(共60张PPT)
第二部分 高分写作进阶训练
高分标准
1. 写作内容：包含题目要求的所有信息，根据要点适当发挥;
2. 语言表达：使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，且错误极少; 语句流畅、意思清楚、
连贯;
3. 逻辑结构：能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系;
4. 书写工整，卷面整洁。
技巧1 巧用并列连词
技巧2 巧用短语
技巧3 巧用比较等级
技巧4 巧用it作形式主
语或宾语
技巧5 巧用感叹句
技巧6 巧用宾语从句
技巧7 巧用定语从句
技巧8 巧用状语从句
技巧9 巧用被动句
技巧10 巧用强调句
技巧11 巧用倒装句
一、高分句型进阶
技巧1 巧用并列连词
并列连词用于把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，且各个分句之间存在着一定的逻辑关系。写作中常用的并列连词有：
1. 并列关系：and, both… and…, neither… nor…
例1 I cooked lunch. I made a cake.
I cooked lunch and made a cake.
例2 New York has traffic problems. London has traffic problems.
Both New York and London have traffic problems.
例3 I don’t like sports. Alice doesn’t like sports.
Neither I nor Alice likes sports.
2. 选择关系：either... or..., or
例1 I will go to the cinema tomorrow. I will go to the zoo tomorrow.
I’ll either go to the cinema or the zoo tomorrow.
例2 Is your mother a teacher Is your mother a doctor
Is your mother a teacher or a doctor
3. 递进关系：not only... but also...
例 We should care for the young. We should respect the old.
We should not only care for the young but also respect the old.
4. 顺承关系：and
例 She felt a little tired. She decided to have a rest.
She felt a little tired and decided to have a rest
【专项训练】
一 、填入恰当的连词
1._______ walking ______ cycling are environmentally friendly ways to go to school.
Both
and
2.Doing sports can ___________ keep us healthy but also make us happy.
not only
3.He said he would be ________ a scientist _____ a doctor.
either
or
4.__________ hamburgers ______ fried chicken is healthy food.
Neither
nor
5.We should set a goal ______ work hard for it.
and
二、用连词将以下句子连接为一个句子
1.He will go to school. He will study hard.（用and连接）
_____________________________________
He will go to school and study hard.
2.My father likes swimming. My mother likes swimming, too. （用both…and…连接）
_______________________________________________
Both my father and my mother like swimming.
3.Linda won’t go to the cinema. Jack won’t go to the cinema, either. （用neither…nor…连接）
______________________________________________
Neither Linda nor Jack will go to the cinema.
4.Shakespeare was a writer. Shakespeare was an actor. （用not only…but also…连接）
____________________________________________________
Shakespeare was not only a writer but also an actor.
5.Did you do your homework last night Did you watch TV last night （用or连接）
____________________________________________________
Did you do your homework or watch TV last night
三、句子翻译
1.他既和蔼又友好。
_____________________________________________________
He is both kind and friendly./He is kind and friendly.
2.我最好的朋友不仅外向而且活泼。
___________________________________________________
My best friend is not only outgoing but also active.
3.我的英语老师又高又瘦。
____________________________________
My English teacher is tall and thin.
4.他喜欢唱歌也喜欢跳舞。
___________________________________
He likes both singing and dancing.
5.莉莉对篮球和排球都不感兴趣。
____________________________________________________
Lily is interested in neither basketball nor volleyball.
6.你可以用微信或者电子邮件与笔友交流。
_________________________________________________________________
You can use WeChat or emails to communicate with your pen pal.
技巧2 巧用短语
把简单的词汇变成高级的词汇或短语，可以让自己的书面表达更具有高级感，更容易得到阅卷老师的青睐。
词性 普通词汇 高级词汇
动 词 decide（决定） make up one’s mind
face（面对） be faced with
happen（发生） come about
hope（希望） expect, look forward to
like（喜欢） admire, be fond of, be interested in, be crazy about, fall in love with
词性 普通词汇 高级词汇
动 词 meet（遇见） come across
remember（记住） keep in mind
save（节省） set aside
should（应该） be supposed to
try（尝试） do/try one’s best to do, make every effort to do
understand（理解） make sense of
use（使用） make use of, take advantage of
visit（参观） pay a visit to
续表
词性 普通词汇 高级词汇
形 容 词 bad（坏的） awful, terrible
beautiful（漂亮的） pretty, attractive, fascinating
clever（聪明的） wise, bright, intelligent
difficult（困难的） challenging
good（好的） perfect, excellent, enjoyable, fantastic, outstanding
happy（高兴的） pleased, cheerful, joyful
helpful（有用的） be of great help/value, beneficial, rewarding
important（重要的） be of great importance
续表
词性 普通词汇 高级词汇
副词/ 连词 besides（另外；况且） what’s more, moreover
but（但是） however
first（ly）（第一，首先） to begin/start with
second（ly）（第二，其次） what’s more
sometimes（有时） once in a while, from time to time
suddenly（突然） all of a sudden
续表
【专项训练】
1.Learning English is important.（用be of great importance改写）
________________________________________
Learning English is of great importance.
