Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.Section B 3a-3c写作课课件

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Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
Unit 7 Section b 3A-3b
学习目标
通过观看图片并结合自己的生活，能够确定家规写作的结构和要点。
通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Let’s find.
Which rule do you like best
Why
Let’s read and think.
(2021年株洲市中考) 校报英语版征文，题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”，你写一篇文章投稿，包括以下内容：
(1) 两条家规；
(2) 对你的影响；
(3) 如何回报你家。
注意：
(1) 词数90左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
写作步骤: 1. 审
审体裁 __________
审人称 __________
审时态 __________
说明文
审
第一人称
一般现在时
Beginning
Development
Ending
outline
写作步骤: 2. 抓
两条家规是什么
2. 家规带来的影响（如何变好的）
3. 如何回报家庭
抓要点
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
outline
Why are family rules important
What are they
How did they work
feelings
and
plans
Development
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
1. A country has its laws and a family ________, too.
2. Rules can _______________________.
3. My family has __________.
Beginning
Why are family rules important
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Rule 1
Development
Why parents make it
How
they changed me
Rule 2
Why parents make it
What
I plan to do for reward
写作微策略：
理清思路
把握结构
Let’s talk.
family rules
can’t watch TV
can’t play computer games
finish homework on time
eat at home every day
can’t hang out overnight
can’t hang out with friend
can’t use mobile phones
What rules should you obey at home？
Let’s debate.
In pairs, discuss the rules you agree or disagree with.
can’t play computer games
pay less attention on study
be bad for eyes and health
may not be able to go to university
have a rest
communicate with friends
get rid of stress
agree
disagree
Let’s debate.
In pairs, discuss the rules you agree or disagree with.
do housework
a waste of time
have no time
too much stress at school
develop good habits
look after themselves
understand parents.
agree
disagree
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
one of my family rules is...
my parents make it because...
The rule keeps me (safe/ healthy/happy) because...
another family rule is...
I am not allowed to... because...
The rule helps me... because...
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Read and answer questions.
写作微策略：
以读促写
（寻找相关话题的文章）
Every family has its rules. My family also has some rules.
My parents are strict with me. The first rule of my family is that I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to be healthy. The rule keeps me active at school. As a result, I can pay much attention to studying and my grades get better and better. Another rule is that they don’t allow me to go out alone at night. Because they worry about my safety.
Though my parents are too strict with me, I understand that’s because of their love. I love them too. I know how important it is to study hard. I will try my best to get into a good university. My parents are tired after work, I will do what I can to help them and let them feel relaxed.
1. What are the rules
2. What will the writer do for the family
The writer should not stay up late and he should not go out alone at night.
He will study hard and do what he can to help his parents.
写作步骤: 3.扩
follow & grow
Thanks to _____________, I become what I am.
My plan: _______________
Ending
Write down key words for your ending.
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. 明确说明对象的层次
2. 表现层次的过渡词句
说明文写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. First of all, I am not allowed to ________.
2. What’s more, ___________.
3. All in all, _____________.
What’s your experience
Development
写作步骤: 5. 查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Can you picture the experience the writer wrote about
2. Does it have a correct structure
3. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
4. Are the verbs in proper tenses
5. Does it include all the information required
Let’s edit.
Every family has its rules. My family also has some rules.
My parents are strict to me. The first rule of my family is that I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to be healthy. The rule keeps me active at school. As a result, I can pay much attention to studying and my grades get better and better. Another rule is that they don’t allow me to go out alone at night.
Though my parents are too strict with me, I understand that’s because of their love. I love them too. I know how important it is to study hard. I will try my best to get into a good university. My parents are tired after work, I will do what I can to help them and let them feel relaxed.
缺少理由：Because they worry about my safety.
relaxing
with
写作步骤: 6. 抄
Tips：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Self-check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
能够确定家规写作的结构和要点。
能够分析阅读文本，扩充内容，起草作文。
能够进行小组讨论，分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文。
Homework.
Redraft your passage.
Change the rules and try to write again.
Look for more information about successful family rules.