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中考满分作文十大句型精选
句型一:分词作状语
1.Moved by the kids in the village, I decided to donate all my money to them.被汶川的孩子们感动了,我决定把我所有的钱都捐给他们。2.Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.看到父亲工作这么辛苦,我忍不住潸然泪下。
点评:分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句,让文章显得更加简洁,同时功底更深。
【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears. → Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.→ Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.
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1.我很高兴能站在这里和你们分享一些如何营造绿色校园的事情。
2.我们应该及时捡起地面的垃圾并且把它们扔进垃圾桶。
Standing here,I’m more than cheerful to tell you something about building a green school.
When seeing rubbish on the ground,I hold the view that we ought to
pick it up and throw it into the rubbish bin at once.
句型二:副词提前
1.Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.显然,保持健康最好的方法之一是做运动。
2.Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.最终,每一个孩子都会离开家庭去过自己的生活,成为一个完全独立的成年人。
【例】... Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital...非常奇怪的是,我最珍贵的回忆发生在我生病住院的那些日子里。
点评:如果要选一种最让人心生感触的句型,副词提前的做法即使不是最好,也是之一了。前置的副词让作者还没说出具体的事件,内心的想法已经呼之欲出。这正是这种无比简单的语法现象所焕发出的魅力所在。
除了提升情感效果之外,副词提前也是让文章结构清晰的一个非常好的办法。我们常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所谓的“逻辑词”都是属于这一种类型,童鞋们要时刻想着去用它。
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1.显而易见的是,水对于我们就如同根对于大树。
2.除此以外,你应该使用双面纸,这对于改善环境是个好主意。
Obviously,water is to us what roots are to trees.
Additionally,you are supposed to use both sides of paper which is a good idea to improve environment.
句型三:动名词作主语
1.Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐可以让我们感觉放松。2.Doing exercise keeps us healthy.做运动让我们保持健康。
【例】Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free. 另外,随身携带一些小型运动器械可以让你利用任何空闲的时间来运动。
点评:动名词做主语是最简单的一种加分句型了,非常容易掌握。当然,即便如此还是有同学会用错,所以这里提醒同学们用的时候注意最核心的一点:
如果主语只有一个动作,谓语动词要用三单!
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1.有规律的饮食也是相当有必要的。
2.在别人需要帮助的时候拉一把手 或许会带给你一段美好的友谊。
Having a regular diet is also definetly necessary.
Giving others a hand when they need may bring you a brilliant friendship.
句型四:强调句
It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.最近这些年人们才开始意识到保护环境的重要性。
【强调句型的基本模式是】
It is / was + 一个句子要强调的部分 + that + 句子中剩余的部分
点评:强调句型是一种规律性极强、非常好用的高级句型,在做文档中使用一个非常有利于增进文章的感彩。
句型四:强调句
Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.→要强调主语Eric,
→要强调宾语a beautiful vase,
It was Eric that found a beautiful vase in the cave.
It was a beautiful vase that Eric found in the cave.
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1.我非常赞同正是好习惯使每个人有了健康的生活。
2.信念造就成功。
I extremely assume that it is great habits that make everyone have a healthy life.
It is faith that makes success.
句型五:同位语or同位语从句
1.Beijing, the capital of China, has a great many places of interests.北京是中国的首都,有很多的旅游景点。2.The fact is clear that our planet is becoming warmer and warmer.很显然,地球正在变暖。
【同位语从句的基本结构】
抽象名词+that+抽象名字的内容(从句)+主句剩余部分。
句型五:同位语or同位语从句
【例】I have just received the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwan yesterday.我刚收到一个消息:昨天台湾某县发生了严重的地震。
点评:相比于前几种闪光句型,同位语和同位语从句就要复杂一点了,尤其是同位语从句要复杂一些。同位语和同位语从句在初中不作要求,但平时见得也并不少。当同位语从句被合理使用,尤其是和排比句一起使用的时候,所产生的效果是震撼性的。
We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.我们认为以下事实是不言自明的:人生而平等,并拥有不可分割的权利,包括拥有生命的权利、获得自由的权利以及追求幸福的权利。-《独立宣言》
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1.一些人认为学生没必要做家务。
2.但是我们必须承认这个不可否认的事实,许多学生很挑食并且拒绝吃早饭。
Some people harbor the idea that we students don’t need to do housework.
But we must admit the undeniable fact that many students are fussy about food and refuse to eat breakfast.
句型六:巧用as
1.As winter comes, more and more leaves fall off the trees, yellow and sad.随着冬天的来临,越来越多悲伤的黄叶从树上落下。2.The pollution is getting worse as the economy develops.随着经济的发展,污染正在变得更加严重。3.Mom's hair is not as black as it used to be.妈妈的头发不再像过去一样乌黑亮丽。
点评:初中阶段我们要求同学们掌握as的一共5种意思或用法:
句型六:巧用as
① 当,随着as time goes by 随着时间的流逝② 作为regard A as B 把A当作B/as a result 结果是……③ 正如,就像as we all know/ as everyone knows 正如我们都知道的as we had expected 正如我们期待的那样as is know to all 众所周知as is mentioned before 正如前面所提到的as the saying goes 就像谚语说的那样as it turns out 正如结果所展示的那样④ 因为⑤ 比较
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1.我们一到达敬老院,就给老人们送去了最好的祝福.
