2022年中考英语专题复习——“书面表达”特训课 课件（53张PPT）

“书面表达”特训课
主讲人：XXX
作文是会呼吸的痛
它活在试卷最后的角落
看别人写会痛
看自己写会痛
反正都会痛......
What are your feelings about English compositions?
英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。
怕写！不知道要写什么！看到就难，甚至还没看，就想着这部分反正是要放弃的！
No.1
不会写！脑海里有汉语，但是就是不知道如果用英语表达，好像单词不够，写上去的也都是错的。
No.2
记不住！背了一些优秀作文，但是考试时候记不住，默不出来。
No.3
自己对于英语作文的真正的困难？
英语作文中常见的表达错误：
No. 1
No.6
No.5
No.4
No.3
No.2
名词单复数问题
主谓一致问题
时态和语态问题
Chinglish现象
行文的逻辑问题
语句不通顺
请你当老师
Give them scores!
卷面潦草一定要扣分!
卷面潦草一定要扣分!

卷面要象清爽的像小仙女
1.Clean & Clear
2.五官端正字体
3.大小一致
4.落在线上
5.避免毛刺
6.用一条横线修改
7.字数不少也不多
8.无标记
知考情·明考向
新的课程标准中关于五级水平（即初中毕业要求达到的水平）的要求是：
A.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；
B.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；
C.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；
D.能简单描述人物或事件；
E.能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
义务教育阶段 新课程标准 (简称“课标”) 中关于写作的要求
知考情·明考向
家与父母
校园生活
人物与地点介绍
喜好兴趣
善人善举
青少年健康与安全
旅行与计划
观点建议
……
初中阶段高频写作主题
观点看法类
说明介绍类
咨询建议类
叙事描写类
话题符合考生年龄特点，贴近考生生活，并且与时事热点紧密结合，内容真实、积极、健康，对中自己的思想、情感、价值观具有正面的导向作用。
基本上是记叙文、应用文体裁，形式多样，如发言稿、信件、邮件、自荐信等
开头、结尾及格式都已给出；
图文、表格、英文要点；
给考生提供了开放的思维空间；
命题特点
考情分析
体 裁
形 式
话 题
知考情·明考向

