2022届高考英语二轮复习：历险类阅读续写 学案
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地震救人
读后续写
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头句子，续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift(轮班), I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.
I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed myself. As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.
Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.
Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.
参考答案：
However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. ①The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. ②However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble(瓦砾) from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly,③we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. ④Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.
Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. ①My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. ②Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. ③It was our teamwork that made a difference. ④I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.
第一段:医生鼓励被困的护士保持冷静，与此同时，我们集中力量清理困住她的尸体的砖块和瓦砾。②然而,有时候我们面临下降的碎石(瓦砾)时间,尽管我们继续。慢慢地，我们把护士从瓦砾中抬了出来。医生让护士躺在他的背上，在我们的帮助下走出了大楼。最后，包括病人、护士和医生在内的所有人都在安全的地方。
我美丽的工作场所躺在那里，面目全非，甚至有些已成废墟。一看到这个，我感到胸口有一种重量。突然，微风在我周围飞舞，这让我想起了所有在我们的帮助下幸存下来的人。是我们的团队合作起了作用。我坚信，在未来的某一天，我的工作场所会重新焕发生机，我们会继续合作，拯救更多的病人。
本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。
2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建
[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）
巨石岩迷路
I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing(穿雪鞋行走) before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed（钉住） to the trees and the snow had been packed down（压实） by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints（足迹）, which I recognized from my field guide.
An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up（抬头凝视）. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.
“Let’s head back,” Dad said.
I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw（爪子） marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone ” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed（翻转） direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldn’t just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldn’t find my way back I started tearing through the woods in a panic.
Paragraph 2:
“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint（微弱的） light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey Are you OK ” Dad’s voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与兄弟和爸爸去看巨人岩，天色逐渐晚了，作者跟着一组不认识的动物脚印和亲人走散了，十分慌张。幸好最后和父亲团聚了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我来到了可以右转或直走的地方。”可知，第一段可描写作者走散后的心理活动以及反应。
②由第二段首句内容“‘停下来想一想，’我对自己说，一边又想象着地图。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何和家人团聚的。
2.续写线索：继续前行——改变方向——慌张——想象地图——看到家人
3.词汇激活
行为类①继续前进：walk on/move on②辨别：tell/distinguish③大叫：shout/yell
情绪类①慌乱地：in a panic/flurriedly②焦急的：urgent/anxious
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (运用了what引导宾语从句)转身：turn around /turn back 冲进：rush into /dash into
情绪类 绝望地：desperately / hopelessly 大哭：break into tears / burst out crying
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (运用了when引导时间状语从
[高分句型2] It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (运用了which引导定语从句)
河中躲鲨鱼
A Narrow Escape
A feeling of terror came over ten-year-old Chet Roscow.He had been swimming in the A Narrow Escape
Matawan River by himself. But he had the idea that someone or something was watching him.
And then he saw a large gray fin(鳍)slicing through the water like a knife. What was that Could it be a shark That was impossible! Elm Hills was miles and miles from the ocean. How could a shark find its way into this little river
But now Chet could see it coming toward him.The shark was bigger than Chet himself. The black eyes staring up through the water-killer eyes.
Chet dived toward the shore, pounding through the water and kicking with all his might. His feet touched the bottom. He was running now, looking over his shoulder. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open and its white teeth shining in its blooded mouth.Those killer eyes stared at Chet. And then, with a flick of its tail, the shark pushed itself backward into the water, and disappeared down the river.
Chet rose to his knees and threw up. When he could stand, he suddenly noticed his fiends,Sid,Monty and Dewey, standing on the dock(码头).Before he could stop them,they had dived into the water.
"Get out of the water!"he screamed."Get out! Get out now!"
He thundered down the path and onto the dock."You have to get out! There's a shark!"
"You hear that,Monty " Sid said."There's a shark in the river! We'd better get out."
Sid lifted himself up on the dock and took a running leap off the edge of the dock.He jumped into the river with such an enormous splash that Chet got thoroughly wet. Monty and Dewey dived in after him.
"Oh shaaaaaaa-rrrrrrrk!"Sid called through cupped hands."Here, shark! Come and get us!"
They laughed, and Chet stood there, totally helpless.