2.Could you please help me （用give sb. a hand改写）
____________________________________
Could you please give me a hand？
3.We should protect the environment.（用be supposed to 改写）
____________________________________________
We are supposed to protect the environment.
4.Mr. Wang visited the Great Wall last year.（用pay a visit to改写）
__________________________________________________
Mr. Wang paid a visit to the Great wall last year.
5.Students should use spare time to improve themselves.（用make use of改写）
_____________________________________________________________
Students should make use of spare time to improve themselves.
6.Jim likes eating junk food, so he is unhealthy. （用be crazy about 改写）
_________________________________________________
Jim is crazy about junk food, so he is unhealthy.
7.Keeping a healthy diet can make us slimmer.（用 be able to 改写）
__________________________________________________
Keeping a healthy diet is able to make us slimmer.
8.I think it is right that the teacher should be strict with us.（用in one’s opinion改写）
__________________________________________________________________
In my opinion, it is right that the teacher should be strict with us.
9.I met our math teacher in the supermarket. （用come across改写）
___________________________________________________
I came across our math teacher in the supermarket.
10.Always remember: be polite and patient. （用keep in mind改写）
____________________________________________
Always keep in mind: be polite and patient.
技巧3 巧用比较等级
在写作中恰当运用形容词和副词的比较等级，可以使句型结构更丰富，表达更多
比较 等级 常见句型 例句
原级 比较 as+形容词/副词+as… The classroom is as big as that one.
比较级 the+比较级… , the+比较级…，表示“越……就越……” The harder you work, the luckier you will be.
样化。除了形容词和副词比较等级的基本用法，常用的句型有以下几种：
比较 等级 常见句型 例句
比较级 比较级+and+比较级/more and more+多音节形容词/副词原级，表示“越来越……” Our motherland is getting stronger and stronger.
最高级 A+be动词+one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数，表示“A是最……之一” Lang Ping is one of the most famous volleyball coaches in the world.
A+be动词+the+序数词+形容词最高级+名词+范围，表示“A是……中第……最……的……” The Yellow River is the second longest river in China.
续表
【专项训练】
一、 完成句子
1.He is ________ （good） at learning maths than Chinese.
better
2.Practice as ________ （much） as you can.
much
3.Nowadays English is _________________ （important） than any other subject.
more important
4.Annie says Sally is _____________ （kind） person in the world.
the kindest
5.____________ （much） you eat, _____________ （heavy） you will be.
The more
the heavier
二、 句子改写
1.He thinks math is difficult. He thinks English is difficult, too.（用as…as改写）
_________________________________________
He thinks math is as difficult as English.
2.We should communicate with our parents and it will reduce problems between us.（用 “the+比较级…, the+比较级…”改写 ）
__________________________________________________________________________
The more we communicate with our parents, the fewer problems we will have.
3.There are a lot of serious environmental problems in the world including plastic pollution.（用“one of the+形容词最高级”改写）
______________________________________________________________________________
Plastic pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in the world.
4.My schoolbag cost 100 yuan. Her schoolbag cost 120 yuan.（改成含有原级比较的句子）
__________________________________________
My schoolbag is not as expensive as hers.
5.His father is 50 years old. His mother is 45 years old.（改成含有比较级的句子）
___________________________________________
His father is 5 years older than his mother.
三、 句子翻译
1.吃更多的水果和蔬菜有助于保持健康。
______________________________________________________
Eating more fruit and vegetables helps to keep healthy.
2.他最大的缺点就是不够自信。
_________________________________________________________
His biggest shortcoming is that he is not confident enough.
3.李雷不如张昭工作那么勤奋。
__________________________________________
Li Lei works not so hard as Zhang Zhao.
4.西蒙希望能跟爱因斯坦一样聪明。
_______________________________________________
Simon wishes he could be as clever as Einstein.
5.这部电影是最受欢迎的电影之一。
______________________________________________
This movie is one of the most popular movies.
6.我们的祖国变得越来越强大了。
_______________________________________________
Our country is becoming stronger and stronger.
技巧4 巧用it作形式主语/宾语
it 作形式主语可以避免句子头重脚轻，它代替的是句子的逻辑主语；当不定式（短语）、动名词（短语）或从句在某个句子中作宾语时，为保持句子结构平衡，常用it 作形式宾语。
1. it 作形式主语
（1）It’s+adj.（+for/of sb.）+ to do sth. 做某事（对某人来说）是……的。/（某人）做某事是……的。
It’s so kind of you to help me work out this problem.
（2）It’s time to do/for/that…是（做）……的时间了。
It’s time to go to school.
（3）It’s one’s turn to do sth. 轮到某人做某事。
It’s my turn to do the dishes.
（4）It takes/took （sb.）+ 一段时间+ to do sth.做某事花费（某人）……（时间）。
It took him three years to finish the plan.
（5）It seems that…似乎/好像……
It seems that everyone likes him.
例1 I think it interesting to travel to Nanchang.
例2 I find it fun to play with little kids.