一、评分原则：1.本题总分为20分，按五个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，结合内容和语言表达，综合给
定分数。3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。4.词数少于80的，从总分中减去1分。5.拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所确定档次的分数范围内，减去1分。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好): (20—17分)
完全完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点:语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第四档(好): (16—13分)
完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点:语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(一般): (12—9分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容:语言有一些错误， 行文不够连贯。
第二档(较差): (8—5分)
未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点:语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。
第一档(差); (4—0分)
未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一-些单词:语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。
同学们，你的作文在哪个等级呢？
中考作文评分标准
01
方法一：翻译句子
Read make me happy
Reading make me happy.
√
Reading makes me happy.
阅读使我开心
01
方法一：翻译句子
Read help me learn more about the world.
Reading help me learn more about the world.
Reading helps me learn more about the world.
阅读帮助我更多地了解世界
√
02
方法二：仿写句子
阅读不仅使我快乐而且使我了解更多知识。
看太多电视不仅伤眼睛，还影响学习。
★ Watching TV too much is not only bad for
our eyes, but also gets in the way of our study.
not only ……but also……
锻炼不仅有益身心，而且有助于学习
★ Taking exercise is good for not only my body
and mind but also my study.
★ Reading not only makes me happy but also
helps me learn more about the world.
02
方法二：仿写句子
(仿写1) 多锻炼对我们来说是很重要的
(仿写2) 上网课对我们来说是有必要的
(仿写3) 玩游戏对学生来说纯属浪费时间
It's important for us to take more exercise.
It's necessary for us to take online lessons.
It's a waste of time for students to play games.
difficult / easy / exciting
interesting / useful
dangerous / difficult
wonderful / possible
impossible / unbelievable
unexpected / necessary…
It is + adj. +for sb + to do sth
03
方法三：改写句子
养成勤洗手的好习惯。
★ Wash your hands many times a day.
★ It is a good habit to wash hands very often.
★ Develop a good habit of washing hands frequently.
03
方法三：改写句子
When we talk about……
When talking about ……
When it comes to ……
★ When we talk about online games,
many students show great interest in it.
★ When talking about online lessons,
both teachers and students say no.
★ When it comes to online shopping,
different people have different ideas.
这样是否就可以了呢？
哎! 太多
语法错误
高分建议
一、 怎么把句子写“高级”——添词原则
l、在名词前面添上一个或多个形容词。Vanessa is a teacher.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher.
2、 在名词后面加上同位语或定语从句。
我们要学好英语。We should master English. 我们中学生要学好英语这门世界上最广泛使用的外语。We high school students should master English, the most widely used foreign language in the world.
高分建议
一、 怎么把句子写“高级”——添词原则
3. 在“助系情之后，实义动词之前”加“副词”
I really/undoubtedly love you.
I can certainly do it.
This is obviously an excellent idea.
?万能副词undoubtedly; certainly; definitely;
4. 多使用短语
I got up quickly.
I got up as quickly as possible.
She always help others.
She is always ready to help others./ She is always offering a helping hand to others.
高分建议
二、 怎么把句子写“高级”——换词原则
高分建议
二、 怎么把句子写“高级”——换词原则
高分建议
二、 怎么把句子写“高级”——换词原则
定 语 从 句
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
He is a great person
who never gives up.
三、 怎么把句子写“高级”——扩句原则
Although he is too small, yet he has a big dream.
让 步 状 语 从 句
Writing
谚 语
He was fighting for his dream since his childhood.
As a saying goes, “___________________________________” In 1985, he became an NBA player.
Where there is a will , there is a way.
Writing
宾 语 从 句
I hope I can be a person like him one day.
Writing
写作策略
1.审（search）
懂技巧·分典例
国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Dan，想给在云南的笔友Liu Wei 写一封信，邀请她来北京旅游，建议她放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80--100个词左右
要点：
1. 北京是中国的首都capital，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3. 北京的烤鸭很美味，人们都喜欢吃。
请你确定该文章的话题，确定体裁，时态，人称，要求， 划出要点
1.审（search）
体裁
话题
时态
人称
要求
懂技巧·分典例
国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Dan，想给在云南的笔友Liu Wei 写一封信，邀请她来北京旅游，建议她放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80--100个词左右
要点：
1. 北京是中国的首都capital，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3. 北京的烤鸭很美味，人们都喜欢吃。
请你确定该文章的话题，确定体裁，时态，人称，划出要点
1.审（search）
体裁
话题
时态
人称
要求
懂技巧·分典例
国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Dan，想给在云南的笔友Liu Wei 写一封信，邀请她来北京旅游，建议她放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80--100个词左右
要点：
1. 北京是中国的首都capital，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3. 北京的烤鸭很美味，人们都喜欢吃。
请根据文章要求列出文章要点
2.列（list）
相关
词汇
短语
句子
懂技巧·分典例
国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Dan，想给在云南的笔友Liu Wei 写一封信，邀请她来北京旅游，建议她放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80--100个词左右
要点：
1. 北京是中国的首都capital，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3. 北京的烤鸭很美味，人们都喜欢吃。
请根据文章要求列出文章要点
2.列（list）
相关
词汇
短语
句子
1.一封信
2. 邀请来北京
3.介绍北京
4.悠久的历史
5.风景名胜
.......
懂技巧·分典例
国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Dan，想给在云南的笔友Liu Wei 写一封信，邀请她来北京旅游，建议她放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80--100个词左右
要点：
1. 北京是中国的首都capital，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3. 北京的烤鸭很美味，人们都喜欢吃。
请根据文章要求列出文章要点
2.列（list）
相关
词汇
短语
句子
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a long history.
2. There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year.
3. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much.

