(共35张PPT)
Learning aims
Learn to organize the ideas according to the type of writing;
Learn to write a letter about asking for people’s help;
Be aware of giving a helping hand and take action .
Heal the world
Someone with a serious disease
People in poor areas
Blind and deaf people
The elderly
Homeless people
Earthquake survivors
Can you tell me how we can help them
Giving a helping hand
Give our love to the elderly.
Take good care of the elderly .
Give seats to the elderly.
……
Help blind people cross the road.
Build schools and buy stationery for
poor students.
Organize a charity show
Peter has read an article about a middle school student in the newspaper. He wants to write a letter to ask for help. Please think of how Peter wrote such a letter.
_______ needs help.
He has a serious _______ disease.
His family need_______.
We can ______ money.
Thanks for _______.
Xiao Wei
blood
money
donate
help/ support
Listen to Peter’s letter and fill the blanks.
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
n. 引言; 介绍
who
kind of help
Thanks
information
how to help
Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month. The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Peter
Find out some useful expressions
Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month. The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Peter
Find out some useful expressions
Choose and discuss the ideas
Choose and discuss who you want to help and what you can do.
Peter,男,15岁,非洲人和父母一样都是聋哑人。家境贫寒,没有上学。他也没有朋友,不敢出门,怕被别人笑话,感到很孤独、悲伤。请求您的帮助。
张兰,女,13岁,阳光中学初一学生。去年,他父亲在车祸中丧生,母亲要照顾家里年幼的弟弟和年迈的奶奶。生活困难。请求您的帮助。
王明,男,15岁,北川中学初二学生,学习成绩优秀。他是汶川地震的幸存者,但他的父母却在地震中失去了生命。从此,他失去了家园。请求您的帮助。
Checklist
评估标准:
1. 结构合理、要点齐全
2. 时态
3. 人称
3. 关联词
4. 书写工整,整体美观
5. 若出现谚语、从句等好句子可适当加分( 1分/句)。
6.语法错误
Writing a letter to ask people’s help according to the plan
Each student writes an article.
(10 minutes)
The fastest three groups can get 5 points, 3 points and 1 point .
10 minutes
8 minutes
6 minutes
3 minutes
2 minutes
1 minute
20 seconds
Time's up!
How to correct other’s mistakes
For example:
1. He is Grade 9 student at No. 2 Middle school.
a
2. He is a Grade 9 student at No. 2 Midle school.
Middle
3. He is a Grade 9 student at a No. 2 Middle school.
Checklist
评估标准:
结构合理、要点齐全
时态
人称
关联词
书写工整,整体美观
若出现谚语、从句等好句子可适当加分
语法错误
Whose writing is the best in your group
Competition
The winners of three groups have a chance to ask for people’s help.
(You should try your best to collect as much money as you can.)
5 points, 3 points and 1 point are waiting for you !
Giving a helping hand
If you can have a speech without your paper, you can get one more minute.
Which group is the winner
Love has a magic power!
假如你是学生会主席丁丁,请根据表格中的提示写一篇80词左右的倡议书,号召同学们捐赠图书,要求语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥。
Introduction: 花山小学
Main body: 中国西北的一所乡村小学,很小,无图书馆或阅览室;学生贫困,但热爱阅读;尽可能多的捐赠图书
Conclusion…….
Dear all,
The children in Huashan School need our help!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks a lot for your support!
Ding Ding