2022届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写之动作、心理、环境、主旨描写讲义

读后续写之动作描写
第一、肢体动作描写
1.有关hand的动作描写
take one’s hand 牵某人的手reach for one’s hand 伸手抓住某人
hold hands 手拉手in one’s hand 在手里with both hands 用双手
shake one’s hand 握手hold out a hand 伸出手raise one’s hands 举手
slide one’s hands into将手插进......spread one’s hand 摊开双手
rub one’s hands together使劲搓着双手rub [r b] vt. 擦；摩擦
one’s hands shake/tremble 某人的手颤抖着
catch/ hold of one’s arm 抓住某人的手臂
cup one’s hand over 捂住......with one’s head in one’s hands双手抱着......
hand in hand 手拉手put one’s hands to one’s cheeks 用双手捂住脸
练习：
1.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.
2.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
He reached for her hand and held it tightly.
3.他们手拉手并肩走着。
They walked along, holding hands.
4.他手里拿着钥匙。
He held the key in his hand.
5.他双手抓着绳子。
He grasped the rope with both hands.
6.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.
7.她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。
She smiled and held out a hand in welcome.
8.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。
She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.
9.几个学生举手回答问题。
Several students raised their hands to answer the question.
10.他悄悄地将手插进口袋里。
He slid his hands into his pockets.
11.她耸耸肩，摊开双手说：“我只能告诉你这么多了。”
She shrugged and spread her hands."That's all I can tell you."
12.她一边颤抖，一边使劲搓着双手。
She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.
13.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。
Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.
14.一只有力的手伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。
A strong hand reached out and caught/ hold of her arm.
15.我用手捂住电话，免得他们听到我的话。
I cupped my hand over the phone so they couldn't hear me.
16.他双手抱着坐着。
He sat with his head in his hands.
17.他们手拉手沿着小路走。
They walked hand in hand along the path.
第二、有关finger的动作描写
raise a warning finger 举起一个手指以示警告
raise/hold up a finger to one’s lip 把一根手指举到某人唇边
wag/wave one’s finger 某人摇着手指
wag v.（动物尾巴）来回摇摆；来回摇动（竖立的手指）
1.老师举起一个手指以示警告，我们停止了交谈。
The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.
2.她把一根手指举到唇边，要求肃静。
She raised/held up a finger to her lip to ask for silence.
3.“这些都不是！”老师摇着手指喊道。
"None of that!" cried the teacher, wagging/waving her finger.
4.我把手指蘸着酱汁舔了舔。
I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it.
第三、有关arm的动词描写
wave one’s arms 挥动某人的双臂with crossed arms 双臂交叉
fold one’s arms 某人双臂交叉hold out/open one’s arms 某人伸出/张开双臂
catch /grab one’s arm 抓住某人的胳膊take one’s arm 挽住某人的胳膊
arm in arm 手挽手put/throw one’s arms around sb. 搂住某人
pull sb. into one’s arms 拉某人进怀
1.他向前跑着，挥动着双臂。
He was running forward, waving his arms.
2.他站在那里，双臂交叉，看上去很生气。
He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.
3.她双臂交叉，盯着他。
She folded her arms and stared at him.
4.他微笑着伸出/张开双臂。
He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile.
5.他伸出一只手抓住她的胳膊。
He reached out a hand and caught /grabbed her arm.
6.她走近父亲，挽住他的胳膊。
She moved closer to her father and took his arm.
7.他们手挽手走着。
They walked along arm in arm.
8.他跑到她跟前，搂住她。
He ran up to her and put/threw his arms around her.
9.他把她拉进怀里，吻了她。
He pulled her into his arms and kissed her.
第四、有关shoulder的动作描写
shrug one’s shoulders 耸耸肩 shrug [ r ɡ] vt. 耸肩
sit on one's shoulders 坐在某人的肩膀上
look (back) over one's shoulder 回头看
1.当我问他为什么这么做时，他只是耸耸肩。
When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.
2.那孩子坐在她父亲的肩膀上看游行经过。
The child sat on her father's shoulders to watch the parade go by.
