(共21张PPT)
习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代,呼唤英雄”。其实,英雄就在我们身边。这些英雄可能是我们的亲人,同学,朋友,老师......请介绍一下你心中的“小人物,大英雄”。
提示:1. 你心中的英雄是谁?
2. 记述你印象深刻的一件事;
3. 对你的影响。
要求: 1. 语意连贯,层次清晰,书写清楚,80-120词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名
step1.审
要点:?个
时态:___________________
体裁:___________________
人称:___________________
记叙文
第一人称、第三人称
一般现在时、一般过去时
3
引出心目中的英雄
描述你印象深刻的一件事
对你的影响
Beginning :
Body:
Ending :
搭
框
架
P1:引出心目中的英雄
P3:对你的影响
略
详
略
P2:描述你印象深刻的一件事
Beginning :
1. Everyone has a hero, and the hero in my heart is …
2. My hero is around me, who ... She is my mother, the hero in my heart.
P1:引出心目中的英雄
Body:
主题句:
I’ll never forget the day.
具体事件:
1. when: when I was in primary school
2. where: in the neighborhood
3. who: my mother and me
4. what:
P2:描述你印象深刻的一件事
① broke the car window of our neighbor
② took me to say sorry instead of running away
Ending :
how to be an honest person
be responsible for my actions
P3:对你的影响
点题:
She is the real hero in my heart although she is an ordinary mother.
When people say the word "hero", who will you think of My hero is around me, who gives me more love than others and teaches me the true meaning of life. She is my mother, the hero in my heart.
I'll never forget the day. When I was in primary school, I broke the car window of my neighbor. I didn’t think my mom would tell the neighbor what happened because nobody saw what I did but her. Besides, we would pay a lot for my stupid mistake. To my surprise, she took me to the neighbor and forced me to say sorry to the neighbor.
As I grow older and wiser, I realize what a great person my mom is. I have learned how to be an honest person and I must be responsible for my own actions. She is the real hero in my heart although she is an ordinary mother.
课后延时服务
假如你叫Xie Fang, 你的一位加拿大笔友Jane,听说重庆从2020年9月开始实施课后延时服务活动,她想了解你校的课后延时服务情况以及对此的看法。
要求:
1. 80-120词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 简介课后服务活动的开展情况
2. 同学们对此活动的看法
3. ......
Dear Jane,
I’m glad to write to you about still staying at school to study after school in Chongqing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Xie Fang
一审:
1.体裁:
议论文
2.人称:
一般现在时
3.时态:
第三人称为主
4.要点:
1)简介课后服务延时活动
2)同学们对此的看法
3)自己的观点
框架:
Para 1:
引出话题,简介课后延时服务活动 (略)
Para 2:
反对的理由(详)
Para 3:
赞成的理由(详)
Para 4:
自己的观点(略)
have more time to study
can ask teacher for help
parents can pay more attention to their work
go back home later
don’t have enouh time to do what they like
Dear Jane,
I’m glad to write to you about still staying at school to study after school in Chongqing. It starts at 4:50 p.m. and ends at 6:10 p.m.. The main subjects include Chinese, math, English and physics and so on. However, there are some different opinions on it.
Some students think this activity makes a big difference to them. On the one hand, they have more time to study and discuss with each other aboout the questions they don’t understand in class. Most importantly, they can also ask their teacher for help.
On the other hand, there is no need for parents to worry about their homework so that they can pay more attention to their work.
Other students argue that they have to go back home later. What’s worse, they don’t have enough time to do what they like.
From the bottom of my heart, it is really helpful to me. Not only can it make me learn more knowledge, but it can also help me review what I have learned today. I strongly believe that with the help of this activity, my grades will be better and better.
关注中学生心理健康
健康的生活对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。而如今我们不仅仅只关注身体上的健康,更应该多关注心理健康。越来越多的中学生的心理或多或少都出现了问题,请你就如何改善中学生心理健康问题谈谈你的看法。
要求:1. 要点充分,内容详实。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
3. 80—120词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考要点:1. 导致中学生心理健康的原因:学业压力大、家庭原因等;
2. 如何改善:学校提供心理健康援助,家长多关心等;
参考词汇:心理健康:mental health 情绪低落 in a bad mood 心理的psychological
Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to young people’s mental health. _____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一审:
1.体裁:
应用文
2.人称:
一般现在时
3.时态:
第三人称为主
4.要点:
1)导致中学生心理健康问题的原因
2)如何改善
3)呼吁全社会关注
框架:
Para 1:
引出话题,谈谈中学生心理健康出现问题的普遍现象 (略)
Para 2:
如何改善(详)
Para 3:
导致心理健康问题的原因(详)
Para 4:
呼吁全社会关注(略)
under too much pressure
bad communication with parents
can't get along well with classmates
find the cause and try to make a change
learn to relax and take exercise
talk to your partner, a relative or a friend
Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to young people’s mental health. Though mental health is considered as an important role, many students suffer from mental illness, which seriously influence their study and daily life.
The causes can vary a lot. Broadly speaking, it's hard to always stay positive under so much pressure from study and parents for most middle school students. Another burden is put by their classmates because of different personality and poor communication.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Undoubtedly, schools should take great account in the responsibilities of students' mental health. Relevent courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the importance of mental health and find proper ways to improve it.
More importantly, no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves. In my opinion, what they can do is finding the real cause of their mental health problems and see whether they can do something to make a change. Meanwhile, learn to relax and take exercise to release the pressure. After all, health is what counts most. Lastly, they may find it helpful to talk to their partner, a relative or a friend about the problems,or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant(心理咨询师).
Only in this way can they reduce their mental illness, and become a strong and confident person. I believe if we all concerned about this issue, the future of our country will be thriving(欣欣向荣).