参考答案
But then he noticed Sid, strangely still in the river. His face had gone white. His mouth was open, like he was going to scream. Chet's insides turned to jelly when he saw the shining fin moving slowly through the water. "Hurry!" Chet cried "Get out!" Monty and Dewey flew out of the water. But Sid seemed stuck. The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing. They all screamed at Sid, but Sid still didn't move. The shark was getting closer.
Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. He swam as fast as he could toward Sid, grabbed hold of Sid's arm and pulled him. Monty and Dewey were at the edge of the dock, reaching down for them. Sid lifted himself up and Chet planted his hands on the dock. Chet was almost out of the water when something caught his leg "It's got my leg!" Chet screamed. “Pull!" Sid shouted. They pulled until Chet's leg finally came free! Chet was injured, but to his relief, his friends were safe.
【解析】
【译文】但后来他注意到希德，奇怪的是他还在河里。他的脸变白了。他的嘴张着，好像要尖叫似的。当切特看到闪闪发光的鳍在水中缓慢移动时，他的内脏变成了果冻。“快点！”切特喊道：“滚开！”蒙蒂和杜威从水里飞了出来。但希德似乎被困住了。鲨鱼现在离水面更近了，它的黑眼睛几乎在发光。他们都冲着希德尖叫，但希德还是一动不动。鲨鱼越来越近了。
还没来得及思考，切特就在水里，把蒙蒂和杜威留在了码头上。他尽可能快地游向希德，抓住希德的胳膊，把他拉了起来。蒙蒂和杜威站在码头边，伸手去抓他们。希德站起来，切特把手放在码头上。切特快要出水时，有什么东西抓住了他的腿：“它抓住了我的腿！”切特尖叫起来。“拉！”希德喊道。他们一直拉，直到切特的腿终于自由了！切特受了伤，但让他松了一口气的是，他的朋友们安全了。
【导语】
本文以鲨鱼为线索展开，讲述了十岁的切特·罗斯科在一条狭窄的通道里游泳时遇到鲨鱼并躲避鲨鱼，最后和朋友们成功脱险的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但这时他注意到希德，奇怪的是，他还呆在河里。”可知，第一段可描写希德在河里时的一些动作和状态以及鲨鱼正在逼近的危险境况。
②由第二段首句内容“切特还没来得及思考，就已经下水了，把蒙提和杜威留在了码头上。”可知，第二段可描写切特对希德的营救过程和遇到的危险状况。
2.续写线索：游泳——遇鲨鱼——躲鲨鱼——提醒朋友——救朋友——朋友得救
3.词汇激活
行为类①变成：turn to/become②出去：get out/go out③抓住：grab/catch
情绪类①尖叫、呼喊：scream/shriek/cry②宽慰、安慰：relief/comfort
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing.【高分句型2】Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词作状语)
旅途中遇到狼
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
Paragraph 1
The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.
Paragraph 2
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
Possible versions:
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again.
第1段：
汽车突然停在他面前。麦克跳下自行车，冲到车门口。但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就跳了起来，开始攻击。幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了Mac。看到狼回来了，保罗迅速打开了门，那个吓坏了的人立刻爬进了车里，重重地关上了门。贝基从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车旁边，好像是在杀戮。不久之后，那只动物就跑掉了。
第2段：
几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人也来了。麦克下车，拥抱了他的朋友们。“这真的是一场噩梦，我以为我要死了，”麦克用颤抖的声音说，眼里噙着泪水。对他来说，生活真是太美丽了。在感激地与保罗和贝基告别后，这三人继续了他们的旅行，同意再也不分开了。(续写词数：158)
山洞遇险
例1：山洞遇险
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home.
After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.
As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.
【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.
于是我们摸索着朝喊声传来的方向走去。尽管我们很害怕，但我们还是下定决心去寻找哈利。在一片漆黑的环境中，我们几乎什么也看不见，所以我们只好用全身的力气摸索着去找哈利。慢慢地小心翼翼地向前走，我们紧紧地握着彼此的手，不让彼此分开。随着那声音越来越近，我们意识到马上就会遇见哈利。幸运的是，当我们发现哈利坐在地上时，我们松了一口气。
After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan.
