外研版（2019） 必修第二册 Unit 2 Let's Celebrate! Developing ideas—Writing课件（34张)

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基于大观念的单元整体教学设计
Unit 2 Let’s celebrate
了解多元节日文化
理解节日深刻内涵
培养节日文化自信
Lesson 1: Starting out & Vocabulary
了解世界各地庆祝季节变换的节日
了解节日相关词汇、节日庆祝原因
Lesson 2: Understanding ideas
理解英国作家Tolkien通过圣诞节信表达对孩子深沉的父爱
Lesson 3: Using language
学会情态动词表推测的用法
掌握如何对节日进行描述
Lesson 4: Listening & Speaking
学习如何发出和接受节日邀请
Lesson 5: Developing ideas
了解人们对春节团圆饭习俗的不同观点
思考传统习俗是否应该改变
Lesson 6: Writing
写信给编辑（对春节走向世界的看法）
Lesson 7: Presenting ideas & Reflection
创造节日：陈述创造原因
单元大观念
了解各国特色节日及庆祝原因的多样性，学会理解并描述不同节日，提升多元文化视野；增强对中外不同节日文化的了解，增强国家认同感，有意识地主动弘扬和传播中华优秀文化；理解和辨析不同节日的意义和内涵，通过创造新节日，联系自身实际，实现知识与思维能力的迁移。
Unit 2 Let’s celebrate!
Developing ideas—Writing
Writing a letter to express ideas
Students can enhance a sense of national identity, and learn to spread Chinese culture.
Learning objectives
To use related vocabulary to write personal views and feelings on certain cultural phenomenon.
Language Competence
1
Cultural Consciousness
2
Thinking Quality
To analyze the reasons behind certain cultural phenomenon.
3
4
Learning Ability
To learn to evaluate, edit and improve their writing.
To enhance a sense of national identity, and learn to spread Chinese culture.
Lead in
Let’s watch a video “The painting journey” performed at 2022 Chinese Spring Festival Gala.
1. What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance
2. How does the dance show Chinese traditional culture
3. Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadcast the Gala live(现场直播春晚) What does it imply
Lead in
Let’s watch a video “The painting journey” performed at 2022 Chinese Spring Festival Gala
The poetic dance, “The Painting Journey – The Legend of a Panorama of Mountains and Rivers,” highlights the aesthetics of traditional Chinese painting and combines spellbinding dance moves with traditional Chinese painting.富有诗意的舞蹈诗剧《只此青绿》突出了中国画的美学，将引人入胜的舞步与国画相结合。
The painting, “A Panorama(全景) of Rivers and Mountains,” is the only extant work by Song Dynasty (960-1279) painter Wang Ximeng (1096-1119) who created it at the age of 17.The painting is a representative of “blue-green landscape.” 这幅画《千里江山图》是宋代（960-1279）画家王希孟(1096-1119）17岁创作的唯一现存作品。这是青绿山水画的代表作。
Audiences follow the dancers to explore the legendary world of traditional Chinese art. 观众跟随舞者探索中国传统艺术的传奇世界。
“We designed undulating movements in the choreography to hopefully remind audiences of mountains, rivers, the sun and the moon or scattered rocks and endless peaks from some paintings.” said the director Han Zhen.导演韩真说 ：“我们在编舞中设计了起伏的动作，希望能让观众想起一些画作中的山脉、河流、日月或散落的岩石和无尽的山峰。”
The Painting Journey 《只此青绿》
1. What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance
2. How does the dance show Chinese traditional culture
3. Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadcast the Gala live(现场直播春晚) What does it imply
《只此青绿》
Answer the following questions.
《千里江山图》
What impresses you most in this poetic dance performance
2. How does the dance show Chinese traditional culture
3. Why did 600 foreign media outlets(外媒) from over 170 countries and regions broadcast the Gala live(现场直播春晚) What does it imply
Answer the following questions.
This poetic dance highlights the aesthetics of traditional Chinese painting.
It shows the growing popularity of the Chinese Spring Festival Gala across the world.
The elegant dance, together with the atmospheric scenic(舞台布景的)design, showcased(展现)traditional Chinese art and cultural charms.
Read the editorial on P23 and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
1. Which countries are mentioned and how do they celebrate Chinese Spring Festival
2. Which event would you like to attend most Why
3. Why do you think Chinese Spring Festival is “going global”
Russia, Ghana and the United States.