2. it 作形式宾语
find, think, consider, make, feel等词后接的宾语为从句或动词不定式时，常用it作形式宾语，真正的宾语（从句/动词不定式）后置。
【专项训练】
一、完成句子
1.我发现这道数学题轻易就能解答出来。
I find ____ easy ______________ this math problem.
it
to work out
2.每天锻炼对我们来说很重要。
It is important ________________________ every day.
for us to take exercise
3.你能帮助他学习英语真是太好了。
It is very kind _____ you ___________________ his English.
of
to help him with
4.我爸爸花了一年的时间戒烟。
It took my father one year ____________ smoking.
to give up
5.下周三轮到我们值日了。
It’s ___________ to be on duty next Wednesday.
our turn
二、 句子改写
1.It’s impossible to finish the task in such a short time. We find it.（用it作形式宾语）
____________________________________________________________
We find it impossible to finish the task in such a short time.
2.To help those poor countries is their duty. Chinese people think.（用it作形式宾语）
_____________________________________________________________
Chinese people think it their duty to help those poor countries.
3.To obey the law is everyone’s duty. （用it作形式主语）
_____________________________________
It’s everyone’s duty to obey the law.
4.Learning Chinese is difficult for a foreigner.（用it作形式主语）
______________________________________________
It is difficult for a foreigner to learn Chinese.
5.I spend ten minutes walking to my office every day.（用it作形式主语）
_______________________________________________________
It takes me ten minutes to walk to my office every day.
三、 句子翻译
1.他似乎没有说实话。
_______________________________________
It seemed that he didn’t tell the truth.
2.是时候去养老院看望那些老人了。
____________________________________________________
It’s time to visit the old people in the nursing home.
3.建这座桥花了他们五年时间。
___________________________________________
It took them five years to build the bridge.
4.这些噪音使我无法继续工作。
_________________________________________________________________
All these noises make it impossible for me to go on with the work.
5.是时候寻找解决方案了。
_______________________________
It’s time to look for solutions.
技巧5 巧用感叹句
感叹句可以将平淡无奇的感彩变得浓烈。在写作中，恰当地运用感叹句可以增强文章的可读性。常见感叹句的结构如下：
1. What+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数（+主语+谓语/系动词）!
What a beautiful girl she is!
2. What+形容词+不可数名词（+主语+谓语/系动词）!
What long hair she has!
3. What+形容词+可数名词复数（+主语+谓语/系动词）!
What beautiful girls they are!
4. How+形容词/副词（+主语+谓语/系动词）!
How beautifully she dances!
【专项训练】
一、 完成句子
1.天气真好！
_______ fine the weather is!
How
2.现代科技发展得如此之快！
_______ fast the modern technology develops!
How
3.他们是多么聪明的孩子啊！
________ clever children they are!
What
4.上周日我们在公园玩得很开心！
________ great fun we had in the park last Sunday!
What
二、将下列句子改为感叹句
1.This mooncake is delicious.
_________________________________
How delicious the mooncake is!
2.Du Fu is a great poet.
_______________________________
What a great poet Du Fu is!
3.He made great contributions to people.
____________________________________________
What great contributions he made to people!
4.Your parents are so patient.
________________________________
How patient your parents are!
5.Our English class is very interesting.
______________________________________
How interesting our English class is!
三、句子翻译
1.袁隆平是多么伟大的一位科学家啊！
_________________________________________
What a great scientist Yuan Longping is!
2.我的妹妹多认真啊！
__________________________
How careful my sister is!
3.共享单车多环保啊！
______________________________________________
How environmentally friendly shared bikes are!
4.他真是一个热心肠的人啊！
__________________________________
What a warm-hearted man he is!
5.苏炳添在奥运会上跑得多快啊！
_________________________________________________
How fast Su Bingtian ran in the Olympic Games!
技巧6 巧用宾语从句
在主从复合句中，作宾语的句子就是宾语从句。在宾语从句中，要注意从句的语序问题，从句要用陈述句语序，同时也要注意从句的时态问题。常见的连接词有：that, if/whether, what, when, where, how, who等。
句式 例句
陈述句式 I know him. He is my sister’s math teacher. →I know that he is my sister’s math teacher.
一般疑问句式 Does Kate get up early Do you know →Do you know if/whether Kate gets up early
常见的宾语从句句式有：
句式 例句
特殊疑问句式 What’s your favorite subject I want to know. I want to know what your favorite subject is.
续表
一、 填入恰当的连接词。
1.I wondered _______ I should do next.
what
2.—Could you please tell me _______ you will go to Beijing
—Oh, I will go there to attend a meeting.
why
3.I believe _______ he will succeed one day.
that
4.—Do you know ________ we can get some books
—You can borrow some in the library.
where
5.Mary didn’t know _______ she failed the exam again. She decided to ask her teacher for some advice.
why
二、将下列句子改为含有宾语从句的复合句
1.Where can I buy the book Could you please tell me
→ ____________________________________________________
Could you please tell me where I can buy the book
2.Light travels faster than sound. Our physics teacher said that.
