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Passage One
I'll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily. When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa. We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, here's another snowman,” shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there this year!
I'll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way
to my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way,
for it was snowing heavily. When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa.
________grandpa`s
__
and
to
1、grandpa 改为 grandpa's。名词所有格误用。此处表示“在去爷爷家的路上”,需要用到名词所有格表示
某人的家,所以将 grandpa 改为 grandpa's。
2、or 改为 and。连词误用。此处表示“一路上我父亲都开得很认真、很慢”,“认真”和“慢”同时存在,
or 表选择意义,不符合语境,所以or 改为 and。
3、collect 前面加 to。不定式符号漏用。此处考查固定表达invite sb. to do sth.,意为“邀请某人做某事”,
所以在collect 前面加 to。
We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, here's another snowman,” shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand.
________
excited
___
were
4、excitedly 改为 excited。形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处作感官动词 feel 的
表语,需要用到形容词,所以将 excitedly 改为 excited。
5、was 改为 were。主谓不一致。分析句子结构可知,此处是一个倒装句,主语是 some
snowmen,为复数,所以将 was改为 were。
6、look 改为 looking。动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知,本句已有谓语动词,此处在句中
应为非谓语动词,与其逻辑主语 all 为主谓关系,所以将 look 改为 looking。
7、hand 改为 hands。名词单复数误用。根据常识和语境可知,拍手需要用两只手,因此需要
用到复数,所以将 hand改为 hands。
_____ looking
_____ hands
It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there this year!
____
whose
_____ could
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8、who 改为 whose。关系词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处引导定语从句,
先行词是 our grandpa,关系词在从句中作定语,所以将 who 改为 whose。
9、删除 kind 前面的 a。冠词多用。此处考查固定表达 kind of, 意为“有点
儿”,所以删除 kind 前面的 a。
10、can 改为 could。时态误用。根据句子结构及语境可知,此处表示现在未
实现的愿望,应用 can 的过去式 coula表示虚拟语气,所以将 can 改为 could。
Passage Two
The person I respect most is my father. Like a doctor, he is always busy with work. After I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend stay with me. Every day, he went to work before I get up, and comes back home after I go to bed. So to me, it doesn't matter at all, because he is a great hero in his mind. He devotes himself his patients, and many life are saved by him. He always tells me what a man should have dignity, honesty, honor, and that most of all, be helpful to others. This affects me deep, so I am working hard in order to be a man like him in the future.
The person I respect most is my father. Like a doctor, he is always busy with work. After I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend stay with me. Every day, he went to work before I get up, and comes back home after I go to bed.
_____
As
_____
Since
1、Like 改为 As。介词误用。此处表示“作为一个医生,他恩是忙于工作”,此处需要用到的介词为 As“作为”。
2、After 改为 Since。连词误用。根据主句中的现在完成时和语境可知,此处需要用到的连词为 Since,表示“自我能记事以来”。
3、stay 改为 staying。动词形式误用。此处考查固定用法spend sth. doing sth.,所以需要将 stay 改为 staying。
4、went 改为 goes。动词时态误用。根据该句的时间状语Every day 以及全文的基本时态为一般现在时并根据语境可知,此处需要用一般现在时,所以需要将 went 改为goes。
_____
staying
_____
goes
So to me, it doesn't matter at all, because he is a great hero in his mind. He devotes himself his patients, and many life are saved by him.
____
But
___
my
5、So 改为 But。连词误用。根据语境可知,尽管父亲总是早出晚归,但对于“我”来说,这一点都不重要,因为在“我”心中父亲是一位大英雄。此处表转折,所以需要将 So 改为 But。
6、his 改为 my。代词误用。根据语境可知,此处表示“在我的心中”,所以需要将 his 改为 my。
7、his patients 前加 to。介词漏用。此处考查固定用法devote oneself to sb.,所以需要在 his patients 前加 to。
8、life 改为 lives。名词单复数误用。life 在此处意为“生命”,可作可数名词,根据其前的 many 和谓语动词 are saved 可知,主语为复数,所以需要将 life 改为lives。
_____
lives
to
He always tells me what a man should have dignity, honesty, honor, and that most of all, be helpful to others. This affects me deep, so I am working hard in order to be a man like him in the future.
