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书面表达之介绍说明类
2022中考英语分题型复习
命题特点
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介绍说明类相关书面表达的命题来看,此类话题主要围绕学生学习与生活以及社会热点话题等进行设题。
解题技巧
考生必须善于从所提供的信息中确定中心思想,明确写作意图,并在把握主题内容的基础上确定文章的题目、主题句、写作方法以及展开段落的方式。句与句、段与段之间的衔接要自然、连贯,可用适当的关联词或过渡句,避免句式单一、呆板。
(2021·兰州 A 卷)
假如你是李华,加拿大交换生 Eric 将要来到中国学习,并在你家居住。他想了解在你家及其他不同场所应该注意的一些规则。请你根据以下要点。给对方写一封邮件。
真题剖析
要求:1.邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4.词数不少于 80,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
真题剖析
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear that you'll come to China and stay in my home._________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li H ua
真题剖析
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审题指导
应用文
文体
邮件的格式,保证内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、行文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。
写作注意
第三人称为主
写作时人称
本文内容为介绍家中及不同场所应注意的规则,故时态以一般现在时为主
时态
方法点拨
真题剖析
写作指导
开头:引出主题
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正文:介绍所了解的规则
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结尾:表达期望
方法点拨
真题剖析
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参考范文
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear that you'll come to China and stay in my home. Here I'd like to tell you different rules in different places.
At home, we must do some housework. We can't stay up late because it's bad for our health. At school, we must wear school uniforms from Monday to Friday, and I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look energetic and smart. And we are not allowed to use mobile phones in class. When we are waiting for the bus, we should wait in line and we have to wear a mask. It's impolite to make too much noise in public place.
The golden rule to follow is: In China, do as the Chinese do. I hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
真题剖析
1.认真审题
细读题目中的每一项提示,明确文章的中心思想,弄清题意,确定写作体裁,掌握所表达的要点,做到心中有数,避免随心所欲,文不对题。
2.理顺要点
根据所给提示标出要点,然后按事件的先后顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序,分出层次。
方法点拨
3.写出词句
根据提示列出所需的自己熟悉的词汇和句型。要多用简单句,用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短,避难就易。若遇到表达障碍,可换一种说法,将一句变两三句,只求达意。
真题剖析
4.连句成文
将写好的句子连贯起来,注意上下句的逻辑关系,适当采用表递进、让步、转折、因果关系的关联词,使短文层次分明,过渡自然。
5.细心检查
文章草稿完成后,默读1—2遍,检查修改。特别要注意人称、时态、主谓一致、单词拼写等。
真题剖析
北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
提示词语:show, traditional, love, treasure, important
提示问题:In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing Please describe it.
Why do you think it can be a symbol
I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
I’m Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.
Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字,如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈×××……假如你是李华,请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件,介绍你心目中的一位英雄。
注意:
(1)信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹;
(2)信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名;
(3) 80词左右(首段已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you._____________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my hero in my heart. He graduated from Beijing Medical College. He is one of the famous doctors in China.
In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against it. He worked hard day and night treating the patients. With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control.
He is a good doctor as well as a great hero in my heart. I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others.
Yours,
Li Hua
Bye-bye!