2022年中考专题：英语写作 课件(共17张PPT)

(共17张PPT)
How to write
an excellent English composition
English Writing
第一档：13-15分。要求：内容涵盖所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。
第二档：10-12分。要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。
第三档：7-9分。要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。
第四档：4-6分。要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。
第五档：0-3分。只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多。
中考英语书面表达评分标准
高分标准：
卷面整洁，篇幅合适80词，要点全面, 结构清晰，语法正确(时态，语态，代词；三单；非谓语动词应用；介词；形容词/副词等)
正确的写作步骤：
审题：确定文体、时态、人称、要点
列提纲：在草稿纸上列出要点，然后列出所需和短语和句型，并适当扩展
组补成文：加“血肉”使文章丰富，符合词数要求。
注意使用合适的连词和承上启下的过渡句。开头点题，结尾要有合适的结束语。三段式：总分总，首尾呼应，开头或结尾的句子应注意要简明扼要。
复查：检查语法，拼写和标点等问题,并对拿不准的词语和句子进行替换或删除,确保文章通顺，注意控制词数。
誊抄：
高级词汇:
not only A but also B 不仅A而且B
First of all，首先； What's more 另外,而且
Last but not least, 最后; In a word, 总之,一句话
becuase of 由于 Thanks to ...由于,多亏；
so that= in order that目的是 in order to do 目的是... However, 然而 though尽管， Unluckily,不幸地
be interested in=show great interest in, be poor at...
such as, for example 例如 You'd better do sth.最好...
In my opinion/view依我所见 It's a good idea to do ...
As we all know,众所周知 As a result结果，因此
be weak/strong in..., work as...., volunteer as ...
句型多样
能力强者，可用被动语态，定/宾/状语从句）
e.g. I'm sorry to hear that you can't sleep well.
You think too much about the things that happened in daytime.
注：如果没有把握，最好不要用复合句。短句用好也好！
万能句：
It's important for us to develop a habit of doing ...
课时练11页
审：应用文,第二人称,一般现在时,should
列：try not to think about the things that happened in daytime
do exercise before you go to bed
listen to some light music when you lie in bed
I'm sorry to hear that you can't sleep well. In my opinion, the problem is that you think about the things that happened in daytime. First of all, you need to relax yourself. Try not to care about too much. What's more, it's a good idea to do some exercise before going to bed. In this way, you will feel tired and go to sleep quickly. Last but not least, you'd better listen to some light music when lying in bed. As a result, it'll make your mind peaceful. In a word, it's important for you to develop a habit of going to sleep on time. Have a try, please.
听到你失眠难以入睡，我很抱歉
依我所见，问题是你想事太多
发生在白天的
首先，你应该放松自己
尽量不要在意太多
另外，睡前运动是一个好主意
通过这方法，你将感到累，然后快速入睡
最后，你最好眼前听些轻音乐
作为结果，
这会使你内心平和。
总之，养成一个按时入睡
的习惯是重要的。
I'm sorry to hear that you can't sleep well. In my opinion, the problem is that you think about the things that happened in daytime. First of all, you need to relax yourself. Try not to care about too much. What's more, it's a good idea to do some exercise before going to bed. In this way, you will feel tired and go to sleep quickly. Last but not least, you'd better listen to some light music when lying in bed. As a result, it'll make your mind peaceful. In a word, it's important for you to develop a habit of going to sleep on time. Have a try, please.
（课时练25页） 假如你校将要与贫困山区某校开展“手拉手”活动。你将成为一名志愿者，并进行下列活动。
要点提示：
1. 捐赠学习用品，特别是书籍。
2. 利用自身学科优势，帮助他们提高。
3. 帮助做些农活。
Our school will have hand-in-hand activities
with a school in the poor area. I think I can
do lots of interesting things together.....
写作步骤：审，列，组补，复查，眷抄
1. 审： 第一人称， 一般现在时
2. 列：
1. 捐赠学习用品。
2. 利用自身学科优势，帮助他们。
3. 帮助做些农活。
1. give away school things
2. be strong in ...
3. help with farm work
1. First of all, I will give away some school things, expecially books. Because I know they don't have enough money to buy them. What's more, I am strong in English and computers. Maybe I can help them with the two subjects. This also helps me to get my dream job in the future. Finally, If we have enough time, I can also help them do farm work. I think it educational to work with them.
In my view, it's important for us to develop a habit of helping others. It'll make a difference to us.
首先，我要捐献些学习用品，特别是书籍。
因为，我知道他们没有足够的钱买
另外，
我在英语和电脑方面比较强，也许
我可以在这两科目上帮助他们
这也会有助于我未来获得梦想工作。
如果有足够时间的话，我会帮助做些农活。
我认为和他们一些干活是有教育意义的
依我所见，培养帮助他人的习惯是重要的
那将对我有重要影响
1. First of all, I will give away some school things, expecially books. Because I know they don't have enough money to buy them. What's more, I am strong in English and computers. Maybe I can help them with the two subjects. This also helps me to get my dream job in the future. Finally, If we have enough time, I can also help them do farm work. I think it educational to work with them.
In my view, it's important for us to develop a habit of helping others. It'll make a difference to us.
假如你叫李华，你校正在开展一场讨论，主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息，用英语总结出讨论情况，并写出自己的意见。（词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数）
70％的学生:
1.应该每天进行体育锻炼，但不要时间过长；
2.锻炼能增强体质,保持健康；
3.锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好。
30％的学生:
1.锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳；
2.锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习；
3.锻炼中可能会受伤。
写出自己的意见。
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. After the discussion, we find that 70% of the students think
70% students:
1. not spend too much time
2. make our body stronger and keep us healthy
3. have a good rest so that our study will be more effective
30% students:
1.tiring and a waste of time
2. too excited to focus on our lessons
3. be hurt
Your opinion:
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. After the discussion, we find that 70% of the students think we should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise can make our body stronger and keep us healthy. Sports also let us have a good rest so that our study will be more effective.
On the other hand, 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time. They say that after having sports we are too excited for a long time to focus on our lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.
In my opinion, I think taking exercise is good for us, especially to our students in Grade 9, but we shouldn’t spend too much time on the sports.