在我们和哈里重聚后，我们试图找到出去的路。我们毫不犹豫地决定寻找我们以前留下的痕迹。“我明白了!”哈利尖叫。我们迅速抬头，很容易就发现了这些清晰的标记。正是在这些痕迹的帮助下，我们迅速找到了出口。当我们走出洞穴时，我们知道我们得救了。从这次经历中，我们了解到，在没有一个完全详细的计划的情况下探索未知的单词是危险的。
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。
【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。
②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。
2.续写线索：听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受
3. 词类激活行为类①寻找：hunt for/search for/ find②大叫：scream/cry
③接近：approach/draw near情感类①小心：cautious/ careful②害怕：scared/ frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.(运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构)
[高分句型2]. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.(运用了强结构)
铁轨逃生
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home（回家的路上） with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track（铁轨）. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle（哨子）. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment（路堤）, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down（往下跑）. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped（绊倒） and fell on the track, scattering（分散） her mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked（惊慌） on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn（吹号角） with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.____
【答案】Para 1:
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(姐姐的反应） Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. （妹妹的反应）Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers.（火车靠近，姐姐护住妹妹）
Para 2:
The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. （司机心情） He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks.（动作和姐妹的心情） Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home.What a narrow escape!（结局回家+升华）
词汇行为类
①靠近：approach/get close ②捡起：collect/pick up ③回家：walk back home/get back home
词汇情绪类①快乐：joy/happiness ②害怕：frightened/scared
高级句式 She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现在分词作状语)
高级句式 Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装)
暴风雪遇险
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 8 a.m. Kathy, a 25-year-old nurse, had just finished a 12-hour night shift at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along the highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert（预警）, the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour,” she says.
Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited.
After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy's car. She couldn't see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, "a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks".
Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. "No, ma'am,” he answered. “You're not going anywhere.”
As it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted her brother Cris, telling him to drive his snowmobiling buddy to get to the highway and find her.
As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. "I was the first person they'd seen in six hours." He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, "Nobody's coming and I can't take you."
Near 10 p.m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder (紧急停车带)and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.
As they headed home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch (浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough (水槽). Instead of coming out of the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
参考答案：1．One possible version:
At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off her coat and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, "I made a terrible mistake. But for others' help, I couldn't have been home for the night." When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because that day's experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位25岁的护士凯西在下班回家，突然遇到了暴风雪，被困路途，后来弟弟过来救援，但也陷入深槽，凯西想到了一个好主意。她脱下外套，把它烧了。后来人们过来营救，最后他们成功回到家里。感悟自己以后也会尽一切努力帮助别人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，他们不得不采取行动并离开。”可知，第一段可描写作者想方设法脱离困境的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“凯西到家时，她母亲正在等她。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家向妈妈述说事情的经过，感悟自己以后也需要帮助别人的过程。
2.续写线索：陷入——求助——感谢——到家——回忆——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类①.采取行动：take action/do the deed/take steps②.回答：answer/respond/reply
③.帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①.相信的：be convinced/ believable
②.可怕的：terrible/feared/scared
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. She asked Kathy what had happened.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句）
暴风雪遇险
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 8 a.m. Kathy, a 25-year-old nurse, had just finished a 12-hour night shift at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along the highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert（预警）, the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour,” she says.
Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited.
After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy's car. She couldn't see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, "a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks".
Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. "No, ma'am,” he answered. “You're not going anywhere.”
As it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted her brother Cris, telling him to drive his snowmobiling buddy to get to the highway and find her.
As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. "I was the first person they'd seen in six hours." He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, "Nobody's coming and I can't take you."
Near 10 p.m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder (紧急停车带)and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.
As they headed home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch (浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough (水槽). Instead of coming out of the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
参考答案：1．One possible version:
At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off her coat and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, "I made a terrible mistake. But for others' help, I couldn't have been home for the night." When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because that day's experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位25岁的护士凯西在下班回家，突然遇到了暴风雪，被困路途，后来弟弟过来救援，但也陷入深槽，凯西想到了一个好主意。她脱下外套，把它烧了。后来人们过来营救，最后他们成功回到家里。感悟自己以后也会尽一切努力帮助别人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，他们不得不采取行动并离开。”可知，第一段可描写作者想方设法脱离困境的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“凯西到家时，她母亲正在等她。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家向妈妈述说事情的经过，感悟自己以后也需要帮助别人的过程。
2.续写线索：陷入——求助——感谢——到家——回忆——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类①.采取行动：take action/do the deed/take steps②.回答：answer/respond/reply
③.帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①.相信的：be convinced/ believable
②.可怕的：terrible/feared/scared
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. She asked Kathy what had happened.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句）
读后续写
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头句子，续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift(轮班), I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.