→ ___________________________________________________________
Our physics teacher said that light travels faster than sound.
3.She is not sure. Are you a teacher
→ _____________________________________
She is not sure if you are a teacher.
4.My mother asked me. What time did you get home yesterday
→ _____________________________________________________
My mother asked me what time I got home yesterday.
5.Do you know Where does Jane live
→ ________________________________
Do you know where Jane lives
三、句子翻译
1.每个人都知道太阳东升西落。
_________________________________________________________________
Everyone knows that the sun rises in the east and sets in the west.
2.你知道下一届奥运会什么时候举办吗？
_________________________________________________________
Do you know when the next Olympic Games will be held
3.我们想知道明天是否还会下雨。
__________________________________________
We wonder if it will rain again tomorrow.
4.你能告诉我们最近的电影院在哪里吗？
_____________________________________________________
Could you please tell us where the nearest cinema is
5.他说他不会轻易放弃的。
____________________________________
He said he wouldn’t give up easily.
技巧7 巧用定语从句
在复合句中作定语的从句叫定语从句。被定语从句修饰的词叫先行词。先行词通常位于定语从句之前。引导定语从句的关系代词有that, which, who, whom, whose; 关系副词有when, where, why。
先行词 例句
先行词 为物 I love the movies that/which are funny.
I’ll never forget the days which/that we spent together.
先行词 为人 He is the man that/who helped us a lot after the earthquake.
Mr. Wang is the man whom/that you met in the zoo this morning.
先行词 为时间 I remember the day when we met for the first time.
先行词 例句
先行词 为地点 This is the town where President Xi Jinping was born.
先行词 为原因 I want to know the reason why you didn’t come to school this morning.
续表
【专项训练】
一、填入恰当的关系代词
1.The book ____________ you lent me yesterday is interesting.
which/that
2.I have a sister ___________ is a doctor.
who/that
3.He is the only doctor ____________ I can turn to for help.
who/whom
4.He bought the dress ____________ was on sale.
which/that
5.Habits ____________ are formed at an early age are hard to change.
which/that
二、 将下列句子改为含有定语从句的复合句
1.The man is making a speech. The man is my father.
_______________________________________________
The man who is making a speech is my father.
2.Have you seen the film Titanic Its leading actor is very famous.
__________________________________________________________________
Have you seen the film Titanic whose leading actor is very famous
3.The building stands near the train station. The building is a supermarket.
_________________________________________________________________
The building which stands near the train station is a supermarket.
4.We should help the old people. The old people are in a nursing home.
__________________________________________________________
We should help the old people who are in a nursing home.
5.I saw a film yesterday. The film was educational.
____________________________________________
I saw a film that was educational yesterday.
三、句子翻译
1.另一件我觉得很难的事就是英语语法。
______________________________________________________________
Another thing that I found very difficult was English grammar.
2.我永远也不会忘了我们一起在农场工作的日子。
__________________________________________________________________
I shall never forget the days when we worked on the farm together.
3.你能告诉我车子出故障的原因吗？
_____________________________________________________
Can you tell me the reason why the car broke down
4.我去过印第安人居住的地方。
________________________________________________
I have been to the places where the Indians live.
5.经常在英语方面帮助我的那个女孩来自英国。
______________________________________________________________
The girl who often helps me with my English is from England.
技巧8 巧用状语从句
在复合句中，修饰主句中的动词、形容词或副词等的从句叫状语从句，主要分为以下几类：
时间状语从句：when/while/as, before, after, since, as soon as
When I got to school, it was raining.
She left after she cleaned the room.
My sister ate nothing before she went to see the doctor.
My brother was watching TV while I was playing with our pet.
条件状语从句：if, unless, as long as
If you want to buy a big house, you should earn more money.
The boy cannot see clearly unless he wears glasses.
原因状语从句：because, since, as
The postman stopped delivering letters because it was raining too hard.
让步状语从句：though/although, even if/even though
Though/Although my car is very old, I don’t want to buy a new one.
目的状语从句：so that, in order that
I am going to the lecture early so that I’ll get a good seat.
结果状语从句：so...that.../such...that...
She worked so hard that she passed the test.
【专项训练】
一、 填入恰当的连词
1.________ John was watching TV, his wife was cooking.
While
2.They were good persons. _________ they went, they were warmly welcomed.
Where
3.The teacher raised his voice _________ the students in the back could hear him more clearly.
so that
4.It’s _______ a good chance _______ we must not miss it.
such
that
5.We’ll start our project ____ the president agrees.
if
二、 将下列句子改为含有状语从句的复合句
1.It is impolite of children to cut in. Their parents are talking.
________________________________________________________________
It is impolite of children to cut in when their parents are talking.
2.I think you’d better relax. You finish the two days’ work.
_____________________________________________________________
I think you’d better relax after you finish the two days’ work.
3.It will rain tomorrow. We will stay at home.
___________________________________________
If it rains tomorrow, we will stay at home.
4.He is young. He has the dream of being a hero as his father.
____________________________________________________________________
Although he is young, he has the dream of being a hero as his father.
