(共16张PPT)
写作突破一 书信
分析指导
书信是人们在日常生活、学习、工作和公务活动中应用最为广泛的，有一定惯用格式的应用文。
英语书信的写作主要包括四个方面的内容，即：称呼，正文，结束语，署名。
第一步：称呼
称呼是指信文开头的称呼，其后一般用逗号。例如：对父母、亲戚：My Dear Mother/Dear Cousin等。对同学、朋友：My Dear Friend/Dear Mr. Jackson/Dear Sir等。对未婚女子：Dear Miss Lucy/My Dear Miss Lucy等。对一般女子：不论是否已婚：Madame/Dear Madame等。对已婚女子：Dear Mrs. Jackson/My Dear Mrs. Jackson等。对公司、学校、工厂等：Dear Sirs/Gentlemen等。
第二步：正文
正文是信件的主体部分，也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼的下一行开始。正文的写法也有一定的规律，一般是：开头带有寒暄、客气的套语。正文要写事情。收尾有寒暄、客气的套语。一般的开头套语要根据信件内容，尤其是回信时的情景来选择不同的套语。而且要开门见山，提出写信的目的，表明信的性质。要发挥自己的想象力把题目中所给的三个要点进行扩展，同时要注意根据文章的要求增加相关的细节及关联词语，这样既能做到要点全面，又能使所写的文章语言流畅，衔接自然。
第三步：礼貌性的结尾套语
这些客套话一般都是焦急等待着您的回信的话。例如：I am looking forward to your reply./Please write to me soon./I hope to hear from you soon./I would appreciate it if you could send a reply at your earliest convenience.或者是问候、祝福一类的用语，例如：Please give my best regards to your family./Please remember me to your family./With best wishes to you.
第四步：签名
签名时注意不要签自己的真名，按照书信的要求办事。个人署名：Yours truly W．J. Watson, 公司署名：Yours faithfully, Legend Computer Company Wang Lin Sales Manager。
典题示例
(2010·全国Ⅱ)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
2．授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础)
3．工作量：
——每周12学时，任选三门课
——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
Dear Peter，
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in
China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best，
Li Hua
[写作点拨]
本文要求以书信的形式把招聘信息表述给笔友，体现了命题的交际性原则。命题看似容易，动笔却不简单，写好更难。考生需根据提示的信息，连贯、贴切地把所要陈述的内容表达出来。本题所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，各种层次的考生只要认真审题均能够发挥自己的水平。
[写作要点]
1．教授课程(the teaching courses)
2．授课对象(the listeners)
三年以上英语基础的高中生(the senior students who have at least three years of English learning experiences)
3．工作量(the work capacity)
一周12学时(teach 12 hours a week)
[范文借鉴]
Dear_Peter，
I_remember_you_told_me_you_were_interested_in_teaching_in_China. Our school now is looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best，
Li_hua
[露一小手]
(2010·福建省泉州市质检)
假设你叫李华，现是泉州某中学的一名高三学生。你的美国笔友Jack来信谈及汉语学习的困难并请你提出一些汉语学习的建议。请你根据以下提示，给Jack写一封回信。
提示：
1．学习汉语一定要有兴趣，不怕困难；
2．不要怕犯错误，多听，多读，多练；
3．创造和利用学习汉语的机会，如：结交中国朋友等；
4．其他建议……
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数；
3．词数120左右。
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck to you!
Li Hua
[范文借鉴]
Dear_Jack，
I'm_glad_to_receive_your_letter_asking_for_my_advice_on_how_to_learn_Chinese_well. Firstly, develop your interest in learning Chinese if you want to be good at it. Difficult as Chinese may seem, you are sure to make progress if you put your heart into learning it. Secondly, it is natural to make mistakes when learning a new language, so don't worry about mistakes. More listening and reading will be of great help in learning Chinese.
Only practice can make perfect. Thirdly, you should try to get yourself into a Chinese environment and seize every opportunity to learn and practice your Chinese. For example, try to make friends with Chinese and communicate with them in Chinese, or you may attend Chinese training classes in your place. I am sure your Chinese will improve soon.