I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed myself. As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.
Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.
Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.
参考答案：
However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. ①The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. ②However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble(瓦砾) from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly,③we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. ④Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.
Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. ①My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. ②Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. ③It was our teamwork that made a difference. ④I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.
第一段:医生鼓励被困的护士保持冷静，与此同时，我们集中力量清理困住她的尸体的砖块和瓦砾。②然而,有时候我们面临下降的碎石(瓦砾)时间,尽管我们继续。慢慢地，我们把护士从瓦砾中抬了出来。医生让护士躺在他的背上，在我们的帮助下走出了大楼。最后，包括病人、护士和医生在内的所有人都在安全的地方。
我美丽的工作场所躺在那里，面目全非，甚至有些已成废墟。一看到这个，我感到胸口有一种重量。突然，微风在我周围飞舞，这让我想起了所有在我们的帮助下幸存下来的人。是我们的团队合作起了作用。我坚信，在未来的某一天，我的工作场所会重新焕发生机，我们会继续合作，拯救更多的病人。
本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。
2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建
[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）
巨石岩迷路
I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing(穿雪鞋行走) before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed（钉住） to the trees and the snow had been packed down（压实） by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints（足迹）, which I recognized from my field guide.
An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up（抬头凝视）. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.
“Let’s head back,” Dad said.
I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw（爪子） marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone ” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed（翻转） direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldn’t just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldn’t find my way back I started tearing through the woods in a panic.
Paragraph 2:
“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint（微弱的） light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey Are you OK ” Dad’s voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与兄弟和爸爸去看巨人岩，天色逐渐晚了，作者跟着一组不认识的动物脚印和亲人走散了，十分慌张。幸好最后和父亲团聚了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我来到了可以右转或直走的地方。”可知，第一段可描写作者走散后的心理活动以及反应。
②由第二段首句内容“‘停下来想一想，’我对自己说，一边又想象着地图。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何和家人团聚的。
2.续写线索：继续前行——改变方向——慌张——想象地图——看到家人
3.词汇激活
行为类①继续前进：walk on/move on②辨别：tell/distinguish③大叫：shout/yell
情绪类①慌乱地：in a panic/flurriedly②焦急的：urgent/anxious
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (运用了what引导宾语从句)转身：turn around /turn back 冲进：rush into /dash into
情绪类 绝望地：desperately / hopelessly 大哭：break into tears / burst out crying
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (运用了when引导时间状语从
[高分句型2] It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (运用了which引导定语从句)
河中躲鲨鱼
A Narrow Escape
A feeling of terror came over ten-year-old Chet Roscow.He had been swimming in the A Narrow Escape
Matawan River by himself. But he had the idea that someone or something was watching him.
And then he saw a large gray fin(鳍)slicing through the water like a knife. What was that Could it be a shark That was impossible! Elm Hills was miles and miles from the ocean. How could a shark find its way into this little river
But now Chet could see it coming toward him.The shark was bigger than Chet himself. The black eyes staring up through the water-killer eyes.
Chet dived toward the shore, pounding through the water and kicking with all his might. His feet touched the bottom. He was running now, looking over his shoulder. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open and its white teeth shining in its blooded mouth.Those killer eyes stared at Chet. And then, with a flick of its tail, the shark pushed itself backward into the water, and disappeared down the river.
Chet rose to his knees and threw up. When he could stand, he suddenly noticed his fiends,Sid,Monty and Dewey, standing on the dock(码头).Before he could stop them,they had dived into the water.
"Get out of the water!"he screamed."Get out! Get out now!"
He thundered down the path and onto the dock."You have to get out! There's a shark!"
"You hear that,Monty " Sid said."There's a shark in the river! We'd better get out."
Sid lifted himself up on the dock and took a running leap off the edge of the dock.He jumped into the river with such an enormous splash that Chet got thoroughly wet. Monty and Dewey dived in after him.
"Oh shaaaaaaa-rrrrrrrk!"Sid called through cupped hands."Here, shark! Come and get us!"
They laughed, and Chet stood there, totally helpless.
参考答案
But then he noticed Sid, strangely still in the river. His face had gone white. His mouth was open, like he was going to scream. Chet's insides turned to jelly when he saw the shining fin moving slowly through the water. "Hurry!" Chet cried "Get out!" Monty and Dewey flew out of the water. But Sid seemed stuck. The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing. They all screamed at Sid, but Sid still didn't move. The shark was getting closer.
Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. He swam as fast as he could toward Sid, grabbed hold of Sid's arm and pulled him. Monty and Dewey were at the edge of the dock, reaching down for them. Sid lifted himself up and Chet planted his hands on the dock. Chet was almost out of the water when something caught his leg "It's got my leg!" Chet screamed. “Pull!" Sid shouted. They pulled until Chet's leg finally came free! Chet was injured, but to his relief, his friends were safe.
【解析】
【译文】但后来他注意到希德，奇怪的是他还在河里。他的脸变白了。他的嘴张着，好像要尖叫似的。当切特看到闪闪发光的鳍在水中缓慢移动时，他的内脏变成了果冻。“快点！”切特喊道：“滚开！”蒙蒂和杜威从水里飞了出来。但希德似乎被困住了。鲨鱼现在离水面更近了，它的黑眼睛几乎在发光。他们都冲着希德尖叫，但希德还是一动不动。鲨鱼越来越近了。
还没来得及思考，切特就在水里，把蒙蒂和杜威留在了码头上。他尽可能快地游向希德，抓住希德的胳膊，把他拉了起来。蒙蒂和杜威站在码头边，伸手去抓他们。希德站起来，切特把手放在码头上。切特快要出水时，有什么东西抓住了他的腿：“它抓住了我的腿！”切特尖叫起来。“拉！”希德喊道。他们一直拉，直到切特的腿终于自由了！切特受了伤，但让他松了一口气的是，他的朋友们安全了。
【导语】
本文以鲨鱼为线索展开，讲述了十岁的切特·罗斯科在一条狭窄的通道里游泳时遇到鲨鱼并躲避鲨鱼，最后和朋友们成功脱险的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但这时他注意到希德，奇怪的是，他还呆在河里。”可知，第一段可描写希德在河里时的一些动作和状态以及鲨鱼正在逼近的危险境况。
②由第二段首句内容“切特还没来得及思考，就已经下水了，把蒙提和杜威留在了码头上。”可知，第二段可描写切特对希德的营救过程和遇到的危险状况。
2.续写线索：游泳——遇鲨鱼——躲鲨鱼——提醒朋友——救朋友——朋友得救
3.词汇激活
行为类①变成：turn to/become②出去：get out/go out③抓住：grab/catch
情绪类①尖叫、呼喊：scream/shriek/cry②宽慰、安慰：relief/comfort
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing.【高分句型2】Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词作状语)
旅途中遇到狼
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
Paragraph 1
The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.
Paragraph 2
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
Possible versions:
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again.
第1段：
汽车突然停在他面前。麦克跳下自行车，冲到车门口。但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就跳了起来，开始攻击。幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了Mac。看到狼回来了，保罗迅速打开了门，那个吓坏了的人立刻爬进了车里，重重地关上了门。贝基从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车旁边，好像是在杀戮。不久之后，那只动物就跑掉了。
第2段：
几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人也来了。麦克下车，拥抱了他的朋友们。“这真的是一场噩梦，我以为我要死了，”麦克用颤抖的声音说，眼里噙着泪水。对他来说，生活真是太美丽了。在感激地与保罗和贝基告别后，这三人继续了他们的旅行，同意再也不分开了。(续写词数：158)
山洞遇险
例1：山洞遇险
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home.
After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.
As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.
【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.
于是我们摸索着朝喊声传来的方向走去。尽管我们很害怕，但我们还是下定决心去寻找哈利。在一片漆黑的环境中，我们几乎什么也看不见，所以我们只好用全身的力气摸索着去找哈利。慢慢地小心翼翼地向前走，我们紧紧地握着彼此的手，不让彼此分开。随着那声音越来越近，我们意识到马上就会遇见哈利。幸运的是，当我们发现哈利坐在地上时，我们松了一口气。
After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan.