Russia: The 2017 Grand Chinese New Year Concert was held in St Petersburg, with its tickets sold out and 90% of the audience local Russians.
Ghana: Over 1,000 Ghanaian junior high school students got up on stage to perform Chinese songs and dances to celebrate the 2017 Spring Festival.
The United States: Students in New York City have since 2016 been able to enjoy an official day's holiday for Chinese Spring Festival.
1.Which countries are mentioned and how do they celebrate Chinese Spring Festival
2. Which event would you like to attend most Why
Go to the temple fair（庙会）
Watch CCTV gala
Watch the Chinese New Year Concert
Watch the lion dance
Set off firecrackers
Join a New Year parade
3. Why do you think Chinese Spring Festival is “going global”
Politics
Economy
Culture
Tourism
Growing political
influence；
Chinese government’s promotion of this festival.
The cultural deposit文化底蕴and cultural values such as win-win progress, unity and harmony “以和为贵”;
The long-cherished family values ;
Embracing diverse culture.
Increasing economic influence.
Economic vitality活力 caused by the festival brought joy to the global market.
The desire for overseas stores and recreational venues休闲场所 to profit from the celebration;
Increasing overseas Chinese population and their efforts to help the festival go global.
Before writing a letter to the editor to express your ideas,
please brainstorm about the content and complete the notes.
Genre, topic
Tense&Person(人称)
Structure&Key points
Dear editor,
Li Hua
Genre&topic
Tense&Person
Key points(reasons)
Structure
How to write a letter to express ideas
Letter, Spring Festival
Simple present tense 一般现在时为主； Third Person 第三人称为主。
1.更多的中国人去国外，极大地促进了中国节日的传播;
2.中国政治经济实力的提升吸引了更多的人了解中国文化;
3.中国节日本身的文化魅力和内涵。
……
Para1: The phenomenon of Spring festival going global介绍春节正在变成全世界庆祝的节日的现象;
Para2: Reasons of this phenomenon 现象背后的原因;
Para3 :Personal views and feelings表明自己对这件事的看法。
第一段. 引入现象:
①Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of ..…. has caused/aroused/captured public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
②Recently the issue/phenomenon of ..…. has been brought
into focus/has been brought into public attention.
③Nowadays, there is a growing/widespread concern about the problem/phenomenon that ..….
④Nowadays, an increasing number of people/people in growing numbers come to realize/are aware of the importance of ..….
⑤ Recent years have seen a boom in the number of ..….
⑥ ... is gaining increasing popularity with ..….
⑦ Recently, there aroused a phenomenon that ..…. / Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ..….
How to write a letter to express ideas
Sentences
第二段：阐述原因:
① A number of factors account for (解释)the phenomenon,but I think the following may be the leading one ..….
②The reasons for this are as follows. On the one hand ..…., on the other hand..…., the third contributing factor(影响因素)is ..….
③ There are three reasons for this. The chief reason is that ..…. , A further reason is that ..…. , ..…. may also have led to ..….
④ First of all/Firstly/To begin with/In the first place/First and foremost, ….. ; Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/In addition, ..…. ; Last but not least/Most important of all, ..….
⑤..….play a key/vital(重要的) role in ......
⑥..….have a profound influence on ......
⑦..….be inseparable from ..…. ..….与..….是分不开的
Sentences
第三段：
总结:
① In conclusion/to conclude; In short/In brief; In summary/ to sum up;
② As has been noted, ..….
表达观点及情感:
① As far as I am concerned ..…. /As for me ..….
② In my opinion/ In my point of view ..….
③ Proud, take pride in, feel obligated (有义务的) to do,
呼吁:
① Let's make combined efforts to ..….让我们共同努力去..….
② I do hope that ..…., only through joint efforts can we ..….
Sentences
a growing number of people overseas
1.越来越多的海外人士
2.希望、团聚和幸福
3.晚会、庙会
4.受益于
5.中国日益增长的
经济和政治影响力
6.旅游收入
7.尽自己的一份力量将更多的中国文化传统带到世界各地
8.拥抱文化的多样性
9.中国经济繁荣的反映
hope, reunion and happiness
gala performance, temple fairs
benefit from
China's growing economic and political influence
tourism revenues
do his or her part to bring more
Chinese traditions worldwide
embrace the diversity of culture
Words and phrases
a reflection of China’s economic boom
1.近年来，春节在海外的传播速度在不断地加快(spread , accelerate)
2.中国的春节越来越国际化，受到世界的欢迎。
3.(具体事实细节)一些国家将春节定为法定节假日，其他国家在春节举行各种庆祝活动。(recognize …as…, a public holiday ,while)
Translation
In recent years, the spread of the Spring Festival to overseas countries has been accelerating.
