这个词上，她尖声尖叫，像一个兴奋的小精灵跳了起来。
Her eyes landing on and fixing at the word “Emily”, she screamed in high-pitched voice and sprang up like an exhilarated elf.
2. 然而，欧文太太的话在她脑海里闪过，使她心中一片阴郁。
However, the memory of Mrs. Owen’s words flickered across her mind, casting a surge of gloom over her heart.
3. “如果有人嘲笑我而我失败了呢？艾米丽紧张地低声说，她先前的兴奋让位于日益增加的焦虑。
“What if anyone laugh at me and I fail ” murmured nervously, Emily’s prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiety.
4. 她拖着脚步离开合唱室，在期待展现自己非凡才华的期待和被戏弄的焦虑之间挣扎着。
She shuffled away from the choral room, torn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased.
5. 但最终，一种无法抗拒的歌唱欲望吸引了她，她决心要取得一个完美的表演。
But ultimately, an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance.
6. 艾米丽摇摇晃晃地走到舞台上，努力把嘴唇弯成优雅的弧线，以掩饰内心的不安。
Staggering to the stage, Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness.
7. 她奇怪的身体发出嗡嗡声，这使她更加焦虑。
Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise, which added to her anxiety.
8. 汗珠从额头渗出，艾米丽紧紧抓住袖子以缓解焦虑，最后终于唱出了第一个音调。
Beady sweat oozing from forehead, Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety, and eventually sang a first tone.
9. 人群一片寂静，接着是雷鸣般的掌声。
A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applause.
10. 艾米丽用悦耳的歌声，让喜悦的泪水在模糊的视线中自由地飞溅。
Singing in melodious voice, Emily let her tears of joy splatter freely and through her blurred vision.
11. 她看到了一个光明的前景，她不再是一个残疾女孩，而是一个歌唱的精灵，永远闪耀着光芒。
She visualized a brilliant prospect, where she was no longer a disabled girl, but a singing elf, shining permanently.
参考范文：
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
Her eyes landing on and fixing at the word “Emily”, she screamed in high-pitched voice and sprang up like an exhilarated elf. However, the memory of Mrs. Owen’s words flickered across her mind, casting a surge of gloom over her heart. “What if anyone laugh at me and I fail ” murmured nervously, Emily’s prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiety. She shuffled away from the choral room, torn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased. But ultimately, an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance.
Finally, the day of performance came. Staggering to the stage, Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness. Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise, which added to her anxiety. Beady sweat oozing from forehead, Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety, and eventually sang a first tone. A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applause. Singing in melodious voice, Emily let her tears of joy splatter freely and through her blurred vision. She visualized a brilliant prospect, where she was no longer a disabled girl, but a singing elf, shining permanently.
精讲精练
Passage 01---拿古董枪偷窃古董被抓
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Carl lost his job. He tried to find another one but it wasn’t easy. As a result, the poor fellow couldn’t pay his bills and he couldn’t even find anybody to lend him any.
Carl spent most of his days at home. Sometimes he looked out of the window and watched his neighbor’s house. An old professor lived there alone. Strangely, he hardly talked to his neighbors. Carl could see into the professor’s house because he never drew the curtain. The rooms were full of antique (古董) furniture and vases. Carl thought, “If I got an antique vase, I could sell it for a lot of money.”
Every day Carl saw the professor. He left at 10 o’clock in the morning and came back home at 4 o’clock in the afternoon. He had a dog. Carl often went to the fence and played with it or gave it a piece of meat.
One day Carl thought, “I will go into the professor’s house and steal a vase. I will break the window and climb in. The dog is not a problem.”
There was an old gun in the cellar(地下室). It had been his great grandfather’s favorite thing a long time before. Carl didn’t want to use the gun but he thought, “Anything could happen.”
He wanted to hide the gun under his coat but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw（锯）.
The next morning he watched the professor leaving home at 10 o’clock. Carl climbed over the fence. The dog ran to him and Carl gave it a big bone. He threw a piece of stone through the window, which broke. It wasn’t high. He could climb into the house easily.
He looked around inside. There were paintings on the walls, small figures and vases on the shelves and the floor. Carl didn’t know much about arts. He couldn’t choose. He reached his hands towards a big vase when he heard a noise. The front door opened and someone entered the house.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
It was the professor. He had forgotten to take an important document (文件) with him.
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The professor was scared.