3.他回头看了看
He looked (back) over his shoulder.
第五、有关heart的动作描写
with a heavy/sinking/broken heart 怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心
with a light heart 心情轻松地touch one’s heart 打动了某人的心
Pierce one’s heart 刺痛某人的心follow one’s heart跟随某人的心
pour out one’heart to sb. 向某人倾诉自己的心声
filled one’s heart 充满某人的内心one’s heart is breaking某人的心正在碎
one’s heart melted 心被融化了beating fast跳得很快
pound with excitement 激动得直跳thump with fear 因恐惧而砰砰作响
1.她怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心，看着他走了.
With a heavy/sinking/broken heart, she watched him go.
2.他心情轻松地出发了。
He set off with a light heart.
3.他的悲惨故事打动了她的心。
His sad story touched her heart.
4.她的话刺痛了我的心。
Her words pierced my heart.
5.只要跟随你的心，你就会快乐。
Just follow your heart and you'll be happy.
6.最后，他泪流满面，向她倾诉了自己的心声
Finally, he broke down in tears and poured out his heart to her.
7.松了一口气。
Relief filled his heart.
8.当我想起他们的悲伤时，我的心很痛。
My heart aches when I think of their sorrow.
9.他的心在里面慢慢地碎了。
Inside, his heart was slowly breaking.
10.他笑了笑，她的心融化了。
He smiled and her heart melted.
11.她的心跳得很快。
Her heart is beating fast.
12.她的心激动得直跳
Her heart was pounding with excitement.
13.他的心因恐惧而砰砰作响。
His heart thumped with fear.
第六、关于back的动作描写
bend one’s back 弯腰/驼背stretch one’s back 伸懒腰
lean one’s back against...... 把背靠在......lean [li n] v. 倾斜身体
on the back后背on one’s back 某人的背上
1.他走路时弯腰/驼背。
He bends his back when he walks.
2.他下床时打了个哈欠，伸了个懒腰。
He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.
3.他把背靠在吧台上。
He leaned his back against the bar.
4.他笑了笑，狠狠地打了我后背一巴掌。
He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on the back.
5.他们把他的手绑在背后。
They tied his hands behind his back.
6.他背着一个小孩。
He was carrying a small child on his back.
第七、有关foot的肢体动作描写
jump to one’s feet 跳起来tap/stamp one’s feet敲打/跺脚
drag one’s feet拖着脚put one’s feet up把脚抬起来
1.她一听到这个消息就跳了起来。
She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.
2.她不耐烦地敲打/跺脚。
She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.
3.她拖着脚，不情愿地跟着她的父母。
She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.
4.我的脚滑了，因为我正要投篮，我错过了球。
My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.
5.他回家后喜欢把脚抬起来看电视。
He likes to put his feet up and watch TV when he gets home.
第八、有关knee的动作描写
hug one’s knees抱着膝盖
on one’s knees 跪下
1.突然，她的膝盖弯曲/虚弱，她摔倒在地板上。
Suddenly her knees buckled/ weakened and she fell to the floor.
2.他抱着膝盖取暖。
He hugged his knees to keep warm.
3.他跪下乞求原谅。
He went/got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.
4.他坐在她父亲的膝盖上，给她读故事。
He sat on her father's knees while he read her a story.
5.他跪在地上，寻找丢失的戒指。
He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring.
读后续写之心理描写
第一、表示人物喜乐
1、既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and happiness
2、心情愉快in cheerful spirits
3、振作精神keep up one’s spirits
4、满意的表情a satisfied look
5、高兴地跳起来dance/jump for joy
6、流下幸福的泪水tears of happiness flowing down
7、感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged
8、精神高涨be in high spirit
（一）happy/ecstatic/radiant/warm开心、温暖
1.Eyes light up. 精神振奋、高兴
2.I beamed at(对...微笑) him, “Welcome back,...”
3.Her smile hit the deepest of my heart. 她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
4.Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy(欣喜若狂)
5.One’s eyes brim over with warm excited tears热泪盈眶
6.One evening, standing under a jeweled sky, I found myself thankful for all the hardships.