As we arrived at the nursing home,we sent them our best wishes.
句型七:定语从句
1.The man, who is called father by me, is trying to ensure us a better life with all his effort.那个被我称作父亲的人,正在竭尽全力为我们提供更好的生活。2.I seldom waste any time during the classes, which helps me to be highly efficient while studying.
在课堂上,我很少浪费任何时间,这帮助我在学习的时候更加高效。
点评:在评分的操作过程当中,一般来说,文章中只要有一个正确使用的定语从句,且没有其他的硬伤,我们都会给上1分的文采分。
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1.对我们来说,营造一个能让我们享受丰富生活的绿色校园很有必要。
2.回顾以前,有许多人对我产生了重大影响,其中有一个人就是我的英语老师。
It is of necessity for us to make a green school,where you can enjoy your colorful life.
Looking back, there are many people who had great influence on me,one of which was my English teacher.
句型八:倒装句
1.Only when I noticed the grey hairs did I realized that Mum was getting old.只在我注意到那一丝丝白发的时候,我才意识到,妈妈已经老了。2.Not only do we collect information about the animals in danger, but we also post the information on the internet. 我们不仅收集濒危动物的信息,还把这些信息发布在网上。3.Never will I forget the days that I spent with my friends.我永远不会忘了和朋友们在一起的日子。4.So moved was I that I lost my tongue.我太激动了以至于说不出话来。
句型八:倒装句
1. Only 倒装公式:Only + 状语 + 一般疑问句.
例句:Only in this way can we improve our English.只有用这种方法我们才能提高英语。2. Not only... but also 倒装公式:Not only + 一般疑问句,but (also) + 陈述句
例句:Not only did we play basketball together, but we also talked for a while.我们不仅一起打了篮球,还聊了一会儿。
句型八:倒装句
3. Never和Seldom 倒装公式:Never / Seldom + 一般疑问句
例句:Seldom have I seen him recently.
我最近很少见他。4. So / Such...that 倒装公式:So + adj / adv +一般疑问句+ that + 陈述句;
Such + 名词性短语 +一般疑问句+that+陈述句
例句:So handsome is Jack that everyone likes him. Such a handsome man is Jack that every one likes him.
点评:倒装句已经是“必杀”级别的闪光句型了,只要能正确使用,必然能获得文采分。
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1.做家务不仅能给我们成就感,而且能帮助我们变得更独立。
2.只有拥有健康的身体我们才能毫无顾虑的追求自己的梦想。
Not only can doing housework give us a sense of achievement,but also it can help us to be more independent.
Only with a healthy body can we go for our dreams without worries.
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3.处于如此糟糕的情绪中,我在朋友圈发表了一些消极的言论。
4.接下来进入送礼物环节,在这过程中,我们计划赠送一些卡片,在上面我们表达了对老师的感激之情。
Such a bad mood was I in,that I expressed some negative words on the Wechat Moment.
Next comes the gift-giving part,during which we plan to send our cards on which we have written our words thanks to our teachers.
句型九:虚拟语气
1.If I were you, I would help my parents do more housework.如果我是你的话,我会帮我爸妈做更多的家务.2.If only I could stay at school forever.要是我能永远留在学校就好了。
1. If I were you, I would .... 如果我是你的话,我就会...(把你想说的话放在I would 后面就行了。注意前面只能用were。)2. If only I could ... 如果我能...就好了。
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1.你们都能来的话我将会十分开心.
2.我强烈推荐你秋天来参观我的家乡。
I would be more delighted if all of you could come to the party.
I strongly recommend that you (should) pay a visit to my hometown in autumn.
句型十:流氓句型
1. 专业。这些句型都是经过验证的在议论文中经常使用的套话,当你用出来的时候会显得比较专业。2. 万金油。这些句型经过前人的实践发现非常容易使用,只要往自己写好的句子上硬套就行,甚至对时态语态都无特殊要求,如同万金油一样。3. 无意义。这些句型本身并没有什么特殊含义,只是辅助一下预期或让表意更严谨一点,有它无它对语义影响其实不大。
句型十:流氓句型
这些句型包括:There is no denying that+陈述句 不可否认……There is no doubt that+陈述句 毫无疑问……Needless to say, 陈述句 不用多说,……It is widely accepted that+陈述句 众所周知……As is known to all, 陈述句 众所周知,……From my point of view, 陈述句 我个人认为,……Personally, 陈述句 我个人认为,
……As far as I am concerned, 陈述句 我个人认为,……As far as I know, 陈述句 据我所知,……When it comes to …, 陈述句 说到……
句型十:流氓句型
Mr. Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.【例】As is known to all, Mr. Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.众所周知,张老师是世界上最帅的老师。【例】As far as I am concerned, Mr. Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.我个人认为,张老师是世界上最帅的老师。