5.I always buy things online. The things are cheaper than those in physical shops.
__________________________________________________________________________________________
I always buy things online because the things online are cheaper than those in physical shops.
三、句子翻译
1.如果他回来了，请通知我。
______________________________________
If he comes back, please let me know.
2.我喜欢踢足球，而你喜欢打篮球。
______________________________________________________
I like playing football while you like playing basketball.
3.自从大学毕业后，我们就没有见过面。
______________________________________________________________
We haven’t seen each other since we graduated from university.
4.为了考试及格，他正在努力学习。
______________________________________________________________
He is working hard in order that he can pass the examination.
5.天气是如此的糟糕，他们不得不一整天都留在机场。
___________________________________________________________________
It was such bad weather that they had to stay in the airport all day.
技巧9 巧用被动句
被动句型可以起到强调主语的作用，基本结构是：be+动词的过去分词。在写作中，通过运用被动句型可以增加句式表达的多样性。常用的被动语态主要有以下几种：
1. 一般现在时的被动语态：am/is/are done
More and more trees are planted on both sides of the street every year.
2. 一般过去时的被动语态：was/were done
Mr. Green was invited to sing an English song at the party and he sang well.
3. 一般将来时的被动语态：will/shall/be going to be done
A bridge will be built over the river next year.
4. 含情态动词的被动语态：情态动词+be done
Teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions.
【专项训练】
一、完成句子
1.格林先生受到了所有学生的尊重。
Mr. Green ______________ by all his students.
is respected
2.过去，河流和湖泊被严重污染了。
Rivers and lakes _______________ seriously in the past.
were polluted
3.将来，所有繁重的工作会由机器和机器人来做。
All the heavy and difficult jobs ______________ by machines and robots in the future.
will be done
4.去年，镇上建了一座大型购物中心。
A large shopping center ___________ in the town center last year.
was built
Ⅱ. 将下列句子改为被动句。
1.We clean our classroom every day.
____________________________________
Our classroom is cleaned every day.
2.We should give away the used books to the children in need.
_____________________________________________________________
The used books should be given away to the children in need.
3.My mother praised me for my hard work.
________________________________________________
I was praised for my hard work by my mother.
4.Mr. Smith will give a speech on robots next Friday afternoon.
____________________________________________________________________
A speech on robots will be given by Mr. Smith next Friday afternoon.
三、 句子翻译
1.大约五千年前，茶叶就在中国被饮用。
_______________________________________________
Tea was drunk in China about 5,000 years ago.
2.杭州作为丝绸之城而广为人知。
________________________________________
Hangzhou is known as the City of Silk.
3.大量和食品安全相关的新法律法规于上个月开始实施。
__________________________________________________________________________
Quite a few new laws and rules on food safety were put into use last month.
4.很多事故都是由粗心的司机引起的。
______________________________________________
Many accidents are caused by careless drivers.
5.在国外，越来越多的学校开始教汉语。
_______________________________________________________________
Chinese is taught by more and more schools out of our country.
技巧10 巧用强调句
在写作中运用强调句有利于增强文章的感彩。写作中，常用的强调句句型为：
It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（强调的主语为人）+其他部分
It was my mother who always took good care of me.
It was in the park that I met him.
注意：
1. 去掉强调结构“It is/was…that/who…”后，剩下的词仍能组成一个完整的句子；
2. 原句中的谓语动词时态为与过去相关的时态时，用“It was… that…”；原句中的谓语动词为现在相关的时态时，用“It is…that…”。
【专项训练】
一、 完成句子
1.是保罗在我困难时帮助了我。
It was Paul _______ helped me when I was in trouble.
who
2.初中时，我就认识了我最好的朋友。
It was in junior middle school _______ I ________ my best friend.
that
knew
3.在一个寒冷的夜晚，我遇到了一只饥饿的小猫。
It was _________________ that I came across a hungry cat.
on a cold night
4.这就是上周末汤姆给我买的那本新字典。
It was ____________________ that Tom bought for me last weekend.
the new dictionary
二、 将下列句子改为强调句
1.I learned to ride a bike last year. （强调last year）
______________________________________________
It was last year that I learned to ride a bike.
2.My English teacher helped me a lot in English. （强调my English teacher）
______________________________________________________________
It was my English teacher that/who helped me a lot in English.
3.We can get along well with our parents by communicating more with them. （强调by communicating more with our parents）
__________________________________________________________________________________
It is by communicating more with our parents that we can get along well with them.
4.I came across one of my old friends in Paris. （强调one of my old friends）
_________________________________________________________
It was one of my old friends that I came across in Paris.
5.He moved back to the countryside for this reason. （强调for this reason）
____________________________________________________________
It was for this reason that he moved back to the countryside.
三、句子翻译
1.就是这张照片让我想起了我的爷爷。
______________________________________________________
It was this photo that reminded me of my grandfather.
2.是我的父亲一直在鼓励我独立解决问题。
_________________________________________________________________________
It is my father who always encourages me to work out problems by myself.
