Unit 5 What are the shirts made of ? Section B 3a–Self-check写作课课件31张

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What are the shirts made of
Unit 5 Section B 3a–Self-check
学习目标
通过分析文本，能够扩充内容、起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于和同伴分享自己的观点、接纳建议并修改作文、提高写作的自我效能感。
Let’s talk.
Do you know who Li Jiaqi is
He is a famous live-streamer (主播).
How will you introduce Tmall Genie if you have a chance to sell the product
Let’s talk.
Appearance:
cuboid (长方体);
The icon of Tmall is on the front.
Color:
red
Functions (功能):
play music, shop on Taobao; control AI home appliances (控制智能家电)
Material: plastic, metal
Others:
interact with audience (跟观众互动);
share your reviews (产品评价)
Let’s watch.
Let’s see how Li Jiaqi sells this product.
中考作文（2016年湖州）
贴心懂你的生活服务
天气查询
百科问答
语音搜索
新闻资讯
我是能听会说的小音乐机器人。联网后，只需说“叮咚，唱首……歌”，你就能听到想听的歌曲了。我还有其他本领……
中考作文
下周一上午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告，你打算把爸爸最近网购的音乐机器人 (music robot) 介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告。请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。
注意：
(1) 选择所给信息进行介绍，建议举例说明并适当发挥；
(2) 必须谈谈你对音乐机器人的看法；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(4) 词数：80-100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
中考作文（2016年湖州）
贴心懂你的生活服务
天气查询
百科问答
语音搜索
新闻资讯
参考词汇：
remind … of;
connect … to the Internet;
provide services
英语写作
审体裁、
人称时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
用过渡词（句）
连接句子
和段落
查单词拼写
时态一致
主谓一致
誊写
写作步骤1：审
应用文
（演讲稿）
第一人称
一般
现在时
审体裁
审人称
审时态
写作步骤2：抓
抓要点
1. 选择音乐机器人信息介绍。（举例+适当发挥）
2. 谈谈你的看法。 (简单说明)
Make a list of the information about the music robot.
music robot
appearance
material
feeling
cylinder, grey
be made of plastic, metal
ask it about weather or your
other questions
play music
remind you of important dates
amazed ...
functions
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
1. greetings
2. introduction
1. functions
2. examples
1. opinions
2. feelings
Development
Ending
Outline
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Dear classmates,
1. I’m XXX. I’m honored to be here to introduce ________.
2. Hello, everyone! I would like to introduce ________.
What’s the beginning of a speech
Beginning
写作步骤3：扩
一、扩展要点，先搭框架
1. 联网后提供服务
After it ___________ (connect) to the Internet and the orders can __________ (receive), the robot can ___________ (提供) different kinds of services.
be received
is connected
provide
写作步骤3：扩
一、扩展要点，先搭框架
2. 放音乐只需说“想听周杰伦的歌”
You just say, “Ding Dong, I want to ___________ (听) Jay Chou’s songs”, and his songs ___________ (play) immediately.
play the music
listen to
will be played
写作步骤3：扩
一、扩展要点，先搭框架
3. 提醒重要的日期
It can __________ you __________ important dates. (提醒某人某事)
remind
of
写作步骤3：扩
一、扩展要点，先搭框架
4. 对机器人惊讶
I am so ________________ at/by my music robot.
amazed/surprised
写作步骤3：扩
一、扩展要点，先搭框架
5. 让我的生活更愉快和方便
It makes my life _____________ (enjoyable) and _______________ (convenient).
more enjoyable
more convenient
写作步骤3. 扩
写作微策略：
以读促写
（寻找相关话题的文章）
What can AI products do Please give some examples.
Many homes today are equipped with smart bulbs, plugs, sensors, security cameras and other devices.
For example, with a smart speaker, it is easy to switch smart lights on or off, dim them or change the color of the bulbs. A smart plug can be set to turn on a plugged-in kettle at a specific time each morning, so that there is always hot water when the occupants wake up.
Sensors that detect motion, temperature, brightness and humidity are key to making a home truly smart. The information collected by these small, low-power devices is sent wirelessly to a smart hub, which collates and uses the data to trigger specific actions. For instance, a smart bulb switches on automatically when a motion sensor detects a person entering a room.
“AI has changed our lives,” said Sun Ning, a professor at the College of Artificial Intelligence at Nankai University. “The AI technologies have not only been applied in the high-end market but also brought convenience to people’s daily lives.”
At a residential community in the China-Singapore Tianjin Eco-city, jogging routes and exercise equipment are fitted with facial recognition technologies, which can capture residents’ facial data and record their exercise times and calorie consumption.
Let’s check the answers.
1. For example, with a smart speaker, it is easy to switch smart lights on or off, dim them or change the color of the bulbs.
2. A smart plug can be set to turn on a plugged-in kettle at a specific time each morning, so that there is always hot water when the occupants wake up.
3. Jogging routes and exercise equipment are fitted with facial recognition technologies, which can capture residents’ facial data and record their exercise times and calorie consumption.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
There are some ________ music robot can do.
After it is connected to ________, the robot can ________.
3. For example, you just say ________.
4. Besides, it can remind you of ________.
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes ________.
Thanks for ________.
Ending
写作步骤4：连
理清演讲稿的结构，将不同要点按逻辑连接起来。
用过渡词等将句与句连接起来。
写作步骤4：连
1. 按照题目要求顺序（详略得当）
2. 连词的使用
3. 逻辑连接词的使用
叙事的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. At first, ________.
2. After it is ________, ...
3. For example, ________.
4. Besides, ________.
Pay attention to the conjuctions.
Development
写作步骤: 5. 查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a speech
2. Are all key points included
3. Does it have a correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
写作步骤: 6. 抄
誊写：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Let’s edit.
Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought me.
It is small, so it is easily carried in your backpack. The music robot is made of plastic and it was made in China. After it is connected to the Internet and the orders can be received, the robot can provide different kinds of services.
Let’s edit.
For example, you just say, “Ding Dong, I want to listen to Jay Chou’s songs”, and his songs will be played immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even questions in your study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.
I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and more convenient. I really love it!
Let’s check.
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通过分析文本，能够扩充内容、起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于和同伴分享自己的观点、接纳建议并修改作文、提高写作的自我效能感。