(共22张PPT)
Reading for writing
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE
1. Haveyou ever been to InnerMongolia (内蒙古) What'syour impression ofit Step 1 Lead-inMongolian tentsMongolian robesroast muttonMongolian steppes1234When/Where/Major events
What do you know about Naadam Festival
lead-in
shooting arrows/archery
horse racing
wrestling
2. What is the most important festival in Inner Mongolia
the Naadam Festival
Check your answers.
1. What festival did the author experience
Where, when and how long
Naadam Festival.
Falls on the 4th day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar
In China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
内蒙古自治区
Lasts for three days
Where
When
How long
1 Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
2 set off
3 from near and far
4 attend the festival
5 opening / closing ceremony
6 separate ... by weight
7 be worth it
8 invite sb back for the winter
9 eat hot pot
10 can’t wait (to do sth)
11 in detail
出发;开始;点燃
从各处
参加节日
开幕式 / 闭幕式
按重量分组
值得
内蒙古自治区
吃火锅
等不及(做某事)
详细地
邀请某人回来过冬天
Reading for language points
1. Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Brief introduction of Naadam Festival
What the author saw before the opening ceremony.
The wrestling competition and rules about it.
The horse race.
Brief summary of Naadam Festival
para1.
para2.
para3.
para4.
para5.
Step 2 Reading - for main ideas
2. The text is mainly about the writer’s _________ of taking part in __________________in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
amazed
the Naadam Festival
experience
According to the left information,we can divide the passage into ________ parts.
3
Body
para. _____
Describe the festival in _______:
activities + my feelings
Give a _________ of the experience:
evaluation + feelings
Opening para. __
Closing
para. __
State the ______: what, when, where, who...
My amazing Naadam Expe-rience
The structure
(1)
(2-4)
(5)
topic
detail
summary
2. How to divide the diary into three parts
1. What is the type of text
2. Person Tense In what order
3. Text structure
Naadam
when
where
what
start
wrestling
horse races
summary
time order
1st person
past tense
Naadam
opening
body
closing
diary
Q.What kind of writing is the passage
A. a(n) narration B. exposition
C. argumentation
para 1
1. When is the festival celebrated
2.Where is the festival celebrated
3.Major events of the festival.
4.What is the function of the first
sentence and the first para
The first sentence functions as the opening sentence of the diary.
opening para
para 2:
1. What were people doing when I arrived at the game
2. Was the writer describing a person, a place or a scene to us in
this paragraph
3. What is the purpose of paragraph 2
Describe a vivid scene for us.
It describes a lively scene before the festival begins, helping readers know more about the surroundings.
para3¶ 4:
1. How did the writer feel about the wrestling competition
2. What is the most impressive thing about the festival for the
writer and why
3. What did the writer think of the horse
horse racing
very important
describe in detail the activities:
wrestling competition and the horse races
Q. What does the writer think of the
festival he / she experienced and why
In my eyes, the writer enjoys the festival very much. I can tell from the words the writer uses, like
“exciting”
“amazing”
“quite moved”
“absolutely enjoy”
“favourite part”
“totally worth it”
etc. ...
Para 1: State the topic (when, where and with whom and main feelings)
Para 2-4:
Describe the festival in detail:
activities(what I saw, what I heard), and my feelings
Para 5:
Give a brief summary of the experience.
Organisation of the diary entry
Writing task:
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍一个你庆祝过的最难忘、最有意义的节日。内容包括:
1. 节日概况;
2. 庆祝活动;
3. 你的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Writing task
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求介绍自己的一次节日经历,属于_______。在介绍节日经历时,可以按照_________ 展开叙述。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可以分为三部分:
第一部分:说明节日名称并简单介绍;
第二部分:具体叙述节日的准备活动和庆祝活动;
第三部分:总结节日经历并表明自己的感受。
记叙文
时间顺序
Make notes of your ideas in the table and then
write your draft.
Outline The name of the festival/celebration: ______________ Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1 The topic and my feeling
2 How I prepared for the festival/celebration
3 The festival/celebration activities
4 A summary of my festival /celebration experience
P9 3
Outline The name of the festival/celebration: ______________ Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1 The topic and my feeling
2 How I prepared for the festival
3 The festival activities
4 A summary of my experience
P9 3
Mid-Autumn Day
Mid-Autumn Day, on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month
delighted
bought some mooncakes, fruits, meat and vegetables
busy but excited
prepared dinner with my mother;
enjoyed a reunion dinner; enjoyed some mooncakes and admired the moon; watched performances on TV
peaceful and satisfied
cherish(珍惜) every chance to keep my parents company
moved and grateful
A festival experience:
Part 1. (Opening )
________Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on ______. It is a great time for us to __________.
Part 2. (Body)
I remember celebrating _______ with ____ this/ last year. We enjoyed a lot of activities. ____ (time), _____________(activity one). _____(time), _______ (activity two). _____ (time), _______(activity three).
Part 3 (Closing)
It was a really _______ festival experience and I felt ______.
范文一
The Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most popular traditional festivals in China, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. It is a great occasion for families to get together.
I still remember my family celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival last year. During the day, we prepared all the dishes for a great feast and bought several types of mooncakes. As darkness fell, all my family enjoyed the delicious mooncakes, various fruits and other tasty food while admiring the shining moon. Over dinner, we talked about what was going on with us recently.
The festival experience made me realize the importance of family and inspired me to spend more time with my family.