3.骑车上学确实可以帮助减少交通拥堵。
________________________________________________________________
It is by riding a bike to school that can help reduce traffic jams.
4.是他们帮助我们脱离了险境。
_________________________________________
It was they who helped us out of danger.
5.多年的辛苦才让他取得了成功。
__________________________________________________
It was years of hard work that made him succeed.
技巧11 巧用倒装句
倒装句可以起到强调作用或惊叹作用。在写作中，常用的倒装结构主要有：
1. There be句型
There are many students on the playground.
2. not only…but also…倒装
Not only did he speak correctly, but （also） he spoke smoothly.
3. so/neither+be/助动词/情态动词+主语
Lily is a student and so am I.
David can’t play the piano and neither can I.
4. Here/There+动词+名词
Here is a photo of my family.
5. only位于句首倒装
Only in this way can we work out the problem successfully.
Only then did I realize that I was wrong.
【专项训练】
一、完成句子
1.公共汽车来了。
Here ________ the bus.
comes
2.这是一张英文报纸。
Here ____ an English newspaper.
is
3.我们学校有很多规则。
There ______ a lot of rules in our school.
are
4.他不仅做出了承诺，而且遵守了承诺。
Not only ______ he ________ a promise, but also he kept it.
did
make
5.只有每天大声说英语，才能提高英语成绩。
Only by speaking English aloud every day __________ you improve your English grades.
can/will
6.如果他不去参加聚会，我也不会去。
If he doesn’t go to the party, _______________ .
neither will I
二、 句子改写
1.Our school has 37 classrooms.（用there be句型改写）
_______________________________________
There are 37 classrooms in our school.
2.We can succeed in doing anything by working hard. （用only倒装句改写）
________________________________________________________
Only by working hard can we succeed in doing anything.
3.He is hard-working and polite. （用not only…but also倒装句改写）
_________________________________________________
Not only is he hard-working but also he is polite.
4.He is not going to swim, and I’m not going, either. （用neither倒装句改写）
___________________________________________
He is not going to swim, and neither am I.
5.Linda is a brave girl, and Lily is brave, too. （用so倒装句改写）
_____________________________________
Linda is a brave girl, and so is Lily.
三、句子翻译
1.这些是我关于保持健康的建议。
_________________________________________________
Here are my suggestions on how to keep healthy.
2.他不仅学习优秀，而且热爱运动。
_____________________________________________________________
Not only does he study well, but also he is crazy about sports.
3.只有遵守交通规则，才能保证每个人的安全。
_________________________________________________________
Only by following the traffic rules can everyone keep safe.
4.如果你去看电影，我也会去。
___________________________________
If you go to the movies, so will I.
5.只有到那个时候我才意识到健康是多么重要啊！
__________________________________________________
Only then did I realize how important health was!(共33张PPT)
二、高分习作进阶
一、表示时间顺序的过渡词语
二、表示转折关系的过渡词语
三、表示因果关系的过渡词语
四、表示递进关系的过渡词语
五、表示列举事实的过渡性词语
六、表示总结的过渡性词语
高分习作不仅要求考生能够使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，更要学会准确运用各类衔接词衔接句子以及段落，确保语句连贯，逻辑清晰。写作中常用的过渡词语主要分为以下几类：
一、表示时间顺序的过渡词语
firstly, first of all, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, last but not least, after that, since then, meanwhile, at the same time, soon, next, all of a sudden, at the weekend等。
例：Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I put away all the books, newspapers and other things in the rooms and put them in place. Then/Later I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that/At last/Finally, I swept and mopped the floors.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
As a student, I am able to attend the activities on weekends. And it’s easy for me to get to the center. I also love animals and I am willing to help them. I know a little about medical knowledge. 1.______________________（时间顺序）, as a student, I am able to attend the activities on weekends. And it’s easy for me to get to the center. 2.___________（时间顺序）, I love animals and
I am willing to help them.
3. _________________________________（时间顺序）, I know a little about medical knowledge.
Firstly/To begin with
Secondly
Besides/At last/In the end/Finally
二、表示转折关系的过渡词语
but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, except for, instead等。
例：Online shopping is becoming more and more convenient. On the other hand/However/On the contrary, it also has many disadvantages.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. She likes square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. She also has a lot of friends. But some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. 1.____________ （时间顺序）, she has fallen in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. 2._______________ （递进关系）, she has a lot of friends. 3.__________________________（转折关系）, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.
Since then
What’s more
However/On the contrary
三、表示因果关系的过渡词语
because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, as a result of, so, therefore, as a result等。
例：As a result of his carelessness, the whole project had to be put off at least one month.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
I was poor in English when I was in Grade Seven. I didn’t know how to learn English well. My English teacher helped me a lot and I have made much progress in English. I was poor in English when I was in Grade Seven. 1.______________ （时间衔接词）, I didn’t know how to learn English well. 2._________________________________________________________________（因果关系）, I have made much progress in English.