China’s Spring Festival is becoming increasingly internationalized and celebrated by the world.
Some countries recognize the Spring Festival as a public holiday while other countries hold various celebrations during the Festival.
4.随着中国经济的飞速发展，越来越多的人意识到，要想与中国合作伙伴合作，就必须更多地了解中国文化。(With句式,if句式)
5.随着春节期间出国旅游的人数越来越多，许多国家都在庆祝春节，让中国游客有宾至如归的感觉.(With句式/As原因状语从句;so that)
With the rapid development of Chinese economy, more and more people come to realize they must learn more about Chinese culture if they want to cooperate with their Chinese partners.
As more people travel abroad during the Spring Festival, many countries are embracing the Spring Festival so that Chinese tourists can feel at home.
Translation
6.数以百万计的中国人在春节期间出国度假，这为他们的热门目
的地带来了巨大的旅游收入。这极大地促进了中国春节的传播。
Millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spring Festival, and it brings huge tourism revenues to their popular destinations. This greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival.
Millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spring Festival, bringing huge tourism revenues to their popular destinations, which greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival.
高级表达（非谓语，定语从句）
Translation
普通表达
7.春节的流行也离不开其独特的文化魅力和底蕴，春节强调社会
凝聚力和家庭团聚。(be inseparable from, 定语从句 )
8.中国春节正在走向世界，因为它代表着世界不同文明认同的家庭价值观，如团聚、平安、富足、健康。(as原因状语从句, done做定语)
The popularity of Spring Festival is also inseparable from its unique cultural charm and deposit, which stresses social cohesion and family reunion.
The Chinese Spring Festival is going global, as it represents family values shared and honored by different civilizations across the world，such as reunion, peace, affluence, and good health.
Translation
Phenomenon
Reasons
Opinions
As far as I am concerned ... /As for me...
I do hope that...
A number of factors account for the phenomenon, but I think the following may be the leading one.
First of all.... / Moreover.../ Last but not least ....
Nowadays, an increasing number of people overseas come to...
Recently, there aroused a phenomenon that …
Chinese Spring Festival Going Global
Let’s review it
Now it’s time for you to write(25m).
WHile-writing
写作评价标准表
Let’s learn how to evaluate your writing.
post-writing
评价级别 参照标准 A 14-15 B 11-13 C 8-10 D 1-7 师评 同伴评
内容完整性 覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容 A
语法结构和词汇 应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误 语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解 文章语法错误较多，词汇很有 限，影响理解 A
文章逻辑性 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 应用简单的语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯； A
格式，卷面，书写 格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁 格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁 格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。 格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够 B
综合评价 14
Dear editor,
These days, a growing number of people overseas are celebrating Chinese Spring Festival, an important traditional festival(同位语) that features(是……的特色) hope, reunion and happiness. Various Chinese cultural activities, such as gala performances, film shows, temple fairs and other forms of celebrations, are held overseas. There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon.
To start with, the spread of Chinese Spring Festival is partly due to the increasing overseas Chinese population. What’s more, more and more countries have noticed or benefited from China’s growing economic and political influence, so they are also embracing(欣然接受) our culture and traditions. Also, many overseas stores and recreational venues(休闲场所) are taking the opportunity to profit from the celebration. Last but not least, the Chinese government and various institutions(机构) have made great efforts to help the festival go global.
I think it’s not only a good opportunity for foreigners to know about China, but a sign of China’s growing influence on the world. I hope everyone can do his or her part to bring more Chinese traditions worldwide, and more people around the globe will embrace the diversity(多样性) of culture.
Li Hua, a senior high school student
What the phenomenon is
What reasons lie behind it
How you feel about it
Sample Writing One
Dear editor,
It seems that more and more countries around the world are holding celebrations of Chinese Spring Festival. I think the reasons are as follows:
First and foremost, millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spring Festival, bringing huge tourism revenues(旅游收入) to their popular destinations.(非谓语) This greatly contributes to the spread of Chinese Spring Festival. What’s more, with the rapid development of Chinese economy(with结构), more and more people realize they must learn more about Chinese culture if they want to cooperate with their Chinese partners. Last but not least, the popularity of Spring Festival is also inseparable from its unique cultural charm and deposit(文化底蕴), which stresses social cohesion and family reunions(定从).
