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书面表达的写作技巧1
巧 用 连 接 词 系 列
要想使文章有整体性,连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词
表示罗列的增加
first,second,third,then/next,after that/ finally
for one thing...for another...,
On (the) one hand ....,on the other hand,
Besides/ What’s more / in addition / furthermore/ moreover/ another / also,
Especially/ in particular.
表示时间顺序
now,at present,recently,after,afterwards,after that,after a while ,in a few days,at first
in the beginning, to begin with,later, next,finally,immediately,soon ,suddenly,all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as,the moment,from now on,from then on, at the same time
meanwhile ,till,not...until, before, after, when. while
表示解释说明
now,in addition, for example,for instance,in this case,moreover, furthermore
in fact,actually
表示转折关系
but,however,while,though or otherwise,on the contrary,on the other hand,in contrast
despite,in spite of,even though,of course,after all. instead of
表并列关系
or,and ,also,too,not only。。。but also,as well as
both。。and,either。。。or,neither。。nor
表示因果关系
because,because of ,since,now that, thanks to。。。,due to。。。,therefore,
as a result,otherwise,so...that,such....that
表示条件关系
as long as,on condition that,if, unless
表示让步关系
though,although,as, even if,even though,whether...or....,however,whoever,whatever
whichever, wherever,whenever,no matter how ( who, what ,which , where ,when,whom)
表示举例
for example,for instance,such as....,take 。。。for example
表示比较
be similar to,similarly,the same as,in contrast,compared with....
just like ,just as
表示目的
for this reason,for this purpose, so that, in order to
so as to
表示强调
in deed,in fact, surely,certainly,no doubt,without any doubt,truly, obviously,above all
表示归纳概括
in a word, in short, in brief, On the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as l know ,as we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion
1.in order to
为了实现他的梦想,他学习非常努力。
2. in order that
她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就续。
3.so.that
他们太累了,除了什伸懒腰什么都做不了了。
掌握常用句型
He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.
She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock.
They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.
4. such...that
天气非常冷,以致于街上一个人都没有。
It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.
5. would rather do...than do
他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。
He prefers making speeches after careful preparation.
6. prefer doing to doing
他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。
He would rather listen to others than talk himself.
You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.
7. prefer to do... rather than do
比起女人,男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。
Compared with women, men alway sprefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping.
8. not only...but also
在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程,而且还获得了博士学位。
In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor's degree.
9. either...or
如果考试过关,你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。
The child is active and funny as well.
10. neither...nor
他是一个无聊的人,既不爱娱乐,也不爱读书。
He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor reading.
11. as well as
他善良又乐于助人。
He was kind as well as helpful.
12....as well
这个小孩活泼又可爱。
What we do will make the world more beautiful.
13. One...the other
你看见桌子上有两只笔吗?一支是红色的,另一支是黑色的。
Have you seen two pens on the desk One is red, the other is black.
14. Some...others
每个人都很忙,有些在读书,有些在写作。
Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing.
15. make...+adj./n.
我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。
18. It is no use (good) doing...
假装不懂规则是行不通的。
It's no use pretending that you didn't know the rules.
17. as if
他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。
He talks a lot as if he knows everything.
16. not...until
.直到他告诉我发生的事,我才了解真相。
I didn't know the truth until she told me what happened
It was 8 o'clock when I got to the cinema.
19. find it+ adj.+ to do...
我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。
I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.
20. It is+ time since...
我已经有两年没见他了。
It is two years since I last met him.
21. It is+ time when...
我到电影院时已经八点钟了。
It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers
22. It is+ time before...
不久我们就会再见面的。
It won't be long before we can meet again.
23. It is...that...
我最珍视的是友谊。
It is friendship that I value best.
24. It is+ n./adj.+ that/to do...
每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机
练习1
近年来,各地媒体不断推出各种选秀节目,电视选秀非常流行,同时不少年轻人,甚至高中生也参加了这类节目。请以“电视选秀节目(TV talent show)之利弊”为主题,用英文写一篇100个词左右的短文。要点如下:
1.简述电视选秀节目的现状;
2.你对选秀节目利弊的看法并说明你的理由。
With different media across China coming up with various show, TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years.Meanwhile, it is not uncommon to see many young people, even high school students, attend these shows.
As far as I am concerned, TV talent show is like a double-edged sword, which can do us both good and harm. On the one hand, these shows can provide precious opportunities for the young to express themselves and to perform their talents of singing, dancing and so on. On the other hand, they may also mislead the youth and make them believe that they can make easy money or become famous overnight, ignoring the fact of "No pains, no gains."
Therefore, it is of vital importance for us, especially young people and their parents, to think twice before attending them.
答案
分析:本文为利弊型作文,要求对电视选秀节目进行利弊分析,本文要点已给出但是要做适当的扩展,写作内容包括:简述电视选秀节目的现状,选秀节目的利弊,自己对电视选秀节目的看法,注意使用连接词,使作文内容连贯,注意写作的时态,时态用一般现在时,人称用第三人称.
Thank you