( Writing time )
snacks
…
toys
snacks
…
Before the party
What do we need before the party?
snacks
…
fruit
drinks
snacks
…
snacks
…
others
blueberries(蓝莓)
kiwis(猕猴桃)
soda(苏打水)
a yo-yo(玩溜溜球)
…
At the party
snacks
…
What are we going to do at the party?
others
games
Performance (表演)
eating and drinking
snacks
…
snacks
…
noodles
hot dogs
roast ducks(烤鸭)
pizza(披萨)
sing
dance
play the guitar(弹吉他)
put on a play
play the piano
Sprite (雪碧)
play with dolls
play with toy cars
take photos
feeling
After the party
How do we feel after the party?
excited
happy
exciting
nice
good
great
cool
amazing
(令人惊异的)
wonderful
full of love and joy(充满爱与欢乐的)
…
We are…
The party is…
…
tired
1
2019年
June
7
Dragon Boat Festival Party
Try to ask
Where?
What?
...
When?
Who?
When is the party going to begin?
When is the party going to end?
Where are you going to have the party?
Who is going to the party?
What are they going to do for the party?
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
We are going to have the party in the classroom.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
Eric
Andy
Lily
Pair work
Dragon Boat Festival Party
根据信息卡,同桌互问互答。
When is the party going to begin?
When is the party going to end?
Where are you going to have the party?
Who is going to the party?
What are they going to do for the party?
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
We are going to have the party in the classroom.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
Dragon Boat Festival Party
Tip: 一般将来时be going to+动词原形,表示将要做某事。be动词随主语变化而变化。
BOOKSHOP
Look and guess
1
2019年
June
8
1
2019年
June
7
Listen and number
BOOKSHOP
Grandma's Birthday Party
Sally
Time: 3 to 5 in the afternoon
Place: at Mike’s home
Peter:
Alice:
Mike:
Tom:
Sally :
have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful
______ for grandma
cook nice____ with his parents
clean and make the house _______
go to the ________ and buy some _____ for grandma
go to the ____________ with her mum
Jenny :
make a ________ cake
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Grandma's Birthday Party
Try to say
bookshop
books
supermarket
food
beautiful
picture
big/...
Mike's grandma is going to be happy.
Children are going to have fun.
BOOKSHOP
Mike
Tom
Jenny
Alice
Peter
Grandma's Birthday Party
We are going to have a birthday party for grandma at Mike's house.
It is going to begin at 3 and end at 5 on Sunday afternoon.
Many children are going to the party.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum. They want to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beautiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake. She is going to be busy.
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
Grandma's Birthday Party
We are going to have a birthday party for grandma at Mike's house.
It is going to begin at 3 and end at 5 on Sunday afternoon.
Many children are going to the party.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum. They want to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beautiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake. She is going to be busy.
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
We are going to have the party at my house.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
PK
简洁的concise
明了的clear
Let's learn
Learning tip1:
避免重复,优化句式。
Mike is going to sweep the floor.
Mike is going to keep the classroom clean.
Mike is going to sweep the floor to keep the classroom clean.
Tom is going to bring some snacks.
Tom is going to bring some drinks.
Tom is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Helen is going to the party.
Nancy isn't going to the party.
Helen is going to the party but Nancy isn't.
并列
目的
转折
两句话合二为一。
Learning tip1:
避免重复,优化句式
转折
并列
因果
but
and
also
too
either
because
others
first
next
then
finally
like
for example
Learning tip1:
避免重复,优化句式
Conjunctions(连接词)
Grandma's Birthday Party
We are going to have a birthday party for grandma at Mike's house.
It is going to begin at 3 and end at 5 on Sunday afternoon.
Many children are going to the party.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum. They want to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beautiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake. She is going to be busy.
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to have at my house.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
PK
优美的beautiful
有想象力的imaginative
Let's learn.
Learning tip2:
发挥想象,丰富细节。
Jenny is going to make a cake.
Jenny is going to make a ... cake.
Jenny is going to make a ... cake. She is going to be...
interesting
happy
exciting
nice
good
great
cool
fun
wonderful
full of love and joy
...
