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Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
Unit 7
Section B
(3a-3b) Writing
Five Rules
How many rules are there in the video
Five Family Rules:
Rule1. You have to make the bed.
Rule2. You can’t smoke.
Rule3. You must help parents do housework. Rule4. You are not allowed to stay up late.
Rule5. You are not allowed to be crazy about
stars.
have to
can’t
must
are not allowed to
are not allowed to
1. Sb can (not)/must (not)/have to...
2. Sb. be (not) allowed to...
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 左右
how many steps(步骤)of writing: _______
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
5
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
2. List an outline. “列”
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
4. Correct the article. “改”
5. Copy it into the paper. “抄”
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视;
3.早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 左右
style of writing(体裁):__________
tense(时态):___________
person(人称): ______
key points(要点):__________________
I
一般现在时
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
说明文
family rules
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视;
3.早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 左右
My family rules
how many paragraphs(段落): ____
para.1: ______________________________
para.2: ______________________________
______________________________
para.3: ______________________________
3
My name is___. I’m a___. I have ___.
my family rules
opinions (I think/agree that...)
2. Make an outline. “列”
(First...second...third...finally...)
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 此左右
2. Make an outline. “列”
Translate the phrases into English.
1.穿耳洞_________________________
2.戴耳环_________________________
3.抽烟、喝酒_____________________
4.写作业_________________________
5.看电视_________________________
6.睡、起_________________________
7.熬夜___________________________
8.顶嘴___________________________
9.关心___________________________
10.做家务________________________
get ears pierced
wear earrings
smoke, drink
do homework
watch TV
go to bed, get up
stay up late
talk back
care about
do housework
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视
3. 早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 左右
2. Make an outline. “列”
my
family rules
make sentences:
I can (not) /must (not)/have to_______.
I am (not) allowed to_______.
3. smoke, drink
1. get ears pierced
2. wear earrings
4. do homework
5. watch TV
8. talk back
7. stay up late
6. go to bed, get up
9. care about
1. I can’t get ears pierced.
10. do housework
2. I can’t wear earrings.
3. I can’t smoke or drink.
4. I must do homework first after school.
5. I’m not allowed to watch TV.
6. I have to go to bed and get up early.
7. I’m not allowed to stay up late.
8. I can’t talk back to my parents.
9. I have to care about my family and friends.
10. I must help my parents do homework.
talk back
do housework
watch TV
stay up late
Free talk: What do you think of these family rules
What’s your opinion
e.g. I think teenagers should do housework at home.
Because our parents are so tired after work.
Students shouldn’t be allowed to smoke.
Because it is bad for our health.
get ears pierced
smoke
go to bed early
drink
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
1. I can’t get ears pierced.
2. I can’t wear earrings.
3. I can’t smoke or drink.
4. I must do homework first after school.
5. I’m not allowed to watch TV.
6. I have to go to bed and get up early.
7. I’m not allowed to stay up late.
8. I can’t talk back to my parents.
9. I have to care about my family and friends.
10. I must help my parents do homework.
技巧 1: 采用多种句式,
使文章更优美。
技巧 2: 适当使用连接词,
使文章更流畅。
Linking words(连接词):
表并列:and, both...and...
表转折:but, however...
表因果:because, so, as a result...
表递进:not only...but also..., what’s more
表结果:so...that..., such...that...
表先后:first, second, third, next, finally...
表时间:when, while, after, before...
Writing practice
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严
格,你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题,根
据提示,简要介绍你的家规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.不准穿耳洞,不准戴耳环,不准抽烟、喝酒;
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起,不准熬夜;
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友,帮助父母做家务。
要求:
1.熟练运用所学知识,条理清楚,逻辑关系合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数:80 左右
person(人称): __ tense(时态):___________
My Family Rules
para.1: ___________________________________
para.2: ___________________________________
para.3: ___________________________________
I
一般现在时
My name is____. I’m a_____. I have_______.
my family rules (first...second...next...finally...)
opinions (I think/agree that...)
time for writing
4. Correct the article. “改”
Exchange your articles, and help each other correct them.
交换文章,互相帮助修改。
Final score(最终得分):
___________
Show Time
hand-writing
书写
contents
内容
Possible Version: My Family Rules
My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. My parents are strict with me. There are many rules in my family. Let me tell you about them.
First, I can’t get ears pierced or wear earrings. I am not allowed to smoke or drink, either. Second, I have to finish my homework before watching TV. What’s more, I must go to bed and get up early. Staying up late is not allowed for me. Last, I must not talk back to my parents. I need to care about my family and friends, and I am required to help with housework at home.
I think some of my family rules are strict. However, I know that they are made to make me become better and better.
family rules
Para.1: My name is___. I’m a___...
Para.2: my family rules
(first... second... third...)
Para.3: opinions(I think/agree...)
Summary
Sb can/can’t/have to...
Sb. be (not) allowed to ...
5 writing steps
“审”、“列”、“连”、“改”、“抄”
Remember:
Our growth needs to have rules.
我们的成长需要规则。
Nothing can be done without rules.
无规矩不成方圆。
Homework
1. Polish your writing after class.
2. Try your best to follow rules
everywhere you go.
See you!