Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 单元话题写作指导课件(共13张PPT)

(共13张PPT)
Unit 7
Writing
--rules
本单元以"rules"为话题，针对该话题，考试中常见的命题角度有∶介绍某处的规章制度，如课堂上的规则、图书馆的规则、家规等；也可以谈论父母和孩子在规则方面所持的不同态度。文体多为说明文或议论文；人称方面较为灵活，视写作内容的不同而确定；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，尤其要注意含有情态动词的被动语态的正确用法。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
As we all know, family rules play an important role in our daily life.众所周知，家规在我们的日常生活中起重要的作用。
If I break one off them, I will be punished.如果我违规，我会被惩罚。
Teenagers are too young to make their own decisions.青少年太小而不能自己做决定。
We must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. 我们必须遵守交通规则并且红灯时不能过马路
I think they are too strict, and they make me feel very uncomfortable.我认为它们太严格并且它们让我感到非常舒服。
I'd like to introduce my class rules to you.我想要向你介绍我的班规
In order to ensure safety, our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. 为了确保安全，我们学校制定了许多需要我们遵守的安全规则
Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.没有规矩不成方圆。
I really hope my parents can understand me and give me more freedom. 我真的希望我的父母能够理解我并且给我更多自由
It helps me to become a better man 它使我成为一个更好的人
题目：俗话说“国有国法，家有家规。”
家规对家庭成员有着重要的约束作用，使彼此的关系更加融洽、和谐。每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩，比如∶尊老爱幼，诚实守信，好学上进等。请你结合自己家庭的实际情况，以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你家有哪些家规，家规对你的影响。
要点：1.家里有哪些家规；2.对家规的感受。
第一步：仔细审题
1、格式--
2、时态--
3、人称--
4、体裁--
命题作文
一般现在时
第一人称为主
议论文
要点：1.家里有哪些家规；2.对家规的感受。
要点：1.家里有哪些家规；2.对家规的感受。
第二步：谋篇布局
第一段—
My Family Rules
As we all know, family rules play an important role in our daily life. My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic family rules that I must follow.
引出话题。
要点：1.家里有哪些家规；2.对家规的感受。
第二步：谋篇布局
第二段—
Firstly,,I must respect the old,and be an honest person. It plays a vital part in my childhood. It helps me to become a better man. Secondly, I must finish a book in a month. Ithink it is meaningful. Reading books is good for my study. Thirdly, I have to do some chores, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom. If I break one off them, I will be punished. But thanks to these rules, I can live a healthy and regular life.
介绍家规的内容和对家规的感受。
要点：1.家里有哪些家规；2.对家规的感受。
第二步：谋篇布局
第三段—
All in all,my parents make these rules to help me be better,but some of my family rules are too strict. I think they should be changed.
总结话题。
Sample Writing
My Family Rules
As we all know, family rules play an important role in our daily life. My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic family rules that I must follow.
Firstly,,I must respect the old,and be an honest person. It plays a vital part in my childhood. It helps me to become a better man. Secondly, I must finish a book in a month. Ithink it is meaningful. Reading books is good for my study. Thirdly, I have to do some chores, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom. If I break one off them, I will be punished. But thanks to these rules, I can live a healthy and regular life.
All in all,my parents make these rules to help me be better,but some of my family rules are too strict. I think they should be changed.
现场写作
题目：目前，绝大多数的学校因为管理因素要求学生每天穿校服，然而处于青春期的中学生因为爱美等心理因素，拒绝或排斥这一规定。假如你叫李华，请你向编辑写一封求助信，请他们帮你解决这个难题。
要求∶
1.阐述正方和反方的观点和立场,条理清晰,语句通顺,无语法错误。2.80词左右。
提示词∶ asks us to wear， argue with， a beautiful sight， concerntrate... on ...，feel uncomfortable，is bad for，have got no idea
Sample Writing
Dear editor，
Nowadays our school asks us to wear school uniforms every day.We don't want to, but we have to. We have argued a lot about this with our teachers, but it didn't work.
The teachers think that it's a beautiful sight in school if we wear uniforms. While I think the uniforms are ugly. And our teachers are afraid that if we didn't wear uniforms, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.I disagree.If we wear uniforms, we would feel uncomfortable and that is bad for studying.
I have thought about this for a long time but have got no idea. What's your opinion
Yours,
Li Hua
1.思路解析：该题目是写一封求助信。要求先阐述正方和反方关于学生要不要每天穿校服的观点和立场，然后再询问编辑的观点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导∶本文应该分别用第一人称和第三人称阐述正方和反方的观点；由于是阐述现在发生的事情和实际情况，所以时态采用一般现在时为主；描述观点时，理由应充分合理，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。