（二）喜乐
①The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
③ I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。
④ I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。
⑤ She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑥ Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑦Joy welled up inside her. 她心中涌起喜悦。
（三）关于兴奋的描写
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了
概括描述When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)
（四）关于高兴的描写
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
概括描述When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed (堆满笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
第二、表示愤怒
1、不断地抱怨complain constantly
2、气得满脸通红flame with anger
3、愁眉苦脸have a worried look
4、气冲冲地跑出房间run out of the room in a burst of anger
5、感到尴尬的feel embarrassed
6、感到困惑的feel puzzled/confused
7、感到沮丧的feel frustrated/depressed
8、感到恼怒的feel annoyed
9、感到泄气的feel discouraged
（一）Ashamed（羞愧）
1.My throat was dry and my face was burning up.
2.So ashamed was I that I could feel my face burning/the blood rush to my face.
3.I dropped my eyes.
（二）Angry生气
1.Charlie glowered(怒视) when I asked him to come forward.
2.The boss is up in arms about the company’s poor sales record in the past few months. (举起双臂，抖动两个拳头, 表示愤怒)
3.be red with anger/rage(愤怒); boil with rage; be filled with fury（愤怒）
4. He clenched his fists. 他紧握拳头. / She shook her fist at him (i.e. as an angry threatening gesture). 她向他挥动拳头.
5.My voice sounds like a growling（咆哮）, angry bear.
6.The reply of the man again fueled the foolish officer’s anger(火上浇油、更加愤怒).
7.His friend, whose patience had worn thin(耐心被消磨光了), phoned to complain.
8.My teacher’s eyes were shining with anger.
9.Anger engulfed吞噬 him like a wild beast.
10.She could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside her.如起泡一般变大
11.I had an undercurrent resentment （对...心怀不满）towards the new proposal.
12.She threw the invitation on the table with annoyance, murmuring...
13.Stamp one’s foot in anger 气得直跺脚
14.Run out of the room in a burst of anger怒气冲冲
15.He was sweating and burning with rage.
（三）愤怒
① His anger boiled over. 他的愤怒爆发了。
② He could hardly contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。
③ His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
④ He gave me a look of burning anger. 他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑤ He glared at me with burning eyes. 他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑥ His face clouded with anger. 他气得脸色阴沉。
（四）关于愤怒的描写
Sheldon感到非常生气。
概括描述Sheldon felt very angry.
1) Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming(砰地关上) the door furiously behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2) Filled with angre/fury(狂怒), Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
3) Boiling with rage(愤怒), Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
（五）关于羞愧的描写
她感到非常羞愧。
概括描述She felt ashamed.
1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)
2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)
3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)
第三、表示悲伤
1、强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss
2、陷入绝望fall into despair
3、悲痛欲绝cry one’s heart out
4、怀着沉重的心情with a heavy heart
5、沮丧的with a sinking heart
6、情绪低落be down in spirits
7、垂头丧气lose one’s spirits
8、意志消沉a broken spirit
悲伤
① He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
② She burst into tears and ran out of the room.
她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
③ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.
她掩面哭泣。
④ I tried to fight back tears. 我努力忍住眼泪。
⑤ My eyes were filled with tears.
我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑥ They sat there with glum looks on their faces.
他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
Sad/depressed (悲伤、抑郁)
1.Jack is overcome with grief.
2.Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
3.The last word went like a bullet(子弹) to my heart. ---伤心、扎心
4.A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤
5.The gloom（忧郁）deepened as the result came in. 更加难过
6.My heart seemed to be torn.(心都要撕碎了)
7.Her eyes are flooded with tears.
8.Tears are rolling down from her eyes.
Sad/depressed (悲伤、抑郁)
1.Eyes begin to water.
2.I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.
3.I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back my tears.
4.There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.
5.An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.
6.Her tears seemed to grieve （使伤心）the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also.
Lonely（孤单）
1.I feel abandoned by the world 被全世界抛弃。
2.New fathers often feel left out when baby arrives.
