Unit5 Seasons(第3课时) 课件（共14张PPT）

(共14张PPT)
Writing time
like
I …at…
I’m …
have
I have a basketball.
Me, too!
Let’s play
...
Picture books
Q: What do you know from the picture
Nicole
live in a tree
a bunny
Let’s look
Let’s enjoy more
What is this picture book about
What is this picture book about
a bunny
do different things
four seasons
Let’s think
——What can she do in four seasons
Let’s say
——She can… in …
请你加入一些具体信息，让表达更丰富。
Let’s add more
pick flowers
catch butterflies
Let’s think
If you were Nicole, what else can you say
如果你是Nicole，你还可以说什么？
spring
activities





I like spring because …
Let’s think
Is this writing complete now
现在这篇作文完整了吗？
Beginning （开头）
Body （主要内容）
Ending （结尾）
请帮文章加一个特别的结尾吧！
Let’s compare
Writing Criteria 写作标准
Score分值
1. On topic. 聚焦主题。
2. No mistakes. 规范准确。
3. Use conjunctions. 使用连词。
4. Have a beginning &ending. 有头有尾。
6. Good words and sentences. 好词好句。
1
4
1
1
1
5. More information. 更多信息。
2
Which one is better Why
I like spring best.
I like to pick flowers.
I like to catch butterflies.
你觉得哪篇文章写得更好呢？为什么？
…
I like ________ best.
It’s … / I like… / I can …
…
Let’s write
Which season do you like best Why
你最喜欢哪个季节？为什么？
1.Work in groups, choose one to mark.
4人一组，选择一张，对照评价表，共同评价打分。
2.Then modify the writing together.
在评价的基础上共同修改作文。
Let’s check