Good_luck_to_you!
Li_Hua(共11张PPT)
写作突破二 日记
[分析指导]
日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情为内容的一种文体。写英语日记一般要注意以下几点：
1．英语日记有一定的格式。英语日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。书端用于记载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行，顶格写起。日期和星期写在第一行的左上角，天气情况写在第一行的右上角。
2．日记是对生活的记录，是把自己一天中最有意义的事情记录下来所形成的书面材料，故写日记必须用第一人称。
3．日记一般记叙当天发生的事，因此多用过去时态和现在完成时态，但也可灵活运用，如说明客观事实、普遍真理或为了使所描述的事物生动等时，也可用现在时态。
[典题示例]
(2010·北京)
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
注意：1.周记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
________________________________________________________________________
[写作点拨]
试题通过四幅图画介绍了高二(1)班的李华利用周末帮祖父母去北戴河旅行的过程，文章要求用周记形式叙述，因此应写成以过去时态为主的记叙文。
[写作要点]
1．上网搜索(search the Internet for...)
2．售票处(ticket office/booking office)
3．整理行李(pack into the suitcase/pack one's things for a journey)
[范文借鉴]
Last_weekend,_I_helped_my_grandparents_prepare_their_trip_to_Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
[露一小手]
假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：地铁(列车)——subway train
February 12th, 2008
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[范文借鉴]
February_12th,_2008
Having bought a small hand bag for my father as a birthday present, I took a subway train home. I got seated and couldn't help thinking how pleased my father would be on seeing the present. At the next train station, an old woman went on board the train. The seats were full and she had to stand with two heavy suitcases in her hands. Seeing this, I stood up and gave my seat to her. She thanked me very much and sat down.
Although I stood all the rest way home, I felt delighted. And I believe my father would be even more pleased to know what I have done for the old woman than to receive the gift.(共15张PPT)
写作突破三 电子邮件
[分析指导]
电子邮件和英文书信相差不多，主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。称呼和落款在考试时常常给出，写正文时要注意以下两点：
1．首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人，语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写词语，但正式的邮件不可以。
2．写电子邮件要直接，并多用短句，使意思清楚。当然，对重点部分要做详细介绍。考试中写电子邮件时，必须根据提示(汉语或图画)，将要点写全，并注意语言的运用。
[典题示例]
(2010·陕西)
假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
写作要求：
1．对她表达感谢之意；
2．介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情；
3．希望了解她的近况。
要求：
1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
4．书写须清晰、工整。
5．邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in China.
________________________________________________________________________
All the best
Li Hua
[写作点拨]
这是一篇文字信息类作文，并且是一种应用文，充分体现了英语学习应该注意实用性。并且在写作时注意这种文体的格式，避免逐词逐句翻译，同时不要漏掉主要信息。如果能用几个高级词汇和句式，文章会更精彩。
[写作要点]
1．表达对老师的感谢之意(be grateful)
2．介绍老师离开后自己及班里的情况(happenings)
3．希望了解她的近况(recent development)
[写作范文]
Dear_Sue，
I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students_in_China. It's almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood
How is everything with you lately We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All_the_best，
Li_Hua____
[露一小手]
假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的外语水平。最近你收到汤姆的电子邮件(附后)，发现有一个成语使用不当。请根据下列要点，用英文回一封电子邮件。
1．不应使用“无所不为”，应使用“无所事事”；
2．说明这两个成语的用法；
3．给予鼓励。
注意：1.词数为100左右；
2．参考释义：无所不为—do all kinds of bad things；无所事事—have nothing to do；
3．除以上两个成语外，邮件中不得使用其他汉字或拼音；
4．电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入你所写词数。
附(汤姆的邮件)：
华华，你好！
近几天在忙什么事？有什么有意思的事吗？我们的学校放假了，所以这几天在家无所不为，饱食终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思。我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。
祝好！
汤姆
Hi! Tom，
Nice to read your e mail today. I notice you've begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Hope you'll find a job soon.
