Unit 10 You’re supposed to shake hands. Section B 3a写作课课件32张

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Unit 10
You’re supposed to shake hands.
Unit 10 Section B 3a
学习目标
通过图片，能够激活学生相关table manners的背景知识。
通过分析题目，抓住写作要点，扩充写作内容。
通过小组合作，能够修改作文，提升写作能力。
Let’s think.
What table manners can you learn from the video
The seat facing the door belongs to the host.
You can sit side by side when there are more than 10 people.
We order for everyone and share the food.
You’re not supposed to stand up to take food; you can turn the Lazy Susan.
Don’t turn the Lazy Susan when others pick up food.
Let’s think and say.
You’re not supposed to hit the bowl with chopsticks.
Do you know any other table manners in China
Let’s think and say.
You’re supposed to let the elderly start first at the table.
Do you know any other table manners in China
.
Let’s think and say.
There is no need to tip in Chinese restaurants.
Do you know any other table manners in China
Let’s think and discuss
假如你是李平，请你对意大利生Amino的邮件进行回复，词数80词左右。
To: Li Ping
From: Amino
Hi Li Ping,
How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I can’t wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners What places of interest can I visit when I am in your city
Amino
英语写作六字诀
誊写
查单词拼写、时态
主谓一致等
用过渡词（句）
连接句子和段落
审体裁、人称、时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
审
收件人
To: Li Ping
From: Amino
Hi Li Ping,
How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I can’t wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners What places of interest can I visit when I am in your city
Amino
应用文
（电子邮件）
第一、
二人称
一般现在时
审体裁
审人称
审时态
寄件人
正文
抓
To: Li Ping
From: Amino
Hi Li Ping,
How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I can’t wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners What places of interest can I visit when I am in your city
Amino
抓要点
1. 中国的餐桌礼仪
2. 名胜古迹
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Greeting! ...
Table manners in China & places of interest.
Your wishes.
Beginning
Main body
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Beginning
How to start an e-mail
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Thanks for your email about …
I’m glad to receive your email …
Sorry for my late reply/Sorry it took me so long
to get back to you.
…
Beginning
1. 开头提到上次联系内容：
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I’m writing to you about the meeting next week.
I’m writing to ask / to inform you / to invite you / to check/ to …
I’m writing to you because I have just found out that / because I thought you’d like to know that / because I need / because …
Beginning
2. 开头直述主题：
写作步骤: 3. 扩
How’s it going / How are things / How’s life
I hope you have a good weekend / a good evening / a good trip …
I hope you (and your family ) are all well.
…
Beginning
3. 开头友好问候：
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Hi Amino,
I’m glad to hear from you and can’t wait to see you in China.
Beginning
Now, start your beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
You’re supposed to ____________________________
Main body
Introduce table manners
wash your hands before the meal.
let the elderly start first at the table.
You’re (aren’t) supposed to
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Main body
Introduce table manners
You aren’t expected to __________________________
talk with your mouth full.
stick you chopsticks into the food.
hit your bowl with chopsticks.
You’re (aren’t) expected to
写作步骤: 3. 扩
It’s polite to say ______________________________
Main body
Introduce table manners
“I’m full.” if you don’t want more food.
It’s polite to ….
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Wuzhen Water Town, lying in the northern part of Tongxiang City, Zhejiang Province, is a typical ancient town in southern China. It’s about 80 kilometers (50 miles) from both Hangzhou and Suzhou. As one of the top six ancient towns in the southern region of the Yangtze River, Wuzhen Water Town boasts more than six thousand years of history and has been a fertile piece of land with abundant rice, fish and silk.
What can you learn from the passage
Beginning
Introduce places of interest
position
history
famous things
写作步骤: 3. 扩
What can we write to introduce places of interest
Can we write all of them in our composition
Just choose one or two points.
Main body
Introduce places of interest.
position
history
famous things
beautiful scenery
…
写作步骤: 3. 扩
As for places of interest, I highly recommend ______________. It lies ____________________
Main body
Introduce places of interest.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I’m looking forward to _____________!
I hope to __________ your early reply.
Wishing you a pleasant _______.
Wishing you ___________.
Write down your wishes for your ending.
Ending
写作步骤: 4. 连
When we talk about different examples, what linking words can we use
For instance, table manners are important in china.
Take chopsticks for example, you aren’t supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food.
写作步骤: 4. 连
When we want to change topics, what linking words can we use
As for places of interest, I highly recommend the West Lake.
Speaking of Hangzhou, one of the most famous places is …
Checklist Yes No
1. Is it an Email
2. Did it start appropriately
3. Did it cover all the details
4. Did it use some linking words to make the article fluent
5. Did it use correct verbs, tenses and spelling
写作步骤: 5. 查
写作步骤: 5. 查
查格式
Hi ...,
How’s it going _________________
______________________________
_____________________________ ______________________________
_________
开场白
正文
称呼
结束语
署名
As for the places of interest, I’d like to introduce the West Lake to you. It is one of the famous lake in China, you can enjoy the beatufly scenery there while walking along the bank of the lake. Hangzhou Nature Tea Museums is another good choice …
写作步骤: 5. 查
lakes
beautiful
Museum
写作步骤: 6. 抄
策略：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Let’s edit.
Hi Amino,
I’m glad to hear from you and can’t wait to see you in China.
I think I can give you some information about table manners in China and places of interest in my city. First, there are indeed some table manners in China that you should pay attention to. When you have dinner with older people, you are not supposed to eat first. Besides, it’s impolite to point at anyone with chopsticks and talk with your mouth full.
As for places of interest, Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake, the Hangzhou National Tea Museum, the Song Dynasty Town and so on. You can enjoy not only the beauty of the nature but also the culture of the Song Dynasty.
I’m looking forward to seeing you!
Li Ping
Let’s check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
1. 能够回忆table manners的相关知识。
2. 能够分析作文要点，扩充作文内容。
3. 能够合作共改作文，提升作文能力。
Homework.
Redraft your passage.
Search for more information about table manners in China.
Search for information about other customs in China.