All in all, I think this phenomenon is a reflection of China’s economic boom and I believe more Chinese culture will be accepted by the world.
Li Hua, a senior high school student
Sample Writing Two
What the phenomenon is
What reasons lie behind it
How you feel about it
number
greatly promoting/which greatly promotes
s
Above all
the
.
评价级别 参照标准 A 14-15 B 11-13 C 8-10 D 1-7 师评 同伴评
内容完整性 覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容
语法结构和词汇 应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误 语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解 文章语法 错误较多，词汇很有 限，影响理解
文章逻辑性 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 应用简单的语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；
格式，卷面,书写 格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁 格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁 格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。 格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够
综合评价
the phenomenon
reasons
How you feel about it？
尾段总结了现象，现象原因及现象好处；不太符合题目要求，应聚焦于自己对此现象的看法及观点。
师评：10分，漏掉一个要点，所用语法词汇有较少的错误，有简单的连接成分，卷面整洁。
Dear editor,
Li Hua
Let’s evaluate this article according the Criterion
C
B
B
B
10
attention
foster the sense
.
评价级别 参照标准 A 14-15 B 11-13 C 8-10 D 1-7 师评 同伴评
内容完整性 覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容
语法结构和词汇 应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误 语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解 文章语法 错误较多，词汇很有 限，影响理解
文章逻辑性 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 应用简单的语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；
格式，卷面,书写 格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁 格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁 格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。 格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够
综合评价
phenomenon
reasons
Personal feelings and opinions
尾段总结了现象并提出展望，提到民族自豪感和人类命运共同体意识，非常好，不过结尾最后一句可以再升华一下。
师评： 12分，覆盖所有内容要点，有些许表达错误，应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇，有连接成分，卷面整洁。
In the
attracted
Dear editor,
Li Hua
Let’s evaluate it.
A
B
B
B
12
评价级别 参照标准 A 14-15 B 11-13 C 8-10 D 1-7 师评 同伴评
内容完整性 覆盖所有内容要点,观点明确 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容
语法结构和词汇 应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误 语法结构及词汇单调，词汇语法错误不影响理解 文章语法 错误较多，词汇很有 限，影响理解
文章逻辑性 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 应用简单的语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；
格式，卷面,书写 格式正确，字体工整，卷面整洁 格式基本正确，字体基本工整，卷面基本整洁 格式有问题，字体欠工整，有涂改现象，字数较少。 格式有问题，字体潦草，有多处涂改，字数不够
综合评价
phenomenon
reasons
Personal feelings and opinions
尾段总结了现象并表达自豪感，提到自己的责任并呼吁其他人一起传播中华文化，非常好！
师评： 13分，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了较多的高级语法结构和词汇，有连接成分，格式稍有问题，卷面较为整洁，书写可提升。
Dear editor,
Li Hua
Let’s evaluate it.
A
A
A
B
13
How can we help to spread Chinese culture
1.Volunteer in the Confucius Institute or spread it as an exchange student.
2. Learn more about our culture, such as Chinese ancient civilization(国学) .
3. Teach foreigners chinese cultural treasures including the Chinese calligraphy(书法) and painting, Chinese food, martial arts (武术) and so on.
……..
现在越来越多的人喜欢过西方的节日; 假如你是李华,请用英语给报社的编辑写封信来分析产生这种现象的原因，并就这种现象可能带来的影响简要阐述自己的看法和观点。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Homework
1. Assess your own writing according to the Checklist
chart and polish your writing.
2. Write the following article by using what we have learned in class.
Summary
1. Expressions related to Chinese Spring Festival;
日益增长的经济和政治影响力;海外人士;尽自己的一份力量
2. Sentences to describe a phenomenon, state reasons and express personal opinions;
3. The evaluation of a writing from content, language, coherence;
4. Self-confidence and proper pride of national culture.
I know some expressions about Chinese Spring Festival.
I know how to analyze reasons from different aspects.
I know how to comment on a phenomenon.
I know how to evaluate and improve an article.
I know how to spread Chinese culture.
Yes / No
课后评价
Circle the proper choices
Self-assessment
Happy New Year
of the Tiger!
Thanks!