Huahua
[范文借鉴1]
Hi!_Tom，
Nice_to_read_your_e mail_today._I_notice_you've_begun_to_use_Chinese_idioms_and_used_most_of_them_correctly.
However, I'm afraid there is one mistake I'd like to point out. It is“无所不为”. This idiom means“do all kinds of bad things”. Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home I guess what you were really trying to say is that you've got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use“无所事事”.
We usually use“无所不为”to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and“无所事事”to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do. Have I made myself clear
Anyway, I'm amazed at the progress you've made.
Hope_you'll_find_a_job_soon.
Huahua
[范文借鉴2]
Hi!_Tom，
Nice_to_read_your_e mail_today._I_notice_you've_begun_to_use_Chinese_idioms_and_used_most_of_them_correctly.
It is obvious that you've made rapid progress in Chinese, about which I feel very happy. However, there is one mistake in your e mail, and I hope you wouldn't mind it if I pointed it out for you. You said in your e mail that you are“无所不为”，but I can see that you actually
meant you had nothing to do, and in Chinese you should use“无所事事”， while“无所不为”means“do all kinds of bad things”. So you don't mean that you are now doing something bad, do you After all, Chinese idioms are sometimes very confusing, aren't they
Nevertheless, I'm glad to see that you have really made rapid progress in Chinese.
Hope_you'll_find_a_job_soon.
Huahua(共13张PPT)
写作突破四 演讲稿
[分析指导]
写发言稿时要注意：
1．观点要鲜明。对问题持有什么看法，要明确表态，不要含糊其辞。要中心明确，重点突出，不必面面俱到。
2．条理要清楚。一篇发言稿要谈几方面的问题，每一方面有哪些条目，都要安排得有条有理，让人听起来容易抓住重点。
3．语言要简洁明快。发言时直接面向听众，尽量不要使用复杂罗嗦的句子，更不要使用深奥难懂的句子，话要说得准确、易懂，最好运用大众语言。
[典题示例]
(2010·四川)
假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。
1．过去对成年的向往；
2．现在的感受和认识；
3．将来的目标及措施。
参考词汇：责任 responsibility
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown up”．
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
[写作点拨]
这是一篇演讲稿体裁的半开放式作文。命题者从“过去→现在→将来”三个时间阶段出发，给考生一个自由发挥的空间，并考查学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作时要避免逐词逐句翻译，除了语言基本功外还要注意好句子的运用，出一些闪光点。
[写作要点]
1．梦想着做某事：dream of doing
2．表达目标：aim to/my purpose is to...
3．有……的责任：have responsibility for...
[写作范文]
Good_morning,_everyone!
The_topic_of_my_speech_today_is_“Thoughts_on_becoming_a_grown up”．
As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I'm a grown up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to
make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.
Thank_you_for_your_listening.
[露一小手]
假如你是高三学生李华，在毕业前的一堂英语课上，英语老师要求你们每人做一个简短的演讲，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。
1．最难忘的一次经历；
2．所取得的优异成绩；
3．你对未来的展望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出；不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I'm glad to make a speech here.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
参考范文1：
Hello,_everyone!
I'm_glad_to_make_a_speech_here. When I look back on the past three years, what has impressed me most is the sports meet, in which we ranked first in the 800 meter relay race. It was through our mutual efforts that we won at last, which always reminds me of the importance of teamwork.
Besides, I feel grateful to my teachers, parents and friends, without whose help and support I wouldn't have achieved so much. Not only have I accumulated lots of knowledge, I've also got plenty of experience by participating in various social activities. I'm deeply convinced that I'll benefit a great deal from my high school life.
In the years to come, I will go all out to do everything well for a brighter future.
Thank_you_for_listening!
参考范文2：
Hello,_everyone!
I'm_glad_to_make_a_speech_here. How time flies! Three years have gone by before we know it. At this very moment, memory has come flooding back to me. I can clearly remember the unforgettable mornings when the teacher would come to school so early to help me with my English. But for her timely help, I wouldn't have won the first prize in the National English Speech Contest. I owe my rapid progress in every aspect to my kind teachers.
It won't be long before we graduate from senior high school. In my future years, I will devote myself to studying English literature which interests me so much. Here I heartedly wish everyone here great success in the coming College Entrance Examination!
