Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum？ A writing lesson（课件）（共有PPT36张）

(共36张PPT)
A Writing Lesson
What do you think of these places
use different adjectives尝试使用不同的形容词
Group work: Brainstorming
What do you think of a good place
beautiful
wonderful
relaxing
peaceful
fantastic
interesting
exciting
enjoyable
take in fresh air
enjoy shnshine
relax yourself
visit the park
see green trees
see beautiful flowers
activities
What can you do
If I visit a nice place, I can ….
Group work: Brainstorming
Make more sentences.
5. ... is a beautiful place to
relax yourself.
How to write
eg:
1.a place
3.a beautiful place+relax yourself
4.a beautiful place to relax
yourself
2.a beautiful place
Let's search for the
beauty of these places.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. …
Second, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese.
At last ,more than three quarters of the population are Chinese.
C.First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese.
Look and Read:
try to choose the correct answers 选出最合适的选项
Preparation
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. …
So you can simply speak Putonghua.
So you can simply speak English.
So you can't simply speak Putonghua.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First,more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua.…
Before that, Singapore is an English-speaking
country.
B.Second,Singapore is an English-speaking country.
C. Second, Australia is an English-speaking country.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second,,Singapore is an English-speaking country. …
I don't like speaking English.
So it's also a good place to practice your English.
C.I enjoyed making friends in Singapore.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second,Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's also a good place to practice your English. .Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore....
Singapore is also an excellent place and you can see new flowers.
B.Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try
new food.
C.Singapore is a boring place and you can try new
food.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First,more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second,, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's also a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.…
A.You can't watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
B.You can watch green trees or nice flowers in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
C.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
How to introduce a place
language
food
people
location
places to visit
People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
Singapore is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday.
First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's a good place to practice your English.
Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.
People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
a place
How are
people there
Where is it
What can
people speak
Where can
people visit
What can people eat
language
location
people
places to visit
food
Mind map
It is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
Pay attention to the content.
content
(内容)
Preparation
It is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. Second, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
Have you ever been to Singapore Singapore is a beautiful country.
Singapore is a place I will never forget.
I want to tell the world I like traveling.
ⅠBetter the layout
Construction
Body: introduce the place
Beginning: feelings
Ending: feelings
Construction
ⅠBetter the layout.
More logical!
Easier to understand.
Singapore is a beautiful country .
It is in Southeast Asia.It's a wonderful and safe place to take a holiday. On the one hand, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. On the other hand, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's also a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes just like seeing the stars in the dark sky.People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
Singapore is a place I will never forget.
Find out the differences
Singapore is a beautiful country .
It is in Southeast Asia.It's a good and safe place to take a holiday. First, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can speak Putonghua. Second, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo .People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
Singapore is a place I will never forget.
Passage 1
Underline
different sentences
in 1 minute.
画出不同的部分
Passage 2
Which has stronger feelings
Passage 1
Passage 2
Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food.
You can watch lions,tigers or foxes just like seeing the stars in the dark sky.
Construction
on the one hand...
on the othe hand
So you can simply
speak Putonghua.
good
wonderful
first....second
So you can speak Putonghua.
Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.
You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
1.Discuss what makes the feeling
stronger
2.Replace(替换) the underlined words.
Group Work
Construction
What makes the feeling stronger
good
wonderful
use different
adjectives.
(形容词)
PK
Construction
first....second
on the one hand...
on the othe hand
What makes the feeling stronger
PK
use different
conjunctions.
(连接词)
Construction
So you can speak Putonghua.
So you can simply
speak Putonghua.
What makes the feeling stronger
PK
+ adv.
(副词)
Construction
Singapore is also an excellent place and you can try new food.
Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food.
+infinitive
(不定式)
What makes the feeling stronger
PK
Construction
You can watch lions,tigers or foxes in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo
You can watch lions,tigers or foxes just like seeing the stars in the dark sky.
Simile
(比喻)
What makes the feeling stronger
PK
Construction
Reading books is important.
Reading books is like enjoying sunshine.
Simile
(比喻)
PK
Construction
Summary
How to make your passage better
simile (用比喻)
use different adjectives. (用不同的连接词)
adverb (加副词)
infinitive(不定式)
use different adjectives(用不同的形容词)
Singapore is a beautiful country.
It is in Southeast Asia.It's a wonderful and safe place to take a holiday. On the one hand, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese. So you can simply speak Putonghua. On the other hand, Singapore is an English-speaking country.So it's also a good place to practice your English. Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food.Whether you like Indian food, Weatern food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.People can visit the Night Safari-a special zoo.You can watch lions,tigers or foxes just like seeing the stars in the dark sky.People in Singapore are very nice to tourists.
Singapore is a place I will never forget.
Where is the title(标题)
Sample
A. I love Singapore.
B.My pleasant trip
C.The best place in my mind
Choose the best title!
选择最合适的标题
Production
Think and answer the following questions.
回答下列问题
The best place in my mind
What makes a good passage
Word spelling(单词正确)
Tense(时态正确)
Beginning & ending(首尾照应)
Handwriting(书写工整)
Funny/surprising…
Conjunctions(连接词使用)
Group ______ Scores Your scores
Word spelling(单词正确) 3
Tense(时态正确) 2
Conjunctions(连接词使用) 2
Beginning & ending(首尾照应) 2
Handwriting(书写工整) 3
Funny/surprising… 3
Total (合计) 15
Give comments on other groups’ passage !
为其他组的同学评分
Post-writing
Show us your comments !
Group ______ Scores Your scores
Word spelling(单词正确) 3
Tense(时态正确) 2
Conjunctions(连接词使用) 2
Beginning & ending(首尾照应) 2
Handwriting(书写工整) 3
Funny/surprising… 3
Total (合计) 15
Post-writing
Show us your passage !
展示你的文章
Beauty is in our life. Beauty is everywhere.Try to find more beautiful places with our eyes and feel them with hearts.
Try to describe a place that is unforgettabble or meaningful for you by using what you have learned in this class.
Homework
Thank You