Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. Section B写作课课件24张

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Unit 4 Section B 3a-3b
I used to be afraid of the dark.
学习目标
通过分析阅读文本、添加连词、增加名言警句等形式丰富作文内容。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
通过运用五指法分析题干，起草大纲，构思作文。
Let’s watch and think.
Q1: What is the video about
Q2: What do you think of changes
Q3: Why do you want to change
It is about the things that make you change.
It’s not easy but worth trying.
Because we are not satisfied with the present situation.
英语写作
审体裁、人称
时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
用过渡词（句）
连接句子和段落
查单词拼写
时态、主谓一致
誊写
Let’s read and think.
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I’ve ever made”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点： 1. 变化是什么。
2. 变化是如何发生的。
3. 变化后有何感受。
要求： 1. 不少于80词。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 短文要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
审主题
审文体
审人称
审时态
审要点
个人的变化
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
一般现在时
3大要点
写作应试微策略：运用五指法分析题干，梳理文章脉络。
Outline:
Beginning
↓
Development
↓
Ending
写作步骤: 1. 审
1. 变化是什么？
2. 变化是如何发生的？
3. 变化后有何感受？
抓要点
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Let’s think and talk.
Changes
APPEARANCE
PERSONALITY
HOBBY
I used to be short, but now I’m tall.
I didn’t use to like music, but now I’m crazy about it.
Tom used to be serious, but now he is humorous.
What can we say when we talk about one’s changes
Beginning
outline
What’s your change
the past situation
why
how
the present situation
effects of your change
feelings
Development
Ending
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that ___________.
What’s your change
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
I ___________ exercise at all.
I used to enjoy _______________.
In the past, ___________ used to be my favorite.
didn’t use to
playing the piano
watching TV
What was the past situation
What’s the reason for the boy’s change
写作应试微策略：以读促写（寻找相关话题的文章）
写作步骤: 3. 扩
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
People
Things
Reason
What’s the reason for your change
Target Language:
1. _______ is the drive of my life.
2. _____ warmed my heart.
3. I was inspired by ____words.
4. ____ lifted me up.
Where
Cause
Development
Ending
写作应试微策略：运用五指法梳理记叙文脉络。
事物描述
五要素
简要描写
运用时间顺序、事情发展的顺序
suddenly/
all of a sudden
however
therefore
when/while
nevertheless
moreover
thanks to
写作小Tips:
加上连词能让文章条理更清晰，逻辑性更强！
Things
When
Development
It may be difficult to change at once.
A good beginning is half done.
I can’t help _____.
With the help of ___, I began to _____ .
At first, it was hard for me to stick to it.
I gradually realized the importance of _____.
As time went by, _____ seemed much easier for me .
_____ was so fascinating that I was totally absorbed in it.
As a saying goes, “where there is a will, there is a way”.
We’re here to put a dent in the universe. Otherwise why else even be here
For what it’s worth, it’s never too late, or in my case, too early, to be whoever you want to be.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
How do you change
写作小Tips:
加上名言警句可以让文章更加优美且有说服力！
Now, I am able to ______.
At present, I am even more interested in _____________.
It seems much easier for me to _____________.
swim
playing football
give a speech
写作步骤: 3. 扩
What’s the present situation
Development
The effect of change
Feelings
Target Language:
I have changed a lot.
I’m more _____ than before.
____ has helped me to improve myself a great deal.
____ has benefit me a lot.
Target Language:
In my poinion, ...
From my point of view, ...
As far as I am concerned, ...
There is no doubt that ...
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Ending
Ending
What’s the effect of your change
1. 按照题目要求顺序
2. 连词的使用
3. 逻辑连接词的使用
叙事的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
写作步骤: 4. 连
Development
连词让你的文章条理清晰，逻辑分明！
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a narrative
2. Can you picture the experience the writer wrote about
3. Does it have a correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes or punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
写作步骤: 5. 查
策略
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
写作步骤: 6. 抄
Let’s edit.
The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I’ve fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t use to enjoy books at all. However, it’s not easy to change at once. To attract my attention, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books that were interesting. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Not just that, but reading is also a fantastic way to spend my free time.
In a word, books are my friends. And they have benefited me and will benefit me a lot. It’s believed that the more you read, the better you will be.
Let’s check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
能够运用五指法分析题干，起草大纲，构思作文。
能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
能够通过分析阅读文本、添加连词、增加名言警句等形式丰富作文内容。
Homework.
Redraft your passage.
Search for more information about the advantages of change.
Preview the new words of Unit5.