Thank_you_for_listening!(共25张PPT)
写作突破五 记叙文
[分析指导]
一篇好的叙事文，必定有一个明确的中心。在叙事时，要交代清楚时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事情的起因(why)、经过(how)和结果(what)；要善于从事件的表面揭示其蕴含的科学性、哲理性或事件的社会意义。我们所写的记叙文不是为记而记，而是有感而发，有悟所写。所感所悟就是叙事的中心，写作时要注意把它贯穿于全文之中。
写记人的文章时，一要注重人物的肖像描写，重点描述人物的精神气质、内心世界和性格特征等；二要注重人物的语言描写，利用人物的独白或对话表现人物的心理状态；三要注重人物的行为描写，抓住具有代表性的动作，使人物形象鲜明；四要写典型具体的事例，反映人物的精神面貌。
[典题示例1]
(2010·浙江)
最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇100～120个词的短文。
你的文章应包括下列要点：
1．李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；
2．你的评论。
注意：1.文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。
2．参考词汇：singing contest歌咏比赛 costume 服装
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week”for what she did for our class.______________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
__________________________
[写作点拨]
本篇为人物及事迹介绍，属记叙文。事迹介绍要点要明确；对他人影响及评论属拓展内容。要求考生把握事迹介绍及评论技巧，注意表达技能。
[写作要点]
1．李越的事迹及其对同学的影响(look for costumes)
2．你的评论(warm hearted, care a lot about others, deserve the honor)
[参考范文]
Star Student of the Week
Li_Yue_has_been_awarded_the_title_of“Star_Student_of_the_Week”for_what_she_did_for_our_class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.
While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we would learn from her.
[典题示例2]
(2009·浙江)
5月1日。高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100～120个词的新闻报道。
1．时间、地点、人物、活动；
2．老人们的反应；
3．简短评论。
注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
[写作点拨]
要求以“学生记者”的身份写一则新闻报道，叙述学生志愿者去阳光敬老院的一次活动。试题有一定的开放性，要求考生说明“时间、地点、人物、活动”，叙述“老人们的反应”，并作“简短评论”，对考生的语言运用能力和信息的组织能力有较高的要求。命题综合采用了三种文体，即叙事(时间，地点，人物，活动)，描写(老人们的反应)，评论(校报记者的简短评述)，不同文体应该用不同的衔接方式以使行文流畅，如以时间主线表达叙事部分：upon their arrival, then, everything done。
[要作要点]
1．时间：May 1st
2．地点：Sunshine Nursing Home
3．任务：volunteer
4．活动：send fruits, clean/tidy, chat with the elderly
[参考范文]
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
[佳作欣赏]
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
Respecting the elders is the Chinese traditional virtues. On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home. They presented the loving heart to the elderly.
As soon as Li Yue and Zhang Hua arrived, they helped the old people clean the windows and walls, sweep the floor, deliver the fruit to the elderly who can't walk freely. Then they began to talk with the old men, caring for their health. Many elderly men were moved to tears and thanked them. However, Li Yue and Zhang Hua said it was their duty.
Their deeds encourage us, and we should learn from them. We must work together to build the kind of communities.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
[露一小手]
1．请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。
标题为：My Teacher Mr Moore
There's a teacher Mr Moore.
Who is lovely and thirty four.
Always encouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of “why”．
We all admire him more and more.
注意：
1．不得照抄短诗原文。
2．必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。
3．必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯。
4．短文不能写成诗歌形式。
5．词数：120左右。
________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
My Teacher Mr Moore
Of all my teachers, Mr Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers, Mr Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know“what”， but also understand“why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.
2．假设你是北京市某中学高一年级的学生李华，擅长舞蹈。你报名参加了2009年国庆60周年晚上的联欢。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写信给你的笔友David，讲述参加活动的全过程以及你的感受。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
注意：词数不少于60。
参考词汇：联欢get together
Dear David，
I am writing to share the great happiness of taking part in the performance in celebration of the 60th national anniversary.
