人教版初中英语九年级全册nit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.写作课课件+嵌入音视频(共41张PPT)

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I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
Unit 14 Section B 3a–self-check
学习目标
通过头脑风暴，能够对有关初中生活的文章谋篇布局。
01
通过分析阅读文本，能够理清演讲稿格式和语言特点、注意行文时态、理清文章动词形式。
02
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点、接纳建议并修改作文、提高写作的自我效能感。
03
Let’s watch.
What do you remember in junior high school
What or who made you regret in junior high school
What will you do after graduation
Let’s think.
What do you remember in junior high school
My name is Mary. I remember training for the sports day and we finally won the races.
I also made a lot of friends.
Let’s talk.
I want to say sorry to my parents. Sometimes, I felt so anxious that I quarreled with them.
What did you want to do but not do in junior high school
What or who made you regret in junior high school
Let’s think.
What will you do after graduation
I will spend more time on reading, and I will get along well with my parents.
Let’s read and think.
（2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔中考 改编）初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去，你是否感到充实和快乐？展望未来，你是否对高中生活充满期待？请结合以下提示写一篇毕业班会演讲稿。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80~100词，格式正确；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
英语写作
审体裁
审人称
审时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
用过渡词（句）
连接句子
和段落
查单词拼写
查时态
查主谓一致
誊写
写作步骤1：审
审体裁 _____________________
审人称 _____________________
审时态 _____________________
演讲稿
审
第一人称
一般过去时、现在完成时
一般现在时、一般将来时
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Outline
(2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔中考改编)初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示写一篇毕业班会演讲稿。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80~100词，格式正确；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
写作步骤2：抓
初中阶段的收获
2. 初中阶段的遗憾和未实现的愿望
3. 对未来高中生活的计划和打算
抓要点
（2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔中考 改编）初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去，你是否感到充实和快乐？展望未来，你是否对高中生活充满期待？请结合以下提示写一篇毕业班会演讲稿。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80~100词，格式正确；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
写作步骤2：抓
Outline
Introduction
Conclusion
Present the topic
Gains in junior high school
Regrets in junior high school
Plans for senior high school
Thank you for your attention.
Body
Let’s think.
Gains in junior high school
What did you learn or get in junior high school
What have you done in junior high school
What are you most proud of in school
How have you changed since you started junior high school
For me, l have learned a lot from the teachers, and I have made a lot of friends.
…
Let’s think.
Regrets in junior high school
What did you want to do but not do in junior high school
What or who made you regret in junior high school
What should you do well but did not do well in junior high school
For me, I failed to keep on reading and sometimes I quarreled with my parents. That made me feel really sorry.
…
Let’s think.
Plans for senior high school
How do you think things will be different in senior high school
What are your plans for the next year
What are you looking forward to
For me, I will spend more time on reading. I will get along well with my parents, too.
…
senior high school
How to write a speech.
Let’s read.
称呼
结尾
祝福或感谢
开场白
引出话题
正文
阐述话题
How to write a speech.
Let’s read.
用祈使句，直接呼吁，激起热情
过渡句或过渡词使层次清晰
写作步骤3：扩
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about ___________________________________
I’m very glad to give you a short speech. My topic is _________________________________________
Introduction
写作步骤3：扩
Gains in junior school
I have learned a lot from the teachers, such as _______________________________________
I have made a lot of friends who _____________
_______________________________________
plenty of knowledge and learning methods.
share the same interest with me.
What did you get in junior high school
Body (1)
写作步骤3：扩
Gains in junior high school
I have learned ____________________, such as _______________________________________
I have __________________________________
_______________________________________
Body (1)
写作步骤3：扩
Regrets in junior high school
I failed to keep on reading because _________
_____________________________________
I ____________________________________ I quarreled with my parents.
I was busy with my schoolwork.
sometimes felt so anxious that
Body (2)
There were always many regrets in the past.
