Unit 6 When was it invented?Review and Writing课件 (共18张PPT)

(共18张PPT)
Unit 6 When was it invented
Review and Writing
1885
1927
1876
1971
Review
P41
Review
seeing in the dark
changing the style of the shoes
serving really cold ice-cream
in our daily lives/Whitcomb Judson/1893
P42
Review
Shen Nong
about5000 years ago
One day Shen Nong was boiling drinking water over an open fire. Some leaves from a tea plant…
P43
eat
1863
potato chips
George Crum
Review
P45
December 21st,1891
basketball
do sports
James Naismith
Review
P46
书面表达
旗袍，中国和世界华人女性的传统服装。虽说它的起源备受争议，但它仍然是中国悠久文化的象征。据说它起源于春秋战国时期的深衣，因为清朝时期的满人也被称为旗人，所以有了旗袍之称。它盛行于20世纪30，40年代，现在世界上越来越多的人喜欢穿旗袍。
参考词汇：
cheongsam (旗袍 ),the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States(春秋战国时期)，Qing Dynasty(清朝)，Shenyi(深衣)
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实校名与姓名。
2.80词左右
Writing
说明文
审题拟题
审题裁
抓题眼
拟题目
布局整理
列提纲
分三段
增美感
修改成文
检查修改
整洁规范
Writing
（如果需要）
Paragraph 1(开好头）
采用多种句式开篇，点明主题——我们要说明的是“旗袍的发展史”。
(本段末可考虑是否书写衔接句)
精彩开头：
1. In recent years , more and more people like cheongsams. Do you know why they like them and how they were invented Here is the information about them.
2.As we know, cheongsams are traditional Chinese clothes. They are a symbol of Chinese culture. So we should know the history of them.
Paragraph 2（主体段）
要充分体现说明文“说” 的特点，不仅要说明发明时间（when），发明人(inventor)，发明过程(how)，原材料（material）,发明物的用途(use)。而且要说的有逻辑性，层次性。
表顺序：
First/Firstly
Second/Secondly
And then/Finally/In the end
表补充：
Besides
What’s more
表转折：
However
On the one hand
On the other hand
表因果：
Because
Therefore
As a result
表举例：
For example+句子
Such as+ n./doing
表陈述事实：
In fact
Actually
表达自己观点：
As far as I know
In my opinion
表总结：
In a word
In short
All in all
表换一种方式表达：In other words
增加美感的过渡词
Paragraph 3(结尾段)
要进行总结、提升、呼应开头、点题并体现——“中国旗袍长盛不衰” 或发出号召与倡议
精彩结尾：
1.Cheongsams are so beautiful .I hope we all like them and wear them. At the same time we can spread the culture of China.
2.The cheongsam not only shows the beauty of women but also has special meanings, so more and more people like it ,even the foreigners.
题目：The traditional Chinese clothes
—— cheongsams
Paragraph 1 : In recent years , more and more people like cheongsams …(点明主旨，引起下文)
Paragraph 2： Firstly ,we know cheongsams are a kind of dress…(按一定的逻辑顺序详细叙述相关信息)
Paragraph 3：In my opinion, we Chinese should often wear cheongsams…(总结全文，升华主题)
Writing Time
Showing Time
1. 复习本单元词汇,短语及重点句子。
2. Think of something that you do not like to do or you can’t do. Then think of an invention that could help you. Write it down.
Thank you !