写作微技能：如何增加有说服力的细节课件20张
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写作专题：如何在请求信中增加有说服力的细节
Review: structure of letters of request
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to talk about some environmental problems in my area.
The first problem is ______. It occurs ________. It is caused by ________. It pollutes the area and makes
everything smell unpleasant.
The second problem is ______. It occurs ______. … It makes it difficult for us to ________.
The third problem is _______. It occurs ______. It is caused by ________. … They make the area untidy.
I would be grateful if you would let me know what you can do about these problems. I hope that you will take
Action quickly before the environment is too badly damaged. Thank you.
Yours faithfully
xxx
Review: purpose of letters of request
Who is the reader of this letter
What is the purpose of this letter
‘The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals– in the form of gases – and it is keeping in too much heat!’
Many of out habits cause pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbish…For example, people throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year.
9BU1 The green consumer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details.
‘The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals– in the form of gases – and it is keeping in too much heat!’
Many of out habits cause pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbish…For example, people throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year.
9BU1 The green consumer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
Convincing details
too much heat 太多热量
massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾
The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths and illnesses.
A thick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east Asia…One doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day.
9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fire
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths and illnesses.
A thick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east Asia…One doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day.
9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fire
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
Convincing details
hundreds of deaths and illnesses 数以百计的死伤
most of the countries 大部分国家
Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）
Convincing details
too much heat 太多热量
massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾
hundreds of deaths and illnesses 数以百计的死伤
most of the countries 大部分国家
Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）
Write down the grammatical rules for these quantifiers.
too much heat
massive mountains of rubbish
hundreds of deaths and illnesses
most of the countries
too much + [U]; 太多的……
(massive) mountains of + [U]/[C]; 成堆的……
hundreds of + [U]/[C]; 数以百计的……
most of + [U]/[C]; 大部分的……
Practice 1: translate sentences
在我家边上的公园里，有着堆积如山的垃圾。
数以百计的生物死亡。
空气中有太多的有害气体。
这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。
Practice 1: translate sentences
河流旁的垃圾堆积如山。
There are mountains of rubbish in the park near my home.
数以百计的生物死亡。
Hundreds of living creatures die.
空气中有太多的有害气体。
There are too many harmful gases in the air.
这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。
Most of people here need to wear masks.
Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the ground. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.
He kept us awake every night with his terrible 'music'! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.
9BU1 Listening script
Read model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details.
Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the ground. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.
He kept us awake every night with his terrible 'music'! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.
9BU1 Listening script
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
The first problem is air pollution. … A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes the area and makes everything smell unpleasant.
The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy.
9BU1 Teacher’s book Writing possible answer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
The first problem is air pollution. … A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes the area and makes everything smell unpleasant.
The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy.
9BU1 Teacher’s book Writing possible answer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
Tip 2: Use adjectives
messy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的
terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的
unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的
untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的
awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的
Practice 2: fill in the blanks
messy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的
terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的
unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的
untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的
awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的
There’s an ____________________ smell in here.
Due to the massive mountain of rubbish, our school is in a _________ mess.
The house was always ___________.
The harmful gases in the air make it _____________ to breathe.
terrible/awful/unpleasant
terrible/awful
messy/untidy
unpleasant
Summary
How to give convincing details in letters of request
如何在请求信中加入有说服力的细节？
Tip 1: use quantifiers 使用量词
Tip 2: use adjectives 使用形容词
Homework
Write at least 60 words about the topic “A letter to my headmaster/headmistress” according to the given situation.
以“给校长的一封信”为题，根据提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
提示：学校最近的环境卫生状况不容乐观。作为学校的一员，你对许多不文明现象都有着自己的看法。请你以Susan的名义给你的校长写一封信，向他／她反映目前存在的问题，并提出自己的建议，希望他／她能采取措施改善校园环境卫生。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Homework
Checklist
Do I use the correct format（格式）
Do I use quantifiers to make the letter more convincing（有说服力的）
Do I use adjectives correctly to make the letter more convincing
写作专题：如何在请求信中增加有说服力的细节
Review: structure of letters of request
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to talk about some environmental problems in my area.