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【写作特训】
1. Carl could see into the professor’s house because ______________________________(他从来不拉窗帘) .
2. I will ______________________________(打破窗户，爬进去).
3. ______________________________(他想把枪藏在外套下面) but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw（锯）.
4. ______________________________(他把手伸向一个大花瓶) when he heard a noise.
5. Carl became so afraid mat ______________________________(他不假思索地拔出了枪).
6. “I haven’t stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, ______________________________(用颤抖的双手将枪对准教授).
7. The professor was scared. Suddenly, ______________________________(他突然大笑起来).
8. Strangely, _____________________________(他似乎不再害怕Carl了).
参考范文：
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It was the professor. He had forgotten to take an important document with him. Carl became so afraid mat he pulled out the gun without thinking. The Professor came into the room and saw him. “What are you doing in my house” he asked surprisingly and angrily. “I havent stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, pointing the gun at the professor with his trembling hands.
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The professor was scared. Suddenly, he burst into laughter. “With that gun ” asked the professor. Strangely, he didn’t seem frightened of Carl any more. He continued, “You can’t shoot with that antique gun. You should have put it in the museum actually.” “Is this really an antique gun ” asked Carl. “How much is it worth ” “It was worth about 17,000 dollars,” said the professor. “But now you can get only 100 dollars for it.” “Why ” asked Carl. The professor replied, ‘Because its end is missing.”
【写作特训答案】
1. Carl could see into the professor’s house because he never drew the curtain.
2. I will break the window and climb in.
3. He wanted to hide the gun under his coat but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw.
4. He reached his hands towards a big vase when he heard a noise.
5. Carl became so afraid mat he pulled out the gun without thinking.
6. “I havent stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, pointing the gun at the professor with his trembling hands.
7. The professor was scared. Suddenly, he burst into laughter.
8. Strangely, he didn’t seem frightened of Carl any more.
Passage 02---抢了饼干的故事
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman----polite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.
With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didn't get that hint(暗示), since he didn't stop grabbing the cookies.
"How annoying!" she thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched(用力咀嚼)some cookies and watched the clock.
She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, "If I weren't so nice, I would blacken his eyes." With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do.
With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1: As she reached in her baggage, she gasped(喘气) with surprise.
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Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her.
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【写作特训】
1. With several long hours before her flight, the woman ______________________________(在机场的商店里寻找一本书，买了一包饼干，然后找了个地方坐下) .
2. ______________________________(尽管她全神贯注于她的书), she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them.
3. ______________________________(她受过良好礼貌的教育), she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument.
4. ______________________________(他脸上带着微笑，紧张地笑着), he took the last cookie and broke it in half.
5. She ______________________________(从他手里夺过它，瞪着他，心想), "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
6. At that moment, ______________________________(她看见那包饼干), which had been just bought by her, unopened at all.
7. ______________________________(感到羞耻和像小偷一样), she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.
8. _____________________________(那女人完全不知所措) but gave the man a nervous laugh in return.
参考范文：
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As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had been just bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her. A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
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Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes, also with a smile on his face. The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. With a quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring “Sorry, sorry…It was I myself who was the real cookie thief.” After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
【写作特训答案】
1. With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit.
2. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them.
3. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument.
4. With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half.
5. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
6. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had been just bought by her, unopened at all.
7. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.
8. The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return.
读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The spot of red was what first caught Randy Heiss’s attention on December 16, 2018. He was hiking the remote land behind his farm in a small town near the U.S.-Mexico border, and there lying on the grass was a balloon. He walked toward it with his dog, thinking he should pick it up and throw it away.
That’s when he noticed the balloon’s string was attached to a piece of paper. “Dayami,” it read on one side, in a child’s writing. Heiss flipped the paper over. On the back he saw a numbered list, all in Spanish. His Spanish wasn’t very good, but he could see it was a Christmas list!
Heiss was charmed. He suspected that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon, something he used to do himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned the letters Heiss had sent, but he wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales, Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million. Based on the wind direction, he was almost sure that was where it came from. Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list. They determined that Dayami, probably a girl, had asked for a doll, a dollhouse, doll clothes and art supplies.
Heiss then posted his search about finding Dayami on Facebook, attaching photos, hoping some of his friends in Nogales might know the girl’s family. A few days passed with no results; Heiss worried that time was running out before Christmas. On December 19, 2018, he decided to send a private Facebook message to Radio Xeny, an AM radio station based in Nogales. To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away and promised him to post his search on the station’s Facebook page immediately.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:
The next morning, Heiss awoke to a message from Radio Xeny.
