Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.单元话题写作指导课件(共15张PPT)

(共15张PPT)
Unit 11
Writing
--worries
本单元以情感为话题，谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。写此类文章时，可以通过描述一件具体的事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐，也可以描写生活或学习中的烦恼或焦虑。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
The loud music makes me nervous.喧闹的音乐使我紧张。
Money and fame don't always make people happy.金钱和名声不能总使人们开心。
I would rather...我宁愿…….
I'm not happy because.…我不开心，因为……
I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.我过去也有这样的烦恼，所以我能理解你现在的感受。
You should learn to relax and not to be too hard on yourself.你应该学会放松，不要给自己这么多压力。
The movie was so sad that it made Tina and Amy cry电影如此伤感以至于蒂娜和埃米都哭了。
To start with,it was cloudy and grey,and cloudy days make me sad.开始的时候，天是多云并且灰暗的，阴天使我难过。
Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life. 有时候你自身的小的变化对你的生活产生很大的影响。
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. 在今天的世界压力是一个严肃的问题。
题目：假如你是李华，今天收到了也正在准备中考的表弟Peter发给你的电子邮件，得知他目前在学习和生活中出现的烦恼。请根据以下信息给他回一封邮件，并针对他的问题提出两点具体建议。
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议。
第一步：仔细审题
1、格式--
2、时态--
3、人称--
4、体裁--
命题作文
一般现在时
第一人称、第二人称来介绍内容
议论文
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议
第二步：谋篇布局
第一段—
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you! I'm very sorry to hear that you have some worries in study and daily life.
表达对Peter烦恼的理解
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议
第二步：谋篇布局
第二段—
From your email, I know that your parents put too much pressure on you. What's more, you often feel tired. You study very hard, but you can't improve your test scores every time.I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.
Peter的烦恼
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议
第二步：谋篇布局
第三段—
I think there is no need to worry about them.Everything will be OK. Here's some advice for you. First, you can have a good talk with your parents, tell them your thoughts and efforts,and let them understand you as much as possible.Second, it's best for you to finish your homework as quickly as possible.Make sure that you go to bed before ten at night. Remember that you shouldn't drink coffee or do anything exciting before going to bed. With a good sleep at night, you won't feel tired the next day.
针对Peter的烦恼提建议
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议
第二步：谋篇布局
第四段—
Hope my advice can help you.Best wishes!
Yours, Li hua
表达祝愿
要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。
2.Petr的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显
3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议
Sample Writing
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you! I'm very sorry to hear that you have some worries in study and daily life.
From your email, I know that your parents put too much pressure on you. What's more, you often feel tired. You study very hard, but you can't improve your test scores every time.I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.
I think there is no need to worry about them.Everything will be OK. Here's some advice for you. First, you can have a good talk with your parents, tell them your thoughts and efforts,and let them understand you as much as possible.Second, it's best for you to finish your homework as quickly as possible.Make sure that you go to bed before ten at night. Remember that you shouldn't drink coffee or do anything exciting before going to bed. With a good sleep at night, you won't feel tired the next day.
Hope my advice can help you.Best wishes!
Yours, Li hua
现场写作1
题目：教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有不好的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真、理性地思考，并做出合理应对，这正是教育要达到的目的。
请针对以上现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。内容包括∶
1.your opinion about this phenomenon （现象）
2.an experience you had/heard/saw
3. what you have learned from it
Sample Writing
As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us,which is beneficial for our lifelong development.
I still remember the day when I had an English class. Seeing Li Ming falling asleep,our teacher, Miss Hu,woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the classroom without permission. It was so impolite and rude to do so.Later,I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasn't so calm that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.
It's a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a moment whenever you're being blamed or criticized. Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life.
现场写作2
题目：许多同学进入初三生活后会有很多烦恼，烦恼会使人产生压力，为了更好的发展及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，根据以下信息以Less Pressure，Better life"为题，写一篇作文。
内容∶
1.同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么。
2.你的压力是什么。
3. 你是如何缓解压力的。
Sample Writing
Less Pressure, Better Life
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Even at school,many students feel stressed out. Some students worry about the exams; others worry about the homework.I'm always under pressure,too.My parents want me to get into a good senior high school, but I am afraid I can't do that.
As we know,too much pressure is bad for our health.So I also have my own ways to relax myself.First,when I can't stand the pressure,I will have a conversation with my parents or friends to ask them for help. Second, it's also a good idea to do sports. Doing sports makes me feel better. Third, listening to music is another way.
I hope everybody will have less pressure and a better life.