外研（新标准）版八年级下Module 3 Journey to space Unit 3 Language in use作文课件(共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
M3作文
学习目标
通过本课学习，你将能
运用现在完成时进行表达；
对just、already、yet进行区分；
用现在完成时，描述图片，介绍外星人的活动。
为了达成目标，你需要
熟读Unit 2 所学课文，及时记录课堂笔记；
练习重点语言项目，准备好写作所需的纸张。
课文回顾
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A. the scientists' progress(进程)
C. the universe
B. the scientists' questions
D. the solar system
E. the life on the earth and other planets
通过other和also实现了与第一句的衔接
运用even表达了一种递进关系
Look through the passage again and pay attention to the logical words (逻辑词).
通过however引出主题
注意：在阅读过程中，我们除了要关注词语和句子层面的信息以外，还要关注语篇，比如课文的逻辑叙述。
We have not found life on any other planets.
There are
some reasons.
There are still lots of questions.
IBC
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
The universe is too large.
No spaceship has reached other stars.
注意：在阅读过程中，我们除了要关注词语和句子层面的信息以外，还要关注语篇，比如课文的逻辑叙述。
What have the scientists just received ( a message from one of our spaceships.)
They have just received a message from one of our spaceships.
1. Where has the spaceship landed (Mars)
It has landed on Mars.
2. What has the spaceship discovered (people on Mars)
It has discovered people on Mars.
3. Why have the people on Mars not sent us a message (do not know how to)
They do not know how to send us a message.
4. Why have the people on Mars not visited us on the earth (do not know how to)
They do not know how to visit us on the earth.
Let's imagine.
Possible answer:
We have just received a message from our spaceship to Mars.
This is our 20th spaceship to Mars.Our spaceship has discovered aliens there. After
a long talk, we have known more about them..They have never sent us a message because they don’t know how to communicate with us. They have not visited the earth because they don’t know how to fly to our planet, and they prefer life on Mars. They seem very happy on their planet.
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
We have done surveys of many planets
and we are very excited to get good news from Mars. We believe we will receive messages from other planets if we keep trying.
Conclusion
二、衔接词强化训练：用方框中的衔接词和 extra words:填空，使小片段更有可读性与逻辑性。
although , first , amazing thing is that , what's more , in addition
Chang'e-4 and Yutu-2 have landed on the moon successfully. They have finished lots of work.___________, they have already sent back lots of photos which are valuable for the scientists to do much more research on the moon. They even have already taken photos of each other. Their pictures are clear.__________Yutu-2 has walked more than 447 meters on the moon. That has broken the record of walking on the moon._________they have ever"slept"on the moon and"woken up"again to work._______ they have stayed there for more than two years, they still work well._______________________ Chang'e-5 aircraft has also successfully landed on the moon. And it will return to the earth soon
first
what’s more
In addition
Although
Another amazing thing is that
实战演练：Teen Science Magazine 正举办“火星生活”畅想征稿比赛。假设你是李华，请参考以下图片及图片下方的提示词，发挥你的想象，以“People’s life on Mars”或 “My experiences on Mars”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的英文
参考词汇： long-distance control system 远程控制系统
写作过程指导（审、列、扩、连、查、抄）
运用：主题句+“1+1或1+2”内容拓展策略进行扩写，并运用适当的连词
二、主体段落主题句参考
1.On Mars, people have lots of things to do to relax themselves.火星上，人们可以做很多事来放松自己。 (此主题句围绕火星上人们的娱乐生活展开细节描述。)
2. I have got to know something about their daily life我已经了解了他们的日常生活。 (此主题句围绕火星上人们的日常生活展开细节描述。)
3. I haven' 't finished the things that I have planned to c.我没做完我计划的一些事情。 (此主题句围绕自己尚未做完的事展开细节描述。)
4. We humans can fly from the earth to Mars freely我们人类可以自由地从地球飞到火星。 (此主题句围绕火星上人们如何便利地去火星展开细节描述。)
5. People on Mars have to face some problems in their daily life.火星上的人不得不面对日常生活中的一些 (此主题句围绕火星上人们日常生活中的问题展开细节描述。)
结束语参考
1.I really have fun on Mars. I expect to visit it again.在火星上我玩得真开心。期待再次光临火星
2. The people's life on Mars are wonderful. I hope they can solve more problems and live better
火星上人们的生活非常精彩。我希望他们能解决更多的难题，生活得更好。
3. With the development of science technology, I am sure we can do better in the future
随着科技的发展，我确信我们未来可以做得更好。
模块写作目标：
能根据所给信息，发挥想象，写一篇太空之旅的经历或报道
1.能用含just，already，yet的现在完成时来强调或说明太空的经历
2.能用have been to表达去过了某地（已回来）或用have gone to表达去某地了（没回来）
3.写作微技能：主题句的强化训练、衔接词的强化训练
Hello! I'm a reporter from our school English newspaper.Now I am reporting from Mars
I have just flown from the earth to report what the life is like on Mars.People living on Mars have to wear special clothes. Look! Their clothes are different from ours on the earth. There is a clothes factory on Mars, which can provide enough clothes for them. What's more, the food they eat on Mars is also like that on the earth. But they can't make all the food on Mars. In addition, they have already had their own schools. But the schools are not big as those on the earth. Another interesting thing is that they have just built a beautiful park. People can walk in the park.