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Dayami’s eyes were wide open with wonder.
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翻译小练习：
1. 工作人员已经找到了Dayami。他确实住在Nogales，愿意在电台安排聚会。
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2. Heiss和他的妻子急忙去买Dayami清单上的所有东西。然后他们驱车45分钟，越过边境进入Nogales。
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3. 他们终于见到了那个非常兴奋的女孩。
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4. 比如，“哦，天哪，这真的很管用！“这是一次美好的经历，” Heiss说。
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5. 61岁的Heiss在Arizona州Bisbee生活了30多年。
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6. 十年前，他和妻子失去了他们唯一的孩子。他们没有孙子。
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7. 现在他们把时间分配给Nogales和Bisbee。
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8. Heiss说：“在我们的生活中，圣诞节期间和孩子们在一起是不存在的。
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9. “在我们的圣诞经历中，这是一个巨大的漏洞。”
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10. 从那以后，他一直在思考，他发现了气球是多么的幻觉，更不用说他能够找到Dayami和她的家人了。
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参考答案：
1. 工作人员已经找到了Dayami。他确实住在Nogales，愿意在电台安排聚会。
The staff had located Dayami. who indeed lived in Nogales and would be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station.
2. Heiss和他的妻子急忙去买Dayami清单上的所有东西。然后他们驱车45分钟，越过边境进入Nogales。
Heiss and his wife rushed to buy everything on Dayami’s list. Then they drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales.
3. 他们终于见到了那个非常兴奋的女孩。
They finally met the very excited girl.
4. 比如，“哦，天哪，这真的很管用！“这是一次美好的经历，” Heiss说。
Like, ‘Oh my gosh, this really did work!’ It was a beautiful experience,” Heiss said.
5. 61岁的Heiss在Arizona州Bisbee生活了30多年。
“Quite healing for us.” Heiss, 61, has lived in Bisbee, Arizona for more than three decades.
6. 十年前，他和妻子失去了他们唯一的孩子。他们没有孙子。
Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child. They have no grandchildren.
7. 现在他们把时间分配给Nogales和Bisbee。
Now they split their time between Nogales and Bisbee.
8. Heiss说：“在我们的生活中，圣诞节期间和孩子们在一起是不存在的。
“Being around children at Christmastime has been absent in our lives,” Heiss said.
9. “在我们的圣诞经历中，这是一个巨大的漏洞。”
“It’s been kind of a gaping hole in our Christmas experience.”
10. 从那以后，他一直在思考，他发现了气球是多么的幻觉，更不用说他能够找到Dayami和她的家人了。
He has since reflected on what a mirade it was that he spotted the balloon at all, let alone that he was able to locate Dayami and her family.
参考范文：
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The next morning, Heiss awoke to a message from Radio Xeny. The staff had located Dayami. who indeed lived in Nogales and would be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station. Heiss and his wife rushed to buy everything on Dayami’s list. Then they drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales. They finally met the very excited girl.
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Dayami’s eyes were wide open with wonder. Like, ‘Oh my gosh, this really did work!’ It was a beautiful experience,” Heiss said. “Quite healing for us.” Heiss, 61, has lived in Bisbee, Arizona for more than three decades. Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child. They have no grandchildren. Now they split their time between Nogales and Bisbee. “Being around children at Christmastime has been absent in our lives,” Heiss said. “It’s been kind of a gaping hole in our Christmas experience.” He has since reflected on what a mirade it was that he spotted the balloon at all, let alone that he was able to locate Dayami and her family.
读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
①Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
②In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.
③Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only include the most excellent people in the field.
④Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens- her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Amy's body and said, "Child, you just don't fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
⑤Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
⑥This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Buttler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
⑦Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Buttler called, “Emily, you're next." Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Buttler told her to do. Mr. Buttler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Buttler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
⑧Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
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The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
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Finally, the day of performance came.
