2022年中考英语二轮题型专题 作文写作指导课件(共31张PPT)

(共31张PPT)
中考英语写作指导
学习目标：
1. 了解中考作文要求及命题特点
2. 学习如何组织作文
3. 如何有效地使用连词
要求：根据所给提示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的短文。词数控制在80—100个左右。
特点：贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维空间。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
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2.如何组织作文。
书面表达六步法
审
时态
人称
体裁
（记述文，应用文，议论文）
一．审题
写好作文必先审题，明确所给的提示或
图表的内容要求，确定写什么，怎么写，
怎样在适当的地方提出所写文章的健康
积极的中心论点；视角新颖也可使文章增色不少。
　
　　依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。例如:一篇以 “我的健康饮食”为标题的文章学生如果写成了以某种菜的做法或感谢妈妈为他每天做饭的文章,不管用词多么恰当,语言多么感人,都不能获得高分.所以写作文之前要先审题,最好列出提纲.做到要写什么一目了然.
　　 若审题不清
在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80—100字左右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的看法。
提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭
4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗
要求：语句通畅，语法正确。
不得逐句翻译。
范文：
在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的看法。
提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭
4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗
要求：语句通畅，语法正确。
不得逐句翻译。
范文：
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人称
时态
事件
要点
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如何列提纲：
Para1:
Para2:
Para3:
I think it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life.
In a word, the more housework I do,
the happier my parents will be.
（综述）开门见山，表明观点。
根据提示，概述家务。
给出评论，发表己见。
e.g.
I help my mother sweep the floor.
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I help my mother cook lunch .
I always wash clothes for my family.
I always wash dishes.
扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，使文章内容完整，要点全面，是写作的关键步骤。
I throw the rubbish away and clean the
floor in the morning.
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做午饭
洗衣服
洗盘子
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合理恰当地运用关联词和过渡句是英语
写作的制胜法宝。它们不仅使你的文章结
构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升
作文档次。
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As we all know, it’s important to help
parents do housework during our daily life. For me, I often help my parents do housework. For example, I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning…Doing housework can not only make your parents happy, but also let you taste the sweet of work.
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, so…that
5.表示对比: instead, not only…but also,while
6.表示解释: for example, such as, in other words;
7.表示顺序: first (of all), firstly…secondly…finally,
later, since then, from then on, in the end;
8.表示强调: also, what’s more, in fact,to be honest
9.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
牢记关联词
四.复查修改
整篇作文写完后，一定要仔细检查，
查看有无遗漏的要点和标点符号，
并检查字母的大小写、单词拼写，
特别要注意文中的动词（主谓一致、
时态、语态）使用的正确性以及字数
是否符合要求。
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人称：Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office.
时态：Last week, they are going to the island.
主谓一致： Everyone work hard.
习惯用法：I very much like it.
正： I like it very much
My work is very busy.
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正：I’m very busy with my work.
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　　1.名词单复数问题：
　单复数的错误产生原因有的是因为语法问题,例如就近原则问题,可数名词和不可数名词分不清.还有的是不认真马虎造成的.
　误 My father and my mother is all teacher.
　　正 My father and my mother are both teachers.
　　2. 缺少动词
　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.
误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.
正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.
误 The apples cheap. I'll take some.
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
　　3.缺少介词、冠词等
　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
　　误 Because heavy rain ,we can't hold the sports meeting.
　　正 Because of the heavy rain, we can't hold the sports meeting.
　4.代词的误用
　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
　　误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.
　　正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
　5.前后不一致
　　所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
　　例1. When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
　　改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
　6.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英
语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 When I get to the station ,the train leave.
正 When I got to the station, the train had left.
Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国食物。
Right: Peter is very happy because he likes Chinese food very much.
Because Peter likes Chinese food, so he is very happy.
我校建于2001 年。
正:My school was built in 2001.
误： My school built in 2001.
Read is funny
I love reading, I think reading is funny .there are much useful knowledge in the books .I can learn much things from the books, more books I read ,more knowledge I’ll have. If I don’t know a answer, I can find it in the books. I’ll be happy after read good books. Reading is a good habbit and reading help me a lot .Reading makes me to become kind. Reading also bring me a lot of fun. I have be a good reader today
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书写规范, 卷面整洁。
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AS we all know, It’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy.
学生的优秀范文 （25分）
Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）
学生的优秀范文 （25分）
我是个中学生, 对电脑特别感兴趣, 一放学回家就开电脑，有时玩游戏，有时上网和朋友聊天，有时给朋友发电子邮件。尽管我喜欢玩电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做，他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。
要求：根据所给提示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的短文。词数控制在80个左右。
小试身手
I’m a middle school student, and I am interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
Thank you !