Learning tip2:
\
发挥想象,丰富细节。
Grandma's Birthday Party
We are going to have a birthday party for grandma at Mike's house.
It is going to begin at 3 and end at 5 on Sunday afternoon.
Many children are going to the party.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum. They want to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beautiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake. She is going to be busy.
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to have at my house.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
PK
完整的integrated
Learning tip3:
结构清晰,篇章完整。
Let's learn
Mike's grandma's birthday is going to be from 3 to 5 o'clock on Sunday at Mike's house.
Many children are going to the party.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beautiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake. She is going to be busy.
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
Body
Beginning
Ending
Learning tip3:
\
结构清晰,篇章完整。
Graduation Plan
Date:June 30th
Time: 6 to 8 p.m.
Place: At my house
Alice: balloons
Mary: presents
Jack: take some photos
Helen: put on a play
Graduation Plan
We are going to have a party on June 30th at my house. The party is going to begin at 6 and end at 8.
First, Alice is going to buy some balloons to make the room beatuiful.
Next, Mary is going to bring some present for the teachers.
Then, Jack is going to take some photos.
Finally, Helen is going to put on a play.
The party is great. We are going to have a lot of fun.
Graduation Party
Example
Date:____________
Time:____________
Place:____________
People: Activities
_______:_________
_______:_________
Graduation Plan
四人一小组制定派对计划。
Pajamas Party
(睡衣派对)
Fancy Dress Party
(化装舞会)
Beach Party
(沙滩派对)
...
Graduation Plan
We are going to have a party on June 30th at my house. The party is going to begin at 6 and end at 8.
First, Alice is going to buy some balloons to make the room beatuiful.
Next, Mary is going to bring some present for the teachers.
Then, Jack is going to take some photos.
Finally, Helen is going to put on a play.
The party is great. We are going to have a lot of fun.
Graduation Party
Example
让我们完成毕业派对计划吧。
We are going to have a party on ________at/in_______. The party is going to begin at______ and end at _______.
First, ____ is going to ______.
Next, __________________.
Then, __________________.
Finally, _________________.
The party is ______. We are going to ________.
Graduation Party
Checking
删除:my
the
添加:in school
分段:
going
改正: go
调换:games play
修改符号
内容简单,句式单一,且单词拼写和语法错误等较多。
语言比较丰富,句式灵活。
结构完整,语言丰富生动。
评分表
When you go to a western party, you open the gift at first.
When you go to a Chinese party, you open the gift later.
A western party
A Chinese party
When you go to a western party, you usually eat buffet.
When you go to a Chinese party, you usually eat at the round table.
A western party
A Chinese party
When you go to a western party, you should wear costumes.
When you go to a Chinese party, you can wear formal clothes.
A western party
A Chinese party
Parties in China mean reunion.
Parties in Western countries mean relaxation.
中国的派对意味着团圆。
西方的派对意味着放松。
Summer holiday party
Mid-Autumn Festival party
National Day party
Christmas party
Let's write.
Western Style
Chinese Style
Pajamas Party
(睡衣派对)
Beach Party
(沙滩派对)
Fancy Dress Party
(化装舞会)
...
Farewell dinner
(散伙饭)
Gradution Evening Party
(毕业晚会)
...
两人一小组讨论,选择一个主题,写一份计划。
What do we need for the party?
fruit
snacks
toys
drinks
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2019年
June
7
1
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June
6
1
2019年
June
5
1
2019年
June
4
1
2019年
June
3
1
2019年
June
2
1
2019年
June
1
What can we do at the party?
...
Let's write.
Western Style
Chinese Style
Who
Where
When
What
Be….going to
have a party
bring to the party
do at the party
?
Let's write.
Western Style
Chinese Style
When …. going to have a party?
Where … going to have …?
What … going to buy/bring…?
Who …. going to the party?
…?
Word bank
play games make grandma happy/laugh
put on a play(about…) make … beautiful
tell a story be good at singing
watch a film be good at games
have some nice food be funny
have a show be interesting
play the guitar/ violin laugh happily
take photos …
…
1分钟轮流说不停,不重复。丰富这句话。
Non-stop talking.