Although people's life is like that on the earth, they have some trouble. First, they haven't planted all kinds of vegetables yet. Lots of vegetables come from the earth. Second, they can't keep many animals either. Most food comes from the earth.
It is clear that people can't live more conveniently like living on the earth. I am sure everything will be better in the future. I really hope people on Mars can live happily.
Hello! I'm a reporter from our schoo English newspaper.Now Iam reporting from Mars
beginning
快速导入话题： 火星报道
I have just flown from the earth to report what the life is like on Mars.People living on Mars have to wear special clothes. Look! Their clothes are different from ours on the earth. There is a clothes factory on Mars, which can provide enough clothes for them.What'smore, the food they eat on Mars is also like that on the earth. But they can't make all the food on Mars. In addition, they have already had their own schools. But the schools are not big as those on the earth. Another interesting thing is that they have just built a beautifu lpark. People can walk in the park.
Although people's life is like that on the earth, they have some trouble. First, they haven't planted all kinds of vegetables yet. Lots of vegetables come from the earth. Second, they can't keep many animals either. Most food comes from the earth.
body
赏结构
段落2的主题句
段落3的主题句
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合理的衔接词能使文本具有更强的连贯性与逻辑性。请圈出本文中的衔接词
赏语言
巧用简单的extra words，也起到衔接的作用。他们既能起到很好的衔接作用，又能起到丰富语言的作用
It is clear that people can't live more conveniently like living on the earth. I am sure everything will be better in the future. I really hope people on Mars can live happily.
巧用简单的extra words，也起到衔接的作用。他们既能起到很好的衔接作用，又能起到丰富语言的作用
写作微技能强化训练】
主题句强化训练：请根据内容，在空白处填上符合内容的主题句
__________________________________________________. I have already finished
my English homework because it's easy. And I have just worked out one of the most difficult maths problems. What's more, I have already written a Chinese composition about my travel experience in Xinjiang. However, I haven't finished science exercises yet. I will finish it tomorrow
Today I have a lot of homework to do.
I have just flown from the earth to report what the life is like on Mars.People living on Mars have to wear special clothes. Look! Their clothes are different from ours on the earth. There is a clothes factory on Mars, which can provide enough clothes for them.What'smore, the food they eat on Mars is also like that on the earth. But they can't make all the food on Mars. In addition, they have already had their own schools. But the schools are not big as those on the earth. Another interesting thing is that they have just built a beautifu lpark. People can walk in the park.
作者运用1+1或1+2内容拓展策略，对衣服、食物、学校和公园进行了合理的内容拓展
I have just flown from the earth to report what the life is like on Mars.People living on Mars have to wear special clothes. Look! Their clothes are different from ours on the earth. There is a clothes factory on Mars, which can provide enough clothes for them.What'smore, the food they eat on Mars is also like that on the earth. But they can't make all the food on Mars. In addition, they have already had their own schools. But the schools are not big as those on the earth. Another interesting thing is that they have just built a beautiful park. People can walk in the park.
作者运用1+1或1+2内容拓展策略，对衣服、食物、学校和公园进行了合理的内容拓展
【话题写作语料库】
话题导入语料
◆报道文章导入语参考
1. My name is. I am a reporter from.我是……我是一位来自……的记者
2. I am reporting in/on.我正在…作报道。
经历导入语参考
. Travelling to Mars has become very popular..去火星旅游已深受欢迎。
2 I have already got to Mars by spaceship.我已经乘坐宇宙飞船到达了火星
3. I have already experienced a lot on Mars.在火星上，我已经历很多了。