在我们和哈里重聚后，我们试图找到出去的路。我们毫不犹豫地决定寻找我们以前留下的痕迹。“我明白了!”哈利尖叫。我们迅速抬头，很容易就发现了这些清晰的标记。正是在这些痕迹的帮助下，我们迅速找到了出口。当我们走出洞穴时，我们知道我们得救了。从这次经历中，我们了解到，在没有一个完全详细的计划的情况下探索未知的单词是危险的。
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。
【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。
②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。
2.续写线索：听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受
3. 词类激活行为类①寻找：hunt for/search for/ find②大叫：scream/cry
③接近：approach/draw near情感类①小心：cautious/ careful②害怕：scared/ frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.(运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构)
[高分句型2]. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.(运用了强结构)
铁轨逃生
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home（回家的路上） with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track（铁轨）. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle（哨子）. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment（路堤）, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down（往下跑）. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped（绊倒） and fell on the track, scattering（分散） her mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked（惊慌） on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn（吹号角） with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.____
【答案】Para 1:
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(姐姐的反应） Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. （妹妹的反应）Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers.（火车靠近，姐姐护住妹妹）
Para 2:
The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. （司机心情） He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks.（动作和姐妹的心情） Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home.What a narrow escape!（结局回家+升华）
词汇行为类
①靠近：approach/get close ②捡起：collect/pick up ③回家：walk back home/get back home
词汇情绪类①快乐：joy/happiness ②害怕：frightened/scared
高级句式 She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现在分词作状语)
高级句式 Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装)
暴风雪遇险
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 8 a.m. Kathy, a 25-year-old nurse, had just finished a 12-hour night shift at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along the highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert（预警）, the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour,” she says.
Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited.
After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy's car. She couldn't see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, "a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks".
Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. "No, ma'am,” he answered. “You're not going anywhere.”
As it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted her brother Cris, telling him to drive his snowmobiling buddy to get to the highway and find her.
As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. "I was the first person they'd seen in six hours." He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, "Nobody's coming and I can't take you."
Near 10 p.m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder (紧急停车带)and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.
As they headed home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch (浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough (水槽). Instead of coming out of the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
参考答案：1．One possible version:
At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off her coat and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, "I made a terrible mistake. But for others' help, I couldn't have been home for the night." When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because that day's experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位25岁的护士凯西在下班回家，突然遇到了暴风雪，被困路途，后来弟弟过来救援，但也陷入深槽，凯西想到了一个好主意。她脱下外套，把它烧了。后来人们过来营救，最后他们成功回到家里。感悟自己以后也会尽一切努力帮助别人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，他们不得不采取行动并离开。”可知，第一段可描写作者想方设法脱离困境的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“凯西到家时，她母亲正在等她。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家向妈妈述说事情的经过，感悟自己以后也需要帮助别人的过程。
2.续写线索：陷入——求助——感谢——到家——回忆——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类①.采取行动：take action/do the deed/take steps②.回答：answer/respond/reply
③.帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①.相信的：be convinced/ believable
②.可怕的：terrible/feared/scared
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. She asked Kathy what had happened.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句）
暴风雪遇险
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 8 a.m. Kathy, a 25-year-old nurse, had just finished a 12-hour night shift at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along the highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert（预警）, the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour,” she says.
Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited.
After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy's car. She couldn't see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, "a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks".
Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. "No, ma'am,” he answered. “You're not going anywhere.”
As it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted her brother Cris, telling him to drive his snowmobiling buddy to get to the highway and find her.
As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. "I was the first person they'd seen in six hours." He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, "Nobody's coming and I can't take you."
Near 10 p.m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder (紧急停车带)and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.
As they headed home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch (浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough (水槽). Instead of coming out of the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
参考答案：1．One possible version:
At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off her coat and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, "I made a terrible mistake. But for others' help, I couldn't have been home for the night." When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because that day's experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位25岁的护士凯西在下班回家，突然遇到了暴风雪，被困路途，后来弟弟过来救援，但也陷入深槽，凯西想到了一个好主意。她脱下外套，把它烧了。后来人们过来营救，最后他们成功回到家里。感悟自己以后也会尽一切努力帮助别人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，他们不得不采取行动并离开。”可知，第一段可描写作者想方设法脱离困境的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“凯西到家时，她母亲正在等她。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家向妈妈述说事情的经过，感悟自己以后也需要帮助别人的过程。
2.续写线索：陷入——求助——感谢——到家——回忆——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类①.采取行动：take action/do the deed/take steps②.回答：answer/respond/reply
③.帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①.相信的：be convinced/ believable
②.可怕的：terrible/feared/scared
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They began to worry and were convinced that they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. She asked Kathy what had happened.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句）