3. He felt a strong sense of loss after his divorce.
4. I ended up feeling completely lost and abandoned.
5.We all have moments of desperation.我们都有沮丧的时候。
6.Ever since I lost him, I have been faced with a deep sense of loss(失落感)--a feeling which is difficult for me to describe in words(难以用语言描述).
Disappointed/frustrated 沮丧
1.Overcome with/by my bitter disappointment, I refused to be comforted.
2.When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank. 我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴.
3. in low spirits \ in an unpleasant mood 情绪低落；沮丧
4.Feel nauseated 觉得恶心
5.I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down.
6.I feel sad, frustrated, angry, confused, hopeless and hurt all at the same time.
关于悲伤的描写
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
概括描述Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
关于绝望的描写
Tony感到很绝望。
概括描述Tony felt hopeless/desperate.
1) As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. (感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3) Tony's beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.(被信念抛弃) (主语问题)
第四、表示害怕
① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
② She was struck with horror when... 她感到恐惧……
③ She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
④ Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
⑤A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.
他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑥Her heart beat fast /violently. 她的心跳得厉害。
⑦ She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。
害怕，恐惧”的常用词
afraid [ fre d] adj. 害怕的；恐怕；
horror [ h r (r)] n. 恐怖，可怕的事物
复数：horrors
horrible [ h r bl] adj. 可怕的；极讨厌的
fierce [f s] adj. 凶猛的；猛烈的；暴躁的
scare [ske (r)] v. （使）害怕；受惊吓
fear [f (r)] n. 害怕；恐惧；敬畏；担心
vt. 害怕；敬畏；为…担心
关于害怕的描写
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
概括描述：At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared.
1）At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
2）At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)
3）At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
关于紧张的描写
She was like a cat on hot bricks before her driving test.
在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。
In her nervousness she stumbled over her words. 她紧张得说不出话来。
She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她全身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。
I could feel sweat beading on my forehead as I walked around the corner.
当我走过拐角处时，我能感觉到额头上的汗珠。
I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public.
我每次在公众场合讲话都会感到紧张。
I could feel my heart in my throat as my name was called.
当我的名字被呼唤时，我能感觉到我的心在我的喉咙里。
My mind went blank. 我的脑子一片空白。
She felt nervousness took hold of her whole body. 她感到紧张占据了整个身体。
She was so nervous that she was shaking like a jelly. 她太紧张了，吓得发抖。
Her ears rang and she couldn’t hear a single word.
她的耳朵一响，一个字也听不见。
She stood almost frozen, with a pale face and red eyes.
她几乎冻僵了，脸色苍白，眼睛通红。
She could feel her palms sweating, heartbeat racing and blood rushing in her ears.
她能感觉到她的手心在出汗，心跳加速，耳朵里的血在奔腾。
She bit her lips and looked away from Mrs. Willow’s eyes.
她咬着嘴唇，把眼睛从威洛太太的眼睛里移开。
My heart was pounding, as if it were about to pop.
我的心扑通扑通地跳个不停，好像要跳出来了。
He looks like an ant on a hot pot. 他看起来像热锅上的蚂蚁。
My heart is hanging like a big stone, how can not fall down.
我的心里像悬着一块大石头，怎么也落不下来。
Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）
1.I said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.
2.I was seized by a sudden impulse （冲动）to run.
3.Fear took hold of me. / Panic seized us.
4.My body tensed as I heard...
5.I chewed my lip.
6.I tossed and turned all night.彻夜难眠
7.... I replied, feeling a lump(块状物) rise in my throat.
8.I felt that the blood in my body cooled\froze rapidly because of the terrible sight
9.With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint.
10.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
第五、表示感动
① Touched\Moved deeply, we thanked the stranger again and again.
被深深感动,我们谢了陌生人一遍又一遍。
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face, she thanked her friends once again.
泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,他再一次感谢了她的朋友。
关于感动的描写
Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……
Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
All those present to listen to her sad story were moved to tears.凡在场听到她悲惨经历的人无不感动得流泪。
I was greatly touched by what you told me.你对我讲的话使我大受感动。
It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。
His speech was inspiring and touched my heart. 他的发言鼓舞人心，让我很受触动。
关于后悔的描写
My face flushed radish red and I stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was.
