(共14张PPT)
Unit 5
What were you doing
when the rainstorm came
To learn how to write the event you remember well;
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
3b
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:记叙文
时态:过去进行时和一般过去时
人称:第一人称和第三人称
First, write about the event (when and where it happened).
An important event that I remember well was _______________. It happened in/on _____________ at/in __________________.
2. 谋布局、写句子
Next, write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______. My friends were ____________.
Last, write about why this event was important.
This event is very important to me because ____________.
/ I remember this event well because ____________.
3. 巧衔接
简述重大事件发生时用一般过去时作为背景,介绍事件发生时你和你的朋友的活动时用过去进行时,这两种时态的配合建立起上下文的逻辑联系。
4. 成篇章
An important event that I remember well was Jiuzhaigou Earthquake. It happened on August 8th, 2017. During the earthquake many people were hurt and some people lost their lives.
When I heard the news of the earthquake, I was watching TV in the living room. My dad and mom were at home, too. Dad was reading books while Mom was making dumplings. I remember this event well because my good friend Daming and his family were taking vacations in Jiuzhaigou. I was worried about them. I kept calling him. When I heard that they were alive and safe, I was very excited.
An Unforgettable Experience
There are many unforgettable experiences in my life. But the one happened in 2018 was the most touching one.
On October 1st, 2018, I planned to take the bus to the train station. When I was waiting for the bus, it began to rain. Unluckily, I forgot to take my umbrella. I stood in the rain, with the rain beating heavily against my body. Just at that time, a car stopped and the driver offered to take me to the train station. I was so moved. When we arrive at the station, I got off and said thank you to him. He smiled and drove off, leaving me alone with warmth in my heart.
I’ll never forget this experience and will always be ready to help others like that driver.
On a cold morming,while I was buying some food for my breakfast. I saw a girl standing in front of me buying some bread and milk. When the girl was about to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree.
He looked cold and hungry. The girl came up to the beggar without thinking twice and gave the food to him.The beggar said thanks to the girl. But the girl said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.
I was moved by what the girl did. I think it was the warmest thing on that cold morning.
1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. _____ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
3. _____ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
While
when
When
While
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I _____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher ______ (come) three times a week to ______ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I _____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I __________ (play), everyone ______ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I _______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I _______ (hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ______ (win)! It ______ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
was playing
sat
waited
heard
was beating
won
was
Ⅱ. 从方框中选择恰当的词语填空,有的需要变换形式。
Venezia is always crowded with visitors from other countries. And in summer it is (1)__________ full.
My husband and I traveled to Venezia by train. I was so excited that I couldn’t (2)_________ the night before arriving there.
The train arrived in Venezia at 8:00 a.m. For one second (秒) I thought I was dreaming, because I couldn’t believe that I was really in one of the oldest cities in the world. But it was the (3)_________.
begin, shock, complete, true, suddenly, realize, silence, fall asleep
completely
fall asleep
truth
When we left the train station, (4)_________ I found that I was in a different world. I was (5)_________. Around us, there were no cars or buses. I only found gondolas (威尼斯小划船) in the canals (运河). I stood outside the train station in (6)_________, looking at the city.
My husband and I (7)_________ to enjoy a wonderful panorama (全景) of Venezia by gondola after breakfast. Just at that time I (8)_________ that there was no other place in the world like Venezia. It was really wonderful!
begin, shock, complete, true, suddenly, realize, silence, fall asleep
suddenly
shocked
silence
began
realized