The first problem is ______. It occurs ________. It is caused by ________. It pollutes the area and makes
everything smell unpleasant.
The second problem is ______. It occurs ______. … It makes it difficult for us to ________.
The third problem is _______. It occurs ______. It is caused by ________. … They make the area untidy.
I would be grateful if you would let me know what you can do about these problems. I hope that you will take
Action quickly before the environment is too badly damaged. Thank you.
Yours faithfully
xxx
Review: purpose of letters of request
Who is the reader of this letter
What is the purpose of this letter
‘The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals– in the form of gases – and it is keeping in too much heat!’
Many of out habits cause pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbish…For example, people throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year.
9BU1 The green consumer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details.
‘The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals– in the form of gases – and it is keeping in too much heat!’
Many of out habits cause pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbish…For example, people throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year.
9BU1 The green consumer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
Convincing details
too much heat 太多热量
massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾
The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths and illnesses.
A thick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east Asia…One doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day.
9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fire
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths and illnesses.
A thick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east Asia…One doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day.
9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fire
Read model sentences. Underline convincing details.
Convincing details
hundreds of deaths and illnesses 数以百计的死伤
most of the countries 大部分国家
Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）
Convincing details
too much heat 太多热量
massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾
hundreds of deaths and illnesses 数以百计的死伤
most of the countries 大部分国家
Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）
Write down the grammatical rules for these quantifiers.
too much heat
massive mountains of rubbish
hundreds of deaths and illnesses
most of the countries
too much + [U]; 太多的……
(massive) mountains of + [U]/[C]; 成堆的……
hundreds of + [U]/[C]; 数以百计的……
most of + [U]/[C]; 大部分的……
Practice 1: translate sentences
在我家边上的公园里，有着堆积如山的垃圾。
数以百计的生物死亡。
空气中有太多的有害气体。
这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。
Practice 1: translate sentences
河流旁的垃圾堆积如山。
There are mountains of rubbish in the park near my home.
数以百计的生物死亡。
Hundreds of living creatures die.
空气中有太多的有害气体。
There are too many harmful gases in the air.
这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。
Most of people here need to wear masks.
Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the ground. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.
He kept us awake every night with his terrible 'music'! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.
9BU1 Listening script
Read model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details.
Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the ground. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.
He kept us awake every night with his terrible 'music'! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.
9BU1 Listening script
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
The first problem is air pollution. … A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes the area and makes everything smell unpleasant.
The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy.
9BU1 Teacher’s book Writing possible answer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
The first problem is air pollution. … A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes the area and makes everything smell unpleasant.
The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy.
9BU1 Teacher’s book Writing possible answer
Read model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives.
Tip 2: Use adjectives
messy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的
terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的
unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的
untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的
awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的
Practice 2: fill in the blanks
messy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的
terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的
unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的
untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的
awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的
There’s an ____________________ smell in here.
Due to the massive mountain of rubbish, our school is in a _________ mess.
The house was always ___________.
The harmful gases in the air make it _____________ to breathe.
terrible/awful/unpleasant
terrible/awful
messy/untidy
unpleasant
Summary
How to give convincing details in letters of request
如何在请求信中加入有说服力的细节？
Tip 1: use quantifiers 使用量词
Tip 2: use adjectives 使用形容词
Homework
Write at least 60 words about the topic “A letter to my headmaster/headmistress” according to the given situation.
以“给校长的一封信”为题，根据提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
提示：学校最近的环境卫生状况不容乐观。作为学校的一员，你对许多不文明现象都有着自己的看法。请你以Susan的名义给你的校长写一封信，向他／她反映目前存在的问题，并提出自己的建议，希望他／她能采取措施改善校园环境卫生。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Homework
Checklist
Do I use the correct format（格式）
Do I use quantifiers to make the letter more convincing（有说服力的）
Do I use adjectives correctly to make the letter more convincing
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