I am going to the party.
We are going to the watch a film.
9
6
21
8
5
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
I am going to the ... party. I ...
1
2019年
June
7
Nationality
Hobbies?
Food?
Word bank
play games make grandma happy/laugh
put on a play(about…) make … beautiful
tell a story be good at singing
watch a film be good at games
have some nice food be funny
have a show be interesting
play the guitar/ violin laugh happily
take photos …
…
1分钟轮流说不停,不重复。丰富这句话。
Non-stop talking.
I am going to the party.
We are going to the watch a film.
9
6
21
8
5
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
I am going to the ... party. I ...
What
Who
Where
When
The party is going to begin at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.
The party is going to end at 5 o'clock in the afternoon.
We are going to have in the classroom.
Eric is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Andy is going to bring some balloons.
Lily is going to think of some party games.
Eric
Andy
Lily
Pair work
Dragon Boat Festival Party
in the classroom
3 to 5 in the afternoon
Eric: snacks and drinks
Andy: balloons
Lily: think of some party games
根据信息卡,同桌互问互答。
Try to write
Body
Beginning
When? Who? Where?
Ending
How?
Who?
What?
Writing tips:
1 避免重复,优化句式
2 发挥想象,丰富细节
3 结构清晰,篇章完整
Date:June 30th
Time: 6 to 8 p.m.
Place: At my house
Alice: balloons
Mary: snacks
Helen:masks and costumes
Graduation Plan
Fancy Dress Party is going to have from 6 to 8 o'clock in the evening on June 30th at my house.
First, Alice is going to buy some balloons to make the room beatuiful.
Then, Mary is going to bring some snacks for us.
Finally, Helen is going to bring some masks and costumes.
The party is great. We will have a lot
of fun.
Fancy Dress Party
Let's write.
Western Style
Chinese Style
The party is going to ... at...
...is going to...
...are going to...
The party is...
Children are...
四人一小组,根据组内计划,完成短文。
Play a game: little train
Learning tip1:
避免重复,优化句式
The party
is
going
begin
to
at 6 o’clock.
The party
is
going
end
to
at 8 o’clock.
The party
is
going
have
to
from 6 to 8
o’clock.
I am going
to
buy
some
food.
I am going
to
buy
some
toys.
I am going
to buy
some
food and
toys.
is going
the
library.
Peter
to
is going
read
some
Peter
to
books.
is going
the
library
Peter
to
to
read books.
两辆火车合二为一。
SUN
MON
TUE
WED
THE
FRI
SAT
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
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June
Activities
… is going to…
Sun.
It is…
The children are going to ... at...
Su Hai is going to buy some snacks and drinks.
Wang Bing is going to bring some fruit from home.
Yang Ling is going to bring some toys and play with her friends.
Liu Tao is going to bring some balloons.
Tip: 一般将来时be going to+动词原形,表示将要做某事。be动词随主语变化而变化。
Try to retell
Story puzzle
Children's Day Party
Listen and write
Grandma’s Birthday Party
Time: 3 to 5 in the afternoon
Place: at Mike’s home
Peter:
Alice:
Mike:
Tom:
Sally :
have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful ______ for grandma
cook nice______ with his parents
clean and make the house _______
go to the _______ and buy some _______ for grandma
go to the ____________ with her mum
Jenny :
make a ____ cake
We are going to have a birthday party for grandma at Mike's house. It is going to begin at 3 and end at 5 on Sunday afternoon.
Mike is going to the bookshop and buy some books for grandma.
Sally is going to the supermarket with her mum. They want to buy some food.
Tom is going to cook nice food with his parents.
Alice is going to clean and make the house beatuiful.
Peter is going to have an Art lesson and draw a beautiful picture for grandma.
Jenny is going to make a big cake.
Grandma's Birthday Party
Try to say
bookshop
books
supermarket
food
beautiful
picture
nice
Mike's grandma is going to be happy. Children are going to have fun.
Grandma's Birthday Party
BOOKSHOP
3 to 5 p.m.
Sunday
Try to say
Grandma's Birthday Party