中考英语 书面表达探索 优质课件（共有PPT22张）

(共22张PPT)
中考书面表达探索
中考英语复习
Thinking：
Step1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；
Step2 列提纲：分几段，以及每段大体内容；
Step3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；
Step4 复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；
*三审：体裁、时态、人称；
三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；
三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
How to write：
文章分3段：
（1）the beginning：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；
（2）the body——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词(and.so.but .then…)。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；
（3）the ending：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。
作文万能句式
The beginning:
It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v…
（形式主语）
The body：firstly,…secondly,…at last,…
The ending: Let’s….Above all…
１.　 be多余或缺少
I’m enjoy studying English.
It bad for our health.
I enjoy studying English.
It is bad for our health.
纠错
2.　时态错误
At that time, they always help me with my English.
I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.
At that time, they always helped me with my English.
I have enjoyed studying English since I met him.
My favorite sport is run.
I think do some sports is very important for us.
My favorite sport is running.
I think doing some sports is very important for us.
３．动词错误
４．　非谓语动词错误
I like do sports.
I wish take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.
I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.
I like doing sports.
５．副词位置错误
I very thank her.
I very like football.
I thank her very much.
I like football very much.
６．代词错误
They are good for us body.
I hope me also become a basketball player.
They are good for our body.
I hope I also become a basketball player.
７．　缺介词或介词错误
I thank him very much help me study English.
He even came to my home for help me.
I thank him very much for helping me study English.
He even came to my home to help me.
I like it because it’s exciting and good for my healthy.
I have ever gived up English.
(单词错误)
(动词错误)
I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health.
I have ever given up English.
８．其他错误
It’s good for my health. Not only make me brave, but also make me become taller.
If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.
It’s good for my health. It not only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller.
If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day.
（缺主语）
（句型错误）
整洁性
1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。
2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。
3 字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。
字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。
4 规范三写：大 小 写,拼 写,书 写
满分作文标准：
完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全，立意高。
句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。
卷面书写干净， 整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。
最好能有一两个亮点句。
（被动语态，定语从句，时间状语从句，谚语）
假如你校举行“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。内容提示：1.不带管制刀具（restricted knives)到校；2上下楼不要拥挤;3注意饮食安全；4注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况(em-ergency要报警 。要求：1短文应包括提示内容，可适当发挥;2词数：80词左右。
实战训练
Pre-writing
1.审：
2.定：
“中学生自我保护” 为题写一篇80字作文
议论文，第一人称，一般现在时
篇章结构：三段式
首段：重要性
正文：提示及发挥
尾段：呼吁
Writing（列）:
不带管制刀具
2.上下楼梯不要拥挤
3.注意饮食安全
4.注意交通安全,遇到紧急情况(em-ergency要报警
Don’t take restricted
Don’t be crowed .go upstairs and go downstairs
Eat more healthy food
Pay attention to, Call the police, have an emergency
How to protect ourselves
It’s important for us to protect ourselves .
Firstly,don’t take restricted knives to school.They might hurt others or ourselves.Secondly,there are too many students at school,and our hallways are crowded.So don’t crowd with each other when we go upstairs and go downstairs.Thirdly,we shoud eat more healthy
Writing连：连词成句，成篇
food and we’d better keep away from junk food.At last,we must pay attention to the traffic.Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency.
Let’s protect ourselves better.
　题目：
李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。
作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢
请用下面所给的提示
写一篇不少于80字的短文。
字迹工整，语言
提示词：
give up , be (become )interested in
Homework