(共19张PPT)
Reading for Writing
about your festival experience
lead-in
guess the festival according to the picture
The Naadam Festival
那达慕大会
More pictures about the Mongolian festival
fancy Mongollian robes
amazing performances
More pictures about the Mongolian festival
wrestling
horse racing
archery
content
Reading a sample
read a sample about one festival and learn the organization and language features
Writing your own festival experience
focus on one festival, make a outline, write a drat and polish your writing
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2
Task 1: read the sample and answer the following questions.
What does “Naadam” mean
What events does it include
What Naadam festival customes did you learn about
reading
Task 2: After reading, discuss with your
partner about the most impressive thing
about the festival
reading
pre-writing
What is the organization and language features of this sample
organization
1
opening paragraph
陈述话题:何时何地何事何意何感
3
closing paragraph
总结经历体验(累,值得,等不及)
2
body paragraphs
描述节日经历:具体细节(所见,摔跤比赛,赛马)
language features
A
第一人称
人称
B
一般过去时
时态
C
时间:on the first day,after the opening ceremony,finally
写作顺序
D
代词指代前文出现的内容(it, which非限制性定语从句,some,others);作比较,比喻等修辞手法;逻辑关联词如and,too,but,however等
行文技巧
sentence pattern
1.This was my first time experiencing....and it was enjoyable and exciting for me.
2.The festival falls on...of the lunar year,usually lasting for...
3.Someone told me that...
sentence pattern
4.as if...好像
后接方式状语从句,从句虚拟语气
5.is different from...与...不同
6.I was+(情感)形容词+to do sth
7.can’t wait to do sth 迫不及待做某事
while-writing
Task 1: finish the table as the outline
writing a draft according to your outline
exchange and check the draft for each other
注意人称,时态,语法,句式的运用,结构,行文技巧等评价
polishing 润色
sharing your writing in the class