我的脸红红的萝卜和我盯着我的脚，希望没有人会注意到我有多尴尬。
Shame hitting, the woman kept silent, having no courage to look his husband in the eye.
羞耻的打击，女人保持沉默，没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。
Guilt and shame flowing in her mind, she didn’t even dare to watch her husband in the eye, weeping in regret.
她心中充满了罪恶感和羞耻，甚至不敢直视丈夫的眼睛，因为后悔而哭泣。
I froze. I could feel the heat rising into my cheeks, did I really just do that
我僵住了。我能感觉到热流到我的脸颊，我真的这么做了吗？
关于希望的描写
At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him.
在这个黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个绝妙的主意。
It filled his mind with a great, bright light.
他的脑子里充满了明亮的光。
He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.
他决心告诉人们真相,但是没有人能听见他的声音。
第六、表示震惊
1. Hearing the bad news, Mary felt very shocked.
听到这个坏消息,Mary非常震惊。
2. Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away on the spot and fell into unconsciousness.
听到这个坏消息,Mary当场晕倒,陷入昏迷。
3.When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and his mouth opened.
当Mary听到这个消息，睁大了眼睛，张大了嘴巴。
4.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.
听到这个消息,Mary僵住了,像扎根在地上一样
Shocked/startled/stunned/surprised震惊
1.Mother fainted away, with the shock of the bad news. 坏消息带来的震惊让妈妈昏过去了。
2.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. (僵住了，像扎根在地上一样)
3.The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief. 难以置信地摇头
4.I sensed a flash of surprise in his eyes. 我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。A flicker of \ a gust of
读后续写之环境描写
通过对环境的描写，能够向读者交待故事的背景，衬托人物，渲染气氛，从而推动情节发展。环境描写真的是必不可少的。此外，作者可以通过环境描写向读者间接的表达着故事中主人公的内心情感变化。
首先要明确的是，把主旨想清楚，时刻不忘“写景乃为主旨服务”这句话。如果景物与主旨无关，就是为写景而写景，就是无效的写景。
例如，大家看看我要传达出“高兴”与“悲伤”两种不同主旨时，该用下面哪种景物描写。
A. 花儿低着头，杨柳无精打采。
B. 花儿昂着头，杨柳摆动这枝条。
答案一目了然。所以，景随主旨变。先确定主旨，然后来写景，这样才有效果。
通常情况下，传达出的情感好，则用褒义色彩的美好的、正向的词。传达出情感需要不好，则用贬义色彩的糟糕负面的词。大家看下面三例：
The wind was blowing dreadfully(恐怖地)。
The wind was blowing softly（柔和地）。
The wind was blowing comfortably（舒服地）。
可以看出三句传达出什么样的情感吧。
下面我来具体讲讲写景两种重要的诀窍：
第一种方法：“情景交融”法
用一个公式来表达就是：写景+感受
写景后，再添加一个明显的情感描写，就是指：有时在景物描写之后，加上一两句自己的情感态度。这样做的整体效果就是：情境交融。当然，如果你想造成“留白启发思考”的效果，那么就没有必要添加这种显性的情感态度描写了。
举个例子，大家记得2017年11月高考《健忘的妈妈》的故事续写吧。第一段可以用到下面三句：
That night we set up our tent in a park.（那天晚上我们在公园里搭起帐篷。）
The moon was held up above the sky, shining her smooth and charming moonlight. （月亮被高举在天空的上方，照耀着她那光滑而迷人的月光。）
Twinkling stars were blinking（眨眼）, and fragrant（芬芳的）breeze（微风） gently blew.（闪烁的星星眨着眼，芬芳的微风轻轻地吹着。）
先来解决5个重点单词。
smooth 光滑的charming 迷人的blinking（眨眼）,fragrant（芬芳的）breeze（微风）
这个景物描写很精彩。但是如果后面在加一句：
Resting beside my mother, with hands held tightly by her, I feel the world is so beautiful.（躺在母亲身边，双手紧紧地握着母亲，我觉得这个世界是如此美丽。）
这样一加，就让“母亲”显现，就让“我与母亲关系和谐”的主旨就显现了。
再比如，下面两句景物描写：
第1句：The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined（成排的） trees.
