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第二篇 攻专题 · 能力提升
二 题型专题探究
专题七 书面表达
栏目导航
解题技巧
中考例题精析
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命题特点
书面表达是每年中考的必考题型,是考查学生语言能力和交际能力的重要组成部分。命题来源于生活,贴近生活,能激发学生的参与性,并且让学生有自由发挥的空间。选材具有教育意义和时代感,关注社会热点,表达形式多样,通过多种文体实现对学生综合运用语言能力的考查。
近年来中考作文题型非常多。形式上有书信、电子邮件、日记、便条、看图作文和提示作文等。文体涉及记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文等。
解 题 技 巧
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解题方法
1.首先要认真审题,在头脑中先构思一个框架,确定短文要写什么内容、用什么时态和用哪些词汇等。
2.根据文章要点在草稿纸上列出文章结构、要使用的句型、关键词语,确定文章的时态、人称、开头和结尾。
3.在写作过程中尽可能多地使用简单句。没有把握的句型先在草稿纸上试写,如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可改为其他表达方式,化难为易,化繁为简。
4.书写工整,写完后应认真检查。
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(2020·四川达州)近年来,全球自然灾害频发,极端天气频频出现,2020年新冠肺炎疫情几乎在全球暴发,环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策,采取了很多措施,成效也很显著,但是,我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园,时代的一粒灰, 落在个人头上就是一座山,没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华,作为达州的学生,应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以 “Let's try our best to protect the environment”为题,向达州的学生发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起,尽最大的努力保护环境!
中 考 例 题 精 析
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写作要点:
1.了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性;
2.在日常生活中节约用水,节约能源;
3.为了减少空气污染,最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学;
4.学会垃圾分类,少用塑料袋;
5.保护野生动物,不食用野生动物。
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写作要求:
1.要点齐全并适当发挥;
2.全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.条理清晰,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确;
4.卷面整洁。
参考词汇:reduce ?v.?减少;sort garbage垃圾分类;
four categories of waste(四类垃圾) : recyclable, harmful ,dry and wet waste;No business, no killing.没有买卖就没有杀害。
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Let's try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I'm a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters have happened on the earth and unusual weather have appeared very often. Even worse, the COVID 19 epidemic broke out nearly all over the world this year. These bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few
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years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let's try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
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and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do
First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, we'd better go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. It's important to protect the air. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort
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First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, we'd better go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. It's important to protect the air. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. Fifth, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be
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better and better. Let's try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【分析】这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let's try our best to protect the environment”和提示的内容写一份倡议书,呼吁大家保护环境。
写作思路:
1.审读清楚主题,围绕主题进行构思;
2.写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,注意涵盖所给提示;
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3.最后给出自己的观点态度。
【高分句型】
1.Third, in order to reduce air pollution, we'd better go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars.
①in order to do sth.为了做某事。
②had better do sth.最好做某事。
2.It's important to protect the air.
It's+形容词+to do sth.做某事是……的。
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【点评】本文采用三段式,结构清晰,将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
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A(2020·广东东莞)
新冠肺炎(COVID 19)疫情影响着我们的学习和生活, 我们应该如何做好日常防护呢?请你以“How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19”为题, 写一篇作文, 80词左右。
内容包括:
1.简单介绍你对新冠肺炎疫情的认识;
2.对如何做好日常防护提出建议(至少3点);
3.呼吁大家远离病毒, 保持健康。
2021年迎考特训
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How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19
The broke out of COVID 19 has influenced our life and study a lot.
The virus is very dangerous and it can be spread from person to person.
How can we prevent the virus Here is my advice. First, the best way is to avoid being exposed to this virus. Second, we should wash our hands often and avoid touching our eyes, nose and mouth with unwashed hands. What's more,
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we must wear a mask when we have to go out in public. Last but not the least, we should keep a healthy lifestyle. For example, we should have a healthy eating habit.
All in all I hope everyone can stay away from the virus and keep healthy.
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B(2019·四川乐山)
为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4月1日起,学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
1.学生吃得健康、安全;
2.及时发现就餐问题;
3.食堂提供食品多样;
4.父母更加放心。
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注意:
1.80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:规定 regulation (n.);食堂 cafeteria (n.);营养的 nutritious (adj.)
A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.
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Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, the food we eat is healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn't worry about our diet any more.
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We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthily, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.
