2022年中考英语作文高分技巧与训练 课件(共23张PPT)

(共23张PPT)
书
面
表
达
How to write a better
composition
Composition is a kind of pain.
It's in the last corner of the paper,which makes me feel afraid.
...
What are your feelings about English compositions
书面表达属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属英语考试的重要题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语能否考好非常重要。
书面表达（共1题，满分15分）
假设你是初三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下内容提示给孙校长写信申请举行以下活动。
活动时间 本周日上午8 : 00—12 : 00
活动地点 太阳敬老院(Sun Old People's Home)
活动理由 老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱
活动内容 ……（请你补充两条以上）
注意：1.词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
实战演练
01
审题（确定时态）
一般将来时
一般现在时
本周日上午8 : 00—12 : 00
02
Our class is planning to do some voluntary work
from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are
suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely.They need our love.
本周日上午8 : 00—12 : 00
太阳敬老院(Sun Old People's Home)
老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱
列要点
First of all, we will raise money, clothes and
books for them. Secondly, we are going to
sing songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed. Finally, we will take photos with them.
活动内容：……（请你补充两条以上）
Dear Mr Wang,
We are writing to ask permission for our voluntary work.
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Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning. We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely. They really need our love. First of all, we will raise money, clothes and books for them. Secondly, we are going to sing some songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed. Finally, we will take photos with them.
I hope we can get your permission and support. Thank you so much.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Class 1, Grade 9
连句成篇
英语作文中常见的表达错误：
No. 1
No.6
No.5
No.4
No.3
No.2
名词单复数问题
主谓一致问题
时态和语态问题
Chinglish现象
行文的逻辑问题
语句不通顺
作文提升之道
The methods of improving your writing
01
方法一：检查主谓一致
Our class are planning to do some voluntary
work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
√
Our class is planning to do some voluntary
work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
本周日上午8 : 00—12 : 00
02
方法二：检查名词的单复数
Our class is planning to do some voluntary
works from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
√
Our class is planning to do some voluntary
work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
本周日上午8 : 00—12 : 00
03
方法三：学会扩句(合并要点）
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old.
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.They really need our love.
太阳敬老院
老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱
They are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.
高分建议
一、 怎么把句子写“高级”——添词原则
l、学会使用形容词。
Secondly, we are going to sing some songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed.
2、学会在名词后面加上定语从句。
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.
高分建议
3. 在“助系情之后，实义动词之前”加“副词”
They really need our love.
4. 多使用短语
Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely.
高分建议
二、 怎么把句子写“高级”——换词原则
1. good
excellent, fantastic, perfect, attractive...
2. think
believe,
in my opinion,
I hold the opinion that...
高分建议
3. like
be fond of,
fall in love with...
4. want
look forward to doing sth.,
can't wait to do sth.,
would like to do sth....
高分建议
5. can
be able to do sth.
6. can't do
fail to do sth.
7. should
ought to do sth.,
had better do sth....
高分建议
8. very
quite, really
9. because of
due to,
as a result of,
10. so
thus,
therefore,
as a result....
宾 语 从 句
I hope we can get your permission and support.
三、 怎么把句子写“高级”——扩句原则
We will go to the Sun Old People's Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.
定语 从 句
1.表示顺序：
first, second, third, first of all, then, next, finally, at the same time, in the end, at last
4.表示转折：
though, although, but, however
3.表示因果:
as a result, therefore
2.表示举例：
as for, such as, for example, for instance
5.表示并列：
as well as, both… and, what’s more, not only.. but also
6.表示结论:
in a word, all in all, generally speaking
四、 怎么把句子写“高级”—— 用好连接词
连接词
谢
谢
听
聆
Practice makes it better