________________________________________________________________________
I will enclose some pictures taken that evening.
Wish you all the best!
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear_David，
I_am_writing_to_share_the_great_happiness_of_taking_part_in_the_performance_in_celebration_of_the_60th_national_anniversary.
Dancing is my hobby and therefore, when I heard there would be a get together to celebrate the 60th National Day on the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I became a member of the dance group.
During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the hot weather. After the new school term began, I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands of people gathered in the splendid Tian' anmen Square. With the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyfully. The beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excitement. It was really an unforgettable experience.
I_will_enclose_some_pictures_taken_that_evening.
Wish_you_all_the_best!
Yours，
Li_Hua(共11张PPT)
写作突破六 议论文
[分析指导]
议论文是通过对某种现象或观点的评述，要求作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非确定其观点的正确或错误。近两年，高考英语作文要求考生具备一定的英语论述问题的能力，要求考生能针对某一现象或观点发表自己的见解。将叙述、描写、说明等手法结合到议论中。将记叙和描写运用于论据中，为论点提供依据；用说明为理论的展开创造条件，或为议论作补充。
[专题回顾]
2009年11月4日，上海市政府宣布迪士尼项目已经获得国家批准。这是中国的第二家迪士尼乐园。人们对此的反应各不相同。
有人认为：
1．香港已经建有一个乐园，没有必要重复建设；
2．在目前经济危机的背景下，这很难吸引足够的游客；
3．会对当地的环境造成影响。
也有人认为：
1．给人们，尤其是孩子们提供了游玩的新选择；
2．创造很多工作岗位；
3．有助于交通和旅游业的发展。
请根据以上信息，给某校报写一份英文稿件谈谈你自己的想法，词数120左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
On 4th Nov., 2009, the Shanghai municipal government announced that China's central government has officially approved the Shanghai Disneyland Project.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路点拨]
这是一篇观点式议论文，写作时可以套用以下模板：
第一段根据提示陈述一下所谈论的话题；第二段分别提出双方的观点，并进行论述(可以采用下列句型：观点陈述1：Some people think that..., The reason is that..., Besides，...(Some are against the view that...)；观点陈述2：(However/On the other hand)others have just the opposite opinion. They think that..., What's more，...(Some are in favor of the view that...)；第三段陈述个人的看法(可以采用下列句型：As far as I am concerned，.../In my opinion, ...)
[范文借鉴]
On_4th_Nov.,_2009,_the_Shanghai_municipal_government_announced_that_China's_central_government_has_officially_approved_the_Shanghai_Disneyland_Project.
People have different opinions of the project. Some think it is not necessary to build another Disneyland in China since there is already one in Hong Kong. Also it is hard to attract large numbers of tourists, given the current financial crisis.
It may affect the local environment as well. But there is another voice. Other people, especially children, think it will be a good choice for them to spend their holidays in the park. Many jobs will be created, which is good for local economy. The opening of the park will definitely promote the development of transportation and tourism.
Personally, I would like to see the park as soon as possible. I am sure people will have great fun there.
[露一小手]
高考状元与广告
每年高考过后，总有一些人在高考状元身上下工夫，让状元们说是使用过他们的产品后才取得了优异成绩。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法。内容应包括以下要点：
1．分析出现这种现象的原因；
2．给那些状元们提出建议。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：状元——Number One Scholar
[思路导航]
本文为一篇命题作文，通过审题可知应写一篇议论文。为了使文章层次清晰，脉胳分明，全文可分为三段。第一段介绍让状元们为产品做广告这种现象；第三段分析状元们学习好的真正原因；第三段为那些状元们提出建议或希望。
[范文赏读]
After the College Entrance Exam is over, some companies that sell learning products are always trying to do what they can to make full use of Number One Scholars in order to promote their products. It is clear that their purposes are to make more profits.
In fact, it's not easy for students to become Number One Scholars. Most of them succeed not because of the products, but because of their proper ways of learning and hard work. Every student has his own way of studying, so the Number One Scholars' experience may not be suitable for other students. Most important of all, not all of these products are beneficial to students' studies.