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C(2019·湖北黄冈)
同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”“Be polite to sb.”“Protecting the environment” “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以下要点提示,写一篇题为 “I'm Proud of My Family”的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事。
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要点提示:
1.家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2.邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3.爱护环境,从我做起;
4.积极参加志愿者活动,帮助贫困儿童。
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写作要求:
1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇:work hard;be friendly to each other;get on well with;protect the environment;be volunteers
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I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family.There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.
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My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. My sister helps in the school library twice a week. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!
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D(2019·江苏连云港)
减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
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注意:
1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇:提升素养promote literacy
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How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful
My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
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In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
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E(2018·广东广州)
你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生本(Ben)的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明本的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben's problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤单 1.参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友
2.?(请你补充)
英语单词难记 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2.?(请你补充)
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Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that
you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you'd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
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F(2018·内蒙古呼和浩特)
你校将开设一些特色课程,请你根据下表中的提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文,介绍这些课程及开设理由,并提出你建议增设的课程以及你的理由。
要求:
1.不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、语意连贯;
3.100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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学校特色课程 开设理由
足球俱乐部 强身健体、鼓励合作
模型制作 走进科学、了解科学
你建议的课程 你的理由
Students in our school are free to choose some special after school
courses according to their interests.
They like the courses because they can enrich their lives. Here is some information.If you are a sports fan, the football club would be a great choice. It can not only make you strong and healthy, but also offer you a good
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chance to make friends and encourage teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making courses would be pretty fun. Students can get to know more about science.
In my opinion, a music course would be really popular. Lots of students are suffering from the stress of studying. It is relaxing for them to play musical instruments or just listen to some songs. Besides, it can make life colorful.
So why not join us in these amazing courses or clubs?
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G(2018·贵州安顺)
每年 6月 8日为“世界海洋日(World Oceans Day)”,今年世界海洋日的主题为“清洁我们的海洋(Cleaning Our Oceans)”。据 2018年 6月 7日中央电视台晚间新闻报道,每年流入大海的微塑料达1300万吨,导致大量鱼类死亡。科学家预测,如果不采取措施限塑,2050年海洋里的塑料重量比鱼类还重。作为中学生的你,应该减少塑料制品的使用。请以“Saying No to Plastics”为题,写一篇 80~100 词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
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参考词汇:pollute(污染);recycle(循环、回收);protect(保护);cloth bags(布袋);basket(竹篮)
Saying No to Plastics
As we know, plastics, which have seriously polluted our world, can be seen everywhere.
Actually, I use plastics too much in my daily life. Now I have come to realize that it's a terribly bad habit. I'm supposed to reduce the use of plastics and everyone can do this. For example, we should use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping. More importantly, even if we need to use plastic
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bags, we should recycle and make full use of them.
All in all, we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener. Do you think I am right?
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H(2018·四川达州)
作为一名中学生,我们不仅要有独立意识,还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中,我们能互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤,能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!
请你以“How to Learn Together as a Team”为标题写一篇英文演讲稿,代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。
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要求:
1.卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感);
2.全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数;
3.条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确;
4.内容尽量包括提示信息,并适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
参考词汇:friendly;help;discuss (talk;listen);share;grow up
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How to Learn Together as a Team
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.
It's very important for us to learn, think by ourselves. And it is also important for us to learn together as a team. First, we must be friendly to others, whether the beautiful or ugly, the tall or short, kids or adults. We should help others when they are in trouble. For example, your classmates can't finish homework. Your friend is becoming upset when he can't solve the problems between his parents and him. There is no doubt that helping others is helping yourself. In a team, anyone is helped and anyone
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helps others.
Second, we are supposed to discuss. When we discuss, we either talk or listen. We have to talk clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. After discussing, you are sure to get more.
Third, in a team, it is very important to share. Many of us are only one or two from our families. We are used to thinking about ourselves. So we are loved more. Now it is time to learn to share with others; feel love and be loved; share happiness and sadness and so on. Let's grow up in sharing!
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That's all for my speech.Thank you!
In a word, we are like a family in a team. Let's help each other, discuss happily and share little by little. Then we grow up.
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I(2019·安徽)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友迈克(Mike)最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
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注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
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Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
I'd like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
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Yours,
Li Hua
I hope you'll find my ways helpful.
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J(2019·广东深圳)
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友托尼(Tony)对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所 婚礼,春节等
表达方式 剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼
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参考词汇:婚礼 wedding;中国结 Chinese Knot;红包 red packet; 代表 stand for
Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For example, in a
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What's more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.