写作步骤3：扩
I failed to _____________ because ________
_____________________________________Because of ______________, I didn’t _______
_____________________________________
Body (2)
Regrets in junior high school
写作步骤3：扩
Plans for senior high school
I hope to _________________________________
I want to _________________________________
I plan to __________________________________
I’m going to ______________________________
spend more time on reading.
get along well with my parents.
join the club to make my life more colorful.
Body (3)
What are your plans for senior high school
...
写作步骤3：扩
祈使句：直接呼吁，激起热情
Never _________________________________
Please do ______________________________
Don’t __________________________________
Let ____________________________________
高分秘籍（1）
写作步骤3：扩
巧用修辞：比喻、排比等
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal.”
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
— Martin Luther King
高分秘籍（2）
写作步骤3：扩
巧用修辞：比喻、排比等
I have a plan that in senior high school, I will _______________
__________________________________________________
I have a plan that ____________________________________ __________________________________________________
I have a plan that ____________________________________
__________________________________________________
高分秘籍（2）
写作步骤3：扩
引用格言、谚语等
To express determination, what aphorism (格言) can you think of How do you say it in English
高分秘籍（3）
写作步骤3：扩
引用格言、谚语等
一次只做一件事，做到最好！
勇往直前，决不放弃！
Do one thing at a time, and do well.
Keep on going and never give up.
Try to translate them.
高分秘籍（3）
写作步骤3：扩
引用格言、谚语等
任何值得做的事，都值得把它做好！
我能行，因为我相信！
Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.
I can because I think I can.
Try to translate them.
高分秘籍（3）
写作步骤3：扩
引用格言、谚语等
Other sentences that may help you.
今天做到最好就是对明天最好的准备！
The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.
高分秘籍（3）
写作步骤3：扩
引用格言、谚语等
Other sentences that may help you.
你不能改善你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。
You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.
高分秘籍（3）
写作步骤3：扩
Thank you very much for your attention.
That’s all. Thank you.
Conclusion
写作步骤4：连
1. Write it in the order of logic and time.
按照逻辑和时间顺序
2. 连接词的使用
演讲稿正文的写作方法
Boys and girls:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about _____
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
写作步骤4：连
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.
Since I entered junior high school, ______________
However, __________________________________
Firstly, ____________________________________
Secondly, _________________________________
In high school, _____________________________
写作步骤5：查
Peer-evaluation checklist Yes No
1. Is it a speech
2. Does it have the correct structure
3. Have you used imperative sentences, parallelism and so on Have you quoted a motto
4. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
5. Are the verbs in proper tenses
6. Does it include all the information required
写作步骤: 6. 抄
誊写：
字母为首
间距为辅
压线保稳
倾斜最美
Boys and girls:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about my junior high school life and my plans for my future.
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I entered junior high school, I’ve learned a lot from my teachers, such as plenty of knowledge and learning methods. I have also made many good friends who share the same interest with me. However, there are still things that I feel sorry about. Firstly, I failed to keep on reading, because I was busy with my schoolwork. Secondly, sometimes I felt so anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In high school, I will spend more time on reading and I will get along well with my parents. I will join the club to make my life more colorful, too. You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted. I believe I will have a colorful high school life. Believe in yourselves. You can do it, too.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
Let’s check.
评价内容 1 2 3 4 5
能够对有关初中生活的文章谋篇布局。
能够理清演讲稿格式和语言特点、注意行文时态、理清文章动词形式。
能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点、接纳建议并修改作文、提高写作的自我效能感。
1. What happened in junior high school that made you have these feelings Complete the chart.
Feelings Memories/Experiences
excited
happy
worried
Our class won the first prize on a sports day.
Our math teacher praised me.
I didn’t finish my homework but my teachers were strict.
Self-check.
1. What happened in junior high that made you have these feelings
Complete the chart.
Self-check.
sad
tired
proud
shy
Because I had had a fight with my best friend, we did not talk to each other for a week.
I stayed up late at night to study.
I got first in the final examination.
I did not dare to talk to anyone on the first day of Grade 7.
Homework.
Redraft your passage.
Make a plan for your senior high school.
Give the speech in front of your classmates.