（风可怕地嚎叫，雨从天倾斜而来，拍打着成排的树枝。）
第2句：The world was loaded with a sea of darkness
（世界承载着一片海洋般的黑暗）.
先来解决4个重点单词。
howling(怒吼)dreadfully（恐怖地whipping（抽打） lined（成排的）
这两句的后面，如果再加一句：
I was seized with the roaring power of nature. A sense of horror creeping up on me. （我被自然发怒的力量抓住了。一种恐惧感悄悄爬到我身上。）
这样就进一步强调了自己的情感。
总之，根据凸显“情感”的需要，我们可以决定是不是该加一句显性的“情感表达”，来决定是不是呈现显性的“情景交融”。
“写景+感受”这个绝招，大家掌握了吗？
第二种方法：比喻法
我们的环境描写还可以用比喻手法，用“like”即可，并交代、突出特点。如果总结成公式，那就是：写景+比喻+特点
与大家分享的例子是一位美国作家的短篇小说The Whistle (寒笛)中的写景片段：
原文是：
Night fell. The darkness was thin, like some sleazy dress that has been worn and worn for many winters and always lets the cold through to the bones. Then the moon rose.
译文： 夜色降临, 暮色稀薄, 犹如穿过了数个冬季的敝衣, 难以抵御刺骨的严寒。而后月亮升起。
01 文本分析
先来解决重点表达：
sleazy 稀薄的
let.. through 让...通过,类似pass through
02
我们再来做句子分析：
这句话的核心句是：The darkness was thin，即：暮色稀薄。
其他内容都是锦上添花的作用，就是让这个核心句子显得更加完整具体。怎么做到的呢？
首先是用到了比喻：这里的 like.就起到了这个作用：“like some sleazy dress”
像是一条薄薄的裙子，
将darkness比作薄薄的裙子还不够，还穿了好几个冬天(has been worn and worn for many winters),冬天里穿裙子一定非常的寒冷。于是作者又加上了寒冷入骨(to the bones)。如此，一个寒冷的夜晚(cold night)与一件不能御寒的敞衣相联系，内容可以如此丰富。
关于比喻，可能有些同学不是特别熟悉，再给大家一个例句：
A fire still fluttered in the grate (壁炉炉膛), ... like a bird trying to find its way out of the room.
一团火还在壁炉炉膛里舞动着，就像一只挣脱束缚的鸟。
这句话里，把壁炉里跳动的火苗比作想挣脱束缚的鸟（find its way out of the room）。使“火苗”的描写更加生动。
我们再来上面提到的“薄雾”的例子，回忆一下公式：
写景+比喻+特点
如果说详细一点就是：
平平无奇的交代下自然现象+比喻（定语从句或非谓语修饰）+突出特点(冷得不得了)
学习读后续写，最快的方式，就是改编，仿写。我们一起来牛刀小试一下吧：
如果我们要描写“雾”，应该怎么写呢？给大家5秒钟时间思考一下吧。
好，时间到。我们来看一下这位同学的写法：
The wind was blowing. The mist was getting thick, like a huge textured velvet cloak, making what is hidden inside an unclear mystery.
风正在吹。雾越来越浓，像一件巨大的有质感的天鹅绒斗篷，把一切隐藏在模糊的神秘之中。
这句仿写的句子很好的get到了比喻的精髓，非常好的运用了“like”，textured velvet cloak（有质感的天鹅绒斗篷），形象具体。非谓语making做状语，也着实炫了一下语法。既简洁描绘了景色，又营造了一种神秘、紧张的氛围。
Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.
站在空旷的道路旁，他们抬头仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的平和。
2.环境描写举例：
（1）夜晚与月光
月亮出现了片刻，她似乎向我投去一个迷茫、沉闷的目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。
The moon appeared momentarily, and she seemed to throw me a bewildered, dreary glance ,and buried herself again instantly in the deep drift of cloud.