____
that 或去掉what
_____
deeply
9、what 改为 that 或删除 what。连接词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处引导一个宾语从句,从句意义完整,此处在从句中不充当任何句子成分,无词义,故可用 that 引导该宾语从句,此外 that 在此处也可以被省略,所以将 what 改为that 或删除 what。
10、deep 改为 deeply。副词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处修饰前面的动词 affects,需要用副词,此处表示父亲说的话深深地影响了“我”,所以需要将 deep 改为 deeply“深刻地,强烈地”。deep作副词时,一般表示的是空间上的深度,不符合语境。
Passage Three
Sometimes our classmates talk about that we can do for our school before graduation. We have different kinds of advices. Some think it is a good idea donate some reference books but notebooks to the school library. By doing so, the fellow students will be able to read it if necessary. Others thought it good to plant trees next to teaching buildings to make the school more beautiful.
On my opinion, we can do something meaningfully in honor of our school life. For the example, we can do some voluntary work or send the school some pictures drawing by ourselves, which can remind us of the golden memories.
Sometimes our classmates talk about that we can do for our school before graduation. We have different kinds of advices. Some think it is a good idea donate some reference books but notebooks to the school library.
_____
what
_______
advice
1、that 改为 what。名词性从句连接词和连接代词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处引导一个宾语从句,且在从句中作动词 do 的宾语,表示“什么”,而 that 引导宾语从句时不作句子成分,故用 what。
2、advices 改为 advice。名词单复数误用。advice 是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故用 advice。
3、donate 前加 to。非谓语动词误用。It is十名词/形容词十to do 是固定句型,It作形式主语,不定式作真正的主语,故加 to。
4、but 改为 and/or。连词误用。根据句意可知,参考书和笔记本是并列关系或选择关系,故用连词 and/or。
_____
and\or
to
By doing so, the fellow students will be able to read it if necessary. Others thought it good to plant trees next to teaching buildings to make the school more beautiful.
____
them
________
think
5、it 改为 them。代词误用。此处指代上文中提到的reference books 和 notebooks,故用 them 指代。
6、thought 改为 think。动词时态误用。根据上文中的 Some think 可知,此处用 think。
On my opinion, we can do something meaningfully in honor of our school life. For the example, we can do some voluntary work or send the school some pictures drawing by ourselves, which can remind us of the golden memories.
.
____
In
____________
meaningful
7、On 改为 In。介词误用。In one's opinion 是固定搭配,故用介词 In。
8、meaningfully 改为 meaningful。形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知,此处用形容词,作后置定语,修饰不定代词something,故用 meaningful。
9、删除 the。冠词多用。For example 是固定词组,故删除定冠词 the。
10、drawing 改为 drawn。非谓语动词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处为过去分词作后置定语,故用 drawn。
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drawn
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Passage Four
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8:00 am, we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited. At 8:00 am, we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries.
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_______
excitedly
1、删除 on。介词多用。表时间的名词前带有 last, next,this, that, these, those 等指示性限定修饰语且其前没有冠词时,其前要省略介词。
2、excited 改为 excitedly。形容词和副词混用。 take part in为动词短语,应用副词修饰。
3、enjoyed 改为 enjoying。非谓语动词误用。分析句子结构可知,此处为分词短语作状语,enjoy 和 we 构成逻辑上的主谓关系,应用现在分词形式。
4、sceneries 改为 scenery。名词形式误用。scenery 是不可数名词,没有复数形式。
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scenery
_______
enjoying
When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
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fell
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and\to
5、fall 改为 fell。时态误用。此处表示过去发生的事,故应用龇一般过去时。
6、or 改为 and/to。连词误用或不定式误用。此处表示“其他人会过来帮忙”,come 和 offer 为顺承关系,故用 and;也可以用 to,不定式短语表示目的。
7、Seeing 改为 Seen。非谓语动词误用。此处为分词短语作状语,see 和 river 之间为逻辑上的动宾关系,故用过去分词形式。
8、such 改为 so。固定搭配误用。so.,that..和 such.that...“如此……以至于…”都为固定搭配。其中 such修饰名词,so 修饰形容词或副词,故用 so。
_____
so
______
seen
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature,
but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!
_______
ourselves
a
9、myself 改为 ourselves。反身代词误用。主语是 we,所以反身代词应该使用 ourselves。
10、wonderful 前加 a。冠词漏用。time 在此处指一段时光,为可数名词,又该处表泛指,且 wonderful 的发音以辅音音素开头,所以其前加 a。。
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