(共12张PPT)
自然与环境
自然与环境保护
写作步骤拆分
结构
P1: 现状+原因
(必要性)
P2: 措施/建议
P3: 总结 (呼吁)
补充目的
Waste and pollution become more and more serious, which has a bad effect on our earth. As a middle school student, it’s time for us to protect the earth.
要点
注意需要补充的内容
建议/措施
→ 根据原因提出
污染
浪费
节流
开源
(开源)
(开源)
(节流)
自然与环境类 — 建议
补充目的
①
②
③
④
措施+目的
②
④
①
④
②
④
③
④
We should often go outside on foot or by bike instead of driving a car so that we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution.
We had better use cloth shopping bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Otherwise, using plastic bags may cause too much rubbish and pollute the land.
Turn off the light when we leave. As a result, we can save much energy.
It is a good way to plant more trees, which can make our earth greener and more beautiful.
补充目的
自然与环境类 — 建议
节流
开源
plant trees, use solar power, sort garbage,
turn off the tap, use both sides of paper...
SAMPLE
提 分 宝 典
话题词汇
自然与环境类写作 – 提分宝典
pollution
现状/原因:
waste
destroy/damage/ruin
be short of
be aware of
take action
realize the importance of
increase & decrease/reduce
建议:
呼吁:
Let’s start out small to do...
put...into practice
die out
hunt
endangered/wild animals
in danger
cloth/plastic bag
sort garbage
solar power
make law
recycle
natural reserve
提建议の套路
自然与环境类写作 – 提分宝典
措施+目的
措施+连词/过渡+目的
① We should/had better do…… so that ……
② 祈使句. + As a result/ Therefore, ……
④ It’s a good way to do……, which can ……
③ It will be a good choice to do …… if ……
Let’s build a green home together! As we all know the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Waste and pollution become more and more serious, which has a bad effect on our earth. As a middle school student, it’s time for us to protect our earth.
To help build a green home, we must take some actions. Firstly, we should often go outside on foot or by bike instead of driving a car so that we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution. Secondly, we had better use cloth shopping bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Otherwise, using plastic bags may cause too much rubbish and pollute the land. Thirdly, turn off the light when we leave. As a result, we can save much energy. Last but not least, it is a good way to plant more trees, which can make our earth greener and more beautiful.
Let’s start out small to build our green home. If we can put these points into practice, we can create a brighter future!