Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Section B 3a-3b写作课课件36张

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I like music that
I can dance to.
Unit 9 Section B 3a-3b
学习目标
通过头脑风暴，能够谋篇布局通知类应用文写作。
通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Let’s think.
Q: Why is Chinese folk
music more and more
popular around the world？
Peng Jingxuan is playing Guzheng in France.
A: Because it‘s beautiful.
Let’s read and think.
(2018年江西) 假如你是李华，有一批外国中学生要来你校参加“中国民乐文化主题周”活动，你要写一篇活动方案向他们介绍这一周的活动安排。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你提供的活动方案，内容包括民乐介绍、活动安排以及安排理由。
提示：
Introduction Schedule Reasons
Chinese folk music traditional instruments and music pieces Time: ______ Places: music room, school hall Activities: 1. take musical instrument classes 2. attend a folk music concert … …
要求：1. 短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.不少于80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
英语写作六字诀
1
审体裁、人称、时态
审
3
扩展要点
扩
5
查单词拼写、时态、主谓一致等
查
2
抓住要点
抓
4
用过渡词（句）连接句子和段落
连
6
誊写
抄
写作步骤: 1. 审
计划
第一、二人称
一般将来时
审体裁
审人称
审时态
Beginning
Development
Ending
Outline
写作步骤: 2. 抓
抓要点
1. 民乐介绍（乐器和著名曲段）
2. 日程安排（时间、地点和活动）
3. 原因
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
outline
1.musical instruments
2.famous pieces
1.when
2.where
3.what
4.reasons
hopes
Development
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Beginning
What’s the beginning of a plan
I‘d like to introduce _______ to you.
We have many _______ musical instruments like _______.
We also have many _______ such as Surrounded on all Sides and Gaoshan Liushui.
They are _______.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
What can foreigners do so that they can know more about Chinese folk music
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
listen to stories about Chinese folk music musicians
visit some local music shops
talk with students who learned folk music
watch documentaries about folk music
attend a folk music concert in the school hall
listen to some
pieces of music
activities about Chinese folk music
Development
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning
afternoon
evening
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning 1.visit music rooms and talk with students 2. who learn folk music
afternoon
evening
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning
afternoon watch students play different kinds of Chinese musical instruments
evening
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning
afternoon have musical instrument lessons
evening
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning visit National Chinese Folk Music Museum
afternoon
evening
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
Mon Tue Wed Thurs Fri
morning
afternoon
evening attend a folk music concert in the school hall
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
写作微策略：
写出动词短语
按照日历顺序排序
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
You can _______ on _______ .
It is the best time to _______ on _______ .
If you like _______ , you can _______ on _______ .
On _______, students _______ and you can _______ .
Let’s think.
Wecome to National Chinese Folk Music Museum.
Do you know the history of Chinese folk music
写作步骤: 3. 扩 以读促写
The Chinese traditionally believe that sound influences the harmony in the universe. Until very recently, music was not to be appreciated or used as entertainment, and Chinese musicians were faced with a very low status in the world. For several thousands of years Chinese Culture was dominated by the teachings of the philosopher Confucius, who conceived of music in the highest sense as a means of calming the passions and of dispelling unrest and lust, rather than as a form of amusement. The ancient Chinese belief is that music is meant not to amuse but to purify one’s thoughts.
写作步骤: 3. 扩 以读促写
Melody and tone are of great importance in Chinese music, and there is always great care taken to ensure that each note has the proper tone. Musical instruments in China are classified by their composition: metal, stone, silk, bamboo, gourd, clay, skin and wood. The older instruments include long zithers, flutes, panpipes, the sheng, or mouth organ and percussion instruments, such as clappers, drums and gongs. Later instruments include various lutes and fiddles introduced to China from Central Asia.
写作步骤: 3. 扩 以读促写
What do the Chinese traditionaly believe
What are of great importance in Chinese music
写作独特微策略：
给出具体的例子
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
If you visit _______, you can see kinds of _______ and know _______. For example, melody and tone are of great importance in Chinese music.
写作独特微策略：
给出具体的例子
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
If you visit _______, you can see kinds of _______ and know _______. For example, melody and tone are of great importance in Chinese music.
写作步骤: 3.扩
Development
Do you know the reason why Li Hua planned these activities for the foreign students
Reason
We hope these activities can help you _______.
2.It‘s a good chance for you to _______.
3.I’m sure you will _______.
写作步骤: 3.扩
Ending
Write down key words for your ending.
Hope you will _______.
I think _______.
My hope
写作步骤: 4. 连
1. 民乐简介
2. 具体活动安排
3. 活动设计的原因及希望
安排的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
Development
What’s your writing sequence
First of all, I'd like to introduce Chinese folk music to you, ________.
Secondly, we have prepared some interesting activities for you, ___________.
We hope these activities can help you ______.
写作步骤: 5. 查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a plan
2. Can you find the schedules the writer wrote about
3. Does it have correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
写作步骤: 6. 抄
Tips：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Let’s edit.
Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about the culture of Chinese folk music. First of all, I'd like to introduce Chinese folk music to you. We have many elegant
musical instruments like erhu, dizi, guzheng and etc. We also have many famous pieces of music such as Surrounded on all Sides and Gaoshan Liushui which are very popular around the world.
Let’s edit.
Secondly, we have prepared some interesting activities for you. On Monday you will visit music rooms and talk with students who learn folk music. On Tuesday you are going to watch our students play different kinds of Chinese musical instruments. On Wednesday and Thursday you are going to take musical instrument classes and our teachers and students will tell you more about our folk music. On Friday evening you are going to attend a folk music concert in the school hall.
Let’s edit.
We hope these activities can help you know more about the culture of Chinese folk music. It's a good chance for you to enjoy the beauty of the music and I’m sure you will lose yourselves in it.
Hope you will have a good time.
Let’s check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
能够谋篇布局计划类应用文写作。
能够分析阅读文本，扩充内容，起草作文。
能够进行小组讨论，分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文。
Homework
Redraft your passage.
Look for more information about Chinese folk music.
Search for the information about how to write
plans better.