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翻译小练习：
1. 她的目光落在“艾米莉”这个词上，她尖声尖叫，像一个兴奋的小精灵跳了起来。
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2. 然而，欧文太太的话在她脑海里闪过，使她心中一片阴郁。
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3. “如果有人嘲笑我而我失败了呢？艾米丽紧张地低声说，她先前的兴奋让位于日益增加的焦虑。
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4. 她拖着脚步离开合唱室，在期待展现自己非凡才华的期待和被戏弄的焦虑之间挣扎着。
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5. 但最终，一种无法抗拒的歌唱欲望吸引了她，她决心要取得一个完美的表演。
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6. 艾米丽摇摇晃晃地走到舞台上，努力把嘴唇弯成优雅的弧线，以掩饰内心的不安。
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7. 她奇怪的身体发出嗡嗡声，这使她更加焦虑。
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8. 汗珠从额头渗出，艾米丽紧紧抓住袖子以缓解焦虑，最后终于唱出了第一个音调。
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9. 人群一片寂静，接着是雷鸣般的掌声。
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10. 艾米丽用悦耳的歌声，让喜悦的泪水在模糊的视线中自由地飞溅。
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11. 她看到了一个光明的前景，她不再是一个残疾女孩，而是一个歌唱的精灵，永远闪耀着光芒。
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参考答案：
1. 她的目光落在“艾米莉”这个词上，她尖声尖叫，像一个兴奋的小精灵跳了起来。
Her eyes landing on and fixing at the word “Emily”, she screamed in high-pitched voice and sprang up like an exhilarated elf.
2. 然而，欧文太太的话在她脑海里闪过，使她心中一片阴郁。
However, the memory of Mrs. Owen’s words flickered across her mind, casting a surge of gloom over her heart.
3. “如果有人嘲笑我而我失败了呢？艾米丽紧张地低声说，她先前的兴奋让位于日益增加的焦虑。
“What if anyone laugh at me and I fail ” murmured nervously, Emily’s prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiety.
4. 她拖着脚步离开合唱室，在期待展现自己非凡才华的期待和被戏弄的焦虑之间挣扎着。
She shuffled away from the choral room, torn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased.
5. 但最终，一种无法抗拒的歌唱欲望吸引了她，她决心要取得一个完美的表演。
But ultimately, an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance.
6. 艾米丽摇摇晃晃地走到舞台上，努力把嘴唇弯成优雅的弧线，以掩饰内心的不安。
Staggering to the stage, Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness.
7. 她奇怪的身体发出嗡嗡声，这使她更加焦虑。
Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise, which added to her anxiety.
8. 汗珠从额头渗出，艾米丽紧紧抓住袖子以缓解焦虑，最后终于唱出了第一个音调。
Beady sweat oozing from forehead, Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety, and eventually sang a first tone.
9. 人群一片寂静，接着是雷鸣般的掌声。
A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applause.
10. 艾米丽用悦耳的歌声，让喜悦的泪水在模糊的视线中自由地飞溅。
Singing in melodious voice, Emily let her tears of joy splatter freely and through her blurred vision.
11. 她看到了一个光明的前景，她不再是一个残疾女孩，而是一个歌唱的精灵，永远闪耀着光芒。
She visualized a brilliant prospect, where she was no longer a disabled girl, but a singing elf, shining permanently.
参考范文：
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
Her eyes landing on and fixing at the word “Emily”, she screamed in high-pitched voice and sprang up like an exhilarated elf. However, the memory of Mrs. Owen’s words flickered across her mind, casting a surge of gloom over her heart. “What if anyone laugh at me and I fail ” murmured nervously, Emily’s prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiety. She shuffled away from the choral room, torn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased. But ultimately, an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance.
Finally, the day of performance came. Staggering to the stage, Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness. Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise, which added to her anxiety. Beady sweat oozing from forehead, Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety, and eventually sang a first tone. A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applause. Singing in melodious voice, Emily let her tears of joy splatter freely and through her blurred vision. She visualized a brilliant prospect, where she was no longer a disabled girl, but a singing elf, shining permanently.
精讲精练
Passage 01---拿古董枪偷窃古董被抓
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Carl lost his job. He tried to find another one but it wasn’t easy. As a result, the poor fellow couldn’t pay his bills and he couldn’t even find anybody to lend him any.
Carl spent most of his days at home. Sometimes he looked out of the window and watched his neighbor’s house. An old professor lived there alone. Strangely, he hardly talked to his neighbors. Carl could see into the professor’s house because he never drew the curtain. The rooms were full of antique (古董) furniture and vases. Carl thought, “If I got an antique vase, I could sell it for a lot of money.”
Every day Carl saw the professor. He left at 10 o’clock in the morning and came back home at 4 o’clock in the afternoon. He had a dog. Carl often went to the fence and played with it or gave it a piece of meat.
