(共16张PPT)
六年级英语
一般现在时 小作文
Who is he
1. He is short.
2. He is not handsome.
3. He is one of the richest man in the world.
4. He loves teaching.
5. He sat up(创建) a famous company ---Alibaba.
He is Ma Yun.
What does he look like
Unit 11
整体外貌 身高:tall, short, of medium hight(中等身高) 体型:fat, strong, thin, of medium build(不胖不瘦) 年龄:old, young, mid-age,
五官描述 hair long, short, black ...
face long, round(圆), funny ...
eyes big, small, round,
bright(明亮的)
nose big, small
mouth big, small
ears big, small
人物描述--外貌
Unit 11
性格 quiet, outgoing, shy, kind, helpful, be good with(与人友好相处)
喜好/ 日常行为/ (学习状态) eating habits(饮食习惯) like eating ...
living habits(生活习惯) do sports ...
school life/ achievements(取得成就) won a prize of (获...奖);
人物描述--外貌
书面表达
请以Andy的身份写一封信向你的笔友Rita介绍你的情况。
要求:1.书写工整,语言流畅。2.短文不得少于5句话。(开头和结尾不包括在内)3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。4.必须用上面所给的信息,可以适当拓展。
书面表达
Dear Rita,
How are you recently
I'm writing to tell you something about myself.
1.审
审题需注意提取文字中的重要信息,
还要确定主要时态。
重要信息:
1.介绍自己的情况;
2.表格内容;
3.对方是笔友;
4.不得出现真实姓名和校名
主要时态:一般现在时
2.列
罗列重点词或句,以及所需其他词汇。理出作文框架
词汇:12 years old/ twelve years old,boy,play basketball,
favourite subject,Chinese,
2.列
开头
中间
结尾
介绍自己的基本情况,如年龄,性别,外貌等;
介绍自己的喜好;
再次表达彼此成为好友的喜悦之情。
框架:
重点
扩展
连词成句。注意避免语法错误,排序时要注意逻辑性。
3.排
I am Andy.
I am twelve years old.
I am a boy.
I like playing basketball.
My favourite subject is Chinese.
将排好序的句子,以及扩展的句子,按序写出来。
4.写
I am Andy. I am twelve years old. I am a boy. I like playing basketball. My favourite subject is Chinese.
I think Chinese is easy. I am not good at English. I think it is difficult.I can help you with your Chinese.You can help me with my English.
I am happy to be your friend.
检查词句是否有遗漏,拼写是否有错误,语法是否有误,逻辑是否通顺,建议用默读。
5.查
缺少逻辑转接词
6-7分 /10
I am Andy. I am twelve years old. I am a boy. I like playing basketball. My favourite subject is Chinese.
I think Chinese is easy. I am not good at English. I think it is difficult.
I can help you with your Chinese.
You can help me with my English.
I am happy to be your friend.
可以加入一些描述性词汇,或用连词或合并句子的方式,让文章整体更有情感。
6.美
I am Andy. I am a 12-year- old boy. I like playing basketball. My favourite subject is Chinese. And I think Chinese is easy.
I am not good at English because it is difficult for me.
I can help you with your Chinese and you can help me with my English.
I am happy to be your friend.
Homework
假如你是Susan,你们这个学期迎来了一位教历史的新老师,请已邮件形式给你的笔友Jack回复邮件,给他介绍你的新老师。邮件开头已经给出。要求:1.语句通顺;2.字数不少于50字
Dear Jack
I'm writing this letter to you about my new teacher.
Your Susan
See you next time !