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中考英语作文指导
2022年4月17日
What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam
作文是会呼吸的痛
它活在试卷最后的角落
看别人写会痛
看自己写会痛
反正都会痛......
How to write a good artile
作文 想说爱你不容易
Writing is a kind of breathing pain
It lives in the last corner of the paper
It is painful to watch others write
While it is more painful to write myself
Anyway, writing is a kind of breathing pain...
2018
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学习目标：
1.通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作技巧。
2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。
3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。
考情分析
方法指导
备战演练
作文点评
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分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。词数均为80词左右。
考情分析
思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？
各类作文常用框架
1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to…..
On the one hand,…On the other hand,…
What’s more,…
In a word,/In short,….
2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion/survey about….
Different people have different opinions.
A thinks….
B thinks differently.….
As for me,/In my opinion, ….
All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
3、写信，建议
总-分-总
I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.
Firstly,….
Secondly,….
Finally,….
In a word,…If you…, you will…
（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；
（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；
（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；
（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。
方法指导
作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
以How to keep healthy 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
备战演练
1.审：
2.构：
Steps of writing
审清题意
列出提纲
3.列：
写出文章
3.列：
4.写：
段落布局
5.检：
检查细节
Style (体裁）：__________
Person（人称）：_________
Tense（时态）: _________________
记叙文
第一人称
一般现在时
Before writing
1. Cross-question(审题)
2、构：文章分3段
1、开头：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题
2、正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话
3、结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华
3.列全要点
Beginning:
Body:(3 parts)
1.Do sports
2.Good eating habits
3.Keep happy
Ending：
Bad sample（0-3分）
Students healthy is important. Even though have a good grade. But haven't healthy is not good.
Have a good healthy is very important.
1.要点全
Bad→Good（4-8分）
2.简单句
2.简单句
翻译：保持健康是很重要的。
Keep healthy is very important.
Keeping healthy is very important.
①找动词V (2)
②保留一个谓语动词
×
√
简单句翻译原则（1个V）
Ving
Ving+ V谓语+ to do
V原
1.并列句
Good→Better（9-12分）
2.连接词
We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.
1.并列句（句与句）
We should not only have good eating habits but also keep away from junk food.
简单句+连词+简单句
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also,
neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, such as,
8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact,
10.表示结论: altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in general
连词
As middle school students, keeping healthy is very important for us. To keep healthy , I have some good advice.
First of all, We should do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food. We can eat more fruits and vegetables. Finally, we should keep us happy, it is the most important part.
I hope my advice is useful. Let’s take action now!
Better
1. 各种从句
Better→Best（13-15分）
2.高级词汇
主句+连接词+从句
连接词+从句，主句
1.各种从句
宾语从句
We should do exercise every day.
I think we should do exercise every day.
使用提示：表达想法建议
条件状语从句
We should keep us happy, it is the most important.
If we keep us happy all the time, we will be much healthier.
使用提示：表达想法建议
定语从句
We should have good eating habits.
We should have some eating habits which are good for us.
使用提示：修饰名词
表语从句
We should have good eating habits.
My advice is that our eating habits should be healthier for us.
使用提示：我的...是...
1. I think/hope +句子.
2. If+从句，主句.
3. 主+谓+N+定从
4.My+N is that 句子.
常用从句模板
good→wonderful
like→enjoy→be fond of
happy→joyful
very→so→extremely
many→plenty of
want →feel like
important→play an important part in
should→be supposed to/be expected to
to(为了）→in order to
高级词汇
As a middle school students, It is very important for us to keep healthy. In order to keep healthy , I have some good advice.
To begin with, I think we are supposed to do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We are expected to have some eating habits which are good for us. Finally, keeping us happy all the time is also important. If we are happier, we will be healthier.
I hope my advice is useful. If we take action now, we must be healthy.
Best
总结回顾：
1.bad→good
要点全，简单句
2.good→better
并列句，连接词
3.better→best
从句，高级词汇
4.书写漂亮
作文点评（2018年中考真题）中考英语作文指导
谭婉灵
一、导入：What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam
二、学习目标：
1、通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作技巧。
2、通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。
3、通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。
三、学习过程：
1、考情分析
分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。词数均为80词左右。思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？
2、学法指导
（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；
（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；
（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；
（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。
各类作文常用框架:
1)、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
开头 It’s adj for us to…..
正文 On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,…
结尾 In a word,/In short,….
2)、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
开头 Recently, we have a discussion/survey about….
正文 Different people have different opinions.
A thinks….
B thinks differently.….
As for me,/In my opinion, ….
结尾 All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
3)、写信，建议
总-分-总
开头 I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.
正文 Firstly,….
Secondly,….
Finally,….
结尾 In a word,…If you…, you will…
3、备战演练
作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请以How to keep healthy 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康。 要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
写作分析:
写作五步骤（Steps of writing）：
________ ________ _________ _________ _________
审：体裁________________ 人称__________________ 时态________________
构：文章分3段
开头：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题
正文：主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话
结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华
列
Beginning:
Body:(3 parts) 1.Do sports 2.Good eating habits 3.Keep happy
Ending：
（4）写：
1）4-8分作文：要点全，简单句
2）9-12分：并列句，连接词
As middle school students, keeping heathy is very important for us. To keep healthy , I have some good advice.
First of all, We should do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food. We can eat more fruits and vegetables. Finally, we should keep us happy, it is the most important part.
I hope my advice is useful. Let’s take action now!
3）13-15分：各种从句，高级词汇
As a middle school students, It is very important for us to keep healthy. In order to keep healthy , I have some good advice.
To begin with, I think we are supposed to do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We are expected to have some eating habits which are good for us. Finally, keeping us happy all the time is also important. If we are happier, we will be healthier.
I hope my advice is useful. If we take action now, we must be healthy.
(5)、检：要点、拼写、语法是否连贯。看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
4、作文点评
5、总结