3.连（add & connect ）
加首尾，注意首尾呼应。使结构完整。可以采取总分总的结构，开头要直奔主题！
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a long history.There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much .
Dear Liu Wei，
Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing.
People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing.
Yours,
Li Dan
beginning
body
ending
中考作文评分标准
第一档：
包含所有内容要点；完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；语言基本无误。
第二档：
基本包含所有要点；遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务；有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚；语言有少量错误。
高分作文技巧
技巧
1.妙用连接词
4.巧用谚语和例子
2.善用高级词汇
3.活用多种句型
连接词（connection words）
1.表示顺序：
first, second, third, first of all, then, next, finally, at the same time, in the end, at last
4.表示转折：
though, although, but, however, while
3.表示因果:
so, , as a result, therefore
2.表示举例：
as for, such as, like, for example, for instance
5.表示并列：
and, as well as, both… and, what’s more, not only.. but also
6.表示结论:
as we know, in a word, all in all, generally speaking
Let’s have a try
1._________________I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
2.We like doing kinds of sports,___________ swimming, running and hiking.
3.__________,he stood up. Then he got out. ________,he went back. _________________, he smiled.
Let’s have a try
1._________________I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
Though/Although
2.We like doing kinds of sports,___________ swimming, running and hiking.
like/such as
3.__________,he stood up. Then he got out. ________,he went back. _________________, he smiled.
First
Next
Finally/At last



3.连 （add & connect ）
As we know, Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing, what’s more, the Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much.
方法一：妙用连接词



3.连 （add & connect ）
As we know, Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing, what’s more, the Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much.
方法一：妙用连接词
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a long history.There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much .
Dear Liu Wei，
Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing.
People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing.
Yours,
Li Dan
4.改（correct & beautify)---美
Dear Liu Wei,
Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing.
People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing.
Yours，
Li Dan

As we know, Beijing is China’s capital .
It has a long history .
There are many interesting places in Beijing,
what’s more, the Great Wall is famous . A lot of people visit it every year.
As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much.

the capital of China
with
places of interest
善用高级词汇
such as Beihai Park, Tian’an Men Square and the Palace Museum.
巧用例子
︷
so
︷
that
Eating Beijing duck is many people’s favorite.
.
活用多种句型
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
巧用谚语
动名词短语作主语
so…that 句型
.
a
4.改（correct & beautify)---美
写作必备万能句汇总：
1回信类作文句型
01开头部分
How are you?
How's everything going?
How are things with you?
I'm writing to you about...
I'm writing to tell you something about...
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I'm glad to have received your letter.
It is my great pleasure to hear from you.
I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit.
I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
02结尾部分
I'm looking forward to your reply.
I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes!
中考作文必备的实用句型
1. It is obvious that 不用说 / 很显然　
2. Of all the … 在各种……之中
3. There is no doubt that 毫无疑问
4. As is known to all 众所周知
5. From my point of view 我个人认为
6. Personally 我个人认为
7. As far as I am concerned 在我看来
8. As far as I know 据我所知
9. When it comes to...，说到……
10. With the increase/growth of the population随着人口的增加……
11. With the advance of science and technology随着科技的进步……
12. It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that ………是必要的
13. It is important (for sb.) to do / that ………是重要的
14. It is proper (for sb.) to do / that ………是适当的
15. spend … on sth. / doing sth. 花费 　
16. it takes sb. some time to do sth.花费
17. If you don't ..., you'll ... 如果你不……，你就会……　
18. so … that …如此……，以至于……
19. I think / I don't think that …我认为，…… / 我认为……不
20. I wonder whether …　我想知道是否……
21. I suggested that you should (not)… 我建议你……
22. …is also a good way for you. ……对你来说也是个好办法。
中考作文必备的谚语
1.Every coin has two sides. 任何事物都有两面性。
2.Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
3.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
4.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
5.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
6.Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。
7.Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
优等生
中等生
基础薄弱生
写对
写全
写好
自己怎么做？
如何提升个人的写作
基于个人情况，分解难点，仿写句子
基于教材，结合语境，翻译句子
基于语用，表达转述，根据提示改写句子
目的在于重视自己记忆句子结构和句法规则，巩固词法知识，体现句意理解
在语境中，根据需要，进行内容替换，写出句式相同、语义不同的句子。
范围限定形式造句，自己可根据提示，在各种语境中根据图片、关键字、问题等写句。
单句输出
小文段输出
语篇输出
下节再见