One day Carl thought, “I will go into the professor’s house and steal a vase. I will break the window and climb in. The dog is not a problem.”
There was an old gun in the cellar(地下室). It had been his great grandfather’s favorite thing a long time before. Carl didn’t want to use the gun but he thought, “Anything could happen.”
He wanted to hide the gun under his coat but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw（锯）.
The next morning he watched the professor leaving home at 10 o’clock. Carl climbed over the fence. The dog ran to him and Carl gave it a big bone. He threw a piece of stone through the window, which broke. It wasn’t high. He could climb into the house easily.
He looked around inside. There were paintings on the walls, small figures and vases on the shelves and the floor. Carl didn’t know much about arts. He couldn’t choose. He reached his hands towards a big vase when he heard a noise. The front door opened and someone entered the house.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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It was the professor. He had forgotten to take an important document (文件) with him.
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The professor was scared.
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【写作特训】
1. Carl could see into the professor’s house because ______________________________(他从来不拉窗帘) .
2. I will ______________________________(打破窗户，爬进去).
3. ______________________________(他想把枪藏在外套下面) but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw（锯）.
4. ______________________________(他把手伸向一个大花瓶) when he heard a noise.
5. Carl became so afraid mat ______________________________(他不假思索地拔出了枪).
6. “I haven’t stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, ______________________________(用颤抖的双手将枪对准教授).
7. The professor was scared. Suddenly, ______________________________(他突然大笑起来).
8. Strangely, _____________________________(他似乎不再害怕Carl了).
参考范文：
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It was the professor. He had forgotten to take an important document with him. Carl became so afraid mat he pulled out the gun without thinking. The Professor came into the room and saw him. “What are you doing in my house” he asked surprisingly and angrily. “I havent stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, pointing the gun at the professor with his trembling hands.
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The professor was scared. Suddenly, he burst into laughter. “With that gun ” asked the professor. Strangely, he didn’t seem frightened of Carl any more. He continued, “You can’t shoot with that antique gun. You should have put it in the museum actually.” “Is this really an antique gun ” asked Carl. “How much is it worth ” “It was worth about 17,000 dollars,” said the professor. “But now you can get only 100 dollars for it.” “Why ” asked Carl. The professor replied, ‘Because its end is missing.”
【写作特训答案】
1. Carl could see into the professor’s house because he never drew the curtain.
2. I will break the window and climb in.
3. He wanted to hide the gun under his coat but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw.
4. He reached his hands towards a big vase when he heard a noise.
5. Carl became so afraid mat he pulled out the gun without thinking.
6. “I havent stolen anything. Just let me go or I will shoot” cried Carl, pointing the gun at the professor with his trembling hands.
7. The professor was scared. Suddenly, he burst into laughter.
8. Strangely, he didn’t seem frightened of Carl any more.
Passage 02---抢了饼干的故事
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman----polite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.
With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didn't get that hint(暗示), since he didn't stop grabbing the cookies.
"How annoying!" she thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched(用力咀嚼)some cookies and watched the clock.
She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, "If I weren't so nice, I would blacken his eyes." With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do.
With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1: As she reached in her baggage, she gasped(喘气) with surprise.
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【写作特训】
1. With several long hours before her flight, the woman ______________________________(在机场的商店里寻找一本书，买了一包饼干，然后找了个地方坐下) .
2. ______________________________(尽管她全神贯注于她的书), she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them.
3. ______________________________(她受过良好礼貌的教育), she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument.
4. ______________________________(他脸上带着微笑，紧张地笑着), he took the last cookie and broke it in half.
5. She ______________________________(从他手里夺过它，瞪着他，心想), "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
6. At that moment, ______________________________(她看见那包饼干), which had been just bought by her, unopened at all.
7. ______________________________(感到羞耻和像小偷一样), she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.
8. _____________________________(那女人完全不知所措) but gave the man a nervous laugh in return.
参考范文：
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As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had been just bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her. A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
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Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes, also with a smile on his face. The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. With a quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring “Sorry, sorry…It was I myself who was the real cookie thief.” After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
【写作特训答案】
1. With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit.
2. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold(大胆的)as he could be, grabbed(抓)a cookie or two from the bag in between them.
3. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument.
4. With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half.
5. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, "Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn't he even show any gratefulness "
6. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had been just bought by her, unopened at all.
7. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.
8. The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return.