Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.Section B 3a-3 b写作课课件(共有PPT40张）

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Sad movies make me cry.
Unit 11 Section B 3a-3b
学习目标
通过复习和分析文本，能够把握讲述回忆/经历的关键信息和框架。
通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
The winning team
Let’s discuss and retell the story.
He was happy that his teammates could _________
him.
He felt to be on a winning team.
He thought he had let the whole team down.
He was worried his coach might ____ ____ ____ the team.
Peter’s worries
Soccer is about , so everyone should support each other.
They should learn to each other and learn from their mistakes.
Peter’s actions
Peter’s team lost a game when he missed __________
He went to the soccer practice with in his heart and said sorry to his teammates.
He encouraged his teammates to continue to .
Peter’s feelings
scoring a goal.
kick him off
team work
communicate with
courage
pull together
understand
lucky
Daddy’s advice
Let’s read and find what information you can get from it
When did it happen
1
Where did it happen
2
How did it make him feel
3
Why did it make him feel so
4
What happened
5
What did he learn from the experience
6
Let’s read and think.
人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次......。请根据提示，就你的第一次......写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1.第一次......的整个过程；
2.你的感受。
要求：
1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time .
抓住要点
抓
扩
扩展要点
连
用过渡词（句）
连接句子和段落
查
查单词拼写
时态、主谓一致
审体裁、人称、
时态
审
誊写
抄
英语写作
写作步骤: 1. 审
审体裁 _____________________
审人称 _____________________
审时态 _____________________
记叙文
审
第一人称为主
以一般过去时为主
Beginning
Development
Ending
outline
第一次做某事的经历是什么
2. 这次经历是怎样度过（时间顺序）
3. 你的感受
抓要点
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Let’s think what we can say when we talk about experiences.
01
03
04
05
02
When did it happen
What happened
Where did it happen
Why did it happen
How did it make you feel
Beginning
outline
Do you still remember the first time you...
when
where
why
the things I did
feelings
Development
Ending
写作步骤: 2. 抓
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Please share with us your first experience to...in details.
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I still remember the first time I_______________.
_________________ was the most unforgettable
experience in my life.
learned to swim
Learning to swim
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I still remember the first time I_______________.
_________________ was the most unforgettable
experience in my life.
cooked
Cooking by myself
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I still remember the first time I ____________________.
__________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.
traveled with my parents
Traveling with parents
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I still remember the first time I ____________________________.
___________________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.
attended an English competition
Attending the English competition
Beginning
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Task 2
Put the sentences in the right order.
1. I went to a theater.
2. My father felt sad and disappointed.
3. My father decided to walk home.
4. I lied to my father about being late.
5. I drove and followed my father, begging him to get in the car.
6. I drove my father to a faraway village.
7. I went to pick up my father.
6-1-7-4-2-3-5
Try to write your experience according to the order of time.
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
As summer vacation was coming
When
at the swimming pool
where
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My parents made some plans for me, because they wanted me to learn something useful.
Why
Swimming is an important skill.
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
The things I did…
I went to the swimming pool.
The coach taught me how to hold breath.
I could stay in water for a long time.
The coach taught me some movements.
I could swim by myself.
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My feelings changed during the process of learning.
At first:
Then:
At last:
meaningful
Write down key words for your ending.
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
last summer
When
at home
where
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time.
Why
Development
写作步骤: 3. 扩
The things I did…
I decided to make dinner for them.
I surfed the Internet for some information on
how to make...
I followed the instructions to make some dishes.
I got the dinner ready.
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My parents’ feelings: My parents returned from work and they__________________.
My feelings: ___________.
Write down key words for your ending.
meaningful
Development
你和父母准备外出旅游。请根据提示做出你们的出游计划。
（只填写字母代码）
1. I would like to go somewhere _____, _____, _____ or _____.
2. By the end of June, we will have _____, _____, _____ and _____
3. Some of the things that we are going to carry can be used for and
.
D F J K
A. exciting B. taking photos C. peaceful
D. packed the suitcase E. exotic
F. asked my neighbor to look after my dog
G. contacting my friends H. education I. fascinating
J. prepared a camera K. bought a mobile phone L. travel
B
A C E I
G
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My parents’ feelings: _________________________.
My feelings: ________________________________.
Write down key words for your ending.
meaningful
写作步骤: 3. 扩
Development
How do you prepare for an English competition Please put the pictures into the correct order.
A B C D E
_____ _____ _____ _____ _____
C
A
E
B
D
Ending
写作步骤: 3. 扩
My feelings changed during the process of the competition.
Before the competition:
During the competition:
After the competition:
Write down key words for your ending.
meaningful
1. 按照时间顺序
2. 逻辑连接词的使用使用
叙事的写作方法
写作步骤: 4. 连
Development
写作步骤: 4. 连
1.To start with, ________.
2. Then, ________.
3. ... hour(s) later, ________.
4. When ________.
5. Although ________.
What’s your experience
写作步骤: 5.查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a narrative
2. Can you find the elements in narration
3. Does it have a correct structure
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
策略：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
写作步骤: 6. 抄
Let’s edit.
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most unforgettable experience in my life. Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time. Considering my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner for them.
Let’s edit.
To start with, I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and Mapo Tofu. Then, I followed the instructions to make them step by step. An hour later, I got the dinner ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done.
Let’s edit.
Although my dishes were not so delicious, I felt excited to share housework. I will never forget the sweet memory.
Let’s edit.
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most unforgettable experience in my life. Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time. Considering my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner for them.
To start with, I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and Mapo Tofu. Then, I followed the instructions to make them step by step. An hour later, I got the dinner ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done.
Although my dishes were not so delicious, I felt excited to share housework. I will never forget the sweet memory.
Let’s check.
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通过复习和分析文本，能够把握讲述事情/经历的关键信息和框架。
通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Homework.
Redraft your writing.
Choose another unforgettable experience and write a passage about it.
Choose an extract from The adventure of Tom Sawyer, read and find how Mark Twain described the adventure vividly.