2022年中考英语记叙文——写人写作讲解（含答案）

中考记叙文----写人
一．写作讲解
题材：记叙文
时态：描述性格，爱好，习惯，长相（一般现在时）；曾经做过的事（一般过去时）
布局
总写：(1.这个人让你喜欢/印象深刻的特点；2.为什么喜欢/印象深刻的原因)
Sb is one of my+情绪+people/ friends.
The reason why.....is that....
分写：
外貌，爱好，性格特点（有选择的去写）
Sb has....; sb is .....with.... (外貌)
She/He is tall and（身材）......
Her/His hair is（头发）......
She/He always wears（表情）and gives us the impression that（每人的印象）......
She/He is always willing to（性格）......
She/He is good at（特长）......
She/He always helps me out whenever I ...... Once（引出事列）
To my surprise,（她／他的做法）
Enjoy; be interested in; have interest in doing sth; take up sth(开始培养一种爱好)
具体能体现这个人物所作的让你喜欢/印象深刻的事情。
He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
I was about to...when...我正要....突然......
Hardly had I done... when... /No sooner had I done... than... 我刚……，就……/我一……，就……
He/She worked hard so as to improve.... 他/她为了提高.... 工作/学习很努力。
His/Her father was so strict with him/her that..他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉以至.....
...gives us the impression that... ……给我们……印象。
总结：你可以从他/她身上学到的东西，及对他/她的评价/态度。
Admire; look up to; regard sb as...; set/make a good example to sb
It turns out to be... 结果是……
I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
Now I understand my ...’s love to me. I will never forget my ....现在我明白了XX对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的XX。
From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重。
Without her help, I will never... 如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法.....
I will respect and love.... forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴.....
She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实，并且乐于助人。
She has set an example for...她给....树立了榜样。
词汇锦集
beautiful漂亮的 pretty漂亮的
handsome帅气的 strong强壮的
round face圆脸 broad face宽脸
straight hair直发 curly hair卷发
short/long hair短/长发 long nose高鼻梁
humorous幽默的 clever/smart聪明的
patient耐心的 hard-working努力的
friendly友好的 warm-hearted热心的
famous著名的 well-known知名的
ordinary-looking长相普通的 wear glasses戴眼镜
graduate from..毕业于 ....get a... degree得到...学位
get further education深造 study abroad出国留学
be fond of...喜..... enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事
be crazy about.. .对....着迷 have a gift for. ....天赋
be interested in... .对....感兴趣 be in the lead处于领先地位
knowledgeable知识渊博的 think highly o... .对....评价很高
be remembered as...被后人誉.为.... be regarded as..被当......
be respected by..受....尊微 devote one's life timeto.倾注毕生精力
live in...居住在....be born in..出生...... spent one' s childhood in... ...过童年
live a happy/busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活
三．例题讲解
“战‘疫’之路，大道不孤!”在新冠肺炎疫情的防控阻击战中，有无数人坚守岗位，默默付出。他们用平凡造就一个国家的伟大。
某英文网站正在开展以“我心中的英雄”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈抗击疫情(fight coronavirus)期间，你心中的英雄是谁，他(她)做了什么，以及你从他(她)身上学到了什么
提示词语:brave, serve, risk one's life, volunteer, make contributions(贡献)to
提示问题: Who is the hero in your heart
What did he/she do
What have you learned from him/her
The Hero in My Heart
Many ordinary people are regarded as heroes in fighting coronavirus.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文：
Many ordinary people are regarded as heroes in fighting coronavirus. For me, my hero is my father.
My father is very kind and willing to help others. During the coronavirus figihting of our whole country, my father became a volunteer in our community, so he paid more attention and did more work for others than for our family. What did he do during that special time He helped to hand out food for our neighbours, and took everyone’s body temperature. One day I found him very tired, but he continued to work, and he told me that the rise and fall of a nation is the concer to every citizen. Therefor, he taught me it is important to help our country when it meets difficulties.
Becuase of my father, I not only have learned goodness but also been willing to help others in need. I consider my father as a hero because he really makes a good example for me.