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How to write a “travelogue” (游记)
Writing
The world is beautiful!
Beauty is right here!
Statue of Liberty(自由女神像)
The Pyramids of Egypt
埃及金字塔
The Antarctic Continent is a pure snow world.
南极冰雪世界
The Great Wall in China
中国的万里长城
The Temple of Heaven (天坛)
Have you ever been to any beautiful places
Free Talk
◆ Where did you go
◆ What did you do
◆ How did you feel
Where
What
How
How to keep
the memory of
your trip forever
How to write
a travelogue
(如何书写游记?)
Brainstorm(头脑风暴)
travelogue
◆ How to write a travelogue
travelogue
transportation
location
food
people
places to visit
feeling
weather
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2
3
Put the 3 paragraphs into the right order.
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last, I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious(宝贵的) experience.
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
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2
3
Put the 3 paragraphs into the right order.
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last, I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious(宝贵的) experience.
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
2
1
3
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last, I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious experience.
A Trip to Singapore
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
1
Try to find the key words.
What
Where
When
Who
How
Feeling
I
Singapore
Last summer vacation
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last, I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious experience.
2
Try to find the key words.
What
How
Feeling
Merlion Park
relaxing.
Lau Pa Sat
food.
great
Night
Safari
precious
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
3
Try to find the key words.
Feeling
unforgettable
Mind Map
Who
Where
When
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
What
How
Paragraph 3
Feeling
How to write a passage more coherently
(连贯地)
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
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1
3
How to write a passage more coherently(连贯地)
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I discover the new flavors(风味). At last , I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious experience.
firstly.
Then
At last
What an unforgettable trip! I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.
2
1
3
I still remember my first trip to Singapore. Last summer vacation, I went there by plane. And I really had an unforgettable trip.
It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last, I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious experience.
Try to polish(美化) your passage.
②. It’s no secret that the Merlion(鱼尾狮) is the symbol of Singapore. So I visited the Merlion Park firstly. ③. Besides having a breath of fresh air , strolling(漫步) through the park was also relaxing. Then I walked to Lau Pa Sat(老巴刹) where I tried different kinds of new food. One great thing about this place was that I could discover the new flavors(风味). At last , I went to Night Safari (夜间动物园) where I watched animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo. As an animal lover, it was my most precious experience.
Try to polish(美化) your passage.
①. The Merlion is the symbol of Singapore.
④. It was relaxing to have a breath of fresh air.
It was also relaxing to stroll through the park.
③.
Writing
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Things You Should Write Down.
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★ Try to use connectives (连接词).
★ Try to polish (美化) your passage.
★ Share your own feelings.
★ Try to use the past tense.
Peer Checklist (同伴互评表)
◆ After reading my classmate’s travelogue, I know
★ where he/she went (place) YES/NO
★ connectives (连接词) YES/NO
★ good/useful expression (表达) YES/NO
★ his/her own feelings YES/NO
★ when he/she traveled (time) YES/NO
★ who went with him/her (people) YES/NO
★ what he/she did (activity) YES/NO
★ how he/she felt (feeling) YES/NO
◆ In my classmate’s travelogue, I can find
The Best Travelogue
Peer Check
(同伴互评)
★ place
★ time
★ people
★ activity
★ feeling
★ connectives
(连接词)
My favorite teacher
Echo, my favorite teacher, is a pretty and slim lady. One of the most important reasons why I like her is that she is very kind. When she talks to others, she always has a smile on her face.
I think Echo is a great teacher because she has a lot of good methods on teaching. She is not only quite friendly, but also humorous. Her class is full of fun that you have never feel bored. To improve our grades, she usually gives us some advice on how to learn English well. What's more, she sacrificed her own time to help us, never thought of gain. When I ask her questions, she must try to make me understand. I have never seen such a good teacher before.
Echo has a great influence on me. I'm lucky enough to have such a good teacher.
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