然后，月亮在其其优雅的白色光芒的映衬下出现，照亮了无云的天空；最后，它慢慢地移动，在河面上投下一大片光，像无数星星一样闪闪发光。
Then the moon appeared in all its elegant whiteness, lightening up the cloudless sky ;finally, moving more slowly, it cast on the surface of the river a large parch of light which glittered like an infinity of stars.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
（2）中午与太阳
当夏日的微风吹过时，我漫步在一座小山上。抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
I strolled up a large hill as the summer breeze pushed past. Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before.
太阳处于最高点，就像一只恶毒的、不眨眼的黄眼睛从无云的天空中凝视着我。
The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicious unblinking yellow eye stares down at me from the cloudless sky.
（3）鸟
鸟儿飞过黎明中画布般的苍穹，仿佛它们的翅膀是细细的羽毛笔，画出了如此欢快的色彩。The birds flew through that ever developing canvas of the dawn, as if their wings were fine quills, drawing such buoyant hues.
森林是一支由鸟儿们组成的管弦乐队，演奏着一首又一首迷人的交响乐。
The forest is the orchestra consisted of the birds, playing one enchanting symphony after another.
他们的白身体翱翔于天空。巨大而美丽的翅膀划破了银白色云层。它们的身影在上方的湛蓝天空中显得格外突出，只有几小片云彩可以遮掩他们。
Their white bodies soared across the skies. The silver linings of the clouds were being sliced by vast, beautiful wings. Their figures stood prominent in the bright blue above, with only small pockets of clouds to hide them.
（4）树
这棵树从草地上笔直地立着，它的粉红的花朵随风飘散，就像一个跳舞的芭蕾舞演员。新叶在晨露中闪闪发光。
The tree stood erect from the grass, its pink blossom blew away with a large gust of wind as graceful a dancing ballerina. The new leaves sparkled with the morning dew.
这棵树沐浴在一片明亮圣洁的光芒中，从风景的其他部分中脱颖而出。
The tree stood out from the rest of the landscape, bathed in a bright angelic light.
（5）风、雨、雪、烟、雾、云
A cold breeze blew through her soft hair.
一阵冷风吹过她柔软的头发。
A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches the willow like a curtain.
阵风吹过,吹起了柳枝的低垂枝条,就像卷起的窗帘。
Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.乌云密布;黑云压顶。　　
The rain came pouring down, th streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house.
大雨倾盆而下,溪水上涨,风吹着,拍打着房子。
On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving lowly skywards from the chimney of his house.
在附近的一座山上,他可以看到烟从他房子的烟囱里慢慢地飘向天空。
The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky
云彩扩散开来,几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cold云层遮住了太阳,微风有了些凉意。
I am drawn outside while the rain still falls. All around, there is a cool and welcome feeling. I breathe deeply and watch the sun's rays streaks through breaking clouds.
雨仍在淅淅沥沥地下着,我却忍不住走到室外,环境是那么清新宜人。我深呼吸,仰望着那破云而出的道道阳光。
I looked out of the car window, winding rivers loft mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination/power.
我望向车窗外,蜿艇的河流,高耸的山脉,阳光明媚的海滩和深深的山谷,让我完全沉浸在它们的魅力之中。
A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.
河岸的不远处有一条闪闪发光的小溪,在绿色的河岸之间奔流而下。
The views there were surpassingly beautiful-the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clear water. We sat on the grass, hooked by the splendid nature
那里的景色超美—温暖的阳光,新鲜的空气,干净的水。我们坐在草地上,被壮丽的自然景色迷住了。
I can well remember that there was a time when deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound
我清楚地记得,曾经有一段时间,湛蓝的天空、鸟儿的歌唱、月光和鲜花从来没有让我如此着迷过。
读后续写之主旨句描写
主旨句一：入门句
That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的
经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：
如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
主旨句二：中级句
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
主旨句三：高级句
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。”
主旨句四：综合型
即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结果+难忘的经历+感悟
我们再说具体点儿，“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重要性。
我们来一个例句：
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s
always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！ （这是一个万能句）
事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。）