I do hope that Number One Scholars will not be easily taken in so as to mislead other students.(共28张PPT)
写作突破七 图表类作文
[分析指导]
图表作文可分为图画式、表格式两类。
看图作文是一种考查学生观察理解能力及运用语言能力的题型。它不仅考查考生对图形的观察力和想象力，而且也考查考生的分析、概括和组织材料的能力。想象空间大，因此难度也大。这类题型的主要特点是：形象、直观，内容具体，且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明，题材以贴近现实生活为主。看图写短文常分为以下五个步骤：
1．一看。即看清楚所给画面表明的含义，看清注意事项，看清内容要点。
2．二定。确定人称和时态。
3．三译。把所掌握的要点逐一翻译。尽可能扬长避短，避难就易。
4．四串。加入适当细节对所翻译的句子加以串通。发挥想象，连句成文。
5．五改。即认真修改，检查。
图表式书面表达常以曲线图、流程图、柱状图、饼式图、数据表格及平面图解等形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息少、要点分散等特征。我们在写作时只有在看懂图示的基础上才能动笔写。
对于这类题型的书面表达，考生首先要根据图表前的文字说明，弄清楚图表的性质；还要仔细阅读图表，了解图表的内容；要研究图表所显示出来的规律，对图表里面的内容进行抽象概括，在掌握全部信息的基础上，着手分析这些信息或数据。通过分析与对比，抓住问题，便可以开拓思路，构思文章的布局、段落的划分及上下文的连贯等。段落的划分可根据内容而定。一般第一段应对图表做简要的概述，点出所要涉及的问题；中间段落应对图表的重要问题进行分析；结尾段对全文做小结。
[典题示例1]
下面描绘的是醉酒驾车的违章行为，请你根据这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。要求描述图画的内容，分析问题产生的原因和解决的办法，并发表一下你的看法。
注意：1.可适当发挥想象，避免简单描述；
2．词数120左右(开头已经写好，不计入总词数)。
This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路点拨]
对于图画式议论文，写作时，第一段描述图画所反映的问题，第二段分析该现象产生的原因，第三段发表一下自己的看法。可以套用以下模板：
As is shown in the picture/This is a picture which describes________.
It is well known that________(On the one hand，______. On the other hand，________). In addition(besides), we should________.
As far as I am concerned, I hold________./Only in this way can we________.
[范文借鉴]
This_is_a_picture_which_describes_vividly_a_kind_of_common_phenomenon_among_some_drivers_in_our_country. In the picture, a drunk driver is caught speeding. He has drunk so much that he can't walk normally.
It is well known that drunk driving has been the leading cause of road accidents, but some people still drive after drinking. What are the reasons for the phenomenon The lack of safety awareness is the direct reason why there exists so much drunk driving. Besides, some people believe that drinking a little does no harm to their driving. If traffic accidents happen, it will be too late for them to regret what they have done.
In my opinion, people should build up their consciousness of safety and pay enough attention to their daily driving. Only in this way will the road accidents decrease in the future.
[典题示例2]
(2010·江苏)
假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
自己英语学习的情况 1.英语学习的目的；
2.英语学习的方法；
3.课外自学的途径；
……
对学校英语教学的建议 (请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。)
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates，it's a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.___________________________ _________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
[写作点拨]
如何搞好英语学习是考生最为熟悉的话题之一，对英语学习的目的、方法等考生会各不相同，故该作文开放性强，考生应该可以有感而发，真正体现英语学习能力和实际语言水平。
[写作要点]
1．个人英语学习的情况(something about your English study)
①目的(aim) ②方法(how to learn)
③课外自学途径(what to do after class)
2．对学校英语教学的建议(suggestions on English teaching)
[参考范文]
Dear_teachers_and_schoolmates，it's_a_great_pleasure_for_me_to_be_here_today_and_share_my_experience_of_learning_English_with_you. I'm interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it's very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV or on the radio. Besides, I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
Thank_you_for_listening.