At that time
Thanks to my English teacher/With the
help of my English teacher
四、表示递进关系的过渡词语
what’s more, furthermore, moreover, besides, what’s worse, on the one hand…on the other hand…, for one thing…for another thing…等。
例：Too much blue light is harmful to your eyes. What’s more, it will also lead to a sleepless night.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
People who like talent shows think it’s relaxing for them to watch those shows after tiring study or work. The shows not only enrich people’s life, but provide chances for those who want to achieve their dreams. Some excellent performers can be found in those shows. People who like talent shows think it’s relaxing for them to watch those shows after tiring study or work. 1.___________________（递进关系）, the shows not only enrich people’s life, but provide chances for those who want to achieve their dreams. 2.____________________（递进关系）, some excellent performers can be found in those shows.
On the one hand
On the other hand
五、表示列举事实的过渡性词语
such as, for example/instance, take…for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words等。
例1： First, you can take an active part in sports. For example, you can go swimming and skating.
例2：When the vacation is coming, you can join in all kinds of activities, such as dancing, singing and the summer camp or winter camp.
普通习作 高分习作
Try to eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Don’t eat junk food too often. Also, you should take exercise regularly. You can take up a ball game as a hobby. In order to make your school life colorful, I suggest you take part in all kinds of activities. You can join some clubs and do some volunteer work. 1._________ （时间顺序）, try to eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Don’t eat junk food too often. Also, you should take exercise regularly, 2.__________（列举） taking up a ball game as a hobby. 3.___________（时间顺序）, in order to make your school life colorful, I suggest you take part in all kinds of activities, 4.__________（列举） joining some clubs and doing some volunteer work.
Firstly
such as
Secondly
such as
六、表示总结的过渡性词语
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, all in all, on the whole, in general等。
例：In a word, sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up. We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.
【专项训练】
普通习作 高分习作
Most students go to school by bike or on foot. We could make less pollution in this way. We can take some exercises on the way to school. It is also good for our health. I think it is a good way to go to school by bike or on foot. Most students go to school by bike or on foot.
1._____________（时间顺序）, we could make less pollution in this way. 2._________（时间顺序）, we can take some exercises on the way to school. It is also good for our health.
3.____________ （总结）, I think it is a good way to go to school by bike or on foot.
First of all
Second
In a word
【综合训练】
一、 阅读短文，选择恰当的过渡词语填空。
第1篇
what’s more, however, in short, first of all, besides
With the development of the Internet, smart phones are widely used among people. Phubbers（低头族） can be seen here and there.
1. ___________ , it is bad for their daily life. 2. _____________ , smart phones have effects on the relationship with family and friends. 3. _________ , if phubbers concentrate on playing with smart phones, traffic accidents will happen easily. 4. _______________ , if phubbers play with phones too much, it will do harm to health and it is also bad for study or work.
5. __________, phubbers should make good use of smartphones to open their eyes and enrich their know-ledge. They should communicate more often through face-to-face conversations rather than chatting online.
In short
However
First of all
Besides
What’s more
第2篇
besides, first of all, at last, in a word
Hello Lisa,
How is it going It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans I’d like to share with you.
1. _____________ , I plan to write a letter to the younger schoolmates, telling them to value the people around and get along well with them. 2. _________ , I will share my success and failure in study, too. 3. _________ , I will give some suggestions on how to make our school better. More trees and flowers must be planted. More after-class activities should be organized so that our schoolmates can join in them to relax.
4. ____________ , I hope all of our younger schoolmates can live and study happily in our school.
Li Ming
In a word
First of all
Besides
At last
第3篇
what’s more, as far as I am concerned, first, meanwhile, second, in a word
Say No to Junk Food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. 1. ___________________________ , we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our bodies. 2. _____________ , the over-packaging leads to more rubbish.
As far as I am concerned
Meanwhile
To get away from junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. 3. _______ , eat regularly. Eat three meals a day on time. Eat as few snacks or less fast food as possible. 4. _________ , take more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. 5. _______________ , do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food.
6. ____________ , a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.
What’s more
In a word
First
Second
二、运用高分句型和恰当的衔接词，将下列普通习作改写成高分习作
Group 1
普通习作 高分习作
Dear Mr. Li, My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my development, I think. I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Dear Mr. Li,
My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my development, I think.
I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class.
续表
普通习作 高分习作
Several days ago I worked on three maths problems for a long time in class, but I couldn’t work them out. I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion, we solved the problems in our group. Several days ago I 1. _____________________________________________________ （巧用句型） them in class, but 2. ________________________________________ （巧用句型）. 3. _____________ （因果关系） I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion, we solved the problems in our group.
spent a long time working on three maths
problems
they were too hard for me to work out
As a result
续表
普通习作 高分习作
I was very excited. Having such a great experience, I want to give two suggestions. Please don’t teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups in every class. 4. ______________________（巧用感叹句）
Having such a great experience, I want to give two suggestions. 5. _________ （时间顺序）, please don’t teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups in every class.
How excited I was!
Firstly
续表
普通习作 高分习作
Please provide us with some laptops if possible, so we can surf the Internet easily. Without doubt, we need an open and free class, you see. That’s all. Thank you. Best wishes, Zhang Hua 6. __________________ （时间顺序/递进关系）, please provide us with some laptops if possible, so we can surf the Internet easily. Without doubt, we need an open and free class, you see.
That’s all. Thank you.
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
Secondly/Besides
Group 2
普通习作 高分习作
All kids want to be good at learning. It’s not easy. In my opinion, those kids who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. They work hard at their subjects and enjoy playing games. Playing also helps them learn better. All kids want to be good at learning. 1. ___________ （转折关系）, it’s not easy. In my opinion, those kids who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. 2. ______________________________________________________________________ （巧用连词短语）. Playing also helps them learn better.
However
They not only work hard at their subjects
but also enjoy playing games
普通习作 高分习作
As to how kids balance learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the rule—work while you work and play while you play. And kids should learn to work happily and relax totally. I’m sure a good balance between learning and playing can help children grow up. As to how kids balance learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the rule—work while you work and play while you play.
3. ________________________ （递进关系）, kids should learn to work happily and relax totally.
I’m sure a good balance between learning and playing can 4. __________________________________________ （巧用短语）.
Moreover/What’s more
make a great contribution to kids’ growth
续表
Group 3
普通习作 高分习作
Have you ever heard about study trips, which are becoming more and more popular in junior schools As for them, different students have different thoughts. Some students stand by them, while others are against them. I think study trips are good for students, and here are my reasons. Have you ever heard about study trips, which are becoming more and more popular in junior schools As for them, different students have different thoughts. Some students stand by them, while others are against them.
1. __________________________（表达观点）, I think study trips are good for students, and here are my reasons.
As far as I’m concerned
普通习作 高分习作
Study trips can open our mind to the outside world because we can learn something important during the trips. Study trips help us have a good mood. We can have fun and feel happy when we are going on a trip. We can learn how to get along well with teachers and students.
2. _________ （时间顺序）, study trips can open our mind to the outside world because we can learn something important during the trips.
3. ___________ （时间顺序）, study trips help us have a good mood. We can have fun and feel happy when we are going on a trip.
4. ___________________（时间顺序）, we can learn how to get along well with teachers and students.
Firstly
Secondly
Last but not least
续表
普通习作 高分习作
We must remember these things when going on a study trip. Teachers should be responsible for students’ safety during the trip. And students should obey the rules in order to keep away from dangers. 5. ___________________ （时间顺序）, we must 6. _______________________________ （巧用短语） when going on a study trip. Teachers should be responsible for students’ safety during the trip. And students 7. _________________（巧用短语） obey the rules in order to keep away from dangers.
At the same time
keep these things in our mind
are supposed to
续表
Group 4
普通习作 高分习作
Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home. They seldom help parents do chores. When they have problems, they don’t know what to do. The problem catches people’s attention. In my opinion, parents should believe in their children and shouldn’t do everything for them. Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home. They seldom help parents do chores. When they have problems, they don’t know what to do. The problem catches people’s attention.
In my opinion, 1. ____________（时间顺序）, parents should believe in their children 2. ____________（巧用短语）doing everything for them.
first of all
instead of
普通习作 高分习作
Parents should give them proper suggestions, and give them more chances to make their own decisions. Children shouldn’t depend on their parents too much. They should learn to do housework, and look after themselves well. On the one hand, parents should give them proper suggestions, and give them more chances to make their own decisions.
3. ____________________ （转折关系）, children shouldn’t depend on their parents too much. They should learn to do housework, and look after themselves well.
On the other hand
续表
普通习作 高分习作
Besides, teenagers should learn to face challenges bravely. No matter what difficulties they meet, they should never give up. It’s very important for children to learn to be independent. 4. _________（递进关系）, teenagers should learn to face challenges bravely. No matter what difficulties they 5. ______________ （巧用短语）, they should never give up.
6. ___________（总结）, it’s very important for children to learn to be independent.
Besides
come across
All in all
续表
Group 5
普通习作 高分习作
Being a teenager of Nanchang, what should we do to help build a civilized city When in public places, we should respect the elderly and take care of the young. We should also be friendly and helpful to others. When having a conversation, we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen. Being a teenager of Nanchang, what should we do to help build a civilized city
1. _________（时间顺序）, when in public places, we should respect the elderly and take care of the young. We should also be friendly and helpful to others. 2. ___________（时间顺序）, when having a conversation, we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen.
Firstly
Secondly
普通习作 高分习作
When on the road, we should obey the traffic rules and let others go first when necessary. As a junior student, I think we should do as the above. Also, we should try our best to study hard and obey the school rules. If we can do these things, we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one. 3. __________（时间顺序）, when on the road, we should obey the traffic rules and let others go first when necessary.
As a junior student, I think 4. _________________（巧用it作形式主语） do as the above. 5. ___________________（时间顺序）, we should try our best to study hard and obey the school rules. 6. ___________________________________________（巧用倒装句） and help to build our city into a civilized one.
Thirdly
it’s our duty to
At the same time
Only in this way can we be a virtue teenager
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