[露一小手]
(1)
(2010·福建)
假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意：1.根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；
2．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；
4．词数：120左右。
参考词汇：短缺shortage; 资源 resource
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning. I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it______________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
[范文借鉴]
Ladies_and_gentlemen，
Good_morning._I'm_Li_Hua_from_Fujian,_China._It's_my_great_honor_to_be_here_to_say_something_about_the_global_water_shortage_and_ways_of_dealing_with_it.
As_we_know,_the_global_water_shortage_is_becoming_increasingly_severe_mainly_due_to_global_warming,_environmental_pollution_and_the_ever increasing_population._Therefore,_it's_high_time_we_did_something_about_it.
Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it's everyone's responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.
In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.
That's_all._Thank_you.
(2)
你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消。请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。
反对取消的理由 赞成取消的理由
1.听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不应该忽视
2.听是获取信息的重要途径之一
3.国际合作日益增多，听、说能力应加强 1.考试中各地收听效果好坏不一，不公平
2.英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大
3.并非人人都要与外国人进行口头交流
注意：1.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．词数：120左右。
参考词汇：取消—cancel 国际合作—international cooperation
The students in our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the College Entrance Examination should be kept or canceled.
Some students think that listening test should not be canceled______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[范文借鉴]
The_students_in_our_school_had_a_discussion_about_whether_listening_test_in_the_College_Entrance_Examination_should_be_kept_or_canceled.
Some_students_think_that_listening_test_should_not_be_canceled. They hold that listening is among the four basic skills students should acquire. Therefore it should not be ignored. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for people to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.
But others have opposite opinions. They don't think everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between schools in the countryside and in the city.
(3)
请结合图画的内容，就这位母亲的做法发表自己的看法。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：公物—public property
_____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[范文借鉴]
From the picture, we can see the boy looking frightened because he has hurt one of his classmates and damaged public property. It is clear that he has to be responsible for what he did. But his mother, who looks as if she doesn't care at all, is trying to comfort the boy by saying “Don't worry, my son. Here is the money for them.”
I think what the mother is doing is not wise. Children need to be told what is right and what is wrong while growing up. The mother's behavior suggests that the boy's wrong actions can be solved with money. In this way, the boy cannot draw a lesson from his mistakes.(共10张PPT)
写作突破八 开放式作文
[分析指导]
开放式作文不同于传统的书面表达。传统的书面表达是一种控制性写作，即通过要点提示、图画、表格等命题形式来限定书面表达的内容、人称、时态、词数、文体等，自由发挥的空间不大，在一定程度上限制了考生的思维。而开放式作文只给出主题、两三点提示或一段素材，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由发挥，自由创作。开放式作文对考生的能力要求更高，考查也更全面。它不仅考查考生的书面语言表达能力、语言组织能力，而且考查考生的逻辑思维能力、发散思维能力、丰富的想象力以及创新思维能力。
[典题示例]
(2010·安徽)
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web？”为题，写一篇英语短文。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
[写作点拨]
本篇属于开放式作文。要求学生根据个人情况随意放弃其中一个，并陈述自己认为合理的原则。试题贴近学生生活实际，给学生提供了充分的拓展空间。
[写作要点]
1．信息时代的三种媒体(the three media in an information age)
2．放弃其中一个(giving up one of them)
3．理由(reasons)
[参考范文]
Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web
We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cell and Web are widely used. it seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them. I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.
As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.
[露一小手]
调查显示，近几年我国中学生的健康状况不容乐观，近视眼、肥胖和体质弱等情况比较普遍。请写一篇120词左右的文章，分析造成此状况的原因及其危害，并提出改进措施。
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Research shows that middle school students' health condition is declining obviously in recent years. Most students are short sighted, some are overweight or weak and many can't reach the physical health standard. These problems are very common.
What causes such problems First, many students spend too much time before computers or TV sets. Second, students have to prepare themselves for examinations in the severely competitive society. As a consequence, they spend most of their time on their subjects. Third, many of them don't form the habit of taking physical exercise regularly.
It's necessary to find ways to improve students' health condition. One available way is to do physical exercises at least an hour every day. In addition, a healthy diet is also contributive to it. Finally, the schools should take